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1Shinka Empty Shinka Mon Oct 17, 2016 4:51 pm

Sutaka

Sutaka


D-rank
Name: 心火 (Shinka)
Species: Northern Mockingbird (Mimus polyglottos) [Standard Combat Pet]
Rank: D (-3 tiers in STR and END, +3 tiers in REA and PER)
Specializations: Ninjutsu,  Taijutsu (Physiology)
Elements: -
Appearance: Like most female mockingbirds, Shinka's upper parts are colored grey, while her underparts are colored white. Her eyes are a sharp yellow, and her beak is a dark black. Shinka is the the average size for her species, measuring 24.3 centimeters from beak to tail-tip. Her wingspan is 33.5 centimeters, and she weighs about 53.8 grams.
Spoiler:
Personality: Shinka is less of pet and more of a tagalong. She fends for herself, and just accompanies Sutaka on whatever journeys he might go on. While not flying high above him, she is usually found on Sutaka's shoulder or a nearby tree. Shinka enjoys making songs, and she can usually be heard wherever Sutaka is found (whenever he doesn't mind detection). Shinka can usually understand some of the clicks Sutaka makes as a makeshift language. The responses Shinka makes are much more limited than Sutaka's, as she can only communicate one chirp for no, two chirps for yes, three for maybe, and other simple responses. Shinka will also peck at her companion whenever she wishes for his attention, or whenever he somehow offended her.

Techniques: Shinka can use her beak and claws as weaponry, but they are treated as weapons 1 rank below her own.



Last edited by Sutaka on Thu Oct 20, 2016 2:43 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Shinka Empty Re: Shinka Thu Oct 20, 2016 12:58 pm

Harue

Harue


D-rank
1) Under Appearance, please change the measurements from imperial to metric.

2) Under Species, add that this is a Standard Combat Pet.

3) For Techniques, change it to fit the following:
"Other biological weaponry, like claws, stingers, and teeth are treated as a weapon of 1 rank lower than the pet."

4) Please remove the jutsu. You should app your pet and jutsu separately, as I'm not trained in jutsu. After both have been approved, you can add the jutsu to your pet's techniques in your item locker.

5) While you didn't add this in, I will need to discuss with the staff on the matter of how high your pet can fly, since this appears to be more frequently occurring.



That should be all for now.

3Shinka Empty Re: Shinka Sat Oct 22, 2016 3:55 pm

Harue

Harue


D-rank
Sutaka wrote:Name: 心火 (Shinka)
Species: Northern Mockingbird (Mimus polyglottos) [Standard Combat Pet]
Rank: D (-3 tiers in STR and END, +3 tiers in REA and PER)
Specializations: Ninjutsu,  Taijutsu (Physiology)
Elements: -
Appearance: Like most female mockingbirds, Shinka's upper parts are colored grey, while her underparts are colored white. Her eyes are a sharp yellow, and her beak is a dark black. Shinka is the the average size for her species, measuring 24.3 centimeters from beak to tail-tip. Her wingspan is 33.5 centimeters, and she weighs about 53.8 grams.
Spoiler:
Personality: Shinka is less of pet and more of a tagalong. She fends for herself, and just accompanies Sutaka on whatever journeys he might go on. While not flying high above him, she is usually found on Sutaka's shoulder or a nearby tree. Shinka enjoys making songs, and she can usually be heard wherever Sutaka is found (whenever he doesn't mind detection). Shinka can usually understand some of the clicks Sutaka makes as a makeshift language. The responses Shinka makes are much more limited than Sutaka's, as she can only communicate one chirp for no, two chirps for yes, three for maybe, and other simple responses. Shinka will also peck at her companion whenever she wishes for his attention, or whenever he somehow offended her.

Techniques: Shinka can use her beak and claws as weaponry, but they are treated as weapons 1 rank below her own.
Approved for 2000 ryo. Also, there is no height limit for Shinka to fly.

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