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1Tejinaji Empty Tejinaji Sat Dec 14, 2013 1:31 am

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
Symbol: Tejinaji Untitl11


Clan: Tejinaji

Kekkei Genkai: Magic

Elements: N/A

Specialization: Fuuinjutsu, Genjutsu (either as primary/secondary)

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The Tejinaji clan has been around for several generations now, traveling from village to village. They are well known as magicians, performing both on the street and in theaters all over the place.  They are capable of incredible illusions and slight of hand, specializing in two things in order to achieve their magic: fuuinjutsu and genjutsu. From placing a seal at the bottom of a hat to pull a rabbit out of to making an elephant disappear with genjutsu. Many ninja are wise to their tricks, however, as they can be explained through these jutsu. There are a few tricks they know, however, that they insist are "True Magic". How these work nobody knows but the clansmen themselves. Due to this nomadic lifestyle and skill of deception, some clan members resort to crime with these powers. They have a reputation as undetectable pickpockets and thieves, leaving many people to distrust them on sight. Still, even this negative reputation adds to their fame as wonderful magicians.

This clan was created by a shinobi named Tejinaji Mujun, who as a young man developed a rare mutation. He was a shinobi who practiced magic in his spare time,  with a will that would allow this mutation to surface. This allowed his mind to discover a secret to controlling space and time itself:

One day, Mujun was holding a coin, trying to come up with a new trick. He focused as hard as he could, applying all of the knowledge he'd acquired as a shinobi into this one task. Through all of the jutsu, all of the illusions, slight of hand, everything; there was no magic! He was furious at this. There has to be something. The thought burned in his mind, stirring his emotions and building his efforts. Eventually, his chakra would become so heavily condensed that he warped the coin several centimeters away, and it dropped to the floor. Mujun was speechless. He saw with his own eyes the coin literally disappear, then reappear in an instant. It was unbelievably, yet undeniably, Magic. From that day forward he trained more and more to control this, and soon found out that it had various other forms/uses than just teleportation. He made the resolve to never reveal this Magic to anyone, as that would take away its significance entirely. He developed ways to disguise this for his magic tricks, and even adopted them to combat as a shinobi. He was a spectacular magician too, not once did he fail to pull off a trick. As he grew older, however, he knew that this Magic would die with him. As a shinobi, he knew it could happen at any moment, so he had to pass on the gift in some way. Mujun created a seal that would spread through heredity, giving future generations his magical abilities. The seal appears as the clan symbol

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Tejinaji clan have become accustomed to deceiving others, through impressive jutsu and slight of hand that comes as second nature to them. All ninjas receive -2 Perception when perceiving a Tejinaji's movements, jutsu, etc.

Using their seal, Tejinaji can unlock the ability to use Deceptive Arts jutsu. These are the jutsu used by the clan to perform their magic tricks, though are often used for malicious purposes as well. All Deceptive Arts jutsu receive +1 to effectiveness.

Drawbacks: Deceptive Arts jutsu cost +5 chakra to activate.

Their bodies naturally have less muscle in order to remain swift and unhindered, receiving a -2 to both Strength and Endurance.

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2Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Sun Dec 15, 2013 11:44 pm

Tame

Tame


D-rank
So, teleportation is the main debatable power with this clan.

1. Seals cannot be made on a nonphysical surface. That's just Fuuinjutsu.

2. You're not explaining why you can remotely-place seals on places. You can't do it with Genjutsu, why can you do it with Fuuin?

3. You're making a literal portal jutsu. Give it some other drawbacks besides the sight thing (especially at lower ranks), because let's be honest, you're going to work your damnedest to make sure they don't.

4. You have 2 techniques that are entirely able to cancel your Kekkei Genkai's weakness. I would like these to be a bit more flawed, or have more cost to them. For example, each rank of both of the Genjutsu can only stop its rank of Sensory (this is usually a given but should be explicated for these jutsu). In addition Misdirection shouldn't work on Multitaskers or Focused people of equal rank. Concealment should have a smaller area of effect (in area of concealment) and/or a higher chakra cost.

Okay, Levitation needs a max flying height. Abusable to the max if it doesn't.

Not having a village is not a drawback.


Needs more drawbacks, considering all of you get a free item as well as spacetime teleportation abilities.

3Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Mon Dec 16, 2013 12:34 am

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
1- removed air part
2- space-time jutsu via "magic"
3- see drawbacks
4- changes made
5- levitation max height set to 100m
6- drawbacks added

4Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Mon Dec 16, 2013 11:32 am

Tame

Tame


D-rank
100m is a no. Another jutsu lets someone glide at B-rank for less than half that.


I'll let another admin look at this to confirm whether or not a spacetime teleport is something we want. I'm still iffy.

5Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Mon Dec 16, 2013 12:40 pm

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
Yeah that's why I was hesitant to make this clan, but someone said they wanted more interesting Fuuinjutsu so I thought I'd try xD. No rush~

6Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Fri Dec 20, 2013 10:45 pm

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
bump if anyone's interested in magic~

7Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Fri Dec 27, 2013 5:02 pm

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
bump~

8Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:20 pm

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
bump x3

9Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:20 am

Yōsei

Yōsei


S-rank
Denied.

This is so conceptually flawed it's ridiculous. I can't even believe it's gotten this far. Miles can talk to me if he disagrees.

10Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Tue Jan 21, 2014 6:51 pm

Noriko

Noriko


D-rank
^Another clan got denied earlier that wasn't spacetime but was very very close to it. So, something that's directly spacetime.....yeah.

11Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Thu Jan 23, 2014 11:54 am

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
Redid Kekkei Genkai and drawbacks, though this will have to wait for the new stat system to come out.

12Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:46 pm

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
I feel as though shinobi shouldn't get a -2 perception in things that involve weapons and movement because that would be more like a taijutsu/bukijutsu perk....remove that for me darling?

13Tejinaji Empty Re: Tejinaji Fri Jan 24, 2014 3:52 pm

Ukiyo

Ukiyo

Dead
? Perception could be used for a number of things, and deception would be its natural counterpart (which, being magicians, the clan naturally excels in). As I said, this needs to go on hold until the new system comes out anyway

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