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1The Sakusen Empty The Sakusen Sat May 04, 2013 9:45 pm

Kami Sarutobi

Kami Sarutobi


D-rank
Symbol:
The Sakusen Yin-yang_trans
Clan: The Sakusen

Kekkei Genkai:Genetic Enhancement

Elements:None

Specialization: Kenjutsu

Location: scattered

Clan History:The Sakusen are a group of soldiers trained at birth, but carry the title of a clan. At the age of one year old, the infant is placed amongst several other babies for many hours a day for early recreation and social interaction. Around eight, that is when strict training regimens are given, up to twelve hours a day of practice. Finally at adulthood, eighteen, they are forced to spar their own family members who are also trained soldiers to the death. The victor is allowed to leave the compound and join a ninja village of their choice. This structure is what makes the Sakusen renowned throughout the countries, making them an asset in any military force.

Kekkei Genkai Description:The Sakusen have a high tolerance to blunt force trauma due to their well-defined muscle fibers. Weaker projectiles that make contact can even be shrugged off with a movement of the hand, deflecting it off to the side. From birth, these soldiers are given a concentrated form of calcium that is taken daily through a syringe in the arm. This enhancement has increased the bone mass to a powerful degree, making their skeletal structure immune to high amounts of pressure. With the added weight provided by the heavy bones, getting a Sakusen off of their feet is a task in and of itself.

Drawbacks: Using the secret jutsu causes the user to bypass physical inhibitors of the mind, in consequence causes heavy strain on the users body. Muscle soreness is common in many Sakusen, but overuse of their techniques will begin to cause their muscles to rip and tear apart. From their mass, their speed is slowed by one tier.

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Last edited by Enus on Tue May 07, 2013 2:35 pm; edited 3 times in total

2The Sakusen Empty Re: The Sakusen Tue May 07, 2013 2:18 pm

Kami Sarutobi

Kami Sarutobi


D-rank
Ready for review.

3The Sakusen Empty Re: The Sakusen Wed May 08, 2013 3:27 am

Takao

Takao


S-rank
Spoiler:
What constitutes as "weaker projectiles"? E Rank?

The minimum rank for broken bones is B Rank, so are they able to withstand this minimum? How much pressure above normal does it take to break their bones?

Spoiler:
Are you aware of the limitations of a D Rank technique? The ability to "effortlessly" slice through the trunk of a "thick tree" is too ambiguous of a description. My definition of a thick tree is likely different from your definition, so a more definite reference to the power of this technique is required. Also, the hell do you mean by "vertically" slicing through the trunk of a tree? Are you implying that with a D Rank technique, you could effortlessly slice a thick tree in half down the middle?

Spoiler:
Remove this technique entirely. This is borderline metagame, and I have no idea what possessed you to label this is a Kenjutsu technique. You don't even mention a sword.

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