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1Unexpected Journey  Empty Unexpected Journey Sun Nov 22, 2015 4:03 am

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
| | Life Changing | |

The day was broad as Burittsu was ordered to out to the border by his superiors due to the rash behavior upon the letter it seemed he was suppose to meet with someone at the meet up point he was headed too. He did not know who he would be meeting up with or how the individual looked due to this Burittsu simply took his backpack in any hopes he would be led onto another mission maybe searching more ruins to find more knowledge about his clan. In the bag it's contained only a couple of items for such a journey again the book which he found from his previous expedition. Four bottles of water and a pouch for carrying his ninja tools in just to be safe venturing through the village before leaving out to the gate he began to wonder who did they have set up to meet him by the border. He could only imagine probably anbu to take him away and cast him out of the village for his last tasks upon the innocent family in the forest. Each step he took he neared closer to the village gate until once more entering out to the paths all over again each path leading to their respective areas but one path in particular lead astray away from the forest and thick bushes it clinged to the side staying close near to the outer wall of the village. This was the path that seemed to be the only way to his destination jumping on it without looking back it was decided that whatever the outcome was he was ready to embrace it with nothing but open arms. It took only half an hour for the male to make it to his destination walking about this pace it was obvious who he was too meet up with way out here upon the borders of the village and what is the motive of all this.

“Mhmm..?”

Coming to a stop it seemed to be bunch of other shinobi and travelers upon the path he was on a crowd it seemed as people were leaving and coming in. In all this chaos it was only best for Burittsu to remain upon the side of the road to avoid any trouble and cause something he would most likely regret later on. It had seem to be a flat surfaced boulder upon the side of the road his feet was kinda sore anyway due to the fact he had not been upon a walk like that in his life. The thought about how it might end for him was simple whoever or whatever was to come and get him only his actions would allow him to live. Sitting upon the boulder he only gazed upon the crowd of shinobi escorting or returning from missions from far away lands each of them having their eyes glimmer from what they seen from other lands. But most came back battered and beaten to a pulp as their souls are crushed from powerful enemies some left with a squad of shinobi and return alone. This was the ninja world that Burittsu awaited to embrace but if he would live long enough to see it from his own self perspective it would indeed put a smile upon his face. Allowing him to one day pass judgement upon the ninja world or maybe even be the one who changes how it is now causing it be more chaotic or prosperful. The choices of his future rested inside him gazing upon the clear blue sky a faint smirk appeared upon his face burning time as he awaited for the individual to show up.

“Whoever it is.. They’re sure running late..”

| | End | |

Word Count: 623

2Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Sun Nov 22, 2015 5:14 am

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
Wolfgang walked down the road, he read his letter a few more times, he had been given a pupil again, his other two now equaled him in prowess, so they deemed it necessary to give him another, it seemed that Wolfgangs methods made good ninja. The letter described the genin, he was blue of hair and darker of skin.
He was being given to Wolfgang due to his increased levels of violence, apparently they have been having some trouble keeping control of him in the squads.
He didnt mind, he enjoyed being able to give all of his attention to a single ninja, impart all of his knowledge onto them and train them as he see fit, without that much groaning from the brass. Wolfgang was dressed for combat as he always was when he wasnt at hte compound office, he wore his anbu vest underneath a bright red Kimono like top, with large billowing sleeves that held many compartments, on his back he wore the large black Bear skin cloak, on his face he currently wore his red anbu demon mask, the mask was red and bore a smiling Oni on the front, with two horns coming off the sides of the mask, his hood was up to cover the rest of his head, he looked the very imagine of a demon ninja...from where he got his title.

Wolfgang came to an area rich with traders and travelers and a few ninja alike, they were all milling about, he smirked underneath his mask, as he walked people got out of his way as fast as they could without looking rude, across the way he saw his kid, he even looked arrogant, he was actually somewhat excited to see and train this kid, though as always he went in with very low expectations.

