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Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
A boy woke up in the changing rooms as other older shinobi were walking passed complaining about having failed the chuunin exams and being forced to watch a bunch of kids fight each other. To top it all off they were even more upset when they heard the exhibition match that was meant to train some of them had been replaced with some training fight involving some other kid who got eliminated in the Chuunin Exams. They asked why they had to deal with this and then one of them bumped the kid knocking him off the bench he was sleeping on, the guy then laughed and glared. "Hey, kid do not go sleeping in here run home to your mommy". The boy sat up and yawned then as the man kept talking to him and telling him to get lost he finally drew his sword as the others quickly covered the big mans mouth. The sword was shining brightly as the man fought off his friends and asked why they were stopping him when all of a sudden he felt a blade next to his neck. "Get lost, i am here to train real shinobi not a bunch of pathetic weaklings who have been genin for all their lives". The man wet himself before falling to the side as the boy walked out to the entrance as he walked into the arena as the people were a bit tired and sleepy some of the people cheered as the arena was not as packed as usual as the people expected this to be a lame training session. He read his note as it explained who he would be training.

'Your request for is to train Toshiko in order for him to be better prepared, he did not pass the chuunin exams but we deemed him worthy of the title. However some of the instructors are not happy with this decision and feel he needs to still spend another year training and doing missions. We would like you to prove that he is truly worthy of the title of chuunin as well as help him to become a better shinobi. As payment you will have your room moved to the class above first class reserved for daimyo and Kage. Thanks for your help in this regard'

he sighed as he dropped his backpack with all his equipment in the arena which seemed smaller at around fifty by fifty meter radius it seemed like they did renovations again. Either way he would wait at the center of the arena in order to train Toshiko in what it takes to be a true shinobi.

Words = 441

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko found himself back at the same hero arena, only a day after he was there. He still hadn't traveled back to konoha. He wanted to wait a bit longer. Didn't want to risk the chance of anyone finding out about the eye he had received. He needed to be cautious. It had been 24 hours since the transplant. If what akira was saying was true, Toshiko was okay to use the eye now. Despite that, he wasn't sure that he wanted to. He kept his eye hidden underneath an eye patch. It was a bit strange only being capable of seeing from his right eye, but he got used to it quickly. Apparently, he'd been called back from his hotel within takigakure to receive training from a certain someone. He hadn't been notified of who it was, and only was told that he'd need the training to prove himself worthy of the title he was granted even though he'd been disqualified from the exams. After leaving his hotel room, he walked back towards the hero arena.

Upon the way there, he wondered about the eye. What type of powers it could grant him. The secrets behind it. What it would do to him. Now that he had the eye within him, all of these questions were soon to be answered.He also wondered who it was that would be training him, and why he was granted a training partner in the first place. It didn't make sense. If they thought he hadn't proved his worth yet then why would they give him the promotion in the first place? He was tired of people doubting him. Second guessing him. It was annoying. Hopefully this would be fun though. He looked at it as an opportunity to get stronger and enhance his skills a bit. Did he already know his training partner? It'd be better that way. Maybe he'd even get to test out the power of his eye. No. He couldn't allow anyone and everyone to know he'd obtained this power. He'd have to try and keep it to himself. How would he explain it though? The eye patch. One day his eye is fine, and the next he has an eye patch? No one would believe that. Well, during his fight, sero had managed to get a large amount of metsubishi in his eye. He could use that as an excuse. Say that sero blinded him, and they had to take his eye out. It wasn't the most elaborate excuse, but people would believe it.

It was hard. Having to keep this a secret. Having the eye at all. All of it was going to be hard. While he knew this, he also knew that he was using the power for the better. To help those in need and to make this world a great place to live in. It had to be somewhat powerful though. If people would want him dead or be hunting him for the power of this eye, then it obviously had to be worth something. He couldn't wait to see it in action. The day would come soon enough. Maybe in a life threatening situation. After a while, he came up to the hero arena. There were still a few people there, sulking for losing the chuunin exams. Either beaten in battle, or didn't even qualify for the first round. It sucked. Toshiko knew how they felt. He had managed to quickly get over it though. He wouldn't be rude by nonchalantly exclaiming the fact that he had now become a chuunin. He would keep it to himself, and only tell those who asked. He came up to the entrance of the hero arena, where he had entered the arena from when he was in his fight with sero.

There was someone in the center of  the arena whom toshiko could see upon entering. He looked a bit small, yet strangely familiar. As Toshiko got closer, he realized who it was. It was the young boy he had met in the forest some time ago back in konoha. it was his buddy Yuzu. The two had initially met at the Naka River within Konoha. Yuzu was a bit aggressive, but eventually came to show a bit of trust to Toshiko. Their meeting came short, as Yuzu had to leave right after they met. They were in the middle of a game of tag. Toshiko walked up to the 13 meter mark between him and yuzu, and smiled and waved at him.

"Hey there Yuzu. Long time no see! I'm sorry we didn't get to finish our game of tag. What're you doing here?"  

Then, Toshiko realized it.

"Oh i get it. You're my training partner aren't you?"

Word Count: 824

Strength: C-C-1 575/575

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
He stood there just looking on as his friend Uzumaki Toshiko appeared, he looked down feeling disappointed for the moment. "Sorry Toshi...ko", as he looked up afterwards with a more serious look in his eyes. "We can not really play a game of tag right now, but I will make sure you get a chance to prove yourself no matter how badly i have to beat you."

