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Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
The night was ushered in a pool of silence. A small and lost raven was strolling beneath the pitch-black sky, and between his paws lingered an open bottle of wine. His lips were now pressed against the bottle, the cold and sweet taste of the wine dripped  inside his throat. A bottle, freshly started as the first one stood beneath his feet; empty. Those eyes were foggy, and his breath emanated an intoxicated smell, piercing the nose of those who stood nearby.

With his back forced against the husk of a tree, the young raven uttered “What am I doing outside this late... even if... I head back home, I’ll probably reach Konoha by sunrise...” to himself, on a barely audible tone.

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
Dray had just been returning from the woods of konohagakure when he stopped to think about what was beyond the village.. He was planning on requesting permission from the hokage to leave the village but now was not the time.. He still had a bit more to do in the village. He was yet to meet his sensei.. That was probably the one thing that was still keeping him in the village. He could not imagine what it would feel like to travel out of the village. To free his head of those places, those thoughts, those voices, those feeling that were always coming to his head whenever he was in the village. He began thinking as he kept on walking without even looking forward... What was to become of him if he travelled out of the village..he did not know.. Where would he go.. He had not decided.. What would be his reason to leave the village..he had not figured out... Having numerous thoughts in his head just seemed to fuck with his body, his mind and his very soul.. He just explored a part of the village and dealt with some ruthless thugs.. He was putting on a white inner wear, his black trousers and his green kimono- like armour.. As dray looked forward after walking and thinking for so long, he found himself in a vast area.. An area so big that he had never seen such in konoha before.. He looked backwards and saw that the woods he was in earlier was now about twenty metres from his current location..then he figured out that he was definetly in the borders of konohagakure no sato. The land that seperated konoha from other villages. Then, an idea struck dray.. He could probably explore the border before he had a chance to travel out of the village.. He checked himself well to confirm his eleven kunais, about five shurikens, twenty senbons, two scrolls and a pack of bandages.. Without any shinobi in sight, dray began his exploration.
WC:341

Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
Those biceps started to contract while his left hand slowly touched the tree, and with a quick gesture the Uzumaki pushed himself away from it. Besides his usual attire and a half-empty bottle of wine, not many things could be seen on him, leaving the impression that he was unarmed. Once his feet stopped dancing and that balance of his was regained, Tengoku placed the bottle once more upon his lips; however, this time he chugged the remaining wine which stood inside of it.

A clashing sound ringed around Tengoku once that empty bottle slipped between his five fingers; the glass was rather fragile and it shattered upon impact against a rock. The noise startled the Uzumaki; those jet-black eyes immediately darted against the ground, and with them came a few words “Whaaat... darn it.”  which were mumbled on a slightly pissed tone.  Making noise was that last thing which he had on top of his mind, as the woods were quiet and the noise was easily carried by the wind. Attracting any kind of unwanted attention was the least thing that he wished for, especially in the state in which he was.

Without further ado, he began wondering with the hopes of finding a nearby road; the trees were surrounding him as the Land of Fire was known for its dense forests. Every footstep left behind a cracking noise, the small branches which stood between the dense grass crumbled against Tengoku’s weight. He was everything but silent...

Gentle was the wind which began to blew, it slowly began tussling a few strays from that raven-like hair which Tengoku possessed. With his eyes scattered all over the place, the young leaf kept walking forth. Luckily for him, the slumbering moon was quite bright on that night and the clouds were nowhere to be seen, as such he was not left within total darkness.

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
Dray kept on walking withing these vast land as he once again entered what seemed to be never ending woods. The trees in this particular area where much taller and broader than those within konoha itself. There were abundant vegetation and this place was so quiet that even an ant yawning could be loudly heard...

Dray continued walking as he started admiring the various trees which he had not seen before. If he had abundant knowledge about anything in this world besides himself, it was about the forest..nature to be precise.. He grew up learning the sounds, appearance and things of the forest. Most of his childhood times were spent in the forest of konoha yet not even once had he been hurt by a single animal though he had been attacked by animals numerous times. His vast knowledge about the forest together with his clan's kekkei genkai helped him in the development of his plant style release which even led to some people calling him the senju- beast.

