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1Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Empty Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Sat Apr 19, 2014 10:40 am

Suzume

Suzume


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Academy Jutsu:
Clan Jutsu:
D Rank Jutsu:
C Rank Jutsu:
B Rank Jutsu:
A Rank Jutsu:



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2Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:56 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Fire Dome - Increase the cooldown to six posts. Also, does the opponent take damage if they touch the dome, and if so, how severe is the damage?

Blades of Fire - Increase the cooldown to five posts.

Bolt Strike - Increase the cooldown to three posts.

Explosive Seal - Update the cooldown to "Duration + 2" and get rid of the second degree burns (D-Ranks may only do first degree tissue damage). You may however increase the knockback to a higher number, if you wish.

Seal Delivery - Lower the speed to a maximum of 25 meters per second and detail the damage of the impact.

Returning Barrier - Limit it to one C-Rank rather than two. Also, can Ninjutsu lower than C-Rank be pulled in by the barrier? If so, you may return two D-Rank Ninjutsu, since they are a rank lower. And increase the cooldown to five posts.

Fireball Launcher is fine as is.

Lightning Ball - Lower the lacerations to 1.5 inches maximum. Increase the cooldown to five posts.

Tesla Weapons - Lower the lacerations to 2.5 inches deep, Lower the speed to 30 meters per second, increase the cooldown to seven posts. You may take out the part about reaction time allowing targets to avoid damage completely, if you want to. That seems like a substantial drawback to me.

Bolt Charge - Lower the stun to one post, increase the cooldown to six posts.

Searing Shots - Increase the cooldown to six posts.

Binding Seal - Increase the cooldown to nine posts.

Propeller Deflector - Note that SS-Rank techniques will still break through the defense completely and hit the user. Also, increase the cooldown to 7 posts.

3Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Wed Apr 23, 2014 1:36 pm

Suzume

Suzume


D-rank
Daraku Ishido wrote:Fire Dome - Increase the cooldown to six posts. Also, does the opponent take damage if they touch the dome, and if so, how severe is the damage?

Edited. The Fire Dome isn't really something that damages, just a technique blocker. Right now it doesn't harm, but if that's allowable could I put in minor 1st degree burns?

Daraku Ishido wrote:Blades of Fire - Increase the cooldown to five posts.

Bolt Strike - Increase the cooldown to three posts.

Explosive Seal - Update the cooldown to "Duration + 2" and get rid of the second degree burns (D-Ranks may only do first degree tissue damage). You may however increase the knockback to a higher number, if you wish.

Seal Delivery - Lower the speed to a maximum of 25 meters per second and detail the damage of the impact.

Returning Barrier - Limit it to one C-Rank rather than two. Also, can Ninjutsu lower than C-Rank be pulled in by the barrier? If so, you may return two D-Rank Ninjutsu, since they are a rank lower. And increase the cooldown to five posts.

Fireball Launcher is fine as is.

Lightning Ball - Lower the lacerations to 1.5 inches maximum. Increase the cooldown to five posts.

Tesla Weapons - Lower the lacerations to 2.5 inches deep, Lower the speed to 30 meters per second, increase the cooldown to seven posts. You may take out the part about reaction time allowing targets to avoid damage completely, if you want to. That seems like a substantial drawback to me.

Bolt Charge - Lower the stun to one post, increase the cooldown to six posts.

Searing Shots - Increase the cooldown to six posts.

Binding Seal - Increase the cooldown to nine posts.

Propeller Deflector - Note that SS-Rank techniques will still break through the defense completely and hit the user. Also, increase the cooldown to 7 posts.

Done all of required edits. For Propeller Deflector, would it be able to weaken said SS or does it break through unfazed?

4Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:28 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Yes, you may add burns to Fire Dome.

On Propeller Deflector, SS-Rank techniques would go through unfazed. I wouldn't consider that a problem, SS-Ranks are going to be quite rare considering +1s to jutsu aren't going to be around nearly as much and they will be unable to stack. Looks like you already put that in, so it's fine.

Everything else is fine as well, so it looks like you only have to edit Fire Dome.

5Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:01 pm

Suzume

Suzume


D-rank
Fire Dome now has 1st degree burns if people try to touch it...

6Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Kōga, Suzume [Jutsu Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 7:11 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Your jutsu list update is approved~

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