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Zaiaku

Zaiaku


D-rank
Sunagakure No Sato.The Village Hidden In The Sands.The village of Zaiaku Koran,the only Jiendo in it.Zaiaku rustled out his comfy bed,his eyes squinting at the sunlight penetrating his window and currently assaulting his poor,tired eyes."Fuck damn star....."He mumbled as he dragged his carcass out of his and almost ripped the closet door open.He slipped into his pants,sandels,Chunin Vest,and Sunagakure headband and left his house.

Today was.....good enough.There was a slight breeze the made Zaiaku relax from his current anger.The desert birds flew over head,chirping as usual,making the morning seem...pleasant.Zaiaku,after a hour of walking,arrived at the Training Grounds.As of late,it has become a habit of his to hangout there and watch the genin(or future genin) train there.

With a bored and lazy sigh he took out a cigarette and presumed to light it with his lighter before inhaling deeply,hiding the flame maker into one of his pockets."I hate mornings..."He grumbled quietly to himself as he went to his usual spot against the fence and smoked,a group of Chunin not to far away giving him ugly looks.

Just because Zaiaku was now a full-fledged Shinobi didn't mean he was accepted by his...allies.



Last edited by Zaiaku Jiendo on Mon Jun 02, 2014 5:50 pm; edited 2 times in total

Sonshi

Sonshi


D-rank
A Devoid Genin,Monsterous Chunin,and Brutal Sannin,what can go wrong?[Private/No Kill/Zaiaku,Sonshi,Yui] 16hlqfc


If the nearby Chunin were giving that tall and freakish man a gander, just imagine their surprise when they had witnessed Sonshi Koga walk into center field. OH wait, there wasn't any surprise. He was a laughing stock, an entry level Genin at Twenty-One years old. The damned brother of the Kazekage herself, and in such a pitiful position amongst the military he was expected to provide for. Not many knew of the truth behind it, unfortunately. Which basically just made him seem a coward to a majority of the village. Was it of consequence? Hell no. In fact, he seemed far too preoccupied by the novelty of his sketchbook to pay much attention to his surroundings.

His fingers were calloused, the usage of the pen clear as he scribbled about. A stroke here, a stroke there.. A stroke everywhere. He was clearly a fanatic, but of course, by the time he had raised his head his eyes were focused up, and up, and up again towards what seemed to be a mammoth creature looming over him. Now, Sonshi was by no means an especially short man. He stood a bit over his sister, even! Though in comparison he seemed a midget. Of course, when taking first glance upon that odd husk that the monstrous Chunin, the proper reaction was fright.. Correct? Apparently not. Sonshi's excitement instead skyrocketed with the introduction of such an absolutely odd creature to view audience to.

"Good lord, what even are you? It's so... amazing!"

Instantaneously had the curious Koga's hand jettisoned itself from the sketchpad to attempt a pat of the large man's jawline. Was he made of metal? He certainly seemed like he was made of metal. He had to be made of metal. Of course, Sonshi could never know if he was made of metal via touch. But, this was what a normal person had usually done when they were curious about something, right? This was an extension of the personality he usually offered others in public areas like this, a curious, friendly young man. Never was Sonshi a rude or judgmental sort unless the situation called for it.

"Are you made of metal? Please tell me you're an Iron Giant. That would be stupendous."

Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
Yui had awoken early like every morning she always had a ritual to train every morning she was one that trained quite often and quite hard. As she moved to get out of bed she began to slide her clothing over her slim body moving to zip the back of her skin tight body suit she always trained with. She also grabbed two five pound weights to bring with her she would place these on her hands to help her train her strength in her arms to allow her to apply more pressure when making sharp turns. She headed out the door moving toward the training ground where she saw quite the odd figure quite the mammoth figure at least eight feet tall. She made her way toward him as another approached asking him rather dumb questions making her sigh.

"Hello you two it is nice seeing others training this early the name is Inuzuka Yui you may know me as I know Sonshi is the Kages brother. However... I do not know much about you I do remember hearing rumors of a giant in Suna I will assume it is you. "

She smiled and waited for the two to answer as several of the other chuunins in the area began to whisper at her name. She was very well known in the village considering she was a Sannin and the only Inuzuka in the entire village. Sekkiea looked over at the two waiting to see if they were aggressive or not.