Dray being a very perspective person took notice of every single detail in his surroundings. His mind marked where and where he had passed incase he lost his way in such a large wood he had never wandered into. Suddenly, dray heard the shattering of an object. Most definetly glass and with the help of his ears, he traced the sound to the point where he saw a young guy...putting on a purple clothing and a mask kinda over his nose and mouth pretty drowsy... but dray was not one to fall for such if it was trickery as he began questioning the young guy in the hope of protecting his dear village....Identify yourself or are you one of those infiltrators that come to spy on the leaf and guising under another personality?? Am afraid that I will have to stop you from entering the village hidden in the leaves if you do not provide me with satisfactory information.. dray said and waited for the response of the young man.

WC:344

Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
“And who...” Tengoku said before being interrupted by his own hiccup. His body slowly tiled against the Senju, and those eyes narrowed while they quickly posed against his own. Spotting him was quite difficult at first, since the green robe in conjunction with the woods were making an almost identical scenery within the eyes of the raven. Although, that white inner gave him away once Tengoku managed to spot it. His outfit was quite a contrast compared to the one which the Uzumaki was wearing, as purple was an odd-looking color, one which made the raven seem like a sitting duck on the field. The red Uzumaki symbol located on the back of his jacket, was visible as well within the eerie night. His clothes screamed against a dark background.

 “... are you to question me? Whatt-tt if you... is enemy?” were the words which spilled out alongside that intoxicated smell of booze. His words probably made little sense, as the alcohol was running deeply within his veins. His words probably came out rude for the Senju, although his true intentions were not backing that up accurately.

Those thin eyebrows immediately arched backwards further backing up his curiosity. While he awaited for the answer, the genin dragged both of the sleeves from his jacket upwards, leaving a bold impression behind; one which could turn against him. Despite all of these, within his current state the raven looked quite nimble on his two feet. He didn’t had the most keen balance, although all of these meant little to nothing if he was to engage a fight with the person who stood forth, beneath his eyes.

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
Dray was expecting a satisfactory answer or he would not even pose the slightest attempt to let the stranger into the village. This could probably be the beginning of another war. Somebody coming to gather info on the leaf and cause war. Since the day dray's parents had died in war, he had hated war and had vowed to stop it by all means. And now, what the boy would say would determine his fate even if he meant him dieing here as there was no other visible shinobi in the area.

As dray finished questioning the young man, he relied in a rude way asking dray who he might be to question him... And at this statement, the young man had decided his own fate. Behaving rude to someone who had the upper hand. As dray was one who detested rudeness, no matter how small it was, he could not go against his personality.. He could not allow someone so inferior to him put a stain on his personality... Dray had wished it would not come to this.. He had wished that the young man would give a perfect and satisfactory answer that would let dray allow him into the village hidden in the leaves and they might even probably be friends but this young man had just written his own destiny in stone. How dray wished the man knew that he was about to die.. Dray need not tell him because nothing he would say would change the situation... Now raising his head to the boy who had moved about two metres back taking what looked like a fighting posture, dray said with rage filling up in his body system....such insolence to me...a shinobi of the leaf.. I do not know about other shinobis..but I as a shinobi of the leaf do not tolerate insults and am sorry to let you know that you will have to pay with your life....

Dray finished his statement rather quickly as he dashed towards the boy who was two metres away.. Upon getting to a metre of him, dray's cunning insticts still lurked within him even though he was no longer a genin.. He kicked up some dirt that would disrupt the already drowsy man's vision as dray would get within inches of the young man and plant his left hand into the ground thereby using it to support the weight of his upper body as dray would launch his legs into the air directly under the yound man and thrust his legs upwards under the man's chin jabbing him upwards.. As this attack would definetly cause the young man to fall metres back as he probably wouldn't have the strength to take the hit. Depending on whether the man would fall backwards, stagger or evade the attack, dray would proceed to the man's location as he would land a barrage of punches on the man if he were to stagger from the previous attack. If he were to fall to the ground, dray would proceed to his location as he would perform a front flip and land his right leg strongly on the man's chest causing him to cough out little blood but if the man did manage to evade the previous attack, dray would then stand his ground and pull out two kunais but regardless of whatever the young man did, dray would still keep a metre long distance between he and the young man while carefully drawing out two kunais from inside his green kimono- like armour...
WC:600

Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
Dirt arose from the ground and clashed against Tengoku’s eyes, irritating his already foggy sight. The Uzumaki was not expecting for a person to act so soon, especially after exchanging such a short number of words. What followed up was actually worse for him, as that chiseled chin of his flew alongside the rest of his body due to the sheer force which stood beneath the kick thrown by the Senju. The raven was bound to land on the ground.

