“How are you feeling, Oomi?” The voice belonged to one Doctor Yu, not that she’d remember his name. He’d stepped out only a moment after her and narrowly avoided a fist to the face. He’d accompanied her to help her understand why she’d not feel the warmth of the sun on her skin – she didn’t even notice.

“Great! …could use a little loosening up though.” Oomi answered, her right index finger placed against her chin as if she were in deep thought. “When do I get to leave here? I should get back to training right away. S’been way too much time off.” She grabbed at her triceps. “I’ll be all kinds of flabby and then people will hear my arms flapping in the wind. Not a secret ninja girl style move at all… though I guess it might make it easier to fly … maybe.” She was already walking away from the doctor and actually intentionally having this conversation with herself. He would have told her when she could go home if only she’d given him a chance.

For a few minutes her conversation with herself continued moving through varied subjects before finally ending on the tactical advantages of being bald. This is best described as irony, being that only a few moments later such a bald headed man would step into the young warrior’s line of sight. He was covered, from what she could see, in tattoos from head to toe – menacing ones that just screamed; “don’t **** with me”.

“Oi! Baldy! How’s that dome of yours take a punch?” It was a serious question despite how it might have sounded. She really did want to know if his being bald made punches simply slide off of the smooth surface. Perhaps, she could go bald as well – maybe even slather her bald head with some kind of oil and forever be less susceptible to strikes.


Word Count: 442
[ Training: Ninjutsu C ---> B ]
[Total Word Count: 442 / 2000 ]

The young Genin’s eyes narrowed as Wolfgang reached for a cigarette and lit it. It was unfortunate that she’d no idea he possessed such a dastardly attack. To make matters worse the girl had lost all physical sensation – a fact she was yet to become aware of. Her face was washed in what she thought was nothing more than smoke, acid hidden within sticking to her flesh, burning her eyes and throat, as well as forcing a heavy cough. Yet, still she’d no idea what was happening to her flesh besides these latter inconveniences. She’d cough again before speaking; “What a jerk!” She was now rubbing at her eyes which her still stinging. “Who does that?! You asked for it, pal!”

There was no need for a second though, nor did it matter that she couldn’t see very well at the moment. She’d had a good idea of where he was prior to his sneak attack – which she still was quite unaware of the scope of. A hand was balled into a tight fist and thrown forward far faster than it rightfully should have been. The shinobi of the Adechi clan had activated nearly the most basic of techniques known to her loosely knit family; Genkhairyu: Ikoiheiki ( Entropy Style: Entropy Distortion ) and thusly increased the speed with which her strike moved by 25%. The speedy right hand straight came with the ferocity of a seasoned boxer despite her youthfulness and inexperience. Years of training and being a fairly quick learner were to thank for that. Not that she’d trained particularly hard. Ol’baldy’d better move or be hit with the fist of fury!


Chakra: 140 / 150

Entropy Style:

There was no reaction to the blow, however, only a light almost devious smile crowned by venomous eyes. The slightly slower movement that she’d cursed him with granted her that extra moment needed to perceived the second attack despite the difficulty of seeing through whatever mischievous jutsu the bald headed tattooed warrior had enacted against her. True, it still took a bit of effort – not to mention she was still in the monsters clutches, but this maneuver would only take nearly the fraction of a second. As Wolfgangs perhaps crab-like clutching hand, being that he was reaching to grab for her neck, came at her she ducked lower and beneath it. Their size difference would work in her favor her – it would be far easier for her to merely duck his attack and slip within his reach. It was a basic tactic used by boxers. A pattern was forming, one that was going to change in the next instant.

Immediately once she was beneath his grasping hand, Oomi launched herself forward like a rocket headed for the moon. Both knees were drawn forward with the complete intent of driving the pair deep into Wolfgangs guts. The idea was to knock the behemoth off his feet and literally give Oomi the upperhand. At which point she pummel him with her free hand until he released her. It wasn’t the best of plans, but it would do for –
…granted he didn’t do something crazy like… Oh, I don’t know… well – we don’t want do give the guy any ideas now do we, Oomi?



Chakra: 135 / 150

Entropy Style:

Despite her recent success Wolfgang was able to strike her quite harshly. Being that she was still in midair and unable to react quickly enough to stop the attack – even with her unique jutsu, the strike found its mark with the greatest of ease. Thusly her body jerked and was forced downward for but the briefest of moments before the monstrous man jerked her back up by the grasp he’d maintained on her now further fractured right forearm. She’d expected him to lift her for a well placed punch, but now this monster was something different, something far more ruthless. As her body was flung through the air the girl swore that she’d blacked out only to find, when she opened her eyes again, that the ground was rushing toward her.

