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1Evolution[private/training] Empty Evolution[private/training] Thu Apr 23, 2015 3:41 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
Tied to a chair, he shivered, he cried as he clenched teeth, he saw nothing, his eyes; blindfolded, he heard shrieks, screams of agony, as his body received more and more and more wounds, impaled in various areas, his arms, legs, feet, hands, shoulders, open wounds were closed through fire fingernails were removed, fingers were cut, and were healed through extremely high level healing techniques, the torture would go on and on and on.

The boy was then placed in a white room after his body had healed completely, the toilet was white, everything was white, he was fed, white rice on a white dish, water was served in white glasses, he had to eat with his hand, he was left there for days, everything was white, his clothes, white, the room white, his food white, he was not allowed to make a sound, ten seals on his body, all were white, and all made him nothing but a weakling, he weak beyond weakness, incapable of movement beside eating, he was capable of doing nothing else, he was placed there for days, and days. Not a single scratch was left on him, but it was all mental, the scars, hallucinations tortured the boy, he wanted anything to happen anything to make him feel alive, he felt as if his senses were no longer there, no sound, no touch, no movement, only mental torture gripped the boy, and it was so severe, he felt as if he is being choked, or buried, as if he was dead, the mental torture went on, he struggled, but thanks to the horrid things he had seen he was capable of staying calm until he was completely broken, seeing his loved ones dead, his loved ones haunting him, it was no genjutsu, it was merely White Torture.
His screams and cries were heard and everything was filmed, for a reason, what was that reason?
After days and days of the torture he was let out, out of that horrid room, out of his white nightmare. He was then taken to a table where he was tied with spiked tree roots, not only that, but a piece of cloth was placed on his face as water was poured on it, not seeing anything, not breathing, and  they continued, they poured more and more water over his head, and it seemed to him like he was drowning, the psychological pain was insane, he was going insane. He screamed and screamed again, as water drowned him over short periods of thirty to forty five seconds, he was dying inside. He then was moved away,  to another torture room
Injected with a syringe that regenerated any wounds almost instantly, torn limbs pop back up, bruises and cuts fade away, they cut him all up,  "tore" out his limbs fingers and fingernails.
He was tortured, over and over and over.
“Please… Kill…. Me, please….”
He begged, the pain was excruciating he lost all hope, he remembered his loved ones, people he cares about, and people he wants to be with, his master  shinobu, his good friend Ayakashi, his elder brother, the Tsuchikage, Matsu, saiyuki, rinshi, owydelu, and the many friends he met.
“Pathetic, you look…. Hehe, Pathetic, I can't believe you were such a weakling”
was what a mocking voice muttered  in the head of the young, tortured boy , he was angered by the weakness he realized he had, he had been beaten again, he was tortured by trashy criminals that served the trashy daimyo and seven bells. It was terrible the realization never knew he was such a weakling, but in those moments of weakness he focused on everything around him, trying to distract himself from the excruciating pain, he wanted to forget these horrid experiences , he wanted to be just another citizen, not even a shinobi, he was about to regret…. Becoming a shinobi. He was in pain, nothing more can be said, this pain caused upon him was due to merely one thing, his inadequacy, he cried, screamed, and begged to be killed, he knew he would find much comfort in dying, much more comfort, he was weak this was proven to him just now, he was breaking, he could no longer endure this unending torture.

He was angered by his weakness,  afraid of the pain to come, and troubled by the life he leads, hoping for a painless ending. He was left there in that same room, tortured through new methods, limbs pulled off, cut off, then brought back again through the strange syringe. Psychological torture,  burned alive and  saved before death healed and the cycle of never ending torture continued, until he finally was brought to stand before the final event, his death,  in his eyes a cold bloody glare, the glare of the dead, with his cold pale skin,  he didn't even flinch before the knife his head would be cut with, or so they told him  it would, he still remained calmly silent, and as they placed the dull knife on the nape of his neck for an extra dose of pain, he closed his eyes. So they made sure the knife was dull to cause more pain to the poor boy as they cut his head off, those clever bastards..
Was his sad life  ending, will he finally have some peace, even though he's dead, even though he no longer can protect anyone, even though he will be defeated, and by some  hooligans working under the despised Bells. Will he really die like this, rejected, and infected, broken and paralyzed?
No.
He won't, it is completely unacceptable, his death…. His end, has been denied, and by non-other than himself, he will survive, he will destroy, he will live, he will wreck the world, tear it apart, rip it apart, demolish and triumph, as the leader issued the order to commence the execution, and with that order a burst of steam surged through the air from Tsuneo's body as he opened his eyes slightly, letting their red glow inject terror in the hearts of these scum.
His red eyes appeared, glowing, through a mist of steam, what was that steam? The result of breaking the seals placed on him, he destroyed them and triumphed, it is time he starts terrorizing the sad bunch. An aura of terror spread in the entire room.
And as he cracked his finger he moved swiftly within the mist of steam as he rampaged in the room of his nightmares, he leaned in on one of his victims for what seemed to be a kiss only to bite off the cheek of his victim swallowing it, wanting to feel alive, and with his right hand bursting through the mist of steam he penetrated his victims neck using his fingers ripping out his throat and feeding on it, a smirk tore through his face “More…” is all he said as his aura grew darker, he then ran towards the rest of his victims, or….Meals. He tore through the room that was now a massacre house, sprinting towards his next target, devouring and demolishing each and every single one of them, not showing the slightest mercy. A twelve story building, that's where he was, and of course it is full of torture facilities but more than that it was filled with trash, but today it will end up as nothing but a slaughter house, a feeding ground for a sadistic cannibal. He abandoned humanity, embraced the dead, and surrendered to his new darkness.
A blood bath each floor was made, and by non-other than the demon whose name was once Tsuneo, he descended from the top to each floor as he destroyed all that stood in his way, and all that didn't. He freed other victims of Bells' lackeys, even though they were terrified of his monstrosity. To face this world, one needs to become a monster, for it is, monstrous.