Little time was given to his rest, and as such the green-haired shinobi followed up with a frontal flip in order to once more hit the raven, although this time his chest was the target. As soon as the Senju attempted to perform his front flip, Tengoku being already on the ground quickly rolled over to his right, letting the Senju’s leg hit upon the harsh ground; escaping a ruthless blow. On his second roll, Tengoku managed to raise himself slightly on his left knee and without any more time wasted, he used that crouching position to push himself further backwards, with the intention of increasing the gap between the two, even if it was for a few mere seconds.

While midair, the raven would gesture a couple of consecutive hand seals. Once the wingless creature landed from his leap, his right hand was slammed against ground while he mumbled to himself a few words “Earth Release: Mud Wolves”. The soil was rather moist underneath his presence; ripples began to take shape. Wolves began emerging from the mud, three in number. Two of them charged at the Senju, one was heading for his left side and the other for his right said with the simple intention of sinking their teeth within his legs; the last remained just a few inches away from the raven, in case he was needed.


Used Mud Wolves, that's a 15 Chakra Cost.

170 Chakra (150 Genin Chakra + 20 Uzumaki) = 155 Chakra Left.

If there are any mistakes, please feel free to PM me and I'll discuss and edit.

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
Exactly... Dray's first attack had hit as the force from the jab sent the boy flying metres back. Pursuing after him again, dray got to him and flipped forward attempting to land a powerful on the boy's chest that would make him cough out blood but the boy was no learner as he simply rolled over before getting up and stretching the distance between them both. Dray too, not being a slacker had quickly gotten up and withdrew two kunais from his kimono like armour... Dray had not a moment to act when he was interrupted by the young man who suprisingly started performing hand seals and with a slam of his hand unto the ground which was moist, three wolves came forth from the ground as the boy set two to attack dray and the last one to probably defend him... Impressive... Dray thought as he well knew the earth mud wolves technique. He was aware that these mud wolves would reform back into their normal shape if they were hit and for that reason, dray would not waste any time on them as dray would then perform some hand seals and call forth his own mud wolves to attack since he had the same exact doton jutsu.. So the boy was a doton user.. Dray figured out.. As the wolves would go into battle against each other, dray would throw the two kunais in his hand towards the boy's two shoulder as he would then throw another two shurikens at the boy's legs hoping to movement.. As dray would then finally throw two shrikens with one aimed for his ear to push him off balance and the last shuriken heading for his throat.. A quick death.

WC:292
CP:185:/200
jutsu used:



Last edited by Draygglez on Sat Dec 13, 2014 9:49 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Edited in my chakra used.)

Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
The wolves which were originally headed for the Senju were no intercepted by their own kind, and thus entangled within a hustle. No matter what was the outcome between them, Tengoku would continue pouring chakra within his technique in order to main the form and shape of his own wolves. A pair of kunai would be heading towards the raven’s location, although the wolf which stood behind was easily capable of intercepting them from making contact within Tengoku’s legs.

Misguided by  the strong presence made by the alcohol, the Uzumaki paid no attention towards the Senju’s  intentions, and as such he began forming a couple of new hand seals. Keeping himself balanced was a hard feat to maintain, and as such the first shuriken completely missed his left ear; however, the second one managed to kiss his neck, leaving behind a wound from which blood began to gush out. That next technique was interrupted the moment Tengoku attempted to cover up his wound, despite the fact that his fate was already taking shape.

When his eyes rested upon his hand, the Uzumaki realized that he was bleeding and there was nothing that he could in order to cauterize the wound. The only thing left for him to do, was to continue with his next technique, even though it may be in vain. Nothing really determined him to fight, although this time was different as his life was on the line, and ironically it all started from a misconception. All odds were against him.


-5 Chakra from maintaining wolves / 155 - 5 = 150 Chakra Remaining.

