1 Flashback: Forging Steel! [Private] Sun May 28, 2017 9:15 pm
Konjiki Jin
D-rank
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The following takes place one year ago, between the Hidden Sand and Hidden River...
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Through the shaded entrance, three horse drawn carriages emerged one after the other. The sand kicked up by the black steeds was like a soft mist, which quickly spread wide as it escaped into the outside. The horses neighed valiantly, well rested and ready to traverse the great expanse. The center carriage was lined with steel drawn ornaments and designs painted aureate; when struck by sunlight, they give off a brilliant shine like a signal from a distant mirror. The rest of it was made of curved wood from the finest pine, painted red with curtain drawn windows on either sides. The other two carriages were regular wooden ones, rectangular and very simple-- the black paint was warn from usage near the underside.
From the center carriage, a child with chestnut hair looked upwards, as the light from the sun shun through his window and lit up his eyes through the glass pane. He was humbled before the tall graduated walls of sandstone, which comprised the massive walls. At this angle, they seemed to pierce the very clouds, curving to the top like a row of skyscrapers. With his mouth agape, almost smiling, it was both thrilling and yet frightening. This was a shinobi village, one of the great five, and he knew not of such a life. He lived in a more safe, socially segmented environment, and coming here felt like walking straight into a police station. The scenery gave him comfort, so he reveled in them, ignoring the dozens of onlooking Suna-nin who were posted upon the walls.
The vehicles came to a slow stop, and the sandy mist quickly dispersed. The child looked to the front, seeing the leading carriage-- and in front of that, two more Suna-nin. They stood at attention on Either side of the road like posts, with their mummy-like appendages and flak jackets wavering in the wind. In what seemed like a flicker, yet another Sand ninja appeared out of the blue . His details were similar to the others, for they all looked the same to the boy. He gestured in a friendly manner, giving some sort of signal, then advancing towards the center carriage. The boy looked to his right now, through the other window on the far side, which his father was near to-- his mother in the center. The Sand ninja rested his forearm on the window, propped his weight on the vehicle, , and gave a formal smile:
"Mornin' Mr.K, hope everything went well."
He coughed shortly after speaking. The man wore regular ninja gear, with a katana strapped to his back. He was middle aged, brown messy hair, and bore a few scars on his face. Something about his speech reminded Jin of a shopkeeper, for it was robotic, but somehow sincere. He looked at Jin for a brief moment and smiled. Jin was uneasy, as most ninja made him, but smiled nonetheless. His mother smirked, placed a hand upon Jin's small shoulder in reassurance, as she saw the mini transaction of smiles.
"I see you brought your kid along this time. Thats good, he'll make a fine business man some day, like his father --"
"Yes Ganju, always a pleasure."
Mr.Konjiki mused, tilting his pinstriped black fedora as he nodded.
"He asked to come personally, something about sand storms and tornadoes."
Ganju laughed,
"Well, kid, you can look, but no touching, Suna's orders."
He looked over his shoulder towards the village,
"Well Mr.K, as customary, we send a ninja with you as escort through the gorges-- your safety is top priority... She'll be here shortly, and will be riding in either the front or back carriages. Oh,and don't be fooled by her size-- "
He leaned in, as if telling a secret with an eye squinted,
even the tiniest scorpions got a lethal dose waiting for ya."
He winked, then taped the window sill as a friendly gesture, and walked away.
Jin looked mildly distressed, wondering what dangers could a baron desert offer short of scorching heat and sinus problems, certainly scorpions were of no threat. He looked behind now, eager to see what sort of ninja was their escort...
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The following takes place one year ago, between the Hidden Sand and Hidden River...
Characters:
- Jin Konjiki
- Midori Ningyou (pre-Kazekage)
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Through the shaded entrance, three horse drawn carriages emerged one after the other. The sand kicked up by the black steeds was like a soft mist, which quickly spread wide as it escaped into the outside. The horses neighed valiantly, well rested and ready to traverse the great expanse. The center carriage was lined with steel drawn ornaments and designs painted aureate; when struck by sunlight, they give off a brilliant shine like a signal from a distant mirror. The rest of it was made of curved wood from the finest pine, painted red with curtain drawn windows on either sides. The other two carriages were regular wooden ones, rectangular and very simple-- the black paint was warn from usage near the underside.
From the center carriage, a child with chestnut hair looked upwards, as the light from the sun shun through his window and lit up his eyes through the glass pane. He was humbled before the tall graduated walls of sandstone, which comprised the massive walls. At this angle, they seemed to pierce the very clouds, curving to the top like a row of skyscrapers. With his mouth agape, almost smiling, it was both thrilling and yet frightening. This was a shinobi village, one of the great five, and he knew not of such a life. He lived in a more safe, socially segmented environment, and coming here felt like walking straight into a police station. The scenery gave him comfort, so he reveled in them, ignoring the dozens of onlooking Suna-nin who were posted upon the walls.
The vehicles came to a slow stop, and the sandy mist quickly dispersed. The child looked to the front, seeing the leading carriage-- and in front of that, two more Suna-nin. They stood at attention on Either side of the road like posts, with their mummy-like appendages and flak jackets wavering in the wind. In what seemed like a flicker, yet another Sand ninja appeared out of the blue . His details were similar to the others, for they all looked the same to the boy. He gestured in a friendly manner, giving some sort of signal, then advancing towards the center carriage. The boy looked to his right now, through the other window on the far side, which his father was near to-- his mother in the center. The Sand ninja rested his forearm on the window, propped his weight on the vehicle, , and gave a formal smile:
"Mornin' Mr.K, hope everything went well."
He coughed shortly after speaking. The man wore regular ninja gear, with a katana strapped to his back. He was middle aged, brown messy hair, and bore a few scars on his face. Something about his speech reminded Jin of a shopkeeper, for it was robotic, but somehow sincere. He looked at Jin for a brief moment and smiled. Jin was uneasy, as most ninja made him, but smiled nonetheless. His mother smirked, placed a hand upon Jin's small shoulder in reassurance, as she saw the mini transaction of smiles.
"I see you brought your kid along this time. Thats good, he'll make a fine business man some day, like his father --"
"Yes Ganju, always a pleasure."
Mr.Konjiki mused, tilting his pinstriped black fedora as he nodded.
"He asked to come personally, something about sand storms and tornadoes."
Ganju laughed,
"Well, kid, you can look, but no touching, Suna's orders."
He looked over his shoulder towards the village,
"Well Mr.K, as customary, we send a ninja with you as escort through the gorges-- your safety is top priority... She'll be here shortly, and will be riding in either the front or back carriages. Oh,and don't be fooled by her size-- "
He leaned in, as if telling a secret with an eye squinted,
even the tiniest scorpions got a lethal dose waiting for ya."
He winked, then taped the window sill as a friendly gesture, and walked away.
Jin looked mildly distressed, wondering what dangers could a baron desert offer short of scorching heat and sinus problems, certainly scorpions were of no threat. He looked behind now, eager to see what sort of ninja was their escort...
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