She’d managed to disperse much of the collision out across the ground and lessen the damage taken but it all happened too fast. Even the bit that her jutsu should have done was halved, perhaps even left to do nothing more than a third of its proper work. Luckily, Wolfgang had decided to put some distance between the two of them. Perhaps, he’d decided it not worth the risk to remain within such close proximity while he planned his next attack. Did that mean that she’d hurt him? Of course she was wrong.

For a moment Oomi lie there motionless, the breath drained from her. It was only now that she was beginning to realize that something was drastically wrong. After a ridiculously powerful blow like what she’d just endured… surely a rib was broken, she was positive that her forearm was in no good condition – yet nothing. Oomi’s eyes widened. The first thought was that she’d been paralyzed. That she’d chosen the wrong opponent and before the fight had even begun he’d destroyed her. Arms moved… legs moved… she was standing. A look of utter confusion crossed a skinless façade that was now visible to bystanders.

They of course did not take kindly to the sight. Yet Oomi merely assumed they were reacting to the ferocity with which the two were fighting. She slid her right foot forward, and her left back behind her body whilst she twisted slightly to give Wolfgang her right shoulder. Her right arm then was raised, and the index and middle finger of the hand found there were aimed at Wolfgang. Lips stretched and formed a smile before she spoke, saying; “Bang.” Raiton chakra that had been channeled to the tips of her fingers was instantly fired in Wolfgangs direction, who was just at the edge of their predicted range. Yet, she did not fire a single shot. Instead she’d fire three in rapid success. The first was aimed for Wolfgangs head, the second slightly off to his right perhaps to strike his right arm, and the third in similar fashion to his left. There was only a momentary pause before a fourth shot was fired at the mans heart.

Chakra: 120 / 150

Entropy Style:

”Lighting Release:

He’d been right to think that she knew what she was doing. Every move was meant to lead to the next action, a preparation for what was to come. Even her stance was meant to aid her in the coming moments of the battle. Granted she’d not expected to be defending against a living dinosaur. Reflexes kicked in an her outstretched arm was drawn back before the creature could wrap its mighty jaws about her hand and quite possibly take it. Now her stance proved its usefulness. Her right foot was swung backward moving her body slightly backward to where she’d previously slid her left foot a short distance behind her body. This wouldn’t spare her the force of the creature entirely however. But no matter she’d already been prepared for this as well. The activation of the most basic of techniques in use by her clan would spare her the electric charge completely. However, as it was produced by Raiton chakra the effectiveness of the technique; Genkhairyu: Jutsu-Sho ( Entropy Style: Technique Neutralization ) was lessened and thus able to only neutralize this single jutsu despite their initially being of the same rank. This in unison with Oomi’s quick reflexes would grant her the gift of taking merely an inch of the claws which had been directed to maim her.

Whilst she did this, knowing that the technique; Genkhairyu Ikoiheiki ( Entropy Style: Distortion ) would have been entirely ineffective, she deactivated the abilities effects in order to shift her chakra usage into her next jutsu. She’d need to do it quick before Wolfgang regained his composure and the risk that this menacing dinosaur would find some means to halt her coming jutsu. With that in mind, before the dinosaur could attack her again Oomi kicked off the ground and sent herself back another 10 meters. This would put Wolfgang 20 meters away from her, and Shakli 10 meters in the middle. The technique was going to take a massive amount of chakra to perform, but the payoff would be completely worth it.



Chakra: 110 / 150

Jutsu Used

Entropy Style: Technique Neutralization:

That is not to say that this action would save her from the speedy steps of Shakli who was already on the move and awaiting her landing. No matter, yet another simple technique would free her of this menace, and in doing so in conjunction with the technique that had saved her right forearm she’d unintentionally avoid the second part of the assault that had been directed upon her by Wolfgang.

Together Oomi’s clan technique Entropy Distortion was reactivated, and her own technique Heavenly Steps was activated. This allowed her to ‘land’ in midair as though it were the ground itself some distance from the dinosaurs jaws. She instantly kicked off of this newly formed surface with the aid of her Entropy Distortion and sent herself soaring into the air above them at an increased rate of speed which pulled her out of the range of Wolfgangs attack – or so she thought. The last of his acid darts found its mark, hitting her right ankle as she moved upward – thing made easier by the slight delay caused by injuries sustained whether Oomi knew of them or not. The resulting explosion engulfed Oomi in a cloud of gas which burned at her skin – fortunately she’d been in an upward motion which would bring her nearly 4 meters above the pair. Once she’d reached this distance, Oomi landed once again – if not prevented from doing so of course. This would mean that Shakli was 4 meters, or 13 feet beneath her and Wolfgang was 10 meters away or 33 feet. Both were in range.