He took a large backstep creating close to twenty meters between them before drawing his sword and holding it with one hand above his head facing the sky. He then shouted, "Dodge this!!!", in order to give him fair enough warning as he slowly slashed directly towards Toshiko as a white slash like silhoette appeared heading towards Toshiko. The warning was to give him enough time to respond and avoid the simple attack, but if he failed to avoid that he could end up losing an entire limb. However this was only the first portion of the attack as the moment the slash was done, he would create five water clones who would each take different equipment from the backpack.

The first clone took out Tsubakiri and faced it towards Toshiko. The other four clones took a pose each carrying a different weapon. Tsunakiri was held by the second clone, the third and forth clones each had a part of the Kukan and Sozo blades. The fifth and final clone had Tsukiyo on his back and was holding the scythe he had gotten from Kamikira long ago after her death in the Seven Bells War. Each clone would be a trial that Toshi would have to pass, however as the trial went on it would only become more difficult as the other four clones backed away and began to locate themselves to each of the four corners of the arena, even though the arena was round they made a square like formation with the end of the radius of the arena as the edges.

The real Yuzu placed his sword in the ground and then sat down with his sword to his back, while the clone would stand there to face off and begin the trial if he happened to survive the first attack.

Words = 441 + 372 = 813
Chakra = 150/340
Clone 1 = 34/34
Clone 2 = 34/34
Clone 3 = 34/34
Clone 4 = 34/34
Clone 5 = 34/34


Jutsu and abilities used
Masamune's Cleave ability = Sends a white silhoette with a width of 5m moving over a range of 20m range of whatever slash he uses at 35m/s

Mizu Bunshin aka Water Clone : Created 5 clones which each have 10% of the originals maximum chakra

OOC Comment : Just look at my jutsu list i do not feel like typing out jutsu in full thanks

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Sorry Toshi...ko",

What was he apologizing for?

"We can not really play a game of tag right now, but I will make sure you get a chance to prove yourself no matter how badly i have to beat you."

The words Yuzu spoke made Toshiko smile. There was nothing wrong with a bit of trash talk before a good fight. That was what Toshiko loved. It was strange. He didn't like harm or pain, but he surely did love to fight. He gave off a strangely twisted, sadistic smile as his lust for battle took over, and he got in a fighting stance.

"What makes you so sure of yourself Yuzu? I have gotten stronger since our last meet! I"m a chuunin now, and i have a lot of tricks up my sleeve! Now come on, lets go!"

Yuzu quickly complied by backing up to the 20 meter mark, taking his sword, and holding it up high to face the sky. He then spoke.

"Dodge this!!!"

Toshiko didn't worry about what it was that Yuzu was referring to. He would take advantage of the warning his opponent gave him. Quickly he began sidestepping to the right, moving 6 meters out of the way of Yuzu as he  and then sent forward a slash with the sword that went plummeting right towards where Toshiko originally stood. the slash clashed into the entrance of the arena, breaking a chunk out of it.

After the slash, Yuzu quickly created five clones of himself.

'He knows the clone technique too? Dammit! Well, maybe i can still surprise him a bit by showing him my version!'

Each clone received a weapon from the real yuzu's backpack, and four of them went to each corner of the arena, one on every side. Then one clone with a blade faced Toshiko with it's blade at the ready. Toshiko smiled.

"Well well well. It looks like this clone wants to play! Alright!"

Toshiko formed the tiger hand seal, and then spoke the name of the jutsu

"Fire style: Fire Clone Jutsu!"

With those words, an exact clone of Toshiko appeared a few meters to his left. Toshiko looked over to his clone, and nodded to him. Then they both faced the yuzu clone that stood 20 meters in front of them. They then spoke in unision.

"Let's go!"

They ran towards Yuzu together, with 6 meters between them. Toshiko quickly moved 3 meters to the right to put more distance between them, and then quickly took out his tanto. He then threw the tanto at the clone's legs as he was 8 meters in front of him, and Toshiko's clone then moved to the side of yuzu's clone, and formed the tiger seal as he inhaled deeply. He then exhaled, and a large fireball came out of his mouth, heading directly towards The yuzu clone from 5 meters away. The real Toshiko would stand and wait for the fireball and tanto to strike the clone, or for the clone to react.

Word Count: 532

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Strength C-1-C-2 532/600



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Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The little blonde boy started to yawn before sitting down, he could no longer see what was going on and did not need to, he began to meditate as he felt the nature chakra all around him begin to gather towards him. He could feel all that was in the world from outside going deep inside him, it was a rush as the nature penetrated the deep reaches of his soul. He was now in perfect peace.

Meanwhile the second clone by the first corner began reading a book on how to make a storm, it was an interesting read and in it were details on the weather including making it rain, making a lake into a river, making a waterfall, making many watery wet works for all sorts of occasions. The books name was Wet Waterworks, which referred to how it dealt with all the many ways one could use water in jutsu.

The third and forth clone were busy practicing sword slashes and thrusts simultaneously and in sync with one another, they made some light vocal sounds which to some may sound cute but to the bandits who had heard it time and again it triggers traumatic experiences in the hearts of the bandit survivors.

Meanwhile the fifth clone kept an eye on the original just in case something bad happens, or if Toshiko decided to sneak in an attack on the meditating little boy. The fifth clone had a more serious look on its face since it was protecting the original, it had its pride and also knew that in the end he was just a small part of a larger whole.

The training had begun as it seemed Toshiko not only avoided the slash to signal the start of battle, but did not waste anytime except for the taunt saying that the little boy wanted to play with him. This did not get to the clone who already had the training situation planned, but it seems that Toshiko did not wait for anything as the clone watched Toshiko bring out his own clone which was apparently a fire clone. As good as clones were a Fire Clone was not going to be that useful against a Water Clone. Maybe there was some kind of plan that Toshiko had in order to try and beat the clone using strength in numbers.

