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Makoto~

Makoto~


D-rank
D-Rank Quest Mission Building a Training Ground Foundation:

Makoto was always having trouble finding good training locations, it was then that he discovered this quest which seemed to be motivated by like minded individuals. He got there and proceeded to check what tools he brought with him, to be honest he felt this would have been easier if he had the earth element. In the end he got out a spade which he struggled to lift up as he dropped it to the ground. After lifting the spade a few times he decided to use his new technique as he performed the clone seal and created up to four clones who did not seem to have much going for them as they all helped to carry the spade.

Making use of team work and some co-ordination Makoto and his clones began to dig the first corner of the foundation with the help of one clone, the other three clones went to mark the other three corners as they continued with their work wondering if anyone else would want to help him with the start of this mission as it may take the whole day at this rate. In the end they needed to create a more efficient training ground for the future of iwagakure as well as for Makoto to one day master his jutsu he would need an area to practice so he would help towards this venture in the hopes of finding time to use this location. It was all for the sake of the village, but to those who actually knew the truth they understood Makoto was doing it all for the sake of jutsu. As he raised the spade the two of them dug in the first corner that would mark the outer boundary of this training area.

Words = 295
Quest Mission = 295/1250

Experimental Clone Technique Used
Makoto = 250 - 10(d-rank jutsu) - 20(clone chakra) = 220
Clones 1-4 = 5/5 chakra

Jutsu:

Makoto~

Makoto~


D-rank
After digging together for quite some while the few makoto's were a bit annoyed at the heat of the day and the sweat on his brow. He got so hungry and so famished he wish he could eat a cow. He ate and ate and could not relate to the fact that he had to debate the hate of his current weak state.

The ravishing pains that his mind could not explains as he began to move towards the second corner for the foundations after finishing the first, the other makoto's followed closely behind in order not to disperse as the reached the next corner with spades in hand, they raised them into the air with all the strength that they had as they followed up by plummeting the blades of their spades into the earth. This was the land of the rock and now he was going to break the rock to build a foundation for another rock to be placed at a later time as they kept on digging and digging.

Striking down he hit something really hard as the five makoto's looked to one another and then they walked slowly as if they were in some kind of hit shinobi theatrical show. The main makoto walked in the center, the makoto on his right was making some water ninjutsu hand seals, the left makoto was doing fire ninjutsu hand seals, the other two makoto's just stretched and scratched their heads. They found the special items, two pick axes made for helping with the building process as they all walked together.

They began to hum a strange song as they all gathered to the point two makotos each hold a pick axe together while the main makoto flexed about a bit. "I will rest, maybe talking to you guys is stupid, but who cares since we are all alone out here" as he spoke to himself or his clones or were they even really a part of him to begin with. He felt jealousy in them becoming jutsu itself as they raised the pick axes high up towards the sky and then dropped it down.

Words = 295 + 361 = 656
Quest Mission = 656/1250

Experimental Clone Technique Active
Makoto = 220
Clones 1-4 = 5/5 chakra

Makoto~

Makoto~


D-rank
"hmmm hmm hmm hmm hmm" as all the makoto's hummed together as the one pair raised the pick axe, the other pair dropped it down as a cling sound was made as the vibrations were crazy. The pair then did their best to raise up the pick axe again, then the other pair brought it down as it made a clang sound as they were getting tired and frustrated as the main makoto realized he could not sleep during this as he watched they continued with a cling and a clang and then he began to get annoyed as did the clones.

Makoto joined them as he decided to create something unexpected, or do something that was the makoto way as they all took off their tops and then the real makoto signaled for a short break as he formed a basic dog hand seal and a pond of water formed beneath his feet, then he performed the hidden mist technique in a way to not block their view as the mist shrouded them it was meant to block out the heat of the molten hot burning rock known as the sun as they began to get ready. The sweat on Makoto's forehead soaking into his hair was now mixing with the mist as they began the humming once more. With a cling over here and a clang over there and the urge to go crazy he started shouting out. "Break, break, break, break, break" as they continued hammering down with the pickaxes until a clash that made a completely different sound as things crumbled something came up from the spot and the clones dispersed as Makoto looked at the madness as a geyser sprouted out and he thought to himself that this might be good for training as this corner would become something else as he formed the clone seal and created water clones which were far more durable then the clones he made earlier.

This time makoto was prepared and he would not be holding back this time, he was going to build this foundation as much as possible for the completion of this mission to benefit himself, not only the village.


Words = 656 + 366 = 1022
Quest Mission = 1022/1250

Water Clone Technique Activated
Makoto = 220 - 15 = 205 - 100 = 105
Clones 1-5 = 20 chakra

Makoto~

Makoto~


D-rank
Makoto felt the weight of the work do its toll as he managed to finally complete the final foundations for the mission as he began to sway slightly, his forehead full of sweat as it dripped down his forehead to his brow, as he had to get this all done somehow. Makoto had been working hard to complete this mission so he would one day have a location to train his jutsu and to call his own, in the end he wanted there to be a place where all of the jutsu masters in the world could train, and in this place he would observe and learn from all of them until there was no more jutsu left for him to learn again.

Makoto could not move much anymore as he started to feel his energy fade away as the clones splashed apart into puddles of water as he nearly hit the floor just getting his hand in front of him in time. He began to breathe heavily as the sweat was dripping like crazy, he had pushed himself. Although others were allowed to join in this mission, no one had come and no one wanted to help him out. In the end Makoto would always be alone, no matter where he went.

He finished the mission and then went to hand in before collapsing upon completion of his mission. He was then taken to the hospital for exhaustion as he was sound asleep as the nurse who usually helped him had a sad look on her face. In the end there was nothing she could do for this boy, but watch him work himself until the moment he collapses and never gets up again.

Words = 1022 + 285 = 1307
Quest Mission Complete = 750 + 500 = 1250 words

Mission Pay = 150 ryo + 1 EP

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