"Do not worry about her as long as you do not do something foolish she wont harm you, attack me and that's going to cost you dearly."


WC:286

Zaiaku

Zaiaku


D-rank
Zaiaku merely stood there,smoking peacefully and quietly,trying not to become enraged at the other chunin.As a few seconds passed,a boy....no...not boy...a young man came up to him,awestruck.He looked at him and reached for his mouth,similar to how a smile child reaches out for a new toy their mother bought for him.Could...could he be a genin also?"Good lord, what even are you? It's so... amazing!" Yup,he was pretty damn awe-struck by Zaiaku,who stood with tired,half-lidded eyes,staring at him."Are you made of metal? Please tell me you're an Iron Giant. That would be stupendous." ....And apparently he is a fan of fiction and big words also!Zaiaku let out a small chuckle before stretching and breaking out of his zombie-like state.

Before he could post,however,another person came up to them.This time,a woman with rather beautiful features.Along next to her was a rather large dog which was,of course,dwarfed by Zaiaku."Hello you two it is nice seeing others training this early the name is Inuzuka Yui you may know me as I know Sonshi is the Kages brother. However... I do not know much about you I do remember hearing rumors of a giant in Suna I will assume it is you. ".....This little dude was the Kazekage's brother?He didn't even know she HAD a brother.Zaiaku,however,was locked on,staring at the dog,who stared back."Do not worry about her as long as you do not do something foolish she wont harm you, attack me and that's going to cost you dearly."

Zaiaku seemingly broke out of the stare with a knowledgeable "Hmmm..." And now looked at both of them with his dull red eyes."No...I ain't a Iron Giant.But I am a giant-" "Monster."One of the chunin cut him off,faking it with a cough.In that instant,Zaiaku's chakra became known amongst this woman,boy,and her dog,being able to felt.It wasn't much,due to just being a chunin,it can be felt,and it was obviously out of anger.Grinding his teeth,he continued."I am Zaiaku Koran,the only Jiendo in Sunagakure." "Mindless Beast." Another one of them said.Zaiaku let out a lowly growl,similar to that of a angered wolf,and turned to their direction."Fuck you."He said firmly,obviously angered,as he turned back.He looked at the boy and began speaking in a much more cool and calm voice."So your Kazekage-Sama's brother,eh?Didn't know she had one."He said with a small,friendly smile,extending his hand for a handshake.

Sonshi

Sonshi


D-rank



Even as the surely beautiful female had approached them, Sonshi was definitely far more intrigued with the giant man's mannerisms and words. Where it might've just seemed like a little guy staring up at him, inwardly Sonshi was making split-second realizations and judgments from the keen micro-expressions, body language, and mannerisms that Zaiaku had encompassed. His eyes were studied well, he was able to realize anger far before Zaiaku had made it so apparent that he was upset.

Just as one of the Chunin had cut the giant man off, Sonshi had offered a witless retort. " Idiot. " His head turned onto a dime.
" Are we saying what we think others are? This is a fun game. " His attention darting to the next one. " Uncooperative. Jobless. I may not know my sister that well, but if she was any type of Kazekage I am sure she would not tolerate a drop of morale in her ranks. Silence is a virtue, even in the peaceful homage of the area we're in." Speaking out of order, surely.

All of it was said in what could only be described as a gut wrenchingly sweet tone that Sonshi had always encompassed. His attention was now placed upon the female, and the dog that had road up upon them. His eyes were scarlet, the same as his Sister. If not a bit more enhanced by the long eyelashes he adorned. Pale, youthful features had contorted even further as his smile broadened. It seemed entirely genuine.

"I don't believe I've ascertained the complete pleasure of your presence in length, regardless it is an absolute charm to meet you and your dog. Can I pet the dog, please? I have a certain penance for animals. They're so loyal, so valiant and strong. There is a great deal we can learn from them, us stupid humans."

He paused, his attention not moving from the dog.

