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1Benihime [Puppet] Empty Benihime [Puppet] Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:05 am

Yukihime

Yukihime


D-rank
Name: Benihime
Rank: E
Primary Use: Offensive/Defensive
Description:
Benihime is a human like puppet that was made by Yukihime when she was 10 years old. It resembles a woman with a cape, armed with a whip and a sword. The face of the resembles her late mother who had passed away when she was just 5 years old.
Spoiler:
Devices:
Thorns Whip - on its right hand it carries a thorny whip. This whip usually is 3 meters long and used to lash out at enemies. However it can also extend up to a length of 10 meters by uncoiling the winding ropes wrapped around its right had. At this extended form it can be used to climb up, lasso enemies or hang them.
Weapons:
Fencing Sword - On its left hand, it carries a sword about 1 meter long. Its primary attack pattern is stabbing or piercing. Can be used to attack or defend.



Last edited by Yukihime on Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:42 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:57 am

Naota

Naota


S-rank
Alrightly, madam. I know that it isnt poison per se, but its still a substance. You're going to have to remove the part about the laced needles. If we work out a poison guide, then we will allow this.

3Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Tue Aug 14, 2012 2:14 pm

Kenta Inuzuka

Kenta Inuzuka


D-rank
On another point entirely; this puppet is to strong to be E-rank. As the Puppetry guide states; an E-ranked puppet is basically a training dummy. You would need to remove the wings and one weapon from this to have it be E-rank.

4Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Wed Aug 15, 2012 4:05 pm

Yukihime

Yukihime


D-rank
Edited.

5Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Wed Aug 15, 2012 8:30 pm

Raijin

Raijin


D-rank
You'll need a textual description of the puppet as well. An image alone is not enough. Otherwise, this is looking approvable now.

6Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:43 pm

Yukihime

Yukihime


D-rank
Done putting a written description.

7Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:55 am

Kenta Inuzuka

Kenta Inuzuka


D-rank
I see no reason not to approve this now. Your clan allows you one free puppet, correct? Or are you paying for this somehow?

8Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:39 pm

Yukihime

Yukihime


D-rank
Im using the clans freebie. I still dont have ryo.

9Benihime [Puppet] Empty Re: Benihime [Puppet] Thu Aug 16, 2012 2:23 pm

Jurou

Jurou


S-rank
Every ninja gets one free puppet of his or her starting rank and is fully trained with it and its weapons.
Approved

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