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1Item update Empty Item update Fri Jul 20, 2018 4:57 am

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
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http://www.narutosaga.com/t26235-junketsu-s-rank

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Name:Junketsu [Purity]
Type Of Weapon: Large Scalpel/dagger
Rank: S
Elemental Alignment: -
Quantity: 1
Ability/Function:

Junketsu's fine obsidian blade is able to cut up to 5 inches deep and is able to cut clean through bone. Every time Lamya uses Medical Ninjutsu, Junketsu gains more power in the form of a charge.

Life Substitution:
At the cost of 6 charges, the user can gently pierce their own skin with Junketsu and allow its risidual power to flow into themselves. This will remove any and all afflictions such as necrosis, poison, burns, etc. It will also heal broken bones and damaged tissue. This won't regrow any limbs though.

Necromancing Bane
At the cost of 8 charges  the user can use Junketsu to transfer any ailments and wounds (damage, secondary effects such as burns, necrosis, etc) they suffer from onto a single victim by stabbing them, this includes clones [when the damage exceeds B rank, it will effectively disperse those clones in this case]

Appearance:
Spoiler:

History: Junketsu's origin is unknown, but it is said to have always been in the hands of skilled, yet completely deranged and twisted practitioners of medicine and surgery. Lamya found this blade coincidentally right after the attack on Sunagakure, hidden away in the storage room of Kaze no Kuni's feudal Court.

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http://www.narutosaga.com/t24301-neo-lamya-outfit-mask

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Name: Medusa
Type of Armor: Helmet/gasmask
Rank: S
Elemental Alignment: N/A
Quantity: 1
Protection:
Negates basic attacks up to C rank, lowers any basic attacks of B to A rank with two ranks, lowers basic attacks of S rank with one rank.
Ability/Function:

Coal Filter
With a custom made filter, this breathing apparatus allows the user to be safe from any and all gaseous poison up to and including A rank used by other characters and up to S rank for their own gaseous poison.

Reverse Rebreather:
Only after 5 posts of the user in a thread, can the user allow the rebreather to reverse its effect, allowing themselves to breath out a large 40m radius cloud of black smoke which spreads at a speed of 20m/s. This cloud is will remain active for three posts unless cleared by any AoE jutsu of A or higher and will block off sight for anyone with perception B rank or lower and when inhaled, it will lower anyone's reaction time and perception by -1 rank for three posts, even if the smoke's been cleared, due to it's stinging effect causing people to have tears welling up in their eyes and thus messing up their eyesight.

Appearance:
Spoiler:
History:
Made by the best engineers and craftsmen, this mask was made to avoid being affected by any unnatural and hazardous material and or chakra that could get into the mask and possibly cause harm to the wearer. This was created per Lamya's request after having escaped the Konoha prison, her fear for diseases and incapacitating poisons having reached a new height.

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http://www.narutosaga.com/t14470-black-anbu-armour

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Name: Black ANBU Armour
Type of Armor:
Rank: S
Elemental Alignment: -
Quantity: 1
Protection: This armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are A-rank. Basic attacks of S-rank do 2 rank less in damage, and such strikes of SS-rank do 1 tiers less in damage. The armor only covers the legs, shoulders, back, chest and torso of the user.

Ability/Function:

ANBU teachings
This armor completely hides any trace of the user's presence from A-rank chakra sensory and below, this includes sensory type dojutsu and jutsu.

Perfect ANBU
Once per thread, the user can use any [custom] ANBU jutsu at no activation cost and without cooldown. Though it does not remove any maintanance cost if applicable.

Appearance:
Spoiler:
History:This is Lamya's standard ANBU armor, now altered into that of the Black ANBU, with the reason of using her enemies strengths against them, she also strengthened her armor and changed the composition to the strongest and sturdiest kind of leather available.

2Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 22, 2018 12:23 am

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Junketsu
- This item has a passive [the charge system] and two actives. This exceeds what S-Rank weapons can have.
- Active abilities always need activation costs. In order to activate the Life Substitution or Necromancing Bane chakra will need to be paid. Any active effect also requires Chakra Flow to use.
Life Substitution should state what rank of poisons or burns it interacts with. This also needs a statement about how much of that damage it heals.
- Remove the text about dispersing clones from Necromancing Bane. Clones will disperse naturally when they take appropriate damage.

Medusa
- The Reverse Rebreather would have to be a chakra effect, of at least A-Rank.
If you reverse the effects of the rebreather, wouldn’t you also be affected by the cloud from this item? You might want to phrase this better as to not accidentally target yourself with it.
- This should state whether it’s light or heavy armor

Black ANBU Armor
- This armor covers too much. It’s too close to full body armor and will have to be split into two parts.
- This negates damage too well. I assume this is intended to be light armor, and light armor can only negate damage of three ranks lower, and lowers damage up to two ranks lower or equal to by one rank. This should also state whether it’s light or heavy armor
You cannot subvert chakra costs with Perfect ANBU.





3Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:42 am

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Item value refund

As stated by Ayakashi, people are allowed to get full refunds on items due to decreased use without chakra flow, so here we go, since I aint got chakra flow I am only updating the anbu armor and selling all my other items due to no longer having any use.

Junketsu acquirement link 6000 ryo
Koketsu Aqcuirement Link 1700 ryo
Mask Acquirement Link 6000 ryo

Total refund: 13,700 ryo

Black ANBU armor:

4Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 22, 2018 12:27 pm

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Lamya wrote:Item value refund

As stated by Ayakashi, people are allowed to get full refunds on items due to decreased use without chakra flow, so here we go, since I aint got chakra flow I am only updating the anbu armor and selling all my other items due to no longer having any use.