The original Toshi and the clone Toshi got mixed up as the water clone did not really take note of who the real Toshi was even though it would have been clear that whichever Toshi was real would probably keep himself safe. THe Toshi's ran parallel to each other with a six meter gap that soon became nine meters, as one of the Toshi's strayed off the beaten path. The one toshi tooked out a Tanto as he looked to it, and then when he was about eight meters away he threw the tanto at the water clones leg as he just stepped his leg out of the way watching this clone, then realizing this was way too similar to his fighting style when he noticed the other Toshi was near him. As this Toshi inhaled deeply it seemed strange as he performed one of his secret jutsu as he countered the blazing fire ball with what looked like more clones as the fireball hit what looked like a water clone real hard as you could just see water splashing as the clone's clone resisted the attack.

He held out his hand to show that Toshi should stop, whether he listened or engaged in a fight the clone would begin a long lesson of talking or more like a lecture.
"That combination was good, but it gets predictable when everyone does it. Using a tanto like a kunai to distract the enemy while having your clone use a major attack from behind was all well and good. But it means nothing if you do not follow through, and if this clone is anything like me you probably do not have much chakra left to it"

As the water clone stood there lecturing while the two mirror images as he later would reveal walked around automatically not attacking and just moving around. How would Toshi deal with his opponent who had images that could block jutsu and who had not even begun his attack yet. However Toshi did pass the first test which was to take the initiative, but it was now the second test Toshi had to pass which was not only to defeat the clone but to show why he deserves to be a Chuunin. As of now he was at best a really great genin, but he was sure there was more to Toshi then a cheap clone and some tantos.

Words = 813 + 800 = 1613(1 EP)
[b]Chakra = 150 + 10 = 160/340 senjutsu meditation
Clone 1 = 34 - 15 = 19/34 used mirror image
Clone 2 = 34/34
Clone 3 = 34/34
Clone 4 = 34/34
Clone 5 = 34/34


Jutsu Used Kagami-zo aka Mirror Image

Mirror Image:

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
OOC: Yuzu i dont have a comp to use and im using my ps4 to type this. i might be able to access a comp later today or tomorrow.

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
[center]Toshiko watched as he planned out his attack. As he predicted, the clone moved out of the way of his tanto. Then, his clone who was behind yuzu's clone fired the great fireball jutsu. As he did so, Yuzu's clone did something that was a bit hard to see. He formed a clone of his own, and used it to deflect the great fireball. there was a splash of water, and then the fireball dispersed.

There were more yuzu clones that were now walking around the other yuzu clone. It was getting a bit confusing, but Toshiko could tell who was who. His attack had failed though. Damn. The original yuzu clone would gesture for Toshiko to stop running, and he and his own clone did so.

"That combination was good, but it gets predictable when everyone does it. Using a tanto like a kunai to distract the enemy while having your clone use a major attack from behind was all well and good. But it means nothing if you do not follow through, and if this clone is anything like me you probably do not have much chakra left to it

The clone was right. it was a bit weird to Toshiko. He'd never trained with a clone, let alone be lectured by one. Despite that, The clone was correct. Toshiko's clone was almost out of chakra, but in no way was Toshiko finished. He had multiple tricks up his sleeve, which he intended to use. He still really wanted to impress his tutor. He wanted to prove himself. Should he use it? Slowly, Toshiko brought his left hand up to the side of his eye patch. before he could rip it off, he quickly brought his hand back down. No. He couldn't. Not unless he really needed it, and even then it was too risky. He'd have to use other tactics for now. Until he knew that his secret was safe.

It was time for him to attack now. Toshiko looked back over to his clone, and then nodded to him. The clone was behind yuzu's clone and it's clones, and then charged it from directly behind. It had almost no chakra, so jutsu was completely out of the question. when it was right behind the yuzu clone, it aimed a kick right at the side of it's head.

The real Toshiko stayed in place for a moment. he focused his chakra, and then converted it into lightning chakra that took a physical manifestation hovering over certain parts of his body. one blast of chakra above his head, and then one hovering over each shoulder. Three in total. After forming them completely, he charged forward. at a 3 meter distance, he fired all three of the blasts. one aimed at the original clone who had spoken to him, and the other two aimed at the two clones he had created. After firing them, Toshiko didn't stop. he charged behind it, and them aimed a punch at the original clone's nose that would hit right after the lightning blast. His clone was attacking the same clone from behind. Toshiko couldn't wait to see how the clone would attempt to dodge this.

Spoiler:

Word Count: 548

C-1-C-2 600/600

548-28- 520

520/1500 For Giant Flame Bullet



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Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The clone finished his lecture and noticed that Toshi was reaching for his eye patch, the only reason to do that was either he had a secret doujutsu or his eye was injured and he was hoping it was healed already so he could use both his eyes. The clone was about to say something when he noticed Toshiko seemed to be looking passed him, as he looked back quickly he noticed the other Toshi charging at him as he thought to himself that this was another decoy tactic so he just raised an arm to block the kick from the clone. However the real Toshi had prepared something as he watched slightly that lightning seemed to appear around Toshi, now he had an idea of the basics of what Toshi's elements were.

Uzumaki Toshiko had both Katon and Raiton which meant he at least had some diversity in elements, but some of the mistakes Toshiko made might have been out of feeling the need to impress those around him. He did not see anything wrong with this as he just kept an eye to guard against the clone as he wanted to see what follow through Toshiko was aiming for, in order to determine whether he was on the right track.

He seemed to be charging in with three lightning charges as he aimed to push the clone away as the real Toshi came within three meters of him he released the technique aiming at his images as well. The attack was good, but the defensive jutsu he used was better. As the lightning was heading towards the images the one took a hit and dissipated into a puddle of water while the other one took one hit before diving in front of him to block the third charge then also dropping like a puddle. Through the water came a fist which made him smile cause the attack was well placed.