"Sonshi Koga. You're an interesting giant, Zaiaku Koran. Indeed, I am the Kazekage's brother, and yes: I get that a lot."


Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
She listened to the two and heard the idiot other Chuunin talking crap to the Chuunin she wanted to go break some bones but that wasn't very nice. The Kages brother spoke really oddly but it was sort of funny at least his eyes and face reminded her of his Sister. She often scolded Yui for doing things in less than favorable ways but they got the job done. The others in the area continued to insult the giant before Yui looked at them and bared her fangs toward them.

"If you idiots do not shut up every one of you will be in the medical center with a broken body part now get the fuck out of here before I get serious."

They began to scamper very quickly away Yui had a very scary look on her face as she turned toward the two sighing as she calmed herself down. She hated idiots like that just because someone was different than you are they attack them and make them feel bad. She smiled toward the two as she placed her weights on her wrists, she began to punch in rapid speed and power as it was clear she was not weak by any stretch of the imagination.

"So I am sure you did not come here to simply chat why not train some, I man it is the only way to prove to pieces of shit like that you are better than they are. Never let anyone talk down to you like that, I don't care if there are fifty of them defend yourself or they will continue to walk all over you."

She continued to train her fist punching the air in rapid pace as she began to backflip each flip going higher than the next until she finished ten of them flipping into a handstand and staying like that.

WC:320

Zaiaku

Zaiaku


D-rank
Zaiaku,though keeping his face slightly tired,was surprised.They were.....defending him?Why are so many people defending him all of a sudden.Did some sort of elixir run into the water of Sunagakure and made mad people magically give a shit for once.He may never know....not that he was caring that much."I don't believe I've ascertained the complete pleasure of your presence in length, regardless it is an absolute charm to meet you and your dog. Can I pet the dog, please? I have a certain penance for animals. They're so loyal, so valiant and strong. There is a great deal we can learn from them, us stupid humans."Again with the regal language and big words!It's obvious this kid came from a rich family,the richest being the Kage's.Zaiaku liked him,however.He seemed to actually have a grasp on common sense,unlike most people.

"Sonshi Koga. You're an interesting giant, Zaiaku Koran. Indeed, I am the Kazekage's brother, and yes: I get that a lot."He get's that alot?Why...that must be annoying."Don't take it in wrong kind of way,I just didn't know she had siblings....at all.I never asked given it ain't my business."Just the way he talked verified that Zaiaku was from the Slums,but the Headband and Chunin uniform also verified that he had worked his way up from the ghettos.Zaiaku then proceeded to watch the woman doing various strikes at almost blinding speeds."So I am sure you did not come here to simply chat why not train some, I man it is the only way to prove to pieces of shit like that you are better than they are. Never let anyone talk down to you like that, I don't care if there are fifty of them defend yourself or they will continue to walk all over you." Zaiaku couldn't help but chuckle."Those little shits have been hatin' me since the Academy,and trust me,I beat their asses to many times to count.They won't ever stop....makes me wonder why can't they suffer some sort of life crippling accident or something."

Never the less,he put out his cigarette,exhaling the gray cloud before walking a few feet from the fence to get some space....only to see 3 of the previous Chunin storming towards them."Son of a fucking bitch..."He mumbled as he proceeded towards them. "What right do you have to just force us out if he-"The girl was cut off,for in that instant,Zaiaku delivered a punch,head-on,and it landed directly on it's mark.The girl was sent flying for a few feet before skidding to a stop on the ground.The other two chunin instantly got their kunai out and stood there,waiting for his next move.

Zaiaku merely crossed his arms and began speaking."We...are the Shinobi of Sunagakure No Sate,The Village Hidden In The Sands.We have the job,no...,the HONOR of serving this place and protecting it's people,no matter what rank,gender,age,or even species."He said,eyeing the dog for a moment before looking back at the two."We must work together to make this place the STRONGEST of the villages and bring about justice to those who wish to betray us.You are basically saying that you reject this honor...just because I'm a different."He glared at them fierecly,his expression turning into a scowl."Just because I look different from you,you don't wanna work with me.....BITCH DRINK BLEACH!You thing I'm a monster?You see that woman right there?"Zaiaku said,pointing to Yui."That woman will beat the ever-living shit out of me in a fight.Do that mean I won't fight her?Hell no.If I need to fight,heh,I'm gonna fight her,I don't give a shit if I lose or even DIE,cause I know I would die serving my motherfucking village.If you can't see that...then you just ain't worthy."He finally finished and turned away,walking back towards Yui and Sonshi,leaving the two dumbstruck chunin and currently out-cold chunin alone.

