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Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


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Clan Name: Ouroboros Clan
Location: Konoha
Specialization:

Orochi Path: Iryō Ninjutsu

Inspired by the Seven Head Serpent, the Orochi rely on own their own power and their own body to become the snake that the god of legends failed to be. If raw power won't cut it, their cunning intellect will aid them.

Hebi Path: Fūinjutsu

Those walking the path of Hebi are the real 'serpents' among the Ouroboros. Dirty tricks, hidden agendas, sealed weapons and allies springing to their aid out of nowhere… Any trick is a good trick if it makes them achieve their goals.

Elements: Doton & Suiton (Mandatory)

Most historical members of the Ouroboros have been found closely tied in with the earth and water elements. Mud is a very homey place for most snakes. Everything that compliments their primal nature comes to them more easily. But every few generations an oddball escapes the clans usual preferences by feeling drawn to other elemental affinities.

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Clan History:

The beginning of the Ouroboros Clan goes back to the dark ages of the shinobi world and is veiled in both secrecy and legend.

According to the clan's own tenets and written legends, the first shinobi with the typical characteristics and bearings of the snake clan, was Orochi Ryu. A man who was believed to be born in the very land of snakes and had been found a scholar in the ways of the legendary 'Great White Snake' himself.

He had become different compared to normal humans, it is said that he was of pale white skin and developed further traits in his appearance that resembled more these serpent creatures than his former human self, obtaining slit eyes and even the long slithery tongue of their kin.

Yet, despite his inhuman appearance, the man founded a family with a young woman that shared similar experiences in the land of snakes, she was named Hebi Maru. While she had been blessed with many talents and skills from her serpent teachers she did not develop many physical changes to her appearance. Together they had two children, Ako and Sano.

These two would eventually become the prodical origins of the two branches. While all were blessed with the serpent genes of their father and the serpent skills of their mother, the tendencies over which path their parents had taken was favored would differ between the children. Ako, as the oldest son would become the fathers heir and obtain most of Ryu's physical traits while learning little about his mothers secret techniques.

Sano, the second son on the other hand, would be far more intrigued by his mothers skills in the secret snake arts and the ability to whisper his will into the serpents ears to make them follow his very whim.

Due to traditions, Ako's children from the Orochi branch would mostly be regarded as the head family and the legacy of the firstborn, while Sano's children of the Hebi branch actually preferred to act from the shadows. Letting the attention given to their elder cousins work as distraction while they controlled everything of importance.

In the days before the foundation of the hidden villages, the Ouroboros clan was one of the first to ally with the Senju clan and although their number was rather small, they were proud and powerful shinobi, who were well respected within the alliance's ranks. Their branches having given raise to many unique talents that the growing leaf was very interested to call their own during their formation.

To the Orochi's demise, they were yet given little actual influence within the leaf's power regiment, but the Hebi branch seemed to welcome this development, allowing the more sneaky and crafty branch to operate in their own ways and once again rely further on trickery and deception to obtain power than the casual ways available.

Either of the branches would give birth to a multitude of highly skilled shinobi, not rarely would they rise in ranks quickly and make wonderful spies and assassins during the first ages of ANBU even up until today.

However, the clan's name has not rarely been tarnished within their own home as from their blood many villains would grow and eventually give them a bad reputation among their leaf brethren. Even until today one does not easily trust a snake. As for they all fear that if one turns away from them, they will exploit your weakness and make you pay.

Over the centuries not much had changed, with the Orochi branch presenting a Clan head, while the Hebi branch provided a council of elders to assist the clanhead. Alas after the internal revolt a decade ago, the council of elders was destroyed by the former clan head Orochi Risu after which she herself had betrayed Konohagakure and left the clan. The clan currently has no clan head and simply abides by a democratic vote, though a strong Orochi might always come to take the empty spot for themselves.
Members:

Orochi, Ryu
Hebi, Maru

Orochi, Ako
Hebi, Sano


Orochimaru
Hebitomi
Kuchirisaki

Orochi, Enaka
Orochi, Risu (Lamya)

Orochiyaru
Hebiyachi

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Kekkei Genkai Name: Hebichi - Snake Blood

While the branches of the Ouroboros have developed different unique skills, they all have certain things in common. Primarily that they date back their seemingly supernatural skills to an age where their forefathers were seemingly more snake than human, their twisted genetics bearing the mark of their reptile-like ancestors, gaining their traits but also their weaknesses.

Advantages:

  • Born Genius
    Their clan became famous not necessarily for their unusual physique but rather for their unnatural skill and superior talent in their genetically inherited master specialization. Becoming the most skilled of shinobi in their fields as they tend to outrun and surpass their competitors quite easily with their talent.