A puff of mist appeared as the clone moved out of the way in the confusion, as the mist expanded the clone spoke while inside the mist. "Well done, using a jutsu along with an ordinary attack was a better tactic. Now all you have to do is find me in order to take the next test." The clone was silent moving through the mist carefully, how would Toshi and his clone find him inside this mist and what would the second trial be if he passed this one.

Meanwhile the real Yuzu was still busy gathering chakra as he meditated while the one clone began walking towards him then stood there holding out Tsukiyo. "Looks like i might have my turn sooner than expected."

Words = 1613 + 448 = 2061(2 EP)
Chakra = 160 + 10 = 170/340 senjutsu meditation
Clone 1 = 34 - 15 = 9/34 used hidden mist jutsu
Clone 2 = 34/34
Clone 3 = 34/34
Clone 4 = 34/34
Clone 5 = 34/34

Jutsu Used Kirigakure no jutsu

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
After the kick, Toshiko watched to see the outcome of his attack. Sadly, The original clone somehow managed to block off the attack Toshiko's clone had aimed from behind and at his blind spot. It was a bit disheartening. Well, more like completely disheartening. Despite that, There were still the other attacks he had planned. Toshiko honestly did not expect what happened next. Each of his lightning javelin blasts hit their target, all besides the one that was most important. The one he had aimed at the original yuzu clone which was blocked by one of the clones the clone had created, as well as Toshiko's strike that was aimed at the original as well. The two clones created by the first clone dispersed into water puddles upon the ground, soaking into the dirt. His attack had failed. Shit.

He still had managed to do a bit of damage by getting rid of those two clones, but he needed a boost. Something that could give him the advantage in this spar. make it end quicker. The eye was the only thing that he had. He couldn't use it. He couldn't use it and it was killing him. He wanted to trust YUzu, but he had learned that not everyone he met would be his friend even if he wanted things to be that way. What if he pulled out the eye and yuzu was one of the hunters that akira told him about? He'd try to kill Toshiko and take the eye from him. He couldn't risk that. He'd have to confirm that yuzu was trustworthy. Ask him beforehand, and then use the eye within their spar. It was then and only then that he could take that kind of risk. He still was insanely curious though. If his life was at risk for obtaining this eye, it had to have miraculous abilities and power that was unheard of. It was almost causing him physical pain to not test out it's capabilities.

Then, something unexpected happened. mist began to fill the area, and the clone disappeared within it. Toshiko's clone was right in front of the original Toshiko, and they could see each other a bit through the mist, but there was no trace of the clone. He began looking around moving in a circle with the hopes of getting at least a hint towards where the Yuzu clone was. Then, while within the mist he heard it. A voice.

"Well done, using a jutsu along with an ordinary attack was a better tactic. Now all you have to do is find me in order to take the next test."

All Toshiko had to do was find the clone to move on? Well, the clone made it a bit less challenging from speaking and giving off his direction. Toshiko of course didn't have the direct location, but he had an idea of where the clone was due to the sound of his voice. He quickly turned in the direction of the voice. It was different this time. He couldn't attack without knowing where his opponent was. It'd be a waste of chakra. Unless.... he attacked in every direction. Toshiko looked over to his clone, and the clone moved backwards a dozen meters. toshiko then inhaled deeply, and converted his oxygen to gas chakra, and then exhaled it, filling the misty area in front of him with the invisible gas. It smelled horrible, But Toshiko would need it's help in just a few more moments.

Toshiko backed up a dozen meters, just as his clone did, and prepared the next part of his attack. He knew that if fire met the gas he fired from his mouth, it would ignite upon reaching it, enhancing it and increasing the degree of burns. He thought of using Phoenix Flower Jutsu, but it was way to weak. He needed something that would span out, and pack a punch if it hit the target. What could he do?.... He thought of which technique would be capable of doing so.

There was one that came to mind. One that he had studied time and time before, but never managed to perfect. It was similar to his great fireball jutsu, but it was B rank and even more powerful. If he could use that and target it into the mist, then he could also be able to hit the clone and get rid of it. It was his first time using a technique above the C rank level, and he didn't know how to go about doing so, but there was a first time for everything. Toshiko was careful about doing this, as he didn't want to put a strain on himself. He inhaled, filling his mouth with chakra that converted to a strange, liquid oil while in his throat, slowly creeping up to his mouth. he then held it in for a few moments, prepping to fire, and then spit it out. The very same second he did, the oil ignited. A massive fireball spewed from his lips, and went sky rocketing forward. It hit the gas, and got even larger in width. It then fired directly towards where Toshiko had heard the voice of the clone. After firing it, Toshiko ran forward along with his own clone, quickly running up behind the fireball 6 meters to the right so they didn't run through the gas. The followed it, and anticipated it to hit the clone so Toshiko could move on the the next challenge. Hopefully he wouldn't be forced into pulling out his sharingan. If he could defeat the clone here and now, then he really wouldn't need it. There was no telling. He couldn't see him, he just had to hope that his attack and calculations were correct. He had to hope that he made the right move.

Word Count: 998

1518/1500 For Giant Flame Bullet. Giant Flame Bullet Learned.

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Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The young boy Yuzu yawned as he felt he had gathered enough chakra as he began to stand up to look over the battle, it looked like his clone had trapped Toshiko in the hidden mist as he looked on closely as his clone had said it might be his turn soon. He looked on waiting to see the answer that the Uzumaki would give him, was he just all talk or did he deserve the title of Chuunin.