Sonshi

Sonshi


D-rank


Sonshi had immediately dropped his rump towards the grass once the nice looking female had taken it upon herself to begin crashing her fists outwards in such speeds that he could barely comprehend with the naked eye. His eyes just weren't trained for her level of movement, they instead seemed ocular blurs through the air that wafted seamlessly through in a bustling, snapped manner. He seemed partial during this fleeting moment to simply observe her stature, her movement with the already keen eyes he wore. Unlike a good deal of others, he was able to simply view small muscle movements that were visible, stances, and differentiate the technique among others so that he could practice such. Just by visualizing this high leveled woman throwing her fists was Sonshi Koga learning. But then, a distraction to what seemed an art of admittedly brutal, but outstandingly beautiful personification.

Sonshi needed a moment to register what the giant man had said to him, he was far too indulged with the woman to even begin caring for the surroundings he had been subject to. He often drifted off on one thing for long exposures of time. It was just the nature of his clan mates usually to get lost in one particular movement that piqued their interests. Scarlet eyes glare upwards towards the man beast, before the words came rushing to his ears like the come down of a loud noise.

"You and about 97% of the village.."  He replied, in a manner that seemed to be entirely devoid of expression or feeling. Like a robot was offering you a statistic on a computer screen.

 It seemed in the midst of his concentration did he utterly forget the normal ruse of personality that he placed up. It was thrown aside like a bag of trash on to the street. Then the giant began preaching, or something to that effect he surmised. He wasn't exactly paying attention to his words, more so that he was yelling them. It had internally gotten on his nerves. He disdained loud noises, couldn't STAND them. His training had been fortunate enough to hide his displeasure in an impeccable mask of false joviality, but within the depths of his mind it was there. He attempted, for the sake of his own self to instead focus upon the clear teaching methods that he had set out. Zaiaku was displaying a completely genuine method of fighting, and being a taijutsu specialist meant that he could maneuver around his sure focus upon strength in the endeavor of disciplining himself. Of course, like most things he observed in the village it was over as soon as it started. Zaiaku wasn't that stupid, it seemed. Clearly he would've been outmatched if Yui decided not to show her presence in the fight. After all, he wasn't the most persuasive man. Indeed, a good deal more abrasive above anything.

Sonshi had determined him quick to anger. Disarming presence ahoy.

"I was not expecting you to be such a passionate giant, seems I'm learning more and more about you as we progress through this meeting of ours. Unfortunately, I cannot say that I am particularly interested in getting my dress shirt dirty. Perhaps we could set up a later date for us to train, all three, together?" He clapped his hands with his statement. "I was just happening upon what I was happening upon without much realization of my surroundings."

He then turned towards Yui. "Luckily enough, my lineage helps me avoid a good brunt of beat downs in Sunagakure. But, just as any charm it will eventually simmer down. When that happens, I'll be sure to take your advice to heart."





[Training Reaction Time from E0 - D0: 622/750]

Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
She watched the giant as he plumbed one of the chunnin making her laugh she remembered the other one asking to pet her canine she continued to punch looking as he watched her. He was trying to figure out her muscle movements likely to practice later smart on his behalf she was glad he figured out what she was doing. She moved to flip back onto her feet as she moved over toward the giant looking at him he seemed pretty tough she wondered if he could handle one of her punches.

"You seem pretty strong want to try to train your endurance some it would be nice to throw a punch and hit something without it shattering. I mean if you can take one hit from me you are doing really well and I would think someone like you is a wall."

She smiled waiting for his response with her weights on her punch would be reduced a little maybe enough for him to stand she would make sure not to kill the poor lad.

