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1The Adashi Clan  Empty The Adashi Clan Wed Mar 25, 2015 10:54 pm

Genesis

Genesis


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Symbol:The Adashi Clan  23kvjvk


Clan: Adashi Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Explosion Release (爆遁, Bakuton)

Elements: Fire Release (Katon), Lighting Release (Raiton)

Specialization: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu

Location: Iwagakure

Clan History: : The Adashi clan were known to be one of the oldest clans in the shinobi world, existing in the late times of the Village re-grouping. They were founded by two brothers, both whom possessed the Kekkei Genkai which allowed them to access the Bakuton element by mixing both their earth and fire chakra types. The brothers lived on Mt. Iyashi which was located near the great mountains of Iwagakure. They resided in a small temple inside the mountain area where they trained intensely to perfect their Ninjutsu. Eventually both boys matured, and left the mountains to embark in a long journey across the villagers to fulfill their thirst of adventure. When reaching the lands of Konoha, they discovered a large clan whom they found much in common with, other clans. The Adashi brothers grew along with the different clan members, forming the now larger Adashi clan. Both clans existing in a cordial relationship, and they helped each other in whatever battles they encountered. The other clans aided the Adashi clan in their training, which is how the Adashi became such talented ninja that they are today. During a last battle, the Raishi clan smashed with the Mushiki clan who allied with the Senju. It was an epic battle of two clans that both possessed advanced element Kekkei Genkai, which ended in many members of both sides being killed. After the war, the Raishi left his clan and fled back to Iwagakure to stabilize their war engulfed life and find some peace in its stone walls. Many elders of the clan possess memories of the battles and prepare the young for the, "Day of Reckoning" which is a conspiracy theory that all the clans will once again fight in a epic battle where they will aid the clans that helped them once again.

After the war, the founders of Iwagakure saw potential in the Adashi clan and devised an alliance with them in hopes of wielding their power. They formed an organization of ANBU operatives called the Explosion Corp., which specialized in explosions and mass destruction. It didn't take long for the Explosion Corp. to become highly feared throughout the neighboring countries. By this time, the Adashi clan had branched into a few other small clans that specialized in their own use of explosions, with the main branch still being the most elite. In recent years, upon the destruction of Konoha, and the recent war, some members of the Adashi clan have migrated to other villages for their own personal needs. Some being spies for Iwagakure, while others taking this opportunity to leave the village once and for all.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Is an advanced chakra nature created by simultaneously mixing of both, Raiton (Lightning release) and Katon (Fire Release) nature elements. By combining the hazardous and unstable properties of both fire and lightning, the wielder is capable of spawning powerful explosions, that can range from micro-cellular, to macro-nuclear levels. Due to level of monstrosity that it can potentially bring, Bakuton has been noted as being one of the most powerful advanced natures in existence. The Explosion Corp. ranked the Adashi a top-tier clan due to their mastery in the use of the Bakuton nature type despite the few other clans that wielded it. Their uses for it include "charging" objects and people with explosive chakra, shaping their Bakuton chakra in a variety of fashions, and even absorbing the force of other explosions to prevent damage to oneself. Depending on the training of the Adashi clansmen, Bakuton can be applied to a number of specializations to amplify their lethality considerably, with the most common being Taijutsu or Weaponry. This can potentially give rise to an unmatched explosive fighting style that can literally annihilate an enemy with a single punch. Before explosion, the appearance of Bakuton chakra is usually stunning white color, which migrates itself to the surface of the charged object, whether it be a fist, or a weapon. Elite users of the Bakuton art were said to be so powerful, that they were capable of destroying entire villages with higher-end techniques.

Drawbacks: The Adashi clan has few drawbacks that make each member of the clan restrict themself to the limit of there abilities.
- Explosion techniques that are not point blank harm the user as much as the target, if the user is within range.
- S And SS Rank technique cause 3 post of massive fatigue, unable to move fast, heavy breathing, Only able to use B Rank taijutsu and Ninjutsu and below.
- The usage of Explosion Release causes the users body to inflict small damage to themself. Repeating technique or over using explosion technique will cause massive inner damage to the user.