The other two clones with Kukan and Sozo began to patrol the area encircling everyone by walking along the edges of the arena. He did not want anyone interfering with the training. Some people began whispering that Toshiko was nothing but an Uzumaki who was only there for his name and not his skill, however the entire crowd was silenced by what happened next. A large explosion of fire within the mist as the clone burnt up and became steam as many people looked shocked while the young little boy Yuzu realized that his test had been passed in a somewhat brute force tactic similar to something he would do, but that was only the beginning as he took a deep breath and looked to his clone who knew what to do as he walked towards the mist as the burning fires were still there.

The clone stepped up close towards the mist before speaking out loud, "Congratulations on passing the first test, I am not here to fight you, but i am here to prepare you for a true test of your skill." As the clone stabbed tsukiyo into the ground and then performed an unknown jutsu which caused nothing to happen as he stood there he looked down. "Prepare yourself", with those two words said the clone dashed towards Toshiko whose fire jutsu gave him away the location of the real Toshiko while the clone must have been near still to prevent a close conbat battle or to make the battle far easier than what it was going to be now.

The clone finally took out ten kunai with five in each hand, he held them close before jumping into the air with a spiral he aimed all the kunai at various locations with the first one aiming directly for Toshiko's face, the other two after that one aimed to escape spots to the right and left of where Toshiko stood. The kunai did not have much of a gap and the remaining seven went randomly in the location to spread them all over. However the last kunai would be thrown from five meters away as he would dash for the position would Toshiko be able to overcome this trial and what did the clone do at the beginning...

Soon things may be answered, but all that was known was that the training and the spar had only just begun for both of them. The real Ren looked up to the sky and then said, "He might be a bit like me".

Words = 2061 + 504= 2565(2 EP)
Chakra = 170/340
Clone 1 = Deceased
Clone 2 = 9/34
Clone 3 = 34/34
Clone 4 = 34/34
Clone 5 = 34/34


Jutsu Used True Hidden Mist
True Hidden Mist:

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko watched closely as he ran along with his clone 5 meters away from his blast. it was a bit hard to see through the mist. Despite that, he could tell that the fire blast hit something, and then as the fire worked as a light, he could see it was the clone. he'd hit his target, and watched the clone disperse. Upon watching the clone disappear, he felt kinda bad, as if he'd just killed someone. He knew it was just a manifestation of yuzu's chakra, but he didn't like it anyway. After getting rid of the clone,Toshiko and his own clone stopped running, and looked around. The real Toshiko then spoke.

"Alright Yuzu! I defeated the clone! Does that mean i passed the test?"

He waited a few moments, no answer. At least, not a direct answer.

"Congratulations on passing the first test, I am not here to fight you, but i am here to prepare you for a true test of your skill."

Toshiko heard the voice of another yuzu. Was it the real him, or a clone? he turned around and then saw him slightly. He stabbed the blade he was utilizing into the ground, and then performed a hand sign. He was going to use a jutsu. Offensive? Defensive? Toshiko didn't know, but didn't tmove either. he got in a ready stance, and awaited the clones move.

"Prepare yourself"

The clone then ripped out a multitude of kunai, 5 in each hand. He then jumped forward, spinning within air, and then fired the kunai directly at the position where Toshiko stood. a few flied to the areas around him as well, attempting to prevent him from moving out of the way of the attacks. There were too many. He could see them coming, but he had to be able to react to them fast, and without getting struck by one of them. It was time. Before the kunai were directly in front of him, Toshiko reached for the side of his eye patch. he needed it this time. he tugged it hard, ripping it off, and opened his sharingan eye.

It was strange at first. Sight from the eye was insanely weird to him, but it was in no way bad. He looked at the kunai that were coming towards him, but now he was ready. There were two headed at him directly aimed at his face. As they came by, he quickly moved his head to the left, grabbing the hilts of both the kunai as they passed him. There were two more, one on each of his sides. The one on the left was set to hit his clone, who quickly ducked underneath the kunai as it came by him. The rest of them came off in random directions. Two more headed towards Toshiko's clone, and he sidestepped away from them. Toshiko stared at the clone who was now dashing towards him. Toshiko stared at him with both eyes. he might have made a real dangerous move pulling out the eye, but if it would win him this spar quicker then he was up for it. He charged up towards the yuzu clone along with his own clone, and the two kunai in his hand. he threw one at the clone's leg, and then threw the kunai that was in his hand up to his clone. The clone charged the yuzu clone from the left side, and aimed a strike with the kunai at the side of it's head. Toshiko came up from the right side, and then aimed a roundhouse kick at the clone's right side of the head. He waited for it's reaction.

Word Count: 629

Spoiler:

Reaction Time: C-C-1 600/575

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The clone had an important objective to perform as the real Ren watched from a distance to see how the situation plays out. The boy then did something strange as he revealed his eye hidden beneath the eye patch, this boy had a sharingan as he gave a serious look as he watched the boy evade the kunai skillfully as his movements were far better then they were previously. He kept a close eye on the boy trying to figure out if this was the real deal or not.

The boy was challenging the clone head on alongside his own clone as he began by throwing kunai towards the clone who kept an eye on him then jumping over the kunai aimed towards his leg, then looking up in time to see the Toshi clone get around to his side and aiming for a direct hit to his neck as he blocked it with his right hand, but he lost view of Toshi for a moment and then felt a kick to his head as fell over before rolling and then getting back up and looking on with a serious glare on his face. Even as a clone he knew it was careless to get hit so easily, but things were going to change now. The clone was getting serious then took something out of his pocket, but kept it hidden with both hands not underestimating the prowess of the sharingan.

"Sharingan?"
as if questioning whether it was real or not.

