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1Keruto No Empty Keruto No Fri Jul 04, 2014 8:28 am

Raizel




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Symbol:
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Clan: Keruto No

Kekkei Genkai: Keltiasome

Elements: /

Specialization: /

Location: Scattered, ex-Kirigakure

Clan History: A clan originating in Kirigakure, this clan was considered more taboo than that of the Kaguya clan which was wiped out after their attack against the Kirigakure village. However with Keruto No, the clan was wiped out as a warning for all those of the clan that had achieved the stage three status. There were originally five of the stage threes, no more and no less, until there was a clan that had wiped them off the planet. A clan that originated from the establishments in the land of snow and found refuge in kirigakure. This clan was the Yuki clan, famed for their ice jutsu. This is the bane for the stage threes as Ice Jutsu is like a living shell to their bodies. Only way to completely seal a level three is encasing them in ice afterall, and three of these immaculate five were sealed up that way, in never melting ice. The remaining two fled to different countries, lands and changing their names and identities. It was due to this that the clan forever is hidden until a stage three will reveal themselves once again, and at that time they may still be considered taboo enough to encase in ice, unless they are used as weapons for destruction at which time there is no telling what will happen.

Kekkei Genkai Description: This clan has three stages to their one power.

Stage 1:

Stage 2:

Stage 3:

Drawbacks: Depending on the ability taken, the drawbacks are different. As for stage 2, their chakra is constantly drained, unless it is "sealed". And for stage 3, they lose all abilities from stage one and two, and lose all elemental affinities.

Members:
Stage 1 =
Stage 2 =
Stage 3(Only two) = Raizel

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu: Only Choose One


Name: Keeper of the Truth
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Contact
Specialty: KKG
Duration: As long as the user wants
Cooldown: 3 post cooldown
Description: To use this ability, the user holds the hand of the target, and this ability triggers. This ability allows the user to know the thoughts, and memories of a person. He can go through their mind, and get any detail from the target. There are several downside to this ability, though. To gain this ability, the user will have to take Both the Special Characteristic which is, blind and lame. As for the drawback of stage 2, the previous drawbacks stay, and now, whenever the user reads the target's memory, thoughts, etc, they will also "leak" their own memories, especially the traumatic ones to the target. Not only that, the user will also "view" their memories that are leaked to the target. Although the drawback increased, the ability also improved. The user can now view the memories, secrets, and thoughts of a target as long as they are in a 5 meter radius around the user.

Name: Memory Eraser
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Contact
Specialty: KKG
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 8 post
Description: To activate this ability, the user must first subdue the target. The target doesn't have to be unconscious(though it would be easier). All the target have to be is to not be able to shake off the user's grip. The user will then place his hand on the target's forehead. This would then activate the ability. The user is now able to make the target forget any jutsu. The drawback, however, is that the user himself must forget a jutsu of equal rank. To get this ability, the user will have to take the Special Characteristic of Haemophilia. When the user reach Stage 2, the user will be able to cause a target to forget multiple jutsu, but in exchange, they have to lose one jutsu more than the jutsu he "erased" from the memory of the target.

Name: Doppelganger
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG
Duration: Stage 1: 5 post, Stage 2: 10 post, 10 chakra for every post after
Cooldown: 5 post
Description: This ability is different from the others. This ability allows the user to gain an appearance of anyone. When they change into that person, they gain the person's voice, gestures and habits. At the second stage, the user gains the same ability, but with a longer duration. The drawback isn't apparent in this ability.

Name: Strength
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG(Exclusive for those that took the Physical Path)
Duration: Stage one=5 post Stage 2=10 post
Cooldown: 5 post
Description: For this technique, the user takes his previous bonuses from the Physical path, and doubles it. The drawback, however, is that they can only use physical attacks, such as punches or sword-attacks. This ability can be cancelled anytime. As for stage two, since the doubling is way bigger, the drawback is also doubled. If they were to cancel the ability, or if it runs out, they go into "cooldown". They cannot perform any jutsu and their bonuses from the path taken disappears for 3 turns.

Name: Chakra
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: KKG(Exclusive for those who took the Chakra Path)
Duration: Stage 1=5 post, Stage 2=10 post
Cooldown: 5 post
Description: For this technique, the user takes his previous bonuses from the chakra path, and doubles it. The drawback, however, is that they cannot use any physical attacks, such as punches or sword-attacks. This ability can be cancelled anytime. As for stage two, since the doubling is way bigger, the drawback is also doubled. If they were to cancel the ability, or if it runs out, they go into "cooldown". They will lose their previous bonus from the path they took, and their drawbacks will double for 3 post.



Last edited by Raizel on Fri Jul 04, 2014 11:24 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Keruto No Empty Re: Keruto No Fri Jul 04, 2014 9:10 am

Raizel




D-rank
This is available for checking. Ignore all abilities below Doppelganger, since it's still WIP. Overall, it would be good to begin checking this clan, since it might take a while haha. Please, please, PLEASE, do not insta-ban it. I'm open for negotiating and editing.

3Keruto No Empty Re: Keruto No Fri Jul 04, 2014 11:24 pm

Raizel




D-rank
Finished everything, including the Paths that they can take. Ready for review.

4Keruto No Empty Re: Keruto No Mon Jul 07, 2014 11:05 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
1.) You can not have more than 4 clan jutsu.

2.) Nobody can start clanless, so that mechanic of your clan has to be completely scrapped or reworked.

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