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1Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Sat Jul 21, 2018 8:43 pm

Daremo




S-rank
The Old

Dark Transmutation :

Healing Disruption Virus :

Festering Wound Virus:

Acceleration Virus :

Path of Pathogen - Enervate of the Mortal:

Pestilence’s Blessing:

Disease God’s Stench :

Suppression Medical Field :

Defense of the Disease God:

Epidemic Eradicator Virus:

Faux Armor of the Diseased God :

2Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Sat Jul 21, 2018 9:31 pm

Daremo




S-rank
The Updated

What's Difference: Many of the techniques done have their names changed, particularly 'Path of Pathogen' is now 'Entropy'. I tried to keep their names similar enough for mods won't have a hard time figuring out what is which. A few jutsus had their duration lowered, and their cooldown lowered to respect the change. Minor edits to the descriptions were made(clarifying certain things, and removing mistakes.)


Suppression Medical Field:



Last edited by Daremo on Sat Aug 04, 2018 10:57 am; edited 12 times in total

3Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Mon Jul 23, 2018 7:01 pm

Takao

Takao


S-rank
Daremo wrote:
The Updated

What's Difference: Many of the techniques done have their names changed, particularly 'Path of Pathogen' is now 'Entropy'. I tried to keep their names similar enough for mods won't have a hard time figuring out what is which. A few jutsus had their duration lowered, and their cooldown lowered to respect the change. Minor edits to the descriptions were made(clarifying certain things, and removing mistakes.)

Corrupt Conversion :

Healing Disruptor :

Side Effect:

Accelerant :

Mortal’s Enverate:

Pestilence Blessing:

Disease God’s Stench:

Suppression Medical Field:

Defense of the God:

Epidemic Eradicator Virus:

Entropy:

Doing the first five.

Entropy - Corrupt Conversion is Approved.

Medical Art - Healing Disruptor is Approved.

The Defiler - Side Effect is Approved.

Entropy - Accelerant is Approved.

Entropy - Mortal’s Enverate:
- This needs a drawback to balance the absence of handseals.

4Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Mon Jul 23, 2018 7:12 pm

Daremo




S-rank
Entropy - Mortal’s Enverate:
-Added back the hand-seals that were in the original version. Hopefully that will work for a drawback

5Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Fri Jul 27, 2018 8:38 pm

Takayuri

Takayuri


D-rank
Daremo wrote:
The Updated

What's Difference: Many of the techniques done have their names changed, particularly 'Path of Pathogen' is now 'Entropy'. I tried to keep their names similar enough for mods won't have a hard time figuring out what is which. A few jutsus had their duration lowered, and their cooldown lowered to respect the change. Minor edits to the descriptions were made(clarifying certain things, and removing mistakes.)

Mortal’s Enverate:

Pestilence Blessing:

Disease God’s Stench:

Suppression Medical Field:

Defense of the God:

Epidemic Eradicator Virus:

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God:

Entropy - Mortal’s Enverate is Approved~

Pestilence Blessing is Approved~

Disease God's Stench is Approved~

Suppression Medical Field needs the speed at which it spreads.

Defense of the God is Approved~

Epidemic Eradicator Virus is Approved~

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God The Cooldown needs to be changed to at least 6 posts + maintained time (2 Times per thread). Other than that, unless the death rules have changed how stuff like this works, it seems fine to me.

6Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Fri Jul 27, 2018 9:27 pm

Daremo




S-rank
Takayuri wrote:
Daremo wrote:
The Updated

What's Difference: Many of the techniques done have their names changed, particularly 'Path of Pathogen' is now 'Entropy'. I tried to keep their names similar enough for mods won't have a hard time figuring out what is which. A few jutsus had their duration lowered, and their cooldown lowered to respect the change. Minor edits to the descriptions were made(clarifying certain things, and removing mistakes.)

Mortal’s Enverate:

Pestilence Blessing:

Disease God’s Stench:

Suppression Medical Field:

Defense of the God:

Epidemic Eradicator Virus:

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God:

Entropy - Mortal’s Enverate is Approved~

Pestilence Blessing is Approved~

Disease God's Stench is Approved~

Suppression Medical Field needs the speed at which it spreads.

Defense of the God is Approved~

Epidemic Eradicator Virus is Approved~

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God The Cooldown needs to be changed to at least 6 posts + maintained time (2 Times per thread). Other than that, unless the death rules have changed how stuff like this works, it seems fine to me.

Edits made. . .

Suppression Medical Field moves at 35 meters per second
Faux Avatar of the Diseased God - cooldown been adjusted as asked.

7Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Mon Jul 30, 2018 4:35 am

Myrddin

Myrddin


A-rank
Daremo wrote:
The Updated

What's Difference: Many of the techniques done have their names changed, particularly 'Path of Pathogen' is now 'Entropy'. I tried to keep their names similar enough for mods won't have a hard time figuring out what is which. A few jutsus had their duration lowered, and their cooldown lowered to respect the change. Minor edits to the descriptions were made(clarifying certain things, and removing mistakes.)


Suppression Medical Field:

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God:

Suppression Medical Field: 1/2 Approved
Faux Avatar of the Diseased God: 1/2 Approved

8Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Wed Aug 01, 2018 6:01 am

Daremo




S-rank
Small edit:
-Was brought to my attention by a jutsu mod that Faux Avatar of the Diseased God needed to state the speed at which the shrouds expands. Therefore, I gave it a speed of 45 meters per sec.

9Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Daremo[Jutsu Revamp] Sat Aug 04, 2018 10:19 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Daremo wrote:
The Updated

What's Difference: Many of the techniques done have their names changed, particularly 'Path of Pathogen' is now 'Entropy'. I tried to keep their names similar enough for mods won't have a hard time figuring out what is which. A few jutsus had their duration lowered, and their cooldown lowered to respect the change. Minor edits to the descriptions were made(clarifying certain things, and removing mistakes.)


Suppression Medical Field:

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God:

Suppression Medical Field is approved!

Faux Avatar of the Diseased God is approved!

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