Meanwhile the real Yuzu had seen the exchange and picked up on the fact that his clone had limited his abilities a bit too much and that a game changing technique had to occur. He gave a signal for the clone to perform its final task as he prepared his next lesson. He signaled for the two clones holding his main swords to return them to him as they tossed it in his direction, he then took that chance to disperse them returning their chakra to him. He kept only two clones alive, the one that was fighting Toshiko and the one who had the Tsunakiri, since this weapon would be less likely to kill or maim. He felt it only fitting that he sees whether Toshiko can handle the next combination and his clone. Meanwhile his main plan was to see if Toshiko could try and reach him for a moment, so that one day he could attempt to make a direct hit on him.

The water clone was facing towards the Toshi clone and Toshiko and then swallowed the hidden item before charging at them with a speed that if it was not for the sharingan he would have never noticed it to begin with. The speed of the dash as he aimed to appear between the both of them and draw his sword in order to finish them off in a single circular horizontal slash. With the sharingan he would be able to pick up on this but whether him and his clone could find a way to deal with it was another thing all on its own.

If Toshiko could pass this trial he would then face his next trial which would soon be here

Words = 2565 + 540 = 3105(3 EP)
Chakra = 170 + 34 + 34 = 238/340
Clone 1 = Deceased
Clone 2 = 9/34 (Hurt)
Clone 3 = Dispersed
Clone 4 = Dispersed
Clone 5 = 34/34


Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
The yuzu clone seemed to be a bit better than Toshiko and his own clone expected it to be. Toshiko's clone attacked it with the kunai from the left side, only to have it's attack blocked visiously as the clone put up it's hand to deflect. There was still the attack Toshiko had planned to the right side of it's head, and he hoped it would go through. Toshiko's clone may not have worked as an offensive technique, but he sure worked as a distraction. The clone was seemingly blinded to Toshiko's presence, and his attack struck the left side of his head. He fell over, and began rolling through the mist, stopping only and getting up from only 5 meters away from Toshiko. His clone stood next to him. The clone stared at Toshiko with a strangely serious glare upon it's face, and then went into it's pocket. It pulled out both of it's hands, but didn't show what it had went to grab. That was suspicious, but Toshiko knew to expect something. He gripped the kunai that he had caught, and didn't dare to take his eye off of his target.

"Sharingan?"

Toshiko gave off a strange smile when the clone said that. Even though he smiled, he was getting mixed thoughts about the clone's reaction. It could have meant that he was simply surprised to see Toshiko with the eye, or it was because he wanted it for himself. Despite that possibility, Toshiko responded as if everything were normal.

"Yea that's right. It's a sharingan. I just got it transplanted. Didn't want to show you too soon cause i thought you were going to try and kill me for it. Was i right with my assumption?

Though Toshiko spoke confidently, he was really worried. He wanted to trust Yuzu of course, but he felt as though there was something strange about him.Very strange. he'd worry about that after their fight, cause as of now it looked like simple training. Then, the clone swallowed the hidden item, and dashed forward Towards Toshiko and his clone. They were ready. The clone was moving fast, and it would have been almost impossible to see if it weren't for his eye. He and his clone stared as Yuzu made a circular slash with his sword. Shit. It e went way too fast for Toshiko to dodge. He couldn't. there was no way.

"Watch Out!"

Toshiko's clone warned the real Toshiko, and then pushed him with all his might, knocking him back 6 meters just as the yuzu's clone slash was near, the clone taking the hit, and dispersing upon impact. Toshiko stood up to his feet. His clone had taken the fall, and it's existence for him. It was an honorable comrade, and he'd avenge it.

Toshiko ran forward, his sharingan eye directly on the clone through the mist. He wouldn't be holding back on him anymore. Quickly, he aimed two punches to it's face, and then a kick to the chest. after the melee attacks, he jumped back, landed on the ground, landed on the ground 6 meters away from the clone, ran up, and jumped within mid air gripped the kunai in both hands and holding it over his head.

"This is for my clone!"

Toshiko then brought the kunai blade down, aiming it directly at the center of the clone's head.

Word Count: 600

Clone: Deceased.

Spoiler:

Reaction Time: C-1-C-2 600/600



Last edited by Toshiko Uzumaki on Sun Nov 02, 2014 9:35 am; edited 1 time in total

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
As the clone reached his target location the fire clone was the only one who could take the hit and buy some time for the original who got pushed aside to avoid the attack. The fire clone was not as lucky as he was cut apart, his body would have burst into flames if it had not been for the mist which was forming, before the mist could get in the way the young Toshiko attempted a few punches to the face which were dodged fairly easily, while the kick to the chest was blocked with a cross arm block which knocked the clone back a bit, but not too far that Toshi would lose track of his location.

It seemed strange to hit with all those techniques and then retreat as Toshiko had leaped back and landed on the ground roughly six meters away from the clone. He soon followed up by running towards the clone and jumped into the air gripping his kunai with both hands in order to hammer down his vengeance for the fate of his clone. As the kunai was heading towards the head of the clone who was cringing in some sort of pain after elbowing himself in the gut before being stabbed in the head, as he burst into water that splashed all over Toshiko, but the water was not normal it burned and stung and hurt the nose eyes and mouth of its victim, even irritating the skin serverely as the ball of metsubishi had been broken inside the stomach of the clone's suicidal like technique.

It was unclear if Toshiko had a way to avoid this technique, but it was clear that seeking revenge led him into a trap and if it had been something worse could have ended in death. The real Yuzu was waiting in anticipation to know if the kid was still okay as the mist was now thick, making it impossible to sense someone or see them through chakra methods, the only possible senses that were of any use now were touch, some degree of smell and the ability to hear. However as silent as he was there would be no sense to detect his presence in the mist while Toshiko was expected to be either screaming or crying in pain. How did Toshiko do against the attack, he thought to himself as the other clone moved silently towards its target, not too certain of the location after the splash.

