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1Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Empty Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Sun Jun 30, 2013 5:24 pm

Karasu Kokuou

Karasu Kokuou


D-rank
Symbol:
Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Hayabusa_Clan_Symbol
Clan: Kokuou Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Chakra Manipulation

Elements: None

Specialization: Ninjutsu ( primary or secondary )

Location: Konohagakure

Clan History: The Kokuou Clan has reigned within Konohagakure ever since it was founded. However they have had a record of keeping to themselves and staying within the solitude of their clan grounds and complex. Since it's founding the clan has been governed by it's own elders and a single ruler known as the King. It wasn't until it's newly elected King Karasu Kokuou that all of this changed. The clan can now be seen out of the confines of their complex and freely roaming about in the village as well as other lands. Along with this change Karasu also formed the clan into a triarchy, giving it three rulers who work together to lead the clan. Karasu did so believing that the elders were not enough. Though the elders gave advice, the King's final say was what stood. However with Karasu's new system the three kings listen to the elders' advice and then take a vote among the three of them, the majority vote being the final decision. Before Karasu's rule the clan freely studied and practiced ninjutsu and other shinobi arts, however they were never registered and recognize as Leaf ninja for their solitude kept them from going to the ninja academy. Now, thanks to Karasu's new freedoms for the clan, they are able to become real shiniobi and earn their right to wear the Leaf's symbol and go on missions for it. Since Karasu only recently became of age to lead all of these new changes have recently been implemented, leaving Karasu a clan leader to even start out as a genin fresh out of the academy. Just as their first king who constantly strives to better himself, the clan can be seen working for goals whether it be to strengthen themselves or even upgrade the complex and help out with Konohagakure.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Kokuou Clan is highly adept when it comes to chakra and is capable of doing extraordinary things with it. Unlike others who simply focus, concentrate or transform their chakra, Kokuou clan members are capable of manipulating it directly, changing it's properties and forming it in ways no other can. For example, they are able to freely flow their chakra out of their body with ease and control it's movements through will alone ( similar to gaara's sand ) Along with this they can change the chakra's density, using it for offense and defense.

Drawbacks: The Kokuou Clan's unique chakra make them sensitive to others. In other words, Kokuou cannot be bijuu hosts or Sages because their body cannot accept the unique forms of chakra. Along with this all Kokuou clan members must have the Pharmacophobia negative special characteristic for their unique bodies are known to reject medical ninjutsu, making it hard for them to heal. Last but not least, Kokuou have a slight imbalance with their yin and yang chakras and possess a stronger yang energy than yin. Meaning, techniques that use yin energy such as medical ninjutsu and genjutsu are reduced by 1 rank. Any D rank genjutsu or medical ninjutsu is void and won't take affect, C rank will have the strength of D, ect.
Members: Karasu Kokuou ( This clan will be ruled by a triarchy. In other words, if it is approved I will be looking for other roleplayers to be the other two leaders. )

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Name: Chakra Resonance
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D+
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Element: None
Range: D-10m C-15m B-25m A-40m S-50m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Chakra cost equals standards ( D rank= 10 ) and each post active will cost an additional 5 points of chakra.
Cooldown: One post.
Description: The Kokuou Clan members are able to use their chakra manipulation ability to vibrate their chakra and change it's frequency. When used for stealth they are able to resonate their chakra at the same frequency as someone else, making detection under a transformation harder to see through since the chakra signature will seem the same as the original. When used offensively the vibrating can make sounds of varying pitches and volumes. At D rank the user is able to make a pitch similar to a dog whistle, harmless to shinobi, but capable of getting the attention of other animals and getting them riled up. Along with this they are able to make musical like notes which can be used for distraction. At C rank the resonance is capable of shattering glass and cause minor ear pain. At B rank the sounds can be so high and loud they are able to blow ear drums, cause bleeding of the ear and even temporary deafness. When finally reaching the height of A rank the vibrations can make a loud sonic boom that will cause even worse damages to the ear and can even create a low note that will rumble the ground and walls. Any weak walls that are less that 3 inches thick and are made out of cheap material ( not thick stone or steel ) are at danger of having the foundation collapsing. At S the vibrations can become highly deadly, capable of causing deafness that can last for 5 days. Along with this, the vibrations can create sonic blasts out of crashing sound waves which can be used to force back projectile and other objects. If focused on stone the sonic blasts can crumble the rock and render it nothing but dust. To avoid damage to their own ears the Kokuou must use their chakra density technique to clog their ears, rendering themselves unable to hear while the attack is being emitted, but avoiding the risk of deafening themselves.