Wolfgang snuck his way behind Buritsu, knowing that he was more skilled in stealth then the kid was, and the very fact that his was an anbu would mean that the sneaking would be succesful, he approached behind as he heard the kid sigh and complain that Wolfgang was late, he approached very close to his back and whispered threw his mask in a cold and dark tone,
A sensei is never late, they are always on time, you must just be early then....I am Wolfgang Osada, Call me Wolf-Sensei You are Burritsu i believe, i think we are new traveling partners[/i] As he eyed the kid, he moved his mask to the the top of his head to show his face, a face covered in a skull tattoo that covered at least 90 percent of his face, his pupils were pin points and his iris were white as bone, he stood a solid 7ft3 and was built to match, he was much bigger then this kid, he was hoping that he could get a good first impression.
450wc

3Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Sun Nov 22, 2015 2:42 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
| | Sensei?! | |

His eyes widen he indeed tried to keep a cool head as the deep tone of the male pierced into his very being it had seem Burittsu was ready until the word “Sensei” slipped through the air. In all nervousness a grin appeared upon his face as he stood up facing what seemed to be a stranger to him only to gaze upon his legs etching all the way up to what seemed to be the sky. Burittsu was only about the height of 5’11” for his age the sun shining down upon the back of the shinobi blinded Burittsu but indeed caught his attention as the towering male stood bold above the male. His eyes studied anything he could see from the male but now knowing his fate it was all the same to the young shinobi. With no hesitation the presence felt from the shinobi shot through his very soul in a response to the males word he kneeled upon his presence bowing his head in signs of respect and understanding. The sense of beating eyes from the travelers and shinobi alike it was assumed that this man who calls himself Wolf is a threat like no other or is most likely well known for whatever he is assigned to do. Moments passed as Burittsu’s face grew emotionless as he stood up silently and positioned himself behind the tall figure fixing his backpack and gear. The words of his new teacher began to fill his head as he realized the outcome of returning back to the village would be a long time or maybe never depending upon the actions of Burittsu himself. Before getting ready to depart Burittsu bowed to the direction of the village with a slight grin upon his face recalling that upon this trip he would only begin to venture forward into the world he wanted to explore and one day change.

“Mother, Father.. I’ll return soon.”

A grin upon his face that lasted for what seemed like hours to him was only a second in reality as his grin quickly died out and he turned his back upon to the village facing the road ahead and his new sensei. He was determined to prove himself due to the fact that his sensei was indeed an anbu his outside emotions remained without a doubt calm and composed. His inside was a different story his heart jolted and his lust for blood only boiled his blood to new limits as the sight of his first sensei only gave him a reason to pursue the history of his clan, parents, and find himself in the world. The journey was about to begin once they left he only attempted to remain calm and not jump out of line remaining quiet he only looked down and remained in that state till it was alright to venture forward into the world.

| | End | |

Word Count: 483

4Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:01 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


D-rank
He looked down at his new pupil, who now bowed to him , wolf was very impressed at least the kid had the brains to bow to his sensei. He quickly composed himself and fell in behind Wolfgang, and for the first few minutes he said nothing though he could feel the kids excitement behind him, he turned his head and spoke to his new pupil,
"you can speak to me you know, you are going to be stuck with me for a while longer, who are you, what are your goals and what not... Me? My real name is Miho Osada, never use that name... My goals are my own until I trust you, your turn"
He looked at his new pupil in the eyes... Just as a large gorilla launched itself out of the nearby woods, out was his height and twice as wide, with blue fur and red eyes, with fists like war hammer heads, it rushed Wolfgang with intense speeds (B rank) and stopped in front of Wolfgang, they stared long and hard at each other until the last beast suddenly broke out with a smile and a monkey like giggle and hugged him, an odd sight two huge beings hugging, after a short hug the monkey stuck out his palm for Burritsu , awaiting his to trace his finger across it...a sign of trust

5Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:28 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
| | Trust | |

Backing up a little bit away a little bit it had seem the beast startled the boy with a palm now in his face he had no choice but to respond by gently placing his hand upon the hand of the large beast. Being cautious at every movement he did being sure not to disturb this giant with a speed of that he seen this was not an enemy to be trifled with removing his hand from the palm of the beast he bowed to the large beast as well treating him with much respect. Looking back towards his new sensei giving a slight cough to clear out his system he gazed upon the male with respect and contained the answers it had seem he was searching for within Burittsu.

“My name is Burittsu Yuki.. I have two goals in life one is to be acknowledged throughout the ninja world and the second is to one day change the world or be a key part in it..I only know combat and was raised without affection..May we begin the journey?”

