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1Update. Empty Update. Tue Mar 27, 2018 2:24 pm

Yōsei

Yōsei


S-rank
Vow & 8 Tails revamped from Enduring Sacrifice pair of ranged swords to better fit updated item guidelines and design. Instead of two gunblades, they have been revamped into one sword and one ranged weapon but both retain their raiton alignment. Ammo needs to be priced and paid for.

Vow APPROVED:

Eight & Ammo APPROVED:

Kyoki has been revamped from Jiwari to better match updated item guidelines and design.

Kyoki:

The Yosei mantle has been revamped from the Sealmaster's mantle due to updated armor guidelines making the old armor illegal.

Mantle:


Seimei Master Seal revamped to this neat trinket due to +1 to jutsu now being illegal as I understand. If you wanna grade this at S-rank I'll happily pay the difference.

Keepsake APPROVED:



Last edited by Yōsei on Thu Apr 19, 2018 3:34 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Update. Empty Re: Update. Fri Mar 30, 2018 3:06 pm

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Yōsei wrote:
Vow:

I'd like you state which buki specialization is needed to use the weapon.

Yōsei wrote:
Eight & Ammo:

The Crossbow:

First, state the specialization that's needed to use the weapon.
Second for precision shot, I'd like the drop-off to be more severe than the one before, double that of the one above.
Third, state that you need to use two hands here as well.
Finally, increase the chakra cost to 10 per bolt.



The Ammo:

First, convert non damage value to metric.
Second change the depth of the bolts to 4 inches, while the guidelines don't state a particular number, SS can only do 5 inches, so it would be weird if S can do more.



Yōsei wrote:
Kyoki:

State what buki specialization is needed.
I'd like you to define better how much damage it can do.

Yōsei wrote:
Mantle:

I'd like a chakra cost to be added in which for every new jutsu that enters the radius you have to pay x-chakra for it to get affected by the mantles effect. Further, seeing as your going for S-rank radius, it would need S-rank activation cost and maintenance.

Yōsei wrote:
Keepsake:

Add in that it only works against jutsu's from S-rank and lower.

3Update. Empty Re: Update. Mon Apr 02, 2018 7:47 pm

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Yōsei wrote:
Vow:

Revamp Approved!

Yōsei wrote:
Eight & Ammo:

Crossbow approved for 6500 ryo!

Bolt canister approved for 5500 ryo for each canister. If buying per 10 canisters they're 4500 ryo each for a total of 45000 ryo!


Yōsei wrote:
Kyoki:

I would like you to add that you can only use one of the abilities in a post, materializing or dematerialize or up the chakra cost for changing forms.

Yōsei wrote:
Mantle:

- Better explanation on how it interacts with the jutsu that come in range of its effect. Does it reduce the damage/speed, etc. by a rank or just that they interacts as if it were a rank lower? If it's the former, how is it determined what the new values are?
- State somewhere that it needs A-rank Fuinjutsu to use.
- I'd still like you to add in that you need to pay x-chakra extra for every jutsu after the first that enters the radius. My suggestion would be 5 extra chakra for every technique after the first.

Yōsei wrote:
Keepsake:

Approved for 3400 ryo!

4Update. Empty Re: Update. Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:22 pm

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Yōsei wrote:
Kyoki:

Approved for 7500 ryo!

Yōsei wrote:
Mantle:

Approved for 7000 ryo!

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