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1Kumori  Empty Kumori Sat May 31, 2014 7:37 pm

Julius

Julius


D-rank
Symbol:

Kumori  Higashimori_high_school_logo_by_lacelazier-d4etfsn

Clan: Kumori

Kekkei Genkai: Ribinguāto (Living Art)

Elements: Kumori  Water11 [Suiton] Kumori  Earth11 [Doton] Kumori  200?cb=20130803151523 [Inkurirīsu]

Specialization: Ninjutsu [Primary]

Location: Konohagakure

Clan History:

History:
Current Affairs:
Clan Head and Elders:

Kekkei Genkai Description: Inkurirīsu or Ink Release is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that is a combination of manipulation of Suiton and Doton. Suiton and Doton are both key elements of regular dyes, and in this form ink which is imbued with the user's chakra as they can create it from scratch in any environment. The user is able to use Ink Release at any rank however the ranking of the Ink Release is the same as the secondary element, Doton. For example, Suiton could be [S] and Doton [C] then Ink Release will also be [C]. Whenever Doton is trained then Ink Release will be the same rank.

*Suiton must be primary, Doton secondary and Inkurirīsu as tertiary

Drawbacks: Due to Ink Release being the same rank as Doton, the user cannot use Ink Release Jutsu higher than their Doton element. For example: a Kumori cannot use B-rank Ink Release jutsu if they have C-rank Doton. Kumori are dedicated to their elements and cannot learn a fourth however they may not take Hesitant [Element]. Ink Release is neutral towards all elements except Katon, being 1 rank lower in power against Katon jutsu and receive +1 in damage.

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Last edited by Yuko on Fri Mar 25, 2016 8:42 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sun Jun 01, 2014 6:43 am

Julius

Julius


D-rank
Bump.

3Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sun Jun 01, 2014 12:09 pm

Kyohei

Kyohei


D-rank
Hmmm, this is really ninjutsu, not fuuinjutsu. Also, you don't really have to take a straight +1 from suiton and katon, if those are the weaknesses you could just say that they have elemental superiority over the ink, so that if jutsu of equal strength collide, the suiton and/or katon would win out. But that is a minor thing.

4Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sun Jun 01, 2014 1:09 pm

Julius

Julius


D-rank
Edited.

5Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sun Jun 01, 2014 8:17 pm

Noriko

Noriko


D-rank
I take no issue. Approved.

6Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:04 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
This has been pulled for revamp, immediately i would like to see WAY more written on what you can bring to life and most of all, its limitations...

7Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sat Oct 17, 2015 1:08 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
KKG

With all the new information you've put, you failed to mention a description of what their KKG 'is.'

"The Kumori clan have through time gained / learned the ability to animate their artworks as ninjutsu techniques. The clan members do this by... something something chakra something something ink."

That's important when making clans with new KKG's because it explains what the KKG is, and how it is done on an IC level, meaning people don't need to assume.

~Also, remove the size chart, size would be determined by the radius thing per rank on jutsu and on a jutsu by jutsu basis, putting a chart here is a lot of extra effort. And it's unneeded.

~Can you explain the maintenance thing to me, it's a little sketchy.

Drawbacks

You need to add at least one more active drawback please, something like a negative special characteristic, hesitant element would be a very good one, or hesitant specialization, because you have a KKG element. negatives to word-counts are not considered active drawbacks though you do have 2 weaknesses.

jutsu

Would like a max side of the weapons printed, and a notation for what the numbers mean. As i assume they are how many of each weapon you make. Also can a person keep making weapons?

8Kumori  Empty Re: Kumori Sat Mar 26, 2016 6:40 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
The jutsu should be called Sumie No Jutsu. not just 'ink release' but made to sound japanese.

Leaving this clan to Jean, as he would like to deal with it.

Please PM him for updates on this clan.

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