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1Dākuchairudo  Empty Dākuchairudo Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:15 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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Clan: Dākuchairudo (ダークチャイルド) (Literally, 'The Dark Child')

Kekkei Genkai: Don'yokuna Puredetā (Voracious Predator) path, or Kurai Torikkusutā (Dark Trickster) path.

(The user must choose one of the two.)

Elements: Varies from clansman to clansman

Specialization: Those who follow the Don'yokuna puredetā path have a Taijutsu focus, while those who follow the Kurai Torikkusutā focus upon Genjutsu.

Location: Kumogakure

Clan History:


"In the world of Shinobi there have been a great many evolutionary jumps, those in a certain area gaining an ability to get ahead of the competition. The world has always seen fit to regulate itself in such ways. We have been created by such a jump, but we are new in our entirety. We are the future ... Manifest Destiny my brethren!" -- The Kemono No Haha, a passage from The 'Shi No Tenrei'


It is unknown where the clan originated from, some say they come from the Bowels of the Netherworld itself, they would heartily disagree of course. Unfortunately most of the clan's history has been lost to just that; however, what is left has been written in the clan's holy book: "Shi No Tenrei", a passage of which can be seen above.


The book states this, (In so many words):

Many a year ago, in the first years that the clans of this world chose their homes in the villages of ninja, two shinobi arose. The two have since lost their names to history but are referred to as, the Kemono No Haha, and the Chichi Torikkusutā; the Beast mother, and the Father Trickster. Two people who shared the womb of a clan-mother who had seen it fit to leave the world after giving birth. The two were not the first of the clan, but they are the two most significant members in it's history; now 'Godly Ancestors', they have in large strides have formed the legacy for the Dākuchairudo. From birth the two were groomed by their clansmen, the Kemono No Haha by the Don'yokuna puredetā, and the Chichi Torikkusutā by the Kurai torikkusutā. Chosen at birth to change the legacy of the clan, to lead them into a grand new life...


You see, back in the days of yore the clan had a penchance for extreme violence leading them to trouble with the many villages, and the many clans who inhabited them. Being as they were, those who eat Shinobi' hearts, in a perpetual state of war with many. While the Kemono No Haha relished the constant battling, the Chichi Torikkusutā had quite the opposite view upon the situation. He wished to ally himself, and his clan or at least the half he controlled, with a country. The Kemono no Haha would have no part of this, instead opting to continue the traditional ways of killing any and everything that the Don'yokuna puredetā set their eyes upon, taking no mind of her brother who she felt was a lesser being for his wish to assimilate, and perhaps even an enemy now.

So taking his stake in the clan he left for the only sensible choice in country, Kumogakure. During this temultous time the Raikage sought help with the protection of his people, and making a deal with the devil seemed a sensible choice. The deal was simple enough, the Dākuchairudo had to promise they would not feast upon any Shinobi of the village without warrant from the Raikage, and that the Chichi Torikkusutā would bring the Kage the head of his sibling to ensure the loyalty to the village of Kumogakure no Sato. Without hesitation the Kurai Torikkusutā and their leader the Chichi Torikkusutā.

Upon finding the Kemono no Haha, as she was committing to her infamous speech which can be seen above, the two spoke for the final time. The Chichi Torikkusutā stressing that they would assimilate or die, the Kemono No Haha stated that assimilation was death in itself.

The battle ensued, and due to the arrogance of the Don'yokuna puredetā it was quite the lopsided fight. An utter slaughter, but of course both sides always have casualties. Both parties lost their respected leaders, both with blade plunged into the chest. Without leader the two groups once again joined into one, out of fear for survival, a fear the Don'yokuna felt for the first time. Together once more the clan returned to Kumogakure, with not one but two heads to present to the Raikage.


Now in modern times the clan holds a firm foothold in Kumogakure, of course most of the average citizens have a certain distaste for the clan due to their nature, but with that distaste comes fear, and with that fear comes a certain amount of respect... Unfortunately this respect does not translate into the inner workings of the clan, while they are unified the two sides are often embroiled in strife. Suffice to say both sides does not particularly get along with each other...

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Dākuchairudo are known, and feared, for the fact that they quite literally eat the heart of any who oppose them in the field of combat. They do this because they have the innate ability to draw in a certain power from eating another being's life source. While it is unknown why, the user gains a certain amount of cellular regeneration from the process, healing wounds they may have maintained in battle. The amount of healing depends upon the rank of the person who had been eaten.

Due to this they naturally have sharper Canines and incisors; however, there are no changes in the power of the jaw or any other structural changes in the mouth, or of the teeth. -- The changes allow the user, if the choose to do so, to use their teeth as D-Ranked weapons.

Effects per Ranks:

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(Due to the Kekkei Genkei the user may not take Necrophobia as a negative SC.)

