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1Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Mon Aug 05, 2013 12:05 pm

Ukio

Ukio


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Name: Hebi

Rank: C-rank

Species: Snake

Appearance: The Snake is 6 feet long with fangs that reach down 2 inches when the mouth is fully open to strike. These fangs pierce into the skin but release no fatal toxin.

Personality: Hebi has a mischievous behavior that Ukio at times cannot even understand. Wandering off at times to find his own food, he refuses to eat from the hands of Ukio. However, he can always be sure Hebi is one strike away from being at his aid wherever he is.

Techniques:

Name: Hebi Strike
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 15 feet
Specialty: None
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: Hebi leaps towards an opponent, opening his mouth to reveal a kunai. Generally aiming for the head, upon making contact with the target he will sink his fangs into their head to latch on. Used in combination with Constrict, it can have satisfying results.



Last edited by Ukio on Sun Aug 11, 2013 11:36 am; edited 7 times in total

2Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Mon Aug 05, 2013 12:28 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Please detail how big the snake is and how deep his fangs can pierce into flesh.

3Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Mon Aug 05, 2013 5:28 pm

Ukio

Ukio


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edited

4Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:30 pm

Bokuden

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Those numbers are entirely too high for a C-Rank Pet. With that length and piercing depth you are looking at more of an A-Rank pet. 6 feet in length and 2 inches with the fangs are the max I'd allow for this pet at C-Rank.

5Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:42 pm

Ukio

Ukio


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edited

6Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Mon Aug 05, 2013 11:59 pm

Bokuden

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Ukio wrote: These fangs pierce into the skin but release no fatal toxins. However, it can release a surge of lightning chakra to shock the opponent.

No, it can't. Pets don't use elemental jutsu (which is what this would have to be even if it was allowed, not free raiton bite).

7Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:33 am

Ukio

Ukio


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edited

8Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Tue Aug 06, 2013 7:37 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
For the jutsu, please give "smaller" a number. Also, if they are indeed smaller than the original then the piercing power of their fangs should also be lower than the original's.

9Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Tue Aug 06, 2013 10:09 am

Ukio

Ukio


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Edited

10Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:22 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Why would a six foot long snake break up into three 2 inch snakes? O.o I mean, I guess it could be allowed, but that seems VERY small. A 2 inch long snake would not have 1 inch piercing power.

11Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Tue Aug 06, 2013 5:54 pm

Ukio

Ukio


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Woah ;-; didn't mean that. Edited.

12Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Tue Aug 06, 2013 6:22 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Please use the site approved jutsu template.

13Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Thu Aug 08, 2013 11:12 am

Ukio

Ukio


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edited

14Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Sun Aug 11, 2013 11:16 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


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The thing about constrict is that you could probably just rp that in witthout having to spend chakra for it. And with the kunai regurgitation, is he llaunching it or just using it like Orochimaru used his kusanagi sword?

15Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Sun Aug 11, 2013 11:36 am

Ukio

Ukio


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He's using it like Orochimaru, as he ranks up he'll use bigger weapons.

I should probably just keep the Kunai technique then.

Edited.

16Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Empty Re: Hebi [C-rank/Combat] Sun Aug 11, 2013 12:30 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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I'd probably add a second technique, just because it is free. But if you can't think of one now, I'll let you app it later. I'm also unsure of exactly what kinds of weapons the snake would actually be able to regurgitate and use since pets don't naturally have Bukijutsu. It might be a good idea to bring that up with an Administrator or a Global Moderator. But as it is now ~Approved~ for 1k ryo. Enjoy~

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