He heard them talk, and wished it was all lies, but they spoke about sending his videos to the Mizukage, he was worried, her anger is not to be trifled with he must meet her, but first he had to visit Kusagakure, the village where these bastards intend to wreak havoc.
He then became, the centipede of death, cracking his fingers with his thumb, he walked out of the building that nothing more than a blood bath now. He couldn't cage the beast, the beast raised by the filth of this world, He was angered, disgusted at what had become of him, but still slightly happy, he was now a full-fledged demon,  he  spat of the blood of his victims as he coldly walked towards his destination.

His return. . .

He returned to where he once stood; Kirigakure, the village under the rule of the Mizukage, aiming to protect her from the harm to come, although he just returned, he had to make sure she is safe.
On his way he encountered a group of bandits, they looked quite skilled, they surrounded him behind trees in an open field as he felt their gazes eat away at his skin, his cold eyes wandered from tree to tree, counting them, detecting their single breath, and in a cold burdened voice he spoke “The cycle begins now, who will be the predator  and which of us is the prey” and with an explosion of wind resulting from the extreme speed of the bandits, and the young man.
“Get wrecked”
He spoke as he dashed to each and every one of the pathetic bunch as he struck them down one by one mercilessly, an open field would witness a carnage finely crafted by the hands of young man as he wrecked the existence of all that stood in his way not a single one remained in front of, and when he walked to the last one that managed to stay alive, with fear gripping the bandits heart they trembled, and as he unveiled her face hid under her hood, her face was quite beautiful, her eyes while fearful were truly pretty, she crawled away from his touch with her eyes glued on him, he looked down at her as he dashed towards her with incredible speed using his new technique silently with nothing close to the faintest of sounds echoed from his body, as a black and red massive ball with incredible force in the hand of the young man, it was the legendary Rasengan, a technique used by the Young Uzumaki that saved the world years ago.

He smiled at the appearance of a blue color dress hiding and acquaintance he had trained with before.  She walked towards him as she patted his head and embraced him, sad for what had happened to him, and so with an ancient technique she created a blue door, as she invited him to the dimension of mind and matter, and so she invited him to the velvet room once again, and he obliged.

It was the time to surpass time, and evolve. The world of velvet was different world, it was world only accessible by those that can execute the key technique perfectly, aside from that, in this world time goes faster, one can easily age up to ten years, with nothing but ten seconds passing the mean time in the normal world, it was a world created by a technique and entered by a technique.  The young lad looked at the long nosed man as he smiled, prepared for the trials to come.
“You've gone through a lot of trials, hardships, and so forth, you've lost a lot again, was tortured, mentally and physically, but you grew stronger, you gained friends, and fought for them, but at the end of the day a question remains; are you strong enough? An easy question that has a simple easy answer, yes you are strong, but you are NOT the strongest, you could be defeated, and there are many people eager for a chance to eliminate you, or hurt you. They are waiting to steal another one of your loved ones…Margaret, Elizabeth, Theodore, destroy him… ”

