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1Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Empty Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:18 pm

Nero Sparda




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Clan: Sons of Sparda (Surname: Sparda)

Kekkei Genkai: Demonic Power

Elements: None

Specialization: Weaponry, Taijutsu

Location: Kirigakure

Clan History: Before his death, a demonic being known as The Dark Knight Sparda fell in love with a Human woman named Eva, who gave birth to three triplet sons: Vergil, Dante, and Nero. Half-demon and half-human, the triplets were born with supernatural abilities as well as white hair and blue eyes, all traits derived from their father's strong Demonic blood. Collectively, they are referred to as the Sons of Sparda. The sons of Sparda spent their early childhood living together with their mother, Eva, after their father's death. Some time after the death of Sparda, Eva was killed by demons sent to “Purge the impure blood” The three brothers were separated in the attack, each believing the others were dead. They each then set out to make a life for themselves, spreading out, and eventually forming large families, thus creating the clan

Kekkei Genkai Description: Sons of Sparda have an extreme rate of regeneration, able to regenerate minor wounds (Small cuts and bruises) almost instantly, and more serious wounds (dismembered limbs, broken bones, ect) over a period of three posts. This regeneration cannot stop a killing blow from being dealt (A stab to the heart, or decapitation will still kill you, for example) Members of the clan can make the choice of having +2 strength to their entire body, or take a Devil Bringer, which increases their strength by 3 ranks in their right arm only (From the shoulder down). This arm is also very durable, being almost impossible to cut. It takes a higher strength rating then the strength of the arm to cut it

Drawbacks: N/A

Members:

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Hell bound:



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2Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Empty Re: Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Tue Sep 17, 2013 9:16 pm

Yōsei

Yōsei


S-rank
Nero Sparda wrote:Kekkei Genkai Description: Sons of Sparda have an extreme rate of regeneration, able to regenerate minor wounds (Small cuts and bruises) almost instantly, and more serious wounds (dismembered limbs, broken bones, ect) over a period of three posts. This regeneration cannot stop a killing blow from being dealt (A stab to the heart, or decapitation will still kill you, for example) Members of the clan can make the choice of having +2 strength to their entire body, or take a Devil Bringer, which increases their strength by 3 ranks in their right arm only (From the shoulder down). This arm is also very durable, being almost impossible to cut. It takes a higher strength rating then the strength of the arm to cut it
Ok. Let's start with this. Your healing factor is a no. That would require medical ninjutsu, and with it being as powerful as it is, would need significant drawbacks. For instance, we have a clan called Hinode who have a regeneration factor, but they suffer from drastically reduced chakra pools as a result.

Next, the +2 to strength option (especially considering you have no drawbacks) is also a no, we don't usually allow clans to get +2s on anything without very very significant drawbacks.

Your +3 to one arm option is a no for the same reasons. Also having your arm be durable enough to withstand A-rank and below attacks when you are a Genin is ridiculously over-powered. There's probably no way to get a +3 to strength in your arm while also withstanding attacks that are from anything lower than an S rank ninja.

Drawbacks: N/A
You must have drawbacks. This is not optional.

I would suggest rewriting most of this clan, as it stands this is not approved and will not get approved unless I see insane drawbacks for your bonuses or you re-work what you want to get in terms of bonuses.

3Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Empty Re: Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Tue Sep 17, 2013 10:36 pm

Shoutoko




D-rank
This may be my personal opinion, but this clan shouldn't be allowed to have inherent regeneration. That's the Hinode's Kekkei Genkai....Besides, a +2 to strength (Devilbringer as-is=no) is a very nice perk by itself.

4Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Empty Re: Sons of Sparda (W.I.P.) Wed Sep 18, 2013 10:12 pm

Nero Sparda




D-rank
I'm sorry, I neglected to mark this as work in progress. Also, thank you for you input, I guess I'm just having trouble understanding the strength ratings. I'll adjust accordingly.

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