Burittsu simply gazed at the male with a blank expression as he awaited for a response from the shinobi himself.

| | End | |

WC: 203

6Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Nov 23, 2015 9:40 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


D-rank
“My name is Burittsu Yuki.. I have two goals in life one is to be acknowledged throughout the ninja world and the second is to one day change the world or be a key part in it..I only know combat and was raised without affection..May we begin the journey?” Wolfgang looked at the young teen, taking the answer to thought, he smiled to his apprentice and decided that it was due time to clear something up.
He jumped forwards with all his speed, swinging down his foot into the back of his new apprentices knee cap, nothing serious bit just enough to drop him to a knee he would then grasp burritsus neck angling it up at his face, which would appear to be almost in the sky from the angle.

"You say you know combat... You know nothing, I took my first life before you were born, my tutelage will not be easy it Will be hard and taxing, but I will shape you into a warrior. Di not consider yourself a warrior yet. Not until I say you are" Wolfgang would let go of his apprentice and smiled again , a very pleasant smile, for under the smiles and laughs, there was a beast hidden deep within, he pushed it down with meditation and training, but underneath he was still a wolf. Wolfgang pulled out one of his favorite kunai, it was long and sharp, with a serrated edge, it was finer then most others he had it made specially with got fine steel, he handed it to his pupil, saying,
"you should have a better weapon then a normal kunai if you are going to train with me" * gives serrated kunai from my locker, it's ad rank weapon you can copy it from my locker and have it :) a new pupil present *

7Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Nov 23, 2015 9:47 pm

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
Item: Serrated Kunai
Rank: D
Quantity: 1
Price:
Description: This projectile, on impact with human flesh, pierces an 1 inches into the target.
If used to slash in melee combat, it can cut 3/4 inches into the target though it causes rips and tears instead of regular cuts.
Appearance: This knife spans 6 inches, from the tip to the base of the blade, with 4 and a half inches of handle and a small loop on the base of the hilt, which can be used to hook wire or other items. The blade of this Kunai is serrated all along the Blade causing more pain when cut by it.
This is from my locker, it is now yours

8Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Nov 24, 2015 12:37 am

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
| | Incredible | |

Gazing upon the sky it had seem the words rang a bell inside the head of Burittsu all this was in a matter of seconds his knee slightly tingled as the pressure of the hand remained upon his face. Reaching out for the new weapon Burittsu would later put his research about it on his free time once more bowing his head to the male in a sign of respect and gratitude. Placing the weapon inside his backpack he quickly took a deep breath in an attempt to hold himself from making any mistake that would most likely get himself killed. His goal indeed was to be acknowledged this was the path he wanted standing up straight upon his feet almost falling back but quickly catching his balance as he shook his leg moving the blood around. With his hand upon his face it seemed that even he realized compared to his sensei with a grin upon his face he smiled upon his teacher.

“This training of yours will not be the only thing that is difficult sensei.. Let us begin this journey..”


The grin upon his face lasted it was a grin that contained many emotions but for now Burittsu was eager to move on into the open world with his fist balled up. As another deep breath exhaled out of his system his hands opened up releasing his grip upon his himself. The grin itself turned into a chuckle as he passed his sensei his eyes gazed upon the path that led away from the village. He was prepared to move forward and become strong enough to one day take down his sensei this was his third goal a goal he now just planned out for his future. Quickly passing the sensei he turned his head looking back with the grin as he waited for his sensei to pass him leading him towards his new adventure.

“Let the new chapter of my life begin..”

| | End | |

WC: 328

9Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Dec 07, 2015 2:16 am

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
After many hours of travel, Wolfgang spotted a small clearing to his right, it would work perfectly for a camp site for a while, since night was falling after all. Wolfgang turned to his apprentice, saying in a brisk tone,
"time for our first lesson Burritsu, endurance, come with me to this clearing. Now you are going to come at me with the intent to kill, but you're main goal on this is to last 10 minutes with me, I will use no weapons, nor jitsu you may use whatever you please, on your mark" Wolfgang stood in a combat stance, with his shoulders squared and his left foot forwards, he un clipped his cloak to reveal his anbu armor, which he preceded to undo as well, revealing his barrel chest, covered in ink, he pulled his mask over his face and stood at the ready, he wanted him to make the first move, he stood with his face mask making every breath audible, he stood in silence for his new apprentices first test.
"good luck, you'll need some"

10Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Dec 07, 2015 4:43 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
| | Test | |

It had seem his teacher proceeded with more test for the young shinobi that which would now require his test in endurance and most likely stamina. Feeling the warmth of the sun leave his side as the cold night creeped upon the unexpected it was only in the right mind for Burittsu to go along with what his mentor had to teach. Remaining silent he stood up following the male into a field only to give out a raise of his eyebrow wondering what secrets were hidden in the shadows but for now his focused remained upon his mentor. The words pounding against his brain and only with a reaction of a grin it allowed himself to be who he was but he reminded himself that this male was also a gateway for himself to be something in the world he dared venture out too.

"Mhm.."

In a quick dash towards his opponent Burittsu swiftly met both hands together forming one hand sign as an exact clone of himself appeared next to him. Due to the fact that the clone itself wasn't near perfection it was still enough to throw the opponent off. Now with the situation being changed it had begun the two quickly dashed down towards the enemy both leaping into the air one pulling out a kunai the other coming down with a fierce kick. Burittsu attempted to take down his enemy swiftly and without hesitation even if his outlook appearance was that of spine chilling experience.

| | End | |

WC: 252



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11Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Dec 07, 2015 9:51 pm

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
Burritsu came quickly, and with ferocity, that made Wolfgang to himself he had picked a good kid to train, to hesitate is death in this world.
"good good, strike as if I'm your most hated enemy*
Wolfgang then went on the defensive, leaning around the genin and quickly ducking around the knife blade just as he brought his arm guard up and deflected the blow with a resounding sound. Wolfgang then rushed forwards, a few feet past the clone and Burritsu, he then back flipped and came down at both of them with a spread eagle kick, aiming for their heads, though he pulled back on the force of his attack, aiming only for light to medium bruises instead of his bone crushing power, he didn't want to maim his new protégé, but a little pain goes a long way in humility. As the landed the swung a huge roundhouse kick to the one on the left, following up with another to the right, he slowed the attack down to let his trainee have a slight chance of dodging, but he wasn't making it easy on him, this was going to be a grueling test, and they had only just begun.

12Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Dec 07, 2015 10:09 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
| | Incredible | |

It was obvious that for his rank he would easily out power the shinobi but through the mind of Burittsu he could not cease an attack or attempt to be humble and not throttle his enemy if given a chance swiftly landing upon the earth floor only to gaze upward of the man coming down with a fierce kick. Burittsu leapt outwards rolling upon the earth as the clone itself dispersed into cloud as the contact was made between it and mentors attack. It had seem the speed of Burittsu could not match that of his teacher but barley avoiding the attack was good enough indeed his enemy was strong and merciless forming multiple hand signs. Burittsu raised his hand to his mouth as if he was playing an instrument such as the trumpet quickly spewing a jet stream of water aiming for the back of the leg of his mentor giving him a minor bruise.

"Water Trumpet Jutsu!"

| | End | |

WC: 161



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13Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Fri Dec 11, 2015 4:15 pm

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
Wolfgang saw his apprentice start going threw a flurry of hand signs, he smiled, at least his new student knew jutsus, he knew a few that techniques that he planned on training his apprentice to know. He then heard him yell out his jutus, he was using a simple water hose style jutus, Wolfgang dropped to his chest and rolled to the left, yelling out as he rolled,
Good job! You know some jutus it seems, ill teach you mush better jutus...Like this one
Wolfgang blew through many handsigns, and breathed in and felt the suiton chakra fill his chest, he breathed out and blasted out a huge quantity of water in the shape of a huge water bullet, capable of breaking bones and causing heavy bruising, he hoped that his apprentice dodged, but it wouldnt be lethal to get hit and may even teach him a lesson of pain. The water Dragon hurdled at his student with a surprising speed.
Jutusu used:

14Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Sat Dec 26, 2015 9:25 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
Only with amazement his eyes widen a bit as the large beast made of water ripped through the air and aimed down for him. It moved at incredible speed for the size of the jutsu but this was not going to stop the shinobi. Quickly raising two fingers into the air as a volley of mist appeared around the male covering his postion and maybe his tracks. Nothing he had could meet the beast head on but what he had was enough to maybe save the male the battle. The mist was not thick but dense enough to cover up his tracks from the beast. Swiftly leaping away from the mist as the beast continued to come down he hoped that it would work and cause it to smash against the earth floor.

