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1Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Kemono Clan (Registration) Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:24 am

Sukoshi Kemono

Sukoshi Kemono


D-rank
Symbol: Kemono Clan (Registration) Stock-vector-logo-of-beast-pirate-skull-bones-and-death-scythes-spikes-swirls-and-oval-vector-illustration-16694698


Clan: Kemono Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Kuchiyose no Jutsu

Elements: No element requirements

Specialization: Kuchiyose no Jutsu

Location: Scattered throughout all villages

Clan History: There was once a shinobi called Odorokimashita. He got this nickname from the great fear of dying he had. Even at the sight of a slight cut he would panic and claim that he was on his death bed. One day a wise old wolf overheard Odorokimashita stumbling his words in complete fright of begining his mission. The wolf approached Odorokimashita and proposed to him an offer, he said that if Odorokimashita would trust him enough to take him somewhere not of this world that he would always stand guard and protect him whenever he needed it fighting as an extention of him. Odorokimashita agreed and after 3 years of training in this other world he came back a changed man, no longer fearing of this world or death knowing he was never alone. Alot of older members of villages say that this was the first birth of the Kuchiyose no Jutsu technique but it has never been confirmed. Odorokimashita grew and produced children of his own, along with a few other selected people from other villages Odorokimashita taught the true secrets of this art to these few shinobi all denouncing their given names and taking on the name Kemono giving birth to the Kemono Clan. Present members of the Kemono Clan are profitiant in Kuchiyose no Jutsu primarily and are scattered throughout all villages coming together once a year to celebrate the birth of their clan. They also have a knack for noticing a fellow clan member even if that member doesn't know they are one yet.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Kemono Clan's Kekkei Genkai is primarily just Kuchiyose no Jutsu but with these small changes. The Kemono Clan have the ability to have 3 summon contracts.

- Members of this clan begin with a free summoning contract of C rank which is able to rank up as they do at the cost of 1500 ryo per rank.

- Members of the clan are able to attain a second free summoning contract (D rank) at Chuunin which is able to be ranked up to a maximum of A rank, at the cost of 1500 ryo per rank.

- The final Summoning contract (D rank) the clan are able to attain, they can achieve at Chuunin and costs 9000 ryo and a a thread with a wordcount of 1000 words to attain, and can be trained up to B rank at 1500 ryo per rank

-The Kemono Clan also get a +20 in Chakra and a +1 tier in Reaction Time.

Drawbacks: - The Kemono Clan cannot use Taijutsu or any other physical type of combat resulting in -1 tier in Strength and Endurance. (Basic defense in close combat permitted but very weak in physical combat.)

- Members of the Kemono Clan must take Fragile as a Weakness.

- When fighting shinobi's with the main spec as a taijustu base members of this clan lose a -1 tier in Endurance.

- As Kemono clan members are specialists in their primary abilities, members of the Kemono clan cannot train a fourth specialization or element, or take either of the Hesitant negative special characteristics.

Members: Sukoshi Kemono

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu: The Kemono Clan have an additional c rank jutsu which must be a defensive barrier.



Last edited by Sukoshi Kemono on Wed Feb 24, 2016 4:27 am; edited 6 times in total

2Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Wed Feb 17, 2016 5:38 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Ahh words!

okay, in the KKG section would you be able to do a little to seperate your points with each of the summoning contracts they can get, make them 3 seperate points and each clear in of themselves, because at the moment it is very hard to read and rather hard to fathom.

3Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Wed Feb 17, 2016 9:26 pm

Sukoshi Kemono

Sukoshi Kemono


D-rank
Lol sorry about that Aya i split it up so it's easier to read for you :)

4Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Sat Feb 20, 2016 5:31 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Okay, little bit of rewording needs to be done here :P

Mostly it's just to keep things inclusive

"Members of this clan begin with a free summoning contract of C rank which is able to rank up as they do at the cost of 1500 ryo per rank."

"members of the clan are able to attain a second free summoning contract (D rank) at Chuunin which is able to be ranked up to a maximum of A rank, at the cost of 1500 ryo per rank."

"The final Summoning contract (D rank) the clan are able to attain, they can achieve at Chuunin and costs 9000 ryo and a a thread with a wordcount of 1000 words to attain, and can be trained up to B rank at 1500 ryo per rank."

Would work a lot better.

Other than that, you're not going to get +50 chakra, +20 would be the max

And for that, you are going to need at least 3 additional ACTIVE drawbacks. Meaning drawbacks which would be a constant factor in combat, not things like additional wordcounts or not being able to learn specs and elements. Things like weaknesses, not being able to learn specs or elements etc. that limit / weaken you.

5Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Sat Feb 20, 2016 7:22 pm

Sukoshi Kemono

Sukoshi Kemono


D-rank
Thank you Aya hopefully this is better :D

6Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Mon Feb 22, 2016 5:29 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
For your jutsu thing. Just say clan members bein with an additional c rank jutsu which must be a defensive barrier.

After that. This clan looks fine

7Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Wed Feb 24, 2016 4:28 am

Sukoshi Kemono

Sukoshi Kemono


D-rank
Thank you Aya now onto the daunting task of Character approval :P

8Kemono Clan (Registration) Empty Re: Kemono Clan (Registration) Wed Feb 24, 2016 5:47 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Approved.

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