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1Apples... [ Open | Training | No Kill ] Empty Apples... [ Open | Training | No Kill ] Thu Jun 20, 2013 5:05 pm

Suzumi Mayori

Suzumi Mayori


D-rank
Ahh, the smell of the market! The joy was almost bursting out of Suzumi, there was almost nothing she loved as much as taking a walk across the market square. She walked by various stalls, feeling the weight of her (full) right pocket. Hmm... What should I get? I'm in the mood for some fruit, I think... She saved a week of allowance so she could buy whatever she wanted here, but now that she's here, nothing seems to actually be interesting, or is heavily overpriced. It would be best to just buy something to eat, and continue strolling by, actually.

She look around her, looking for the best choice. I want something juicy... And sweet, juicy and sweet! And that's when it hit her. Apples. Apples what she was thinking about. And, was it a coincidance that she was just standing by a stall that sold nothing but apples? I think not. It was destiny. She turned to the lady, who was pretty nice as well. She had short black hair, and some casual clothes on. Suzu glared at which of the apples looked the tastiest...

"Can I help you?"

The lady's voice snapped Suzumi back to memory, so she responded with a nice and friendly voice.

"Oh, yes please. I'd like an apple."

"Just one? How about you take five, and get an extra one for free!"

The lady responded back, but it wasn't quite the response Suzumi expected. She was trying to get her to buy more apples... Hmmph. I said I wanted an apple, that means I want an apple... Suzumi looked at the seller with a "are you serious" face, before responding, still trying to sound nice.

"Ughh... No thanks, I just want the one if that's alright."

The lady looked a little offended, but didn't say a word. There was an awful silence, where both of them just kept glaring at each other's eyes, like it was a Texas standoof, just about to commence.

"That'll be two ryo, dear."

The odd lady finally decided to end the silence. Hahah, I knew she'd crack... Suzumi gave her the money, and picked the biggest and juiciest apple on the rack, biting it the moment she took it. Sweetness filled her senses; this was surely the best apple she ate so far. She swirled around on her heels, completing several full circles before she took off from the stand, more hopping than walking, actually.

Wordcount: 432/2000

Training Bukijutsu C -> B.

Chakra - 150/150:

Otto

Otto


D-rank
Otto stared at his prey for a long time he had been gone for so long; partying, drinking, and dancing that money eluded him for some reason or other. He stared at the stand with all the focus of a bird of prey.  The apples looked great bright red and certainly with a crisp color like that they must be juicy. He stared and watched as a person approached the stand. A Girl maybe 13 years old max she wouldn’t be a problem there was no way she would stand in the way of his plans {insert evil laugh here}. With a smile he climbed down from the place in which he had taken haven so as to pick a suitable target.

The place in question was another shop, so as you can imagine he gained a few glances from people who had to deal with his ass in their face. There were a few groans of disapproval but Otto had one thing on his mind fresh apples. He winked at the disapproving Kirigakure residents then smoothly put his finger over his mouth,” Shhhh” he said with a cool smile. Then explosively with no warning he charged past the apple girl. She began to spin allowing him enough time to slide past her and crash into the apples sending them flying everywhere. With practiced skill he caught at least 8 apples then ran left into the clearest possible area.

239/10000000000

Suzumi Mayori

Suzumi Mayori


D-rank
She wast walking away, when, an apple hit her, right in the middle of the head! OW! She turned around, reflexively, only to see the apple stall lying on the floor, together with like a hundred of apples, and the lady on the floor. A guy was there, looked a bit over Suzu's age. It appeared that he was trying (and succeeding) in catching the apples. The sight, for some strange reason, had a strong association to a juggling monkey. Suzumi chuckled at the thought, just as the boy fled the scene. Everybody was confused, yelling and laughing. Nobody seemed to see the direction the young vandal headed for, nobody except Suzumi at least.

"Where did he go, where did he go???"

The woman, that now got up from the floor yelled, and Suzumi was the first one to answer.

"This way! He went this way, and toppled me as well!"

The crowd formed, and together they ran to catch the shoplifter. Suzumi moved to the site, smiling. That's what you get... It wasn't nice of Suzumi to lie about the location of the shoplifter, but she actually didn't care all that much. When the crowd cleared, she grabbed another apple from the floor (the mob threw the heavenly one she had out of her hand, and stompeled it) and bite it, after wiping it with her face. She then started running, in the direction of the mysterious boy. Who knows, this might just end up as an adventure.

Wordcount: 681/2000

chakra - 150/150:

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