"Mhm.."

Burittsu began to feel the fatigue of using Jutsu back to back simply removing a kunai from his side he gripped it firmly. Ready for the fight to begin now increasing his distance from the male but also giving him time to plan a strategy and regain his strength. His rank didn't matter out here upon the battle field giving a deep breath he stood tall and firm.

WC: 202



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15Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Dec 28, 2015 9:47 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


D-rank
Wolfgang saw a thick mist form, he smiled to himself, he thought to himself,
''Yes waste the jutsu you need'' He had a common genin sympton, they fought by throwing their jutsus at each other like baseballs, non stop, without a plan.
Wolfgang walked into the mist and eyed where his apprentice would be generally located, he charged and sent a boot flying through the air, followed by a large swung elbow, following up with a spin into a flying knee, he was aiming all of these attack at the torso of his student, he had no intention of actually hurting Burritsu seriously, but he wanted to make him learn, and learning was pain and hard work, no one became a great ninja with cuddles and niceness, ninjas were born of pain and blood, and his new student would lean this today, he would then send a flurry of kicks, using knees feet and his heel, sending out attack after attack.
You need not throw all of your jutsu around like a plaything, they must always bge used to their maximum potentiality, never waste chakra what if this fight lasted more tehn an hour, would you be able to out last me?

16Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Dec 29, 2015 5:00 am

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
Burittus in all hopes may have dodged a couple of the strikes being thrown at him but not enough to dodge and embrace the impacts that his teacher threw at him. Only to be sent flying through the mist at great speed falling upon his back releasing a loud cough as his arms wrapped around his waist. Through his mind his body was going through fatigue but he tried to persist and attempted to stand up and embrace the rest of this practice. Knowing the outcome by now Burittsu was no idiot but his mindset pushed his body to the limit of that a fool would clearly see from a mile away. Gripping a tight ball of fists he was ready to continue his legs felt heavy but clearly losing to his teacher seemed to the only way to learn how to be a successful ninja.

"I came out to the ninja world to learn and become a ninja.. As my teacher you.."

With the fade of his eyes it had seem it was all in a end using jutsu as if it was free simply did not work for the male his response to the male ended with a quick falling to his knees. Which he remained motionless for what seemed to be a lifetime his hands remained curled up into a ball of fury his eyes were hidden under his eye lids. A cough or two carried through his body and expelling out into the air as moments later he forced his body to rise standing tall towards his opponent with nothing but hope in his fist and heart.

"Bring It.."

WC: 273



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17Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Dec 29, 2015 8:25 am

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
Wolfgang stood stoic, seeing his apprentice curl into a ball taking deep breaths of pain, for a moment Wolfgang thought that he had chosen the wrong apprentice, then he saw something, he saw the look of pure detremination as he stood up slowly and it made Wolfgang actually smile for the first time in a long time.
Good, you need to learn to live with pain, pain makes a man. Me? i feel none, i have not felt a lick of pain in years, i didnt even feel my arm get removed, come at me my student,, ill give you one minute to get a hit on me without swinging back He stood in a defensive stance in front of his apprentice,
If you can hit me i shall teach you some new jutsu? how about that, i know a few suiton techniques that you may like.

18Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:15 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
Indeed it had seem the battle was at a lost for Burittsu but he had met a personal goal from within being acknowledged by his first teacher did nothing but put a grin upon his face. That was the only message he received and with that smile his body quickly lunged across the field only to take flight in mid-air his right fist cocked back with force. Coming down aiming for the jaw line of his sensei his left hand reached out for the collar of his sensei's shirt in an attempt to hold him down to be able to land a blow. His legs quickly swung up in an attempt to wrap around the neck of his teacher to confirm that he couldn't be able to dodge any move that Burittsu attempted to commit on him.

"Don't make it easy on me!"

The sound of growing stronger to reach goals and learning jutsu sounded completely enjoyable he had many ambitions and for once his eyes gaze a type of shine no one will ever see the shine of hope and determination.

"Give it to me!"