Notes upon the appearance of members, please read if applying:

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The process of removing the heart and eating it is quite ritualistic, the user prays for the dead essentially apologizing for killing them, then the user must manually dig the heart from the chest before feasting upon it (The process taking two posts in total).

While they are completing the process they are left open to attack, if attacked they must restart the process. Thusly it is highly recommended to do this outside of combat, or with immediate back up.

Within the clan there have been situations where members have killed and eaten other members, in fact the situation is fairly common and is considered the most appropriate way of settling serious issues amongst members. After eating another member of the clan the user effectively doubles the minimum amount of threads they may go without having to eat a character again.

(Notes: The user must eat the heart of another RPC to gain these benefits. They can for all intensive purposes feed on NPCS, but any bonuses stated above would not go into effect. Anyone that is to be eaten must be approved for the act at least two weeks in advance of the act happening, to prevent characters being made just to be eaten, and of course the user has to be an active member.)

Drawbacks: The body of a Dākuchairudo is a strange thing, it seems that if the user does not eat once every 35 (70 if the user has eaten another clan member) IC threads (The user must keep track of said threads in their signature). If the user does not eat within that time frame they will begin to show signs of neurological decay. At 45 (90 if user has eaten another clan member) signs of cognitive dysfunction occurs, the user hears auditory hallucinations and will become quite paranoid. At 60 (120 if eaten another clan member) the user loses their grasp upon reality, they become feral, they kill and eat the nearest person and anymore they can get hold of. At all points beforehand the effects can be reversed, but once the user has become Feral nothing can be done for them, with the exception of killing them of course.

If the user opts for a third specialization they must choose Medical ninjutsu, as to further the effects of their regenerative properties.


Members: Dakuchairudo Jishin

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
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Last edited by Dākuchairudo Jishin on Thu May 02, 2013 5:52 pm; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : Added coding for jutsu)

2Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:18 pm

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Yamamoto clan has that logo.

3Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:35 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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Edited.


Stating now that I'm quite open to change, or suggestions for the drawbacks and kekkei genkei itself as far as the powers you gain via feeding upon someone.

4Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:20 pm

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Ahh, although it's a Kekkei Genkai, this would be considered Medical jutsu.


Name: Hāto jokyo - gijutsu (Heart-Removal-Technique)

I swear dude, you could do this without a jutsu XD

5Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:07 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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Hey, if you say I don't need a jutsu for it -- Removed.


Added a couple other jutsu I had apparently missed in my initial posting.


6Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:35 pm

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Name: Deddokyarī (Dead carry) <-- this would be Taijutsu

Name: Kandakai itami Since this doesn't do much other than annoy people, i'd make it D rank, unless it does more damage than that

7Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Mon Apr 29, 2013 3:14 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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Edited; could've sworn I had put Taijustsu specs for Deddokyari.

8Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 6:55 pm

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In your drawbacks you say 'may' throughout. Change to 'will'. In addition, I find that 50 threads is a long time.... but then again you ARE killing people. Still, I think the drawback effects should progress more quickly.

Your jutsu are fine. However, your KKG in itself needs tweaking. Your incisors and canines...are they like E-ranked weapons now because of their sharpness (jaws are powerful even without modification, sharpness would be devastating when you're trying to bite).

Regeneration...one clan already has this passively, but I would think that this is different. As it would happen less frequently and you have to kill people for it. Detail the types of injuries you can recover from, in in/cm for cutting, as well as breaking bones/bruising, bleeding, and burns. Painkiller is iffy without Medical, though I can see it working, a murderous rush. Detail how much of an energy jolt they get, like 'just drank a cup of coffee' or 'like they hadn't even been fighting' or something like that; perhaps for how long it lasts. You may want to say as a drawback that their 3rd or 4th spec must be Medical, just to cover that base...

9Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 7:51 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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I believe I've edited everything you've asked, but I do have a quick question.

For the time required before feralization, if I were to remove the bonus from eating another clan member, would I be able to bump up the average a bit?

10Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 10:48 pm

Takao

Takao


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Simply because I'm thinking about how this type of effect can be abused, make a note somewhere that a player has to have been approved for a certain amount of time before they can be consumed for the effects to take place. I don't want to see people making characters just to be killed and eaten.

11Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 10:58 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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Added in under: Notes in the 'Kekkei Genkei' section.

12Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 11:09 pm

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Not long enough. Make it at least two weeks, and on top of that being an active member of the site.

13Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 11:12 pm

Dākuchairudo Jishin




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Edited.

14Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Wed May 01, 2013 11:17 pm

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Approved.

Damn, Taco, that is one sexy avatar.

15Dākuchairudo  Empty Re: Dākuchairudo Sun Dec 14, 2014 2:53 pm

Tame

Tame


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A-OK. Ya little cannibals.

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