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Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Name: Explosion Release: Absorption
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A Rank
Type: Defensive
Element: Explosion Release(Bakuton)
Range: 10 Meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post
Description: A hidden technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the clansmen to absorb the shock wave force given off by an explosion. The technique is performed by the user extending their hands and channeling the force through their palms, sucking it in like a vortex. The amount of chakra necessary to perform this technique depends on the size of the explosion, or the the rank of the technique used to create it. The absorption process is fairly quick, however, larger explosions will take more time to absorb than smaller ones. Fire, or substances given off by the explosion other than the force itself, is incapable of being absorbed.

Name: Explosion Release: Landmine Fist
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Explosion Release(Bakuton)
Range: Point Blank
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Post
Description: After establishing direct contact with their opponent through a expeditious jab, the user utilizes Explosion Release to subsequently generate an enormous explosion from the initial point of physical contact. This explosion is powerful enough to completely obliterate an opponent far larger than the user. Due to the directionality of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated. It is possible to aim this technique towards the ground and cause an explosion beneath the target as well, plopping them upwards while severely damaging the lower portion of their body.

Name: Explosion Release: Giga Ball
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Explosion Release(Bakuton)
Range: 15 Meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post
Description: After performing a short sequence of hand seals, the Adashi launches a small sphere of explosive chakra from their mouth which detonates on impact. The aftermath of this technique creates a large cloud of cinder and ash that can obscure the vision of the enemy, assuming they survive.

Name: Explosion Release: Dragon Fists
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Explosion Release(Bakuton)
Range: Point Blank
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown: 8 Post
Description: An extraordinary technique developed by one of the founders of the Adashi clan. It gave name to the Adashi as the, "Dragons of Destruction" during their era. After forming a single hand sign, the Adashi forms two large fiery dragon-shaped shrouds around their fists that animate on their own. They then attack their target with them like a pair of boxing gloves. Every strike from this technique is capable of creating a herculean explosion upon impact, that can not only destroy a target, but decimate others in the vicinities as well. Users will experience great fatigue after the duration of the technique, despite their remaining chakra reserves.

2The Adashi Clan  Empty Re: The Adashi Clan Thu Mar 26, 2015 7:32 pm

Genesis

Genesis


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Bump

3The Adashi Clan  Empty Re: The Adashi Clan Fri Mar 27, 2015 10:14 am

Gin

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Alright! Let's get started!

First, let's tackle the drawbacks. For an advanced element and the kind of damage that you're aiming for, they need to be a lot heavier. I need to see something that directly affects users of all ranks in combat. This is a good start:

- The usage of Explosion Release causes the users body to inflict small damage to themself. Repeating technique or over using explosion technique will cause massive inner damage to the user.

But it needs to be fleshed out more. What type of damage are we talking about? Burns, I'm guessing? If so, what degree? Is it a standard amount of damage for every technique? Or does it vary according to the technique's rank? You need to explain it a lot more, is what I'm saying.

- Explosion techniques that are not point blank harm the user as much as the target, if the user is within range.

Remove that one and replace it with something else. It isn't really a drawback, to be honest.

- S And SS Rank technique cause 3 post of massive fatigue, unable to move fast, heavy breathing, Only able to use B Rank taijutsu and Ninjutsu and below.

Since this one only affects certain ranks and people, it should be an effect of whichever S or SS rank jutsu they use, rather than a universal drawback. Drawbacks should be something that affects the whole clan, or at least the majority of it.

Now, there are several drawbacks that are universal to advanced elements and you therefore need to add them into your clan. First is that all members must take "Hesitant (Element)" as a negative special characteristic without being able to balance it with a positive one. The second is that both elements that make up the advanced one (fire and lightning in your case) have to start at C rank. The advanced element depends on the lowest ranking of the two that make it up. So, say, if you have S rank fire and C rank lightning, you can only use C rank explosion release techniques.

The KKG itself needs a couple of things. I'd like you to explain how it interacts with other elements. What is it weak against? What is it strong against? How much of a difference do these strengths and weaknesses make? How much more damage (in terms of rank) does it do or receive against these elements?

That's all for now. Bump when you're done and I'll look at the jutsu and other details I might have missed! Best of luck!

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