WC: 186



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19Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:34 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


D-rank
Wolfgang smiled as he saw Burri lauch at him, ambition was good. As he neared he jumped into the air with a large swing of his fist, Wolfgang dodged to the right and with a pivot of his neck and torso, he then noticed a hand grasping his collar, as Burritsu swung again trying to overpower him by holding him in place,
YOU SHOULD KNOW YOUR OWN STRENGTH LAD! He let the punch come in, and held his jaw stoic as he was hit with a nicely time hook to the jaw, though he felt none of it due to his numbness, he knew that there wouldnt be much damage, what he really wanted to do was show his apprentice how strong his was.
after he yelled this he would use his only arm to grasp onto the kids wrist, aiming to grab him and throw him into the air, aiming for at least a few meters, Wolfgangs Physical strength was tremendous, if this worked on the way down he would bring his knee into burritsus ribs, using the downwards momentum to knock the breath out of him, and maybe bruising the ribs of his young enemy.
He flourished this with a sound boot to the ribs, aiming to send his opponent at least a few meters back as well, making a quick handsign he covered his entire body in a weak acid mist,
This is the power of my namesake lad, this is what the Osada clan is best at, I wont hold back on you, since you asked so nicely, but you did manage a hit on me, ready for another he would then clear the distance, swinging his fist forwards, mist trailing off of his entire body, a grey spray that on contact would give mild burns, nothing mortal but definitely painful at the minimum. He wanted his student to react, would he counter attack or avoid Wolfgang due to his jutsu.
OOC- Want to show Burri my clans element
Chakra 180:

20Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:45 pm

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
DISREGARD



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21Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Wed Dec 30, 2015 10:58 pm

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
Being flung into the air with the force from his teacher it had seem he had knew his limit he felt good either way. Coming down upon the knee of his teacher sent a violent pain and sting throughout his body knocking the air out of him. As he barlely had enough strength to cover from the assault of his teachers kick being sent through the air and crashing down upon the earth floor. He could only feel the pulse of his head pounding making his vision difficult his mindset was to never give up but dying and losing was never a choice. Trying to stand upon his feet was not a option the breath was taken as he remained curled upon the earth floor attempting to gasp for air. It took time but Burittsu was only able to sit up as he coughed a little bit spitting out a bit of blood.

"I give up.."

Taking another deep breath Burittsu layed upon the earth gazing at the sky only to shut his eyes and fall into what seemed to be asleep. Tired and worn out the shinobi gave to his sensei as he layed upon the ground a smile rested upon his face.

WC: 204



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22Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Thu Dec 31, 2015 8:01 am

Kikisu

Kikisu


D-rank
Wolfgang stopped his oncoming assualt, and ended his low level jutus, as he heard the words i give up he frowned a little bit to himself, though his genin was in no way weak, it was his rank and size and age that betrayed him, most would have already given up, he was proud of him the falling knee would knock the wind out of the best of them,
Wolfgang sauntered over to Burritusu, with one thin eye brow cocked up with almost a grin smeared on his face, he examined his students body and remarked that he had nothing broken, just bruises, and a heavier one where his ribs were, it would be fine within a few days, Wolf made sure not to use his full strength otherwise he would have shattered all of his ribs and jaw, his power was tremendous when he felt like using it, hopefully one day he could use his full power, like his tw apprentices before Burritsu.
*Pant* are you okay?

23Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:23 am

Burittsu

Burittsu


D-rank
Only the grin remained upon Burittsu's face as his eyes opened up once more gazing at his teacher giving an approval with a thumbs up he rose up half way. Giving a deep breath once more focusing on his breathing making it easier for him. Rising upon his feet the smile went away as he bowed to his teacher as he now showed Burittsu his limits killing his ego but also opening new doors for him to approve. Once more bowing to his teacher thanking him for the lesson that he will not forget this day of their fight turning his back Burittsu headed off back inside the forest.

"I must defeat him.."

Grasping upon his side the pain was durable as his mind was only mere focused on gaining more skill to benefit him in the shinobi world. Whatever the teacher was planning for him he was ready to take the step to aid him in the near future.

WC: 160



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24Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Mon Mar 14, 2016 12:47 am

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
Word Count 2400
Perception- 2000 words- C-1 to B-0
ryo 450

25Unexpected Journey  Empty Re: Unexpected Journey Tue Mar 22, 2016 8:47 pm

Wolfgang

Wolfgang


D-rank
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