"If you want to pet Sekkiea do so she wont bite, as long as you don't show aggression toward me she will be fine. You idiot Chunnin better run off one more outburst and I will shatter your spines."

They grabbed their friend and began to run off they certainly did not want to fight her as her bunches were very fast the sound of her blows echoed through the air. She simply smiled as she waited for the giants answer she was still unsure he could even handle one punch but maybe just maybe he could and he could become a spar partner for her.


WC:289

Training Strength b-0 to B-1 609/700

Zaiaku

Zaiaku


D-rank
"I was not expecting you to be such a passionate giant, seems I'm learning more and more about you as we progress through this meeting of ours. Unfortunately, I cannot say that I am particularly interested in getting my dress shirt dirty. Perhaps we could set up a later date for us to train, all three, together?"'No one ever does..' He thought as stopped in-front of them.They were nice enough and cool to be around,so why not.He crossed his arms and yawned,showing his fangs inadvertly.He chuckled quietly,however,hearing the Chunin run off and drag their unconsious friend with them."You seem pretty strong want to try to train your endurance some it would be nice to throw a punch and hit something without it shattering. I mean if you can take one hit from me you are doing really well and I would think someone like you is a wall."

Zaiaku raised a eyebrow.Should he?Should he really risk having his ribs shattered into a million tiny pieces.The answer would be...yes...yes he would.He took a few steps closer to the woman and shedded out of his padded Chunin vest.He was gonna take this like a man and he is going to like it.He stood in-front of her,his dark gray skin almost shinning in the morning sun light as he crossed his arms."Go for it."He said with a smile equaling hers.

WC: 250/750
Training Endurance E-0 to D-0



Last edited by Zaiaku Jiendo on Tue Jun 17, 2014 12:35 am; edited 2 times in total

Sonshi

Sonshi


D-rank


Sonshi was now the minority, with that snappy dress shirt and that disposition to not get his ribs crushed by a Sannin inclining him towards exit. He did like his new firends, but they were in a different mind set in comparison to his own. He could not relate with belligerance, for he was not a belligerant person. Nope, instead he had simply turned around to walk away. Not before offering a pet towards the creature that he was allowed to do so with.

"I'm gonna leave now, do have fun with your punching, though. Perhaps we'll find each other in another area some time."

With that, he was off.

Tap..
Tap...
Tap....


Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
She watched as the Kages brother left the two he was not exactly on for this sort of training causing her to chuckle a little. She was quite shocked when the giant removed his vest that was a brave move one she was unsure would be wise. She had to give him credit he had balls but if he was that confident she was going to hit him as hard as she could as she pulled her fist back before moving her right leg forward sliding it across the sand before driving a powerful blow directly into his chest. Her fist digging hard as she was sure she at the least bruised him quite badly. She pulled her fist away from his chest the sound of the blow still ringing in the area she hoped she did not go to far and waited to see his reaction to the blow.

"Sorry if that was to hard but showing off by removing your vest sort of made me mad it was brave I give you that. I think it was stupid however even if you face an enemy you do not think can hurt you never underestimate anyone's power. "

Sekkiea looked over at him woried would he be alright with such a blow she was not sure but Yui certainly did not hold back going full force at the Chuunin. Still Yui had a smile she liked this guy he had guts maybe she could teach him some of her taijutsu she figured he would use it quite well and had the body to handle the stress it puts on it.


WC:274 training for strength B-0 TO B-1 785/700 completed

Zaiaku

Zaiaku


D-rank
Zaiaku watched as Sonshi left,his little feet creating quiet 'tapping' sounds as he left.Zaiaku was slightly disappointed by this to be honest.He found the young man to be a pleasure to have around.He chuckled as he saw him stop and pet the dog before he left.Seems as if that was his goal.Zaiaku now looked back to Yui.He watched as she reeled back her fist,her muscle being easily seen through the skin tight material.Zaiaku braced himself,knowing this was going to hurt.....real bad.The attack came quick and echoed throughout the entire training area,causing the near-by genin and academy students to look into their direction,only to have their jaws drop open at the rather remarkable sight.

