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1Heishi Empty Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 5:24 pm

Sero

Sero


S-rank
Symbol:Heishi Fist_1x


Heishi FAHfQ33
Clan Name: Heishi
Location: Iwagakure
Specialization: Taijutsu
Elements: N/A


Heishi HhU72Pp
Clan History: The Heishi is a blood line focused on the physical body. Training their bodies to surpass the common limits of others. From a young age their aptitude for which two physical traits they are talented with is determined before they are set to train their body to those traits. The clan has always supplied Iwagakure with their young in order to fill the ranks with capable fighters. It is considered a great honor to gain ranks within the shinobi rank and file. The entire compound is very militaristic. It is common for members of this clan to be selected from the village to join the Daimyo's guard. Within the clan there is its own ranking system with a general leading the clan. Each academy graduate is considered a private and must accomplish missions to rank up within the clan.(Missions must be apped by the individual wishing to take them) The General position requiring a duel. The ranks are as follows.

Private - academy student
Specialist - Academy Graduate (Genin)
Corporal - Genin with mission accomplished (C rank)
Sergeant - Chunnin
Warrant Officer - Chunnin with Mission accomplished (B rank)
Lieutenant - Special Jounin
Captain - Special Jounin with mission accomplished (A rank)
Major - Jounin
Colonel - Jounin with mission accomplished (S rank)

On top of the normal rank up guidelines members of this clan can not rank up within the shinobi ranks without ranking up in their clan first. Their clan mission must be accomplished on top of the normal rank up requirements.



Members: Empty


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Kekkei Genkai Name: Sukiru no shōten (Skill Focus)

Kekkei Genkai Description:Members of this clan add which two stats they focus in their character app in place of the normal taijutsu focus. Those two stats can be trained up each rank a full rank higher. (If they pick Reaction time and Strength both stats can be trained a rank higher but the other three stats still cap normally. AKA two stats at genin can be trained to C-3.)

Drawbacks: Unlike usual this clan gains no passives from taijutsu. They can not train stats higher than the cap until after they complete their mission for their clan for their rank. All training wc for stats is 15% percent higher. On top of the normal rank up guidelines, members of this clan can not rank up within the shinobi ranks without ranking up in their clan first. Their clan mission must be accomplished on top of the normal rank up requirements. This mission pay out is only the clan rank up and can not give any other type of reward. Once the two stats chosen at genin are approved with the character app these two stats can no longer be changed.
Must take hesitant element
Must take hesitant spec
The Heishi cannot receive passive buffs that amplify their focused stats (special characteristics, passive jutsu, etc),
Any jutsu or other method that would increase their Focused Stats improve them at a negative one of what they normally would have.



Last edited by Sero on Sat Jan 13, 2018 9:14 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 5:53 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Hiya Sero! Nice to see a taijutsu focused clan app (Now make a bukijutsu one)

Now, since I'm clueless and rather new at this, I hope you'll humor my excessive amounts of (almost stupidly simple) questions concerning everything. ^_^


KKG: We'll address this later, depending on how drawbacks go.

Drawbacks: These missions that clan members have to complete, these are going to be written up later correct? Because if possible I would like to have them on the app. Additionally when you say cap do you mean the normal cap for any given rank?

I think that will be it for now.

3Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 5:59 pm

Sero

Sero


S-rank
Its based on each rank yes. So each rank has those two stats they select at character creation able to go one full rank higher once they complete the clan mission

As for the clan mission as the history states its to be custom made by the person going for the in clan rank up. There are no special notes needed to be included so long as they follow the mission guidelines. The pay out for the mission though is the rank up.

4Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 6:22 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Ah, I see. So every time a clan member completes one of this 'clan' missions they can start training above the cap. Please increase the training WC requirements to +20%. Also, I see this in your clan history.

"On top of the normal rank up guidelines members of this clan can not rank up within the shinobi ranks without ranking up in their clan first. Their clan mission must be accomplished on top of the normal rank up requirements."

If you're serious about this, please include it in the drawbacks section. (In truth I would've asked you even if you weren't serious.)

5Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 6:25 pm

Sero

Sero


S-rank
Edits made

6Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 6:35 pm

Sero

Sero


S-rank
Edits made again

7Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 6:55 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Now, let's get down to the real work here. *Cracks knuckles*.

Sero, so....

- A bit of a repetitive note on this one but also note in the KKG section that these focuses cannot be switched once chosen.

- Although you have a lot of drawbacks, these mostly just serve to stall from going from the min to the max. It's not bad. However I will need another more active drawback for this to be more balanced. For example: Such a physical clan wouldn't suffer, let's say, in their elemental training? Or ninjutsu perhaps? Because although your KKG only allows for one rank above the normal having a whole rank of stat above your opponents is a massive advantage, and for a genin to have two stats at that level, even if you have to massively train it, you're gonna need to balance that part. If you do that you can lower the training increase to 15%.

8Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 7:10 pm

Sero

Sero


S-rank
Threw in two drawbacks for you

9Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 7:11 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Unless anyone has anything to say about this or an issue arrises, consider this clan officially-

~APPROVED!~

10Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 9:06 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
~ A bit of an embarrassing moment for me but for the moment this clan is considered withdrawn for some issues that occurred to me.



- We never really addressed how your clan interacts with other stat increases. Even a +1 in a focused stat could potentially leave them with 2 full ranks above their opponents. Thus, could you please add, "The Heishi cannot receive passive buffs that amplify their focused stats (special characteristics, passive jutsu, etc), additionally due to the natural limitations of the human body at any point of development, when Heishi use jutsu or similar methods to increase their focused stat it strengthens them by -1 of what it usually would."

Or something like that. Once that is done I'll look over the clan again to see what drawbacks are no longer needed or need to be adjusted.

11Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sat Jan 13, 2018 9:15 pm

Sero

Sero


S-rank
Either way edits made

12Heishi Empty Re: Heishi Sun Jan 14, 2018 7:44 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
APPROVED

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