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1Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Mon May 26, 2014 10:04 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Done!



Last edited by Strafe Aisu on Sun Jan 25, 2015 12:22 am; edited 6 times in total

2Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Wed May 28, 2014 8:36 pm

Tame

Tame


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Staff of the Hurricane: 2 1/2 inch cuts, maximum. When you say 'projectiles', do you mean jutsu too?

Mamoru's Sonic Roar: Limit the number of offensive jutsu it can block.

Mamoru's Arctic Soul: Only the next Hyouton jutsu that's used by the recipient.

Mamoru's Wall of Fur: Cannot fully block an S-rank; can buffet the damage up to -2 if the jutsu wasn't damaged before.

Mamoru's Needle Hell: Just detail how deep (since several ranks of senbon have been apped).

Get the latest Kunai from the Catalogue.

That's all~ The Seven Swords will be dealt with all at once.

3Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Wed May 28, 2014 9:36 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Updated!

4Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Thu May 29, 2014 7:46 am

Tame

Tame


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Sonic Roar: Cut the range or reduce damage from breaking bones; that is if you want to keep deafness.

Needle Hell: Just reduce range to 40m as is the max for C~


Staff of the Hurricane: The gust can't shatter bones. (it reads as if the gust can, but cutting + buffeting is enough for a 15-chakra ability that isn't even a jutsu.)

And....nooooow we're done.

5Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Fri May 30, 2014 2:03 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Updated!

6Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:32 am

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Just to be clear, this is approved? Or does it need looking at again? I never got the official word xD

7Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Sat Dec 06, 2014 6:08 pm

Tenmei

Tenmei


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Okay, let go

-Your kunai is a catalouge item so that's fine to be returned to Locker

-Momaru. That loveable lion. First things first, I would like you to roughly mention how big this guy is.
Secondly: Now in the new guidelines it states that every pet starts off with the base stats of it's rank. 
If you want to maintain Momaru's awesome strength or even make him stronger, you are allowed to sacrifice 1 or 2 tiers and add it on to another. For example you would take off maybe 2 off of endurance and add them on to strength and he would have that extra strength. Of course this is your choice whether you wish to do so or not.
Now, this would be based off if Momaru hits with the strength of his paws, but his claws will deal a different amount of damage based of -1 off the animal's rank. Which needs to be around the fracture bones and 2.25-inch cuts and piercing line mark. The same goes with the teeth.

-Sonic Roar Jutsu: You have the range as both a radius and a straight line. Choose which one you would prefer and reduce it by 5-10. You can keep your damage.

-Arctic Soul Jutsu: +1's are no longer allowed in jutsu. Instead you can have it allow the user to use a rank higher of their normal range, or maybe even allow an additional affect to their jutsu. Choose something else but +1 has to go.

-Wall of fur: Is all good. Nothing more needs changing here.
-Needle Hell: Is the same~

Staff of the Hurricane: is fine
tea box, glass jar: They are all good too.

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Bump with edits~

8Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Sun Dec 07, 2014 1:59 am

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Updated and moved the ones that were approved :)

9Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Fri Dec 26, 2014 10:12 am

Noriko

Noriko


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Sonic Roar: Only 1 offensive technique can be stopped if breaking-bones is to be kept.

Arctic Soul: Not sure how I feel about this being a regular Ninjutsu, but I'll deliberate with others on it.

Size: 8m is just too big for my tastes. xD that's like, a summon, easily. Even an approved S-rank pet is smaller than this (10ft-ish at the shoulder).

10Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Fri Jan 09, 2015 9:12 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Updates have been made. :)

11Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Wed Jan 14, 2015 2:17 am

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


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Bump

12Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:48 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


D-rank
Bump

13Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Locker Update] Sun Jan 25, 2015 12:19 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


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Sonic Roar Jutsu: Yeah that's all good now.
Arctic Soul: I don't see how this wouldn't be anything but ninjutsu so it's fine

That's all you had fix up.

Consider Mamoru: APPROVED

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