Chakra: 80 / 150

[Word Count: 945 ]
[ Word Count: 3,219 / 2000 ]

Jutsu Used

Wind Release:

Entropy Style:

Entropy Style:

Oomi drew in a deep breath as Wolfgang fired yet another set of acid darts. She’d have nothing more than a second to… the dinosaur was on the move and yet just as quickly as he’d gone into action he was cut down by the deft skill of another chuunin that had took it upon himself to join the battle. She almost didn’t recognize him, but those blonde locks said it all. This was Yuzu Ren, come to rescue her yet again. That was becoming a horrible habit and fast. In those moment that she’d come to realize just who was helping her Oomi had directed her right hand, much in the manner she had some time ago, at the acid darts which were now nearly upon her. Zzt! Zzt! Zzzzt! Three shots, and she’d only hit one target. There just wasn’t enough time to aim, not with all the injuries she’d already sustained. It was a miracle that she’d stopped even one of the darts.

Oomi cursed herself as her left knee was stuck by the dart that she missed. Luckily, the one she had hit was the second one directed at her knee. The third was a complete mission – an intentional one, but she was thankful for it. However, this left her with only two options to escape the cloud of acid gas that followed the darts explosion. By slowing the expansion of the cloud itself, Oomi bought herself precious moments to make a decision. Her left knee now in tatters the thing was already more difficult to move, and the ankle which had taken a dart prior was already stiff. No matter, she’d been allotted one last push.

Oomi kicked off the false solidity of the air with her left foot, whilst keeping her knee fairly straight – not by choice of course. This maneuver brought her just outside of the clouds range – though it still lapped at her face and threatened to burn sinew ever so slightly. This would constitute her 3rd step in the technique Heavenly Steps, this meant that she only had two left.

She’d chosen not to use all 15 shots of her Lightning Release: Shock Bullets upon her initial use in the hopes that the remaining shots would come in handy later – which they had and more were still to come. She’d used 7 of them thus far and still had 8 to go. What better to do with them than to put a stop to Wolfgang? “I didn’t need your help, I could’ve handled ol’baldy!” Oomi lied as she held both hands out in front of her as though she were weiding dual pistols. Four balls of lightning were fired from each hand, thusly maxing out the jutsu she’d kept in waiting. The shots were fired in sets of two aimed in a similar fashion as the very first she’d fired – head, arms, and chest. It was a maneuver she’d learned during training that cut off various points of escape. It had been successful prior – maybe… just maybe…

…and still blood dripped from her body. It was a wonder the girl was still moving. Soon enough her body would simply give out on her, but she still had a trick or two left up her sleeve before she was out for the count. Though she’d best get it done quick, she could already feel muscles becoming limp and or stiff as they screamed trying in vain to tell her what levels of agony they were in.


Chakra: 80 / 150
[Word Count: 755 ]
[ Word Count: 3,974 / 2000 ]

Jutsu Used

Lightning Release:

Entropy Style:

The solidified air beneath her feet was dissipated and she fell about six feet before activating the jutsu’s final step. The final drop to the ground was far harsher than she’d realize. Hell, the damage done to her body was extensive yet she’d not a clue how bad it truly was. Though she got an inkling when it was nearly impossible to lift her arm to catch the cloak that had been thrown at her. It was impeccable timing as the last strand of fabric which held the portion of her gi on the right in place finally gave way. Fortunately, what other damage that had been done to her clothing by the various acidic gases that Wolfgang had unleashed on the young woman were quickly covered by the oversized black tunic. As it was made with Wolfgang in mind it fit her like a loose hoody and stretched to her knees – yet surprisingly enough it seemed it would not hinder her movement. “I accept, even though you’re a cheater – what with the dinosaurs, and the explodey things….” She called out to Wolfgang as he vanished from sight after having said his piece to Ren.

“I learned that things always work out for me, in the end.” Oomi said as she tugged at her new garment. “I will play with them! I’ll kick their asses too! Damn bitey bitey lightning dinosaur…” Oomi mumbled. It was then that Ren wrapped his arms around her. A frown slid across the girls lips. Without the same level of adrenaline pumping through her veins she was far more aware of the lack of sensation. Oomi embraced the boy, regardless. It was always nice to feel cared for – to know someone was worried about your well being. Not that her father didn’t do that – just… “Ha, you with grey hair? Crrrrray-zzzzzeee!” She chimed as she pulled the hood of her new tunic over her head and realized it had a cape as well. “Oh my gawd! It has a cape too! Yesss! Total wi –“ She collapsed, flat on her face. Ironically the arrow wouldn’t be needed. Not this time. She’d pushed herself entirely too far.


Exit Thread!


Chakra: 80 / 150
[Word Count: 477 ]
[ Word Count: 4,451 / 2000 ]

[ Training: Ninjutsu C ---> B – 2,000 / 2,000 ]
[ Training: Entropy Style: Entropy Distortion D ---> C – 1,000 / 1,000 ]
[ Training: Entropy Style: Technique Neutralization D ---> C – 1,000 / 1,000 ]
[ Extra: 451 words to be used in ???? ]