Any normal man would've bent down at the pain.Hell,any normal man would be on his knees,holding his chest in agony.However,Zaiaku wasn't the average man.Hell,he wasn't a man yet,he was still 15.Even so,he tilted forward at the pain.However,the tilt was so small,if someone wasn't looking,they wouldn't have noticed.Though he knew he was injured,Zaiaku grinded his teeth and return to full stature,standing straight in-front of the woman,his face full of determination."Sorry if that was to hard but showing off by removing your vest sort of made me mad it was brave I give you that. I think it was stupid however even if you face an enemy you do not think can hurt you never underestimate anyone's power. "Zaiaku flashed a toothy smirk at her before speaking.

"I wasn't showin' off.If you offer yourself to take a attack head-on,you might aswell have the balls to do it without protection."He said as he grabbed his vest and slid it back on,barely showing any of his rather great discomfort with the large bruise forming under neath the fabric and mush of his vest.He took out a cigarette and lit it,but before he put it in his mouth,he extended his hand to her,offering his small addiction to the woman who probably just fractured some of his fuck damn rips.While waiting for the response to his action,he could notice the genin and academy students still gawking at them in what seemed to be total awe and slight fear.

Endurance:658/700

Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
She watched as he stayed standing but she could tell that must have really hurt she gave him some credit for not falling on the ground in pain. When he mentioned why he removed his vest it simply made her smile, he was certainly someone she could train but he had to get a lot tougher first. She would have to work on getting his toughness up to handle the sharp and fast movements of her jutsu it was not something someone could learn easily.

"I am quite shocked you could stand I know I felt ribs break inside but I guess I expected as much considering how strong you are and large. Though if you ever saw my true form you would have been shattered into a hundred pieces but I don't use such excessive power on allies."

She stretched her hand out to shake his even with him standing his knees were shaking the type of blow she used was not a fun one. If she really wanted to be mean she would have used her medical to charge a blast through his entire body rendering him unconscious.

"I think I will take you on and train you some of my jutsu, however we need to train you physically because right now your body would snap under the pressure and speed of my jutsu. I have trained all my life in the way I fight this is a very hard martial arts to learn if you are up for it I would be more than glad to train you."


WC:268

Zaiaku

Zaiaku


D-rank
"I am quite shocked you could stand I know I felt ribs break inside but I guess I expected as much considering how strong you are and large. Though if you ever saw my true form you would have been shattered into a hundred pieces but I don't use such excessive power on allies."Zaiaku merely chuckled,a small stream of blood exiting his mouth and running down his chin,where it dripped quietly,staining the sand below him."I believe that..."He said,putting the cigarette in his mouth...well..the side without blood on it.Honestly,could this woman tear him to shreds if she wanted to?The pain in his chest was great but he bared with it.

"I think I will take you on and train you some of my jutsu, however we need to train you physically because right now your body would snap under the pressure and speed of my jutsu. I have trained all my life in the way I fight this is a very hard martial arts to learn if you are up for it I would be more than glad to train you."She said.......She is offering to become his Sensei?A Sannin...wanting to become HIS sensei?The thought was almost laughable if it wasn't hard to breeze."Heheheh...sure,I'll let ya train me...but can we go to the hospital first?I feel my ribs scraping against my lungs."

Total Word Count: 904
Endurance (E-0 to D-0): 750/750
Remaining Word Count: 154
Reaction Time (E-2 -> E-3): 154/225



Last edited by Zaiaku Jiendo on Tue Jun 17, 2014 12:08 am; edited 1 time in total

Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
Yui laughed at his reply the drip of blood from his mouth was a sigh as she expected as much his ribs were crushed it would be time to take him to the medical center for treatment. What a surprise for him when it winds up being herself to treat him but she would let that little discovery remain secret until than.

"Follow me I know where to treat you though I must say still proud you have not fainted yet. I did not really hold back much other than using none of my jutsu which was quite merciful."

She motioned for him to follow as she walked out of the training area she would train him to become Sunas unstoppable wall. If she could train him well no one stood a chance of entering hr village because they would n ever be able to get past this one man.

-exit thread-

WC:155

Inuzuka Yui

Inuzuka Yui


D-rank
Trained strength B-B2 1592/1500

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