Words = 3105 + 414 = 3519(3 EP)
Chakra = 238/340
Clone 1 = Deceased
Clone 2 = Deceased
Clone 3 = Dispersed
Clone 4 = Dispersed
Clone 5 = 34/34

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko's attack had hit. His kunai cut into the clone's head, and the clone dispersed into water that splashed in his face. He quickly closed his eyes to protect his sharingan, and the water entered his mouth and nose, and burned his face. Quickly he spit out the water, wiped the water from his face, and felt his tongue and skin sting. He grunted loudly as the water stung upon his skin, but quickly quieted down as he opened his eyes. It was absolutely clear. He couldn't even see his own arm if he held it out in front of him. How would he know where to strike? How would he know what to do while within this mist? There wasn't much to do. He could only rely on his hearing, and his sense of smell which was now gone due to his nose being filled with water. Toshiko simply stood there with the kunai within his hand, and waited for his opponent to strike. If yuzu's clone struck him, he'd know where to attack.

Word Count: 183

Strength: C-2-C-3 183/700

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The clone heard the sound of Toshi's spitting as he dashed up close and slashed from the front of him as the blade was coming up the noise of his feet making his location quite clear. What would Toshi do with that little kunai and a closed mouth and nose. He really expected to deal with one of the legendary seven sword clones like he still had a chance. The real Yuzu sighed as he began to perform some seals as he wished to perform his last jutsu that he would show to Toshi as a gift. However that would only be if Toshi passed the final test of his prowess and a Chuunin.

He remembered how they tried to play tag that one time, and he began to wonder if things had changed or whether they merely changed to stay the same. In the end this would be the final lesson before he would have to leave Toshiko behind. He knew that Toshi was stronger now, and far more impressive than he was back when he was a week genin. It was clear Toshi was actually worthy of his title, but this did not mean that he was ready to acknowledge him just yet.

Words = 3519 + 206 = 3725(3 EP)
Chakra = 238/340
Clone 1 = Deceased
Clone 2 = Deceased
Clone 3 = Dispersed
Clone 4 = Dispersed
Clone 5 = 34/34

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
There it was. Toshiko could hear someone dashing forward from directly in front of him. Then, he saw the blade come directly for him. Quickly, Toshiko jumped back , focusing chakra into his left palm as he did so. THe chakra converted to lightning chakra, and then Toshiko quickly ran forward, firing out the lightning bolt in the direction of the slash and throwing the kunai from his right hand directly behind it.

Word Count: 74

Spoiler:

Strength: C-2-C-3 257/700

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
This was the end wasn't it. The young Toshiko made a brilliant back step to avoid the slash and the follow up of lightning and a kunai was brilliant, if only it had been a bit faster as the idea was never to strike from the front to begin with as the lightning made a bright splash as a slash came to the back of Toshi, who whether he understood it or not was a decisive slash in order to end this fight. With this movement being too fast and the mist being too thick, only the clone had the perceptive skills to truly fight in this situation. He had used his after image jutsu in order to get behind Toshi right away in order to do the final strike to end this fight. It may only be able to leave a scar one and a half inches deep, but it would be enough to get the point across that Toshi was tough. That and the clone was annoyed that the other clones were beaten even though they were meant to be. It was at this moment that the real Yuzu would wait, he would wait in order to leave Toshi with his last lesson. What was the lesson the clone was trying to get through to him. Could Toshi take a hit though, would he be tough enough to still stand and continue in this mist which gave him no chance to fight back.

Words = 3725 + 246 = 3971(3 EP)
Chakra = 238/340
Clone 1 = Deceased
Clone 2 = Deceased
Clone 3 = Dispersed
Clone 4 = Dispersed
Clone 5 = 19/34 used After Image jutsu


Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko Threw his attacks forward with no idea of whether or not they would hit his target. One thing about the clone was certain. It was very in tact with the area. Yuzu must have had insane perceptive abilities. Toshiko listened, and heard nothing indicating the clone had dispersed. Shit. He'd missed his mark. Then, Toshiko heard faint movements coming from behind him. Quickly he turned around, and just as he did he felt it. He felt it hit him. Before he knew it, there was an inch and a half deep gash upon the right side of his chest and upon his right shoulder. It didn't reach his bone, but cut through most of the flesh and skin. He was knocked back 6 meters, and grunted out in pain, but stood on his feet. The clone had managed to strike him, but that would be the last time. Toshiko hoped that he'd been able to provide what he was asked for. He was hopeful that he'd proved his worth and managed to convince those that questioned his new position, but he'd come to far with these challenges. He wanted to finish them completely. And he wouldn't accept defeat no matter how wounded he was until the clone was gone.

There was the sharp pain from the gash, but he wouldn't let that stop him. He exerted his chakra, and it converted to three bolts of raiton chakra. One above his head, and one hovered over each shoulder. he was using the lightning bolt jutsu this time to assure he would pass the test that yuzu had given him. After the chakra bolts were fully formed, he fired them directly from where the gash had came from. All three. He had to get rid of the clone to keep his self respect, and to make sure there would be no more questioning behind the rank up he had rightfully gained. By getting rid of the clone, in his mind he was getting rid of those that opposed him or underestimated. Getting rid of the negative thoughts and perceptions others carried of him for unknown reasons.