Name: Chakra Density
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C+
Type: Offensive, Defensive and Supplementary
Element: None
Range:  D-10m C-15m B-25m A-40m S-50m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Chakra cost equals standards ( D rank= 10 ) and each post active will cost an additional 5 points of chakra.
Cooldown: One post
Description: Along with being able to manipulate their chakra and move it about, Kokuou Clan members can also raise the density of their chakra and use it as weapons, shields and armor. At C rank the chakra can become as dense as wood however with each rank the strength continues to increase. This is done with basic law of physics, by compressing more chakra into one place it's durability will increase. Similar to how even air when it's compacted can cut through rock. At B rank the chakra can become as hard as stone and at A rank it has the strength of steel. When finally reaching the heights of S the density can be comparable to diamonds. But none the less it is not indestructible and can still be countered. Also, when the chakra is in this state it's defense against fire release techniques is raised, lowering their effectiveness by one rank, however it's defense against lightning release is lowered, raising their power by one rank. The armor or hardened chakra can be shattered by a lightning ninjutsu one rank or higher above it. In other words, when using D rank armor, D rank lightning ninjutsu is raised to C rank, and can break it. When the armor is at S it can still be shattered by a S rank lightning ninjutsu but will take a taijutsu or bukijutsu blow of at least B rank.

Name: Chakra Sensory
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D+
Type: Supplementary
Element: None
Range: (What is the range of your jutsu?)
Range:  D-10m C-15m B-25m A-40m S-50mSpecialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Chakra cost equals standards ( D rank= 10 ) and each post active will cost an additional 5 points of chakra.
Cooldown: One post
Description: The Kokuou Clan is filled with natural born chakra sensory ninja who are capable of feeling the presence of others through their chakra and can read chakra signatures. Since people of the same family and same village have chakras that resonate at similar frequencies, a Kokuou clan member can tell what village and what clan a person comes from. They can also memorize a specific chakra signature so they know the exact identity of someone. To use this ability they simply need to expense the chakra and focus.



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2Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Empty Re: Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:36 pm

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First things first, Specializations. This is a clan that directly uses Shape Manipulation of chakra to make it similar to objects, therefore it is Ninjutsu by definition. So, the clan members will be required to take Ninjutsu, either as a primary or a secondary spec. Also, all of their clan jutsu will have to say Ninjutsu under specialty, instead of kokuou kekkei genkai. You may still put that in parenthesis next to Ninjutsu, if you wish.

As for Drawbacks, I think they are sufficient enough, but take out the part that says:
Karasu wrote:If the chakras are moved into the Kokuou's body it will forcefully reject it, creating cuts along the body and forcing it to flow outwards. This goes for every other chakra that is not normal human chakra, including dark chakra, star chakra, ect.
Dark chakra and star chakra aren't allowed here, so you won't have to worry about chakra being forced into your body.

Next, Clan Jutsu.
Chakra Resonance
This is a simple enough technique, but you'll need to go into detail about how it works at each rank. You'll need to specify it like this:

D-Rank: The jutsu can make...
C-Rank: The jutsu can make...
B-Rank: The jutsu can make...

etc., etc., and detail the pitch of the sound and how it damages the ears, such as temporary deafness, bleeding from the ears, ringing in the ears, blown eardrums, or whatever you wish. Just make it appropriate for their rank, i.e. D-Ranks shouldn't be able to make your ears bleed, and so on. As for object shattering, what do you mean by a "trained Kokuou"? Specify a rank, please.

Chakra Density

Now, honestly, you shouldn't be able to create weapons, armor, and shields that are as hard as wood at D-Rank. I recommend you make this a C-SS rank technique, and eliminate D-Rank completely. Next, you'll need detail how it works at each rank, like Chakra Resonance. Also, when you say..."can still be broken with enough force" do you mean Taijutsu and Bukijutsu at a certain rank? Be specific, here. I genuinely don't like the idea of this technique, it's far too flexible, but I'll still consider it.

Chakra Sensory

I'll accept it, although many other clans here have very similar techniques. But you may not tell which village and which clan the people you detect are from. Even people with the Byakugan can't do that, c'mon.

Make these edits and we'll continue.

3Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Empty Re: Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:10 pm

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This is looking much better, and I'll allow the chakra sensory thing, due to the connection to Canon. Sooo, Kokuou clan is 1/2 approved.

4Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Empty Re: Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:23 pm

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Remove ALL of the SS variations off their jutsu...

You can have ONE of them rank up to SS, and then that means EVERY member of this clan can NEVER app another SS rank technique, cos you can only have one per person.

5Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Empty Re: Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:40 pm

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APPROVED

With a warning to clan members, if this clan's "chakra manipulation" is EVER used to manipulate other people's chakra... i will be back and recommending this clan shut down.

6Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Empty Re: Kokuou, The Clan of Kings Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:44 pm

Karasu Kokuou

Karasu Kokuou


D-rank
Warning taken, and don't worry. A Kokuou clan member can only manipulate their individual chakra, they can't even manipulate other Kokuou clan memeber's chakra.

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