Junketsu acquirement link 6000 ryo
Koketsu Aqcuirement Link 1700 ryo
Mask Acquirement Link 6000 ryo

Total refund: 13,700 ryo

Black ANBU armor:

Junketsu:
- Refund approved for 6000 ryo

Koketsu & Mask:
- These do not require chakra flow, therefor do not benefit from the full refund and would follow normal reselling values. (50% of purchase price). Further I don't see a purchase confirmation for the mask in that thread, so I'd like to see the admin request for purchasing it instead.

The ANBU armor:
- Make it state what type of armor it is.

5Item update Empty Re: Item update Mon Jul 23, 2018 1:38 am

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
eh...as for the admin request...only staff can find it since it should be in a prior admin request thread, given it was during Jean's tenure as admin

Also, the mask as an S rank DOES benefit from the rules since it has been made prior to the current item rules and has the right to have an active ability, but no longer can have one due to the chakra flow rules.

so...it would be: 850 ryo for koketsu and still 6000 ryo for the mask

6Item update Empty Re: Item update Mon Jul 23, 2018 11:59 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Lamya wrote:eh...as for the admin request...only staff can find it since it should be in a prior admin request thread, given it was during Jean's tenure as admin

Also, the mask as an S rank DOES benefit from the rules since it has been made prior to the current item rules and has the right to have an active ability, but no longer can have one due to the chakra flow rules.

so...it would be: 850 ryo for koketsu and still 6000 ryo for the mask

Okay, well then I'll go bother admins to find it for me.

As a matter of fact it does not benefit from the full refund. Yes it was applied for when items could just contain actives without needing a specialization for it, however this mask does not have an active ability and thus is not affected by the changes to the guidelines. Therefor it does not get the full refund benefit and follows the normal reselling prices.

7Item update Empty Re: Item update Tue Jul 24, 2018 8:34 am

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Okay, so after some thinking, digging and guessing... I'll only sell the one scalpel for 6000 as you approved and find me some suitable replacements for the items in question, that sound good?

8Item update Empty Re: Item update Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:36 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Looks good to me.

9Item update Empty Re: Item update Wed Jul 25, 2018 2:49 am

Yōsei

Yōsei


S-rank
Fuyuko wrote:
Lamya wrote:Item value refund

As stated by Ayakashi, people are allowed to get full refunds on items due to decreased use without chakra flow, so here we go, since I aint got chakra flow I am only updating the anbu armor and selling all my other items due to no longer having any use.

Junketsu acquirement link 6000 ryo
Koketsu Aqcuirement Link 1700 ryo
Mask Acquirement Link 6000 ryo

Total refund: 13,700 ryo

Black ANBU armor:

Junketsu:
- Refund approved for 6000 ryo

Koketsu & Mask:
- These do not require chakra flow, therefor do not benefit from the full refund and would follow normal reselling values. (50% of purchase price). Further I don't see a purchase confirmation for the mask in that thread, so I'd like to see the admin request for purchasing it instead.

The ANBU armor:
- Make it state what type of armor it is.

refund PAID

10Item update Empty Re: Item update Wed Jul 25, 2018 6:05 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Black ANBU revamp

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Black ANBU armor:

OLD

Black ANBU Mask:



Last edited by Lamya on Fri Jul 27, 2018 3:49 am; edited 2 times in total

11Item update Empty Re: Item update Thu Jul 26, 2018 12:28 am

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Lamya wrote:Black ANBU revamp

Black ANBU armor:

Black ANBU Mask:

- Light armor by default makes basic attacks negligible if they are 3 ranks lower than the armor (meaning C-Rank for S-Rank items.), and basic attacks of equal rank or below do one rank less in damage. This currently has the protection that heavy armor would provide. If you wanted to make light armor that has the protection of heavy armor as a second passive that would be fine, but it would obviously be considered a passive ability and increase the cost of the item appropriately. This applies to both the armor and the mask.

- When revamping items, please provide a link to the item that is being revamped along with the new version for clerical purposes.

12Item update Empty Re: Item update Fri Jul 27, 2018 3:49 am

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
just edited the requested stuff in the last post

13Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 29, 2018 5:57 am

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
1/2 Approved!

14Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 29, 2018 11:54 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Lamya wrote:Black ANBU revamp

OLD

Black ANBU armor:

OLD

Black ANBU Mask:

Black ANBU armor - Shade
- The amount of things it can hide from needs to be lowered. It can't hide from all sensory jutsu and definitely not as a passive (neither as an active).

Black ANBU mask - Shade
- Reforge approved for 2000 ryo!

15Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 29, 2018 1:30 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Black ANBU revamp

OLD

Black ANBU armor:

16Item update Empty Re: Item update Sun Jul 29, 2018 10:57 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Lamya wrote:Black ANBU revamp

OLD

Black ANBU armor:

1/2 Approved.

17Item update Empty Re: Item update Mon Jul 30, 2018 4:08 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Lamya wrote:Black ANBU revamp

OLD

Black ANBU armor:

Reforge approved at 1500 ryo!

18Item update Empty Re: Item update Mon Jul 30, 2018 4:40 am

Kirei

Kirei


B-rank
Fuyuko wrote:
Lamya wrote:Black ANBU revamp

OLD

Black ANBU armor:

OLD

Black ANBU Mask:

Black ANBU armor - Shade
- The amount of things it can hide from needs to be lowered. It can't hide from all sensory jutsu and definitely not as a passive (neither as an active).

Black ANBU mask - Shade
- Reforge approved for 2000 ryo!

reforge PAID

19Item update Empty Re: Item update Thu Aug 02, 2018 4:07 am

Kirei

Kirei


B-rank
Fuyuko wrote:
Lamya wrote:Black ANBU revamp

OLD

Black ANBU armor:

Reforge approved at 1500 ryo!

PAID

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