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1Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Sat Jul 07, 2018 10:30 am

Yurei

Yurei


D-rank
CLAN

Serpent's Poison:

Serpent's Parade:

Serpent's Requiem:

C-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

B-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

A-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

S-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:



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2Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Re: Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Sat Jul 07, 2018 10:31 am

Yurei

Yurei


D-rank
Revamping my jutsu list since its been a here. Includes the Kurohebi jutsu before clan revamp and therefore grandfathered in. However I did make edits to it along with other jutsu.

My unrevamped jutsu list is in my signature.

3Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Re: Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Sat Jul 07, 2018 2:25 pm

Takao

Takao


S-rank
Yasuo wrote:
CLAN

Serpent's Poison:

Serpent's Parade:

Serpent's Requiem:

E-RANK

Academy:

D-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

C-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

B-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

A-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

S-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

Library Techniques are Approved.

Serpent's Poison:
- Removing the KKG ability should be A Rank minimum.

Serpents Parade:
- Speed is too high for each rank, exceeding the limitations without being balanced adequately. B-Rank is at 40m/s, A-Rank is at 45. List each speed individually and balance them accordingly.
- List the degree of severity on the C-Rank's first degree tissue damage. Minor/Moderate/Major.
- What does "Can break through the armour of lower ranks" mean?

Snake's requiem:
- This technique does 3 things with no drawback. It can increase the range of their aura, it can lower the cooldown, and it can increase debuffs. It needs to be either balanced further by toning these effects down, providing a drawback, or removing the additional effects.

I don't know what other custom jutsu need modded. Separate them from the library techniques please.

4Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Re: Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Mon Jul 09, 2018 11:09 am

Yurei

Yurei


D-rank
Serpents Parade: Edited

Snake's Requiem: Edited

Requesting to swap Serpent's poison with Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave

5Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Re: Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:00 am

Myrddin

Myrddin


A-rank
Yurei wrote:
CLAN

Serpent's Poison:

Serpent's Parade:

Serpent's Requiem:

C-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

B-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

A-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

S-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

Serpents poison: as Takao stated needs to be A-Rank to remove Kkg.
Serpents Parade: Needs to be maintained or have 2 post duration.
Snake's requiem: this seems incomplete or unfinished. If its not I am going to need more details.
Hiss: I prefer this to be ninjutsu not medical. How fast does the ringing travel from the user to the target. Considering its level I would say it needs a max number of targets it can affect.
Noose: needs a speed at which the senbons travels (jutsu speed). Considering it can potentially suffocate someone (only stoppable by healing) I would say it needs to be a higher rank than C-Rank or it needs to stop before then.

6Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Re: Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Mon Jul 23, 2018 8:31 pm

Yurei

Yurei


D-rank
Edited

Requesting a second opinion on Hiss cause I feel an aoe on sound having limits is odd also requesting a second opinion on Noose cause 7 posts should be a good amount of time to get suffocated especially when current death rules allow such methods 4 posts sooner.

7Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Empty Re: Yurei's Jutsu Revamp Fri Jul 27, 2018 9:14 pm

Takayuri

Takayuri


D-rank
Yurei wrote:
CLAN

Serpent's Poison:

Serpent's Parade:

Serpent's Requiem:

C-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

B-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

A-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

S-RANK

Medical:

Ninjutsu:

Serpants Poison is Approved~

Serpant's Parade is Approved~

Serpent's Requiem I'm extremely confused as to what this is supposed to do. It makes no sense. It needs to be rewritten. I'd also like to point out that it should cap on the amount of debuffs it can effect (if I'm reading this correctly) to 1

Hiss is Approved~

Noose This seems like it should be B Rank.

Howl is Approved~

Disparitas I want a clarification with this one. Please state who it costs an extra 5 chakra to activate and maintain jutsus for. If it's the opponent, I don't like it lasting 4 posts.

Ruptured The perception check can only be the max of the rank of the jutsu, aka B-3. This also needs a higher cooldown. I also don't understand how this is maintainable...

Smother Same as above

Arthritis This should have an endurance check.

Reflective Palm V1 and V2 Drop the defensive properties by 1 rank, as it has the ability to reflect jutsus.

Basilisk You need to state your hand signs or a drawback to balance not having them.

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