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Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Mission name: First Dance // Baroque of Bracken Bone
Mission rank: S (Criminal)
Objective: Kill the First Assassin
Location: Kirigakure
Reward: 3k Ryo
Mission description:

Bao Sanniang, the youngest but most loyal of Zhuge's Assassins managed to find a way to pry free of the technique which had long drugged her to the will of her lord. Using this chance to defy his edicts in a bid for attention and favor, she's rallied the united armed force Under the feudal lord in a desperate attempt to ambush Ayakashi and end her once and for all, taking an entire forest village hostage to draw out the Mizukage and her thralls. However, due to her reliance and addiction to the control, Sanniang has made herself psychologically vulnerable, though unbound. Having not felt pain for half a decade and the deterioration of her emotional state, she will likely not back down, but be a far more powerful opponent.

Mission details:

Aya and those with her will receive a distress note from a dying courier, relaying that a fortress townage of Sp. Jounin in the forest had been overrun by strange warriors dressed in red, led by a mysterious young girl who moved faster than any of them could see.

Attacking the village, it will look like a spider had struck at it, covered with wire threads as Bao had set the stage with her deadly vortex spinners, an ensuing fight with Bao and her many, many minions (100) will ensue where Aya and others will have to both rescue hostages that Bao and her men will attempt to execute as distractions to divide the party.

After her minions are dealt with, Bao will empower herself with a chakra state similar to sage mode, giving her and all her jutsu the same bonuses as senjutsu techniques for the remainder of the fight, increasing any stats under SS-2 to SS-2 and her specs and elements increase in power by 1 rank as well as giving her a borderline ludicrous boost in overall power to an almost legendary extent. After she is eliminated, reinforcements will arrive, forcing the party to flee, but finally with a success under their belt as the tides begin to change.

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Last edited by Ayakashi on Tue Aug 08, 2017 6:34 pm; edited 9 times in total

Nozomi

Nozomi


D-rank
1/2 approval

Mitsuo

Mitsuo


S-rank
Approved~

Mitsuo

Mitsuo


S-rank
I'm pulling this quickly, as going through it again I realized that this isn't a SS Ranked mission. It should be difficult for a SS Ranked person to complete, but it's not even close. I want you to make the NPC more powerful, she shouldn't only have A Rank specs and elements, that is ridiculous. I'd also like you to increase her endurance and strength to S-3.

As for the minions, they again are too weak. They should each have S Rank specs and elements at A Rank and be carrying A-S Rank weapons. This would make it much more realistic for a SS Ranked mission. It should be something of world changing import, and as it currently stands, it is something that any S Rank on the site could easily solo.

I'm sorry I didn't go through this better earlier. I made a mistake of just seeing the 1/2 approval and not reading it. I won't make that mistake again.

Make the recommended edits, and I will re-approve.

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Fixed

Mitsuo

Mitsuo


S-rank
I can point to several S Ranks who could kill 100 A Rank ninja~

That said this looks better, thank you.

Approved~

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Altered to S rank.

Seeking approval

Mitsuo

Mitsuo


S-rank
Approved~

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
Revoked.

Daimyo and other national level political characters are considered site NPCs. Anything involving them or that would influence that sphere of the world is completely off-limits to member manipulation and must come directly from the administration. If you have something you'd like to propose, submit something in writing to the admins and we'll discuss it internally. Applications coming from members breaching this area of the geopolitical landscape will not be permitted.

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
This plot-line was approved by Andrea a LOOOONG time ago, and it's been no secret moving forward on site in almost 20 threads for over the past year and a half in kiri... so feel free to confer with her about this one, cos it's a bit late to stop the ball now... In the end, it does little to effect the geopolitical landscape of the country as it all resets itself nicely at the end of the intended arc. If you would like to talk to me about this in person, feel free to PM me about the subject and I will happily give you the in depth details of the plot-line and how it is intended to be resolved.

-Aya :)

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
In the mean time, removed any and all reference of the Daimyo, instead replacing it with a feudal lord who is within the village, whom is not a national level NPC, thus addressing your concerns.

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Finished le mission with Sero and Nozomi. 15000 / 11000

Max reward: 6000 ryo

Part 1:
http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

Part 2:
http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#205059

Sayuri

Sayuri


D-rank
Ayakashi wrote:Finished le mission with Sero and Nozomi. 15000 / 11000

Max reward: 6000 ryo

Part 1:
http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

Part 2:
http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#205059

This is being Approved~ as an S-Rank Criminal Mission, the payment for which will follow the current guidelines which is 3000 ryo.

Sero

Sero


S-rank
http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 1 of the mission
2322

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 2 of the mission

6165

total of 8487


6250/6250 for the 3000 pay out

2237 left over

Using 2200 for an extra 1,100

Requested pay out of 4,100

Sayuri

Sayuri


D-rank
Sero wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 1 of the mission
2322

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 2 of the mission

6165

total of 8487


6250/6250 for the 3000 pay out

2237 left over

Using 2200 for an extra 1,100

Requested pay out of 4,100

Approved~

Sayuri

Sayuri


D-rank
Sayuri wrote:
Sero wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 1 of the mission
2322

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only
Part 2 of the mission

6165

total of 8487


6250/6250 for the 3000 pay out

2237 left over

Using 2200 for an extra 1,100

Requested pay out of 4,100

Approved~

PAID~

Mitsuo

Mitsuo


S-rank
Ayakashi has been paid~

Nozomi

Nozomi


D-rank
http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#208217

The completed missions TWC: 6131
1100*50/100= 550 extra ryo

Crime Mission Payout: 3000 + 550 = 3550 + Hunternin Captain bonus of 30% (1065) = 4615 Ryo reward

Izumi

Izumi


A-rank
Nozomi wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#208217

The completed missions TWC: 6131
1100*50/100= 550 extra ryo

Crime Mission Payout: 3000 + 550 = 3550 + Hunternin Captain bonus of 30% (1065) = 4615 Ryo reward

Approved for 4615 ryo! Please see the Admin Thread for payment.

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Izumi Karisuma wrote:
Nozomi wrote:http://www.narutosaga.com/t23815-baroque-of-bracken-bone-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only

http://www.narutosaga.com/t25002-baroque-of-bracken-bone-part-2-the-first-dance-ss-mission-plot-invite-only#208217

The completed missions TWC: 6131
1100*50/100= 550 extra ryo

Crime Mission Payout: 3000 + 550 = 3550 + Hunternin Captain bonus of 30% (1065) = 4615 Ryo reward

Approved for 4615 ryo! Please see the Admin Thread for payment.

PAID

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