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1Kill em crimes Empty Kill em crimes Wed Dec 18, 2013 3:27 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
nope not a criminal

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Last edited by Uzumaki Tsuneō on Sun Jan 05, 2014 9:41 am; edited 7 times in total

2Kill em crimes Empty Re: Kill em crimes Thu Dec 19, 2013 5:25 am

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
BUUUUUUUUUUUUUMP

3Kill em crimes Empty Re: Kill em crimes Fri Dec 20, 2013 10:13 am

Daremo




S-rank
Killing Spree
Is this Repeatable or not?
B-rank rewards are 200 - 300

I need more detail on the NPCS. Use the NPCS Template(Found in Mission Rules) feel it out for the chuunin and Jounin. Give me element & specialties of each shinobi along with their ranks.

This sounds A-rank. . . fix it along with the ryo reward

Murder or is it?
Is this repeatable or not?

Again, need more detail on the Npcs. Use the NPC template. feel it out for the special jounins and Zaraku Clan head. Need to know the elements/specialties along with the rank of each. If the clan head has some ability this need to be known as well.
C rank mission reward can only be between 100 - 180.
This seems higher than a C-rank, more like A-rank to me. . . so fit accordingly.

Voices
Repeatable or not?
B-rank rewards are 200 - 300
Ugh, same as the others. Fill out the NPC template and everything.
Again this mission seems like an A-rank mission fix it along with the reward accordingly.

Exploding Deal
Repeatable or Not?
C-rank rewards are 100 - 180
Same as the others. Fill out the NPC template and everything.
Again this mission seems B-rank-ish fix it along with the ryo reward accordingly.

Overall, most of theses problems could have been fix beforehand if you reread over the mission rules. And a tip for further reference. The more detailed the mission is, the quicker it will get approved. And please for my sake, use proper capitalization and the likes.

4Kill em crimes Empty Re: Kill em crimes Fri Jan 03, 2014 4:28 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
bumpu desu

5Kill em crimes Empty Re: Kill em crimes Fri Jan 03, 2014 8:18 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
I made  more edits I forgot to add that they're not repeatable, and I added more missions

6Kill em crimes Empty Re: Kill em crimes Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:47 pm

Taigen Kichirou




D-rank
A gift

The only thing that irks me is the grammar and lack of capitalization. Fix that and it will be approved.


Ca$h
Same as above. Though you could have been a little more creative. . . alas.


Dem Kitties
Same as above.

Kirigakure's special jounin
You misspelled Jounin in mission description. Other than that approved. . .

7Kill em crimes Empty Re: Kill em crimes Sun Jan 05, 2014 9:43 am

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
Never mind. I deleted them, am gonna be joining Kirigakure...Sooo no bad boy act.

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