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
Dray watched as his projectiles soared in the air above the fighting wolves.. Most of the projectiles were stopped by the last wolf of the young man that was guiding him but dray smirked as one of the shurikens knocked on the door of the boy's flesh precisely around his neck region as blood poured forth to welcome the incoming visitor.. Dray was certain that the young man could feel the pain of the injury but that did not stop him or seem to get in his way as he simply went on to perform a series of hand seals... So, the stubborn type huh.. Dray thought... Dray had no choice but to admit that the young man in purple clothing was some what like him. Always fighting on even when he had the least chance of winning.. Just like when he fought with his sensei.. The outcome was certain and dray's fate had been sealed right from the beginning of the battle but ignoring that thought, dray still went on to fight his sensei until he earned his respect... But that was not so in this situation. The only common thing was that the young man's fate was sealed just as dray's fate was sealed when he fought his sensei.. Apart from the fact that dray was aiming to protect his village- the village hidden in the leaves from danger, he was also washing off the stain that this fellow man had put on his personality with his act of rudeness... As dray was not one to underestimate anybody, no matter who the person might be, summoning three mud wolves was quite a feat from someone of the boy's calibre..what more did the young man have under his sleeve.. Dray was eager to see as the night was still dark with the light of the moon giving them visible sight yet dray was not ready to be a victim of the boy's tricks...

Infusing an amount of chakra into the log of wood besides him, as well as feeding the mud wolves with a bit of chakra to keep them standing, dray ran towards the boy though the fighting wolves were betwwen dray and the young man..so upon getting to the bridge, dray jumped foward over the occupied and distracted wolves as he put his hand to his mouth with the appearance of blowing a trumpet as dray opened his mouth to release a blast of water moving at 10m/s towards the young man... Before dray now landed a metre away from the boy with the fighting wolves about three metres behind dray... Let's see how long he'll last.. Dray thought..
WC:453
Infused 5 chakra for kawarimi
Maintained 5 chakra for mud wolves
CP:175/200
jutsu used:

Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
When the raven finished building up the necessary hand seals, he already was located against a nearby tree; the water trumpet made a wonderful job.  Due to its sheer force, Tengoku has lost his balance and landed with his back against the husk of a nearby tree. The minor bruises caused by the jutsu were not of his concern as his clothes were soaked, by both water and the amount of blood which spewed from his early injury. He no longer had the strength to raise himself from the seated position, and as such he whispered a few final words “Lightning Release: Javelin”. Once his words were finished, three spear-like lightning bolts appeared around him; each was about two feet in length.

The spears were not meant for the Senju, but for his wolves. As such, each spear headed for the mud wolves in order to dissipate them once and for all. Once his final attempt was over, Tengoku pulled down his mask and whistled, informing his own wolves to surround and attack the skillful Senju, without even carrying what happened to his spears. Those two eyes of his were barely kept open, clearly he was about to faint. Tired and numb was his body, while those breaths were heavy as stones; his cage was unfitting for anything more. The raven has given his last battle cry. Ironically, the one thing which he despised the most was about to happen. With just seconds away from his own death, Tengoku looked forth once more and awaited for the end.


150 Chakra - 15 the C-Rank Jutsu - 5 for Wolves / 130 Chakra Left.

Lightning Release: Javelin
Spoiler:

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
Dray's water trumpet had done well in sweeping the young man off his feet thereby sending him crashing into a nearby tree trunk.. The young man was clearly exhausted as he was soaked in blood from his numerous injuries and water from dray's jutsu..
It was pretty visible that the young man was exhausted as he could not even stand on his feet after dray's attack.. He was now sure that his death was near but he still pushed on as he mumured some words in his seated posited. Three raiton natured bolt appeared above him with one over his heads and two by his side... So, he had this and did not use it all this while..hmmph.. Dray thought yet dray had the perfect counter if he was being attacked.. As dray prepared to use his already set plan if the lightning bolts came anywhere near him but instead, the attack was directed at dray's three mud wolves.. Phew..saving me my chakra.. Dray smiled but as the wolves were destroyed by the lightning attacks, the boy seemed to command the mud wolves as the surrounded dray and set to attack him..