    Ouroboros members receive a 20% WC and Ryo discount into their primary specialization derived from their family branch and take the Specialist Special Characteristic by default [this does not count to the maximum of positive SC a player can have].


  • Snake Senses
    Due to snakes natural shortcoming with their eyes, they are usually quicker to act on instinct and have their other senses sharpened, especially in reaction towards potential danger.

    They gain a free passive +1 tier boost to their Dexterity.


  • Snake Physicality
    The Ouroboros are generally more adaptable and physically more flexible than most other people. More resistant to pain, more resilient to chakra loss and or corruption.

    This allows them to have a single transplant or prothetic without a drawback [chakra drain, chakra pool loss do not apply, transplants can be turned off], however every other transplant or prosthetic will follow the rules in this regard..


  • Cold Blooded
    A reminder of their snake skin still lingers in their pigmentation and pores. Their bodies are naturally more resilient against fire, this is further enhanced by their cold blood that pumps through their veins.

    Katon element interacts 1 rank weaker against them.





Drawbacks:

  • Gifted Boredom
    While their branch unlocks their hidden potential and insane talent towards one specific specialization, they are normally well versed with the skills of their sister branches but horribly lack interest and skill with specs that are rather uncommon to their family. Since the origins of their creation is most likely given birth to be Senjutsu it is an exclusion of this rule.

    Taijutsu, Genjutsu and Kugutsu will receive a 25% WC and Ryo increase if one shall choose to pursue one of these paths.


  • Snake Eyes
    The serpent clan suffers from the same short coming as their animal counterparts, their eyes, with or without slit pupils just don't see as well as those of normal shinobi. Also their hearing is supposedly not the best either.

    They suffer a penalty of -1 tier to their Perception.


  • Snake Pride
    The Ouroboros are prideful creatures. Powerful, cunning, seemingly unlimited in body and potential. Because of this, they believe they do not need the whole world of options to prove themselves as superior and have been widely known to simply slack out on training towards their elemental skills.

    They must take the 'Hesitant (Element)' negative SC per default [This does not count towards the minimum of negative SC's required].


  • Cold blooded
    Due to being cold blooded, members of the Ouroboros clan tend to start engagements rather slow and sluggish, always more keen to observe rather than to engage, leading to them never being able to go all out from the start.

    For the first 3 posts in a battle [from when engagement starts, not the thread itself if there's no engagement prior in it] Ouroboros members have -1 in all their stats.



Aesthetic Traits:

  • Serpent Heritage
    Uncaring of branch, all children of the Ouroboros bloodline will find reminders of their heritage within the very mirror in front of them. Be it scales on their skin. Unusually pale pigmentation. Sharp pointy teeth. Unnaturally long tongues or the most common trait, slit shaped pupils in their eyes. Orochi seem to be especially often victim of the physical traits while the sub branch Hebi are less cursed, or blessed.

    All Ouroboros must choose a distinctive physical trait that shows part of their serpent genetics in their general appearance.



Original Creators: Lamya and Mizuki



Last edited by Orochi Risu on Thu Aug 01, 2019 8:48 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Ouroboros Clan V3 Empty Re: Ouroboros Clan V3 Sat Jun 22, 2019 7:51 am

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Not rly much to work with, just had to remove that hidious third branch, edit the drawback to exchange chakra flow with Genjutsu.

3Ouroboros Clan V3 Empty Re: Ouroboros Clan V3 Tue Jul 16, 2019 3:50 pm

Nova Makato

Nova Makato


A-rank
one thing i would like to see changed just for clarity is whether the special characteristics count towards the maximum a character has(and its fine if it doesn't id just like it to be detailed), and the other is that i would like to see the disadvantage to elements have a primary element instead of just an advanced element. other than that it looks good, feel free to dm me after changes are made and i can approve since its such a small change.

4Ouroboros Clan V3 Empty Re: Ouroboros Clan V3 Thu Aug 01, 2019 8:45 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
So since none of the other elements, besides water mad eany logical sense, I removed that drawback and made it more RL compatible in a sense of giving them a slow start.

Also edited the snake physicality thing.

5Ouroboros Clan V3 Empty Re: Ouroboros Clan V3 Sat Aug 17, 2019 4:34 am

Nova Makato

Nova Makato


A-rank
new drawback is fine. the Advantage "snake physicality" is fine as far as the prothetic part,  but the removal of all drawbacks for KKG and transplants is a little too strong. I could see it working as "The kkg powers chakra cost is either double or +15 whichever is lower", not as strong but for example an A-rank jutsu that would have this applied would cost 10 less than it would without this effect. As just a side note, transplants aren't always on anyways so they can be "activated" and "deactivated" at will. Also just change the cost discount/increase stuff to ryo only since WC isnt a thing anymore

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