Clan: Yoisha

Kekkei Genkai: Healing hands

Elements: Raiton

Specialization: Medical Ninjutsu

Location: Sunagakure no Sato

Clan History:
The Yoisha gained fame during the third shinobi war, they were some of the few sand ninja that were able to counteract the leaf’s poison specialists. The Yoisha worked hand in hand with the honored sibling’s Chiyo furthering their research of herbs and ingredients, and how they affected the human body, bother to help and hinder. Much of their numbers were killed during that conflict by leaf shinobi, leaving the populous thin by the time the fourth shinobi war happened. In the many years since then, the numbers have once again grown to a more stable number.

Kekkei Genkai Description:
Medical Expertise:Thanks to their years of practice and learning, all clan members are taught in depth and thorough Medical skills. Member’s of the clan can use Medical Ninjutsu one rank higher than their rank normally dictates, meaning a gennin can use B rank medical Ninjutsu.

Drawbacks: Even though this clan is adept in the medical way, they have been watched over by other and kept safe from other dangers that a normal shinobi has to deal with. This has soften them to the point where they can not wield a sword like they can wield the scalpel, making them unable to use Bukijutsu, their skill lies with the pin point accuracy of the small blade, and not the fineness or strength of the larger ones. Kunai and other basic ninja tools are unaffected. Even though they cannot use Bukijutsu they are allowed to use Taijutsu but at the effect rate of -1 of normal. They are unable to form chakra strings required to operate puppets, making them unable to learn puppetry. Due to their history with Konoha, all members of the clan have a weakness to Katon based jutsu, as such all Katon get +1 in strength when used against members of the clan.

Members:

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Name: Defibrillator
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: Touch
Specialty: Medical Ninjutsu
Duration: Until discharged
Cooldown: 4 posts after discharged.
Description: Rubbing the hands together the user can create a charge of electricity in their hands. This will cause the hands to have electricity around the outside of them, while chakra control ensures the charge doesn't spread to the rest of the user’s body. This causes the hands to act as a defibrillator and upon contact of another body with both hands the electricity will leave the hands and shock the other body. This will throw 1000 volts into the body, leaving minor second degree burns on the target’s body where touched. This will first shock the body causing a temporary paralysis lasting for a post. Second it will fling the body away from the user, if the person is not flat on the ground. Even though this can be offensive, it is also able to save a failing heart from stopping. Third it makes the muscles spasm painfully and erratically for a post from the residual discharge and give a harsh headache for some time after (Purely RP, target determines how long/strong).

Name: Accelerated Regeneration
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Touch to apply
Specialty: Medical Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 8 posts after casting the jutsu
Description: After molding chakra with hand signs, the medical ninja lays their hands on the target and lets their chakra seep into the target’s flesh. From then on the chakra permeates their flesh for 3 posts, attempting to repair any damages for the duration. They do this in part by speeding up the natural cell regeneration, and part by traditional Medical Ninjutsu. After the duration elapses, if the target has been healed from wounds that would otherwise slow or weaken them like large amount of blood loss, or rest for 3 posts out of combat. Each post causes minor cut, scrapes and small bruises to vanish completely, stops all bleeding internal or external. Flesh is knitted back together again fixing any severed tendon or mussels by half a post after getting them. Broken bones are put back together just before a post of this jutsu's activation, allowing full use of limbs. Naturally while the body is being healed common illnesses are cured even alcohol doesn't affect the body, and suppressing incurable and advanced diseases for the duration. (Fatigue, Born Ill, and the like have their effects or post counts suspended.)

Um, the first Clan jutsu: Defibrillator this looks more Chakra flow than medical ninjutsu, i'll let another mod look at that part.

Second jutsu: Accelerated RegenerationUhh, not sure if you're allowed to regenerate your chakra or someone else's on Saga. The rules i know are that your chakra only regenerates when you enter a new thread.

I know we've discussed this in the chat box, but i'm getting negative feelings still about the poison refrence, idk.

And you'll need to get Tril's OK ont he transplant thing btw

:)

The second jutsu doesn't say anything about regenerate some one ell's chakra, it says it repairs their damage done to the flesh.

hmm, sorry. Must've read it wrong

Starts with SS rank Medical Ninjutsu: No.

Practised Surgeon: We're not allowing modifiers to Transplant odds.

changed

If no one else disagrees...Approved.

Alright, most things look satisfactory here. Only thing I can see is:
Drawbacks: Kenjutsu is no longer it's own spec. It needs to be turned in to 'bukijutsu'.

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Seeing as that is all, I will move straight on to jutsu.

Defibrilator: The burns can be improved from Major 2nd-Minor 3rd degree burns. If you want a full body stun and be able to propell people back then you will need a drawback as well.

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once this has been fixed, bump for further review

All fixed!