As the wolves came at dray, he sighed at the little pesky things as dray simply stamped his feet on the ground as the ground brought forth earth spears that hooked the mud wolves right below their jaws in the process, destroying them... Now, it was dray and this young man.. Nothing was seperating them both.. The time of fate had come and dray was not ready to defy it... With some hand seals, the earth beneath dray paved way as about twelve spear like earth missles came forth waiting fro dray's command.. As dray was only ten metres away from the young man, he wished he did not have to do this but when the time for doing the right thing had come, dray was not one who bothered in not doing so..
As final and parting words to the almost dead young man, dray proceeded not caring if the young man heard or not....In your next life, try to answer question more suitably and most importantly, try not to put a stain on people's personality and finally, warn yourself and others to always fear people in green.. dray concluded as he launched ten of the earth missles at the young man who was pretty helpless and had already accepted his faith.. Preserving the remaining two missles in the earth, dray would follow distantly behind the missles as they would explode upon contact with the young man blowing up various parts of his body as the explosion caused by the missles would be concentrated due to their numbers.. As dray would then get to what was left of the young man as he would still have a little life in him that he was probably hanging unto, dray would say to the man finally as he was standing before him... You are what you make of yourself as dray would then yell out.... MOKUTON: SAKISHI NO JUTSU! as both of dray's hands would transform into two large wooden branches with extremely sharp edges as dray would use sheer force to impale the young man's heart with his right hand and stab his lower abdomen with the left bidding him farewell....
WC:573
CP:115/200
jutsu used:

Tengoku

Tengoku


D-rank
Draygglez has successfully killed Tengoku.


Fading was the world around him, or more likely his life was from the world. To top all of this, the Senju darted a couple of spears against Tengoku, each and everyone hitting the target as he was standing there like a dummy. All of these were enough the end the life of the raven, and thus a curtain posed over those jet-black eyes. Nothing more than an empty husk was not standing against the tree. Alongside the raven, those three mud wolves that he formed extinguished as well; Tengoku’s chakra was no longer present.

The words mumbled by the Senju never had the chance to reach the raven’s ears, as the vast loss of blood managed to take care of that. When those inspiring words were shouted, the Senju appeared to form two wooden spikes which went against Tengoku’s hearth, piercing it thoroughly. Some may consider this act unnecessary and a bit of an overkill, although he probably wanted to assure himself that everything went accordingly to his plan.

No valuable objects were present on the Uzumaki, as the only thing which he had of some worth was his leather wallet which contained his ninja id card and a modest sum of 260 Ryo.



Last edited by Tengoku on Sun Dec 14, 2014 12:05 pm; edited 1 time in total

Aomine

Aomine


D-rank
As dray's wooden hands pierced the young man's organs, he could feel the fire in him quench... The young man's death was more of his fault than dray's. He should have been more specific in answering questions and more polite too..but on a second thought, this was dray's first kill. He was defending the village of the leaf as an excellent shinobi so when he found CLAYMORE, he would not be much of a problem to him. Killing off this unknown ninja was clearly a silent and perfect way. Dray killed him without having a single blood stain on him except the wooden branches of dray's arm that would return back to normal without any stains as dray seemed to search him but couldnt find anything valuable on the man to pay for his rudeness except a little money dray kept..but most of all, dray would like to accept the fact that this young man was a shinobi regardless of the village he belonged to and for this reason, dray did not want the birds of the sky to feed on his dead body..

As the explosions hit the young man's area, it made sure to clear a bit of the man's surroundings.. As dray now saw the lifeless body of this youngman lying flat on the ground, dray formed little handseals as the earth beneath him rose up to about two metres above the dead body.. The form in which dray raised the earth paved a little opening for the dead body of the man to fall in.. As dray was on top of the risen earth, he jumped down backwards as he re-called the remaining two earth missles that he had previously not used and sent them towards the risen earth... the earth missles hit the risen earth at the base, exploding and causing to to break and fall over the deadbody in the earth..

After the ruble and dust, the scene looked just like dray had just buried this shinobi.. Leaving behind no evidence except broken earth that would level itself very soon when the rain fell besides none of what had happened here was traceable to dray.. Dray had killed the young man yet he had given him a perfect graveyard.. With no scents or cuts or even the slightest sign of blood to give dray away, dray dusted off the dirt on his cloth as he made his way back to the village hidden in the leaves..
jutsu used:
WC:423
Total wc:3026
EXIT
KILLED TENGOKU UZUMAKI
TOOK ALL HIS MONEY
Training:
Per:C2-C3(700/3026)
End:C-C1-C2(1175/3026)
Rea:C-C1(575/3026)
Remaining: 576

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