Word Count: 364

Spoiler:

Strength: C-2-C-3: 621/700

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The clone was tired of playing around as he heard a grunt of pain roughly six meters away from him as he prepared the second slash. He knew that this boy was being really stubborn and decided he had to let him taste his blade again. He listened realizing that the boy did not give up and was actually still trying to win this fight. He dashed towards Toshiko after a short moment of thought as he built up his rage, he picked up something as he activated his technique for the second time as the lightning made another splash as he was now to the side lowered before using a rising side uppercut slash which was aimed for Toshi's right arm. A direct hit would hurt Toshi's arm and if he attempted to avoid it he would expose his under arm or gut to the slash itself. The fight was not over, but without direct site he could not ensure a perfect hit, but a general hit. The clone was now running low on chakra, but it was only a matter of time. Would Toshi understand this test or would he fail to impress the young prodigy standing before him waiting in the mist.

Words = 3971 + 207 = 4178 (4 EP)
Chakra = 238/340
Clone 1 = Deceased
Clone 2 = Deceased
Clone 3 = Dispersed
Clone 4 = Dispersed
Clone 5 = 9/34 used After Image jutsu's second image

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko had no clue of whether or not his attacks connected, but this fight was growing tiresome very quickly. He could barely see a few inches in front of his face,  and he had obtained a wound. For what? That was what he really couldn't figure out. What was he doing this for? He was all about training and growing stronger, but the one and only reason he'd been assigned this training partner was because apparently the people who had appointed him chuunin didn't think he was strong enough? What was it worth? Nothing. Nothing at all. Then, he felt it. another slash, this time connecting with his right arm, not going too deep though, only piercing through the skin and first layer of flesh. After the blow hit, and the pain reached his body, toshiko was pretty much done. NOt because he didn't enjoy the fight, but the reason behind it. He didn't feel obligated to prove his strength to anymore anymore, and it was honestly pretty irritating.

"Okay. That's it for me Yuzu. I got rid of two of the clones, held my ground, wasted almost all of my chakra, and took two of your hits. It that's not enough to show you and the rest of the imbeciles that promoted me chuunin that i'm worth it, then oh well. I've lost interest. I have more important battles to fight. it's been fun and all, but i don't enjoy being belittled. I quit."

Strength C-2-C-3 700/700

Wc: 256

Total wc: 5008



Last edited by Toshiko Uzumaki on Mon Nov 10, 2014 6:46 pm; edited 1 time in total

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
The test was finally over as the clone was dissipated, as with the help of several high rank Fuuton users the mist was blown away as Toshiko stood defeated. However as the young Yuzu Ren approached him he had only two words for him, "You Pass". He then looked up to the sky then explained why he passed as this might have confused everyone in the arena who did not have common sense or experience. "Sometimes it is best to give up when you can not win, they say you need to be brave to stay and fight. You also need to be brave to run away knowing people will call you a coward. If you do not know the difference then you have no right to call yourself a shinobi."

The crowd were silent then after a while everyone cheered and roared out loud. "That the best fight we seen all day." As others shouted, "Finally a real fight and not some little genin fight, i really get sick of watching those amateurs." While the young and talented Yuzu looked to Toshiko he then left him with some last words, "If you want a serious fight next time, get a lot stronger and i will be here waiting to remind you to know your place. I am the strongest". He knew this was not true for there were a few who had the power to defeat him, but the moment he chose to admit that he would defeat himself. One day Toshiko might become strong enough, but one day is a long way off.

After a while the young Yuzu vanished from the arena leaving Toshi with that harsh message.

Words = 4178 + 281 = 4459 (4 EP)
Training Strength A to A1 = 1000/1000
Training Reaction A to A1 = 1000/1000
Training Reaction A1 to A2 = 1150/1150
Training Reaction A2 to A3 = 1300/1300
Total Training = 1000+1000+1150+1300 = 4450/4450

Exit Thread

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank

"You Pass"
That was it. that was all that he needed to hear and all that was needed to be said. He did it. While he didn't have to or want to, he got all the idiotic people who were doubting him to shut their mouths. He passed. He proved his worth and hopefully would now get the respect he was entitled to. He didn't even really care about that part really. Respect from others was his life goal and all, but at that moment he was pissed. all he wanted now was those people who were judging him who didn't even know his name to shut the fuck up.

"Sometimes it is best to give up when you can not win, they say you need to be brave to stay and fight. You also need to be brave to run away knowing people will call you a coward. If you do not know the difference then you have no right to call yourself a shinobi."

The boy's words were wise and all, but he must've misunderstood Toshiko's reasoning for ending the fight. It wasn't that he didn't want to. It was that he didn't feel like he needed to prove a point or show people what he was worth who didn't deserve it. He didn't feel obligated to go out of his way to appease individuals who thought he had to prove his worth to them. it wasn't worth his time. Despite his thoughts, he didn't want to be rude of course so he kept his thoughts to himself, but there was a look of agitation upon his face that could be seen by the individuals who were watching the fight, and yuzu himself as his jutsu cleared. Toshiko said nothing, and simply nodded in agreement with his tutor. after a few moments of silence, the crowd that was watching the battle take place apparently broke out into cheers.Well, at least they enjoyed it. That was kinda nice.

Yuzu turned towards Toshiko with a few finals words.

"If you want a serious fight next time, get a lot stronger and i will be here waiting to remind you to know your place. I am the strongest"

Toshiko actually broke a smile upon the child's words. His arrogance and ego coming from his little body was quite comical. But at the same time, it actually wanted toshiko to aspire to become stronger. So he could fight yuzu one on one with both of them putting 110% in.

"We'll see Yuzu. We'll see."

From that moment on, Toshiko and Yuzu would be rivals. With those last words, Toshiko turned towards the exit of the arena, walking out and back to his hotel room. He would rest, and then get stronger to take on his new friend.

Word Count: 487


Total word count: 5495

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