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1Hanbei Justu Updates Empty Hanbei Justu Updates Sat Jan 10, 2015 6:55 pm

Hanbei~

Hanbei~


D-rank
D Rank:

C Rank:

B Rank:

A Rank:

S Rank:

SS Rank:



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2Hanbei Justu Updates Empty Re: Hanbei Justu Updates Sat Jan 10, 2015 6:57 pm

Hanbei~

Hanbei~


D-rank
Hanbei has not learned his SS rank technique, it still requires training.

3Hanbei Justu Updates Empty Re: Hanbei Justu Updates Tue May 19, 2015 4:50 am

Noriko

Noriko


D-rank
I do apologize for the wait.

Wind Haze: This can't be a stat-boosting technique as a D-rank. However, you can make it more difficult for ninja to detect you via the Perception stat, marginally.

Micro-Vacuum: Is this like a gate, per se, that the projectiles travel through to get the boost? If so, I'm not sure how your control is precise enough to evade obstacles.

Self-Healing Pulse: You can update this to the most recent Jutsu Rules damage tables~

Sitting-Needles: How thick are they? In addition, how quickly can they travel? They should only pierce about half what they can right now. Specify exact ranges that (a. you can shoot them and (b. that they can exist from you at all in trap form.

Chakra Senbon: As above, so below.

Chakra Acupuncture: Modify the speed to be appropriate.

Needle Hell Stream: You're making a lot of these, should the effectiveness not go down just a tad? Consult the Jutsu Rules on this.

Chakra Interception: This is fine.

Sun-Senbon Sphere: You can throw the sphere(s) with as much force as you would be able to otherwise. Fix the other parts of the jutsu to go in line with Jutsu Rules; it'll only cost ya +5 to create two spheres that are less effective than the large one.

Medical Sensory Technique: Mid-range, very specific use. Sensory, slightly supplementary. I do think this checks off.

Needle Jizo Tank: Can you specify what you mean in regards to speed? Wording-wise, I wasn't sure if you meant jutsu-rank speeds or their own normal travel speed. The explosion of senbon at the end is a bit much.

Needle Hell Orb: Being offensive and defensive, this technique has alright defensive power, but the offense is still pretty strong. Consult the Jutsu Rules.

Spinning Needle Hell Orb: You upped both the blocked jutsu count and the offensive utility, even though the lower-rank jutsu would have been fine at a higher rank. It's unbalanced at this point, due to that.

Lightning Snare:
C-rank: Immobilize would be okay, but not a stun. Lasting -1 to RT would be OK for one or two posts after.
B-rank: Likewise, and the immobilize can very likely increase in duration.
A-rank: This is where a 1-post stun can start. Due to this being a full 2-post setup, I can allow auxiliary effects. But inability to use entire limbs until medical treatment is received is a bit much with the primary effect as well.

Needle Hell: The cooldown should be something like "Duration +3 posts". Adjust the jutsu damage (you shouldn't have to lower it by much).

Mark of Fortune: The would-be maintenance cost is actually 30 chakra. However, the technique itself is perfect.

Void Tracker: Suck away a jutsu, and a terrific tracking offense... where's the drawback? Set this to Jutsu Rules standards on speed, please.

Mirror Clone is fine.~

Needle Storm Prison: Explicate what radius you can have the needles converge in on. Otherwise, just consult Jutsu Rules.

Second Needle: Dharma: I need a second opinion on the back-from-life thing just to be sure it's still legal. <3 I think it should cost a tad more to bring back from the brink, though.

4Hanbei Justu Updates Empty Re: Hanbei Justu Updates Tue May 19, 2015 4:58 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
I've moved a lot of these to my jutsu registry cos they weren't getting done, many of these have been changed and looked over, though some havn't, so, this page can be effectively removed <3

http://www.narutosaga.com/t15226-hanbei-justu-registration

this is what's been done.

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