Or so spoke the man as he unleashed the orders to destroy the young visitor, and so the three attacked him, and so he moved swiftly dodging a drop kick from Margaret, but she soon reacted to him falling back by raising her other leg and aiming a spinning kick towards Tsuneo's shoulder, but Tsuneo luckily managed to get a grip of her and spin throw her at Elizabeth, he sister, but Theodore was merciless, he struck both his shoulder with side chops, powerful damaging strike that threw Tsuneo off his balance, but as he jumped backwards Tsuneo aimed to strike his chin with his foot, a move the Mizukage used with him, and did it succeed? No, but it threw Theodore off, Tsuneo used this moment as he dashed towards Theodore landing a powerful punch in Theodore's abdomen, causing him to cough blood, but the two sisters did not stop, Margaret kicked Tsuneo in his right side right away but by the time she had done so, her other sister Elizabeth, swept him of his feet with a mighty sweep, Tsuneo's stance was quite solid, but the force she invested in her sweep, removed him off the ground and had him airborne until he took Margaret's kick to his side which sent him flying to the end of the room slamming the wall behind him with his back. The fight did not stop, Tsuneo quickly rose to his feet again arming himself in a stance against the three attackers, but it was time to get serious, a lightning spear pierced his biceps, but that did not stop him, not even a little, before the piercing wound became a hole he drew himself away from the spear, and ducked as a kick aimed at his face dashed through the air for its target had disappeared, but Theodore still attacked, reacting fast once again, as he casted a technique that created a pillar under Tsuneo launching him upwards while Theodore's kick dashed downwards, Tsuneo quickly rotated to the left side dodging this whole attempt as he unleashed a lightning shell, that barely did any damage but still struck them off guard, Elizabeth appeared late as usual and spat a blast of raging fires towards the young lad, but he reacted faster than what she anticipated and let his right hand do the job as raging fires disappeared into his palm leaving nothing but a thin trail of smoke emerging from  the palm of his hand. His eyes calmly observed their movement, and it was far from over, this fight was. They dashed towards again, but each one of them had Tsuneo locked in their vision, and each one of them released a blast, each blast dashed towards Tsuneo with .

A flash struck Tsuneo, as his friend appeared in a world of shining lights, but his friend, a victim of Tsuneo himself, was smiling ever so warmly, his friend would walk forward and pat Tsuneo's shoulder as he passed him.

Snapping back to reality Tsuneo drifted against the dirt with his feet as he turned to face the blast, sealing all three of them into his hand, absorbing all three of them in a flash, again nothing but a trail of smoke was left, his cold gaze stunned them as he dashed, it was his turn. Attacking the first victim, which was Theodore, handpicked by Tsuneo, for having the most effective strategies and the strongest amount of brute force, he directed a punch towards his face, but Theodore reacted faster than one would expect. Aiming to grab Tsuneo's hand Theodore was caught off guard by Tsuneo's strategy as he opened his palm and pierced Theodore's hand with a concentrated spear of lightning.

Why did he appear, his dead friend? Tsuneo killed him a long time ago, the world separated them, and they were put one on one in a death match, the arena was the battlefield, Tsuneo triumphed, and his friend was nothing more than a motionless corpse, Tsuneo regretted many he did, and many things he didn't, he regrets killing him, even now, Tsuneo was just an insane killing machine to the eyes of many, he has killed many, and now he was known as the centipede, rumors of the centipede that kills criminals, and rotten people spread wide and far.

But what was not known  about the centipede is what he thinks of himself; weak, he falls a lot in life, and that he disliked, he wanted the power to stand on top of all obstacles, he was sick of his weakness, he wanted to become strong enough to destroy everything that stands in his way, sure his fears were trivial, and almost nonexistent but they still existed, and he wanted to overcome them, he wanted to protect his loved ones, crush his enemies, and to do that he had to train, Tsuneo's life was quite eventful but the thing he did the most in his life was  training even more so than killing, he was strong but to a limit, that limit is his biggest enemy and his worst enemy, he wants the true destructive unlimited power, to gain that power, he had to abandon sanity, and the life of comfort, and for the sake of his revenge he fought, killed, suffered, and trained, and suffered more.

Tsuneo snapped back to reality and found himself standing in front of his three opponents, he glared at them with challenging eyes as he moved as fast he could, the wound he inflicted to Theodore with his lightning spear stunned him and Elizabeth who was nearby, and in that second he struck both of them as much as he could but abhorrent as it is, they were both woundless now, Margaret healed them with a clown as she  stalled for time, Tsuneo was in a tight spot for the first time in a long time.
Focus-
Tsuneo's eyes sharpened their gaze as he read the simplest twitch his opponents would make, and as he dashed forward towards the one in the middle, Theodore, he jumped as Theodore initiated a counter attack for a frontal attack, not expecting the centipede named Tsuneo to jump, Tsuneo knew the two girls would react, and so he slammed his palms together shocking everyone with a shell of electricity and a dose of surprise right before he jumps, and as he was above Theodore he spun his chakra in the form of a ball, the orb of chakra he held in his hands rotated vigorously raging and aching, begging to strike, and Tsuneo lent it the pleasure by striking Theodore's head with his Rasengan, Theodore was forced into a half bow, and with his head lowered, Tsuneo used the friction between the Rasengan and Theodore who  escaped death by a thread to jump back a centimeter on his back but right before his back touches the ground Tsuneo let his hands over his shoulders push him above and forward, between Theodore's legs , until their faces met, Tsuneo pushed himself up with his right hand and struck Theodore's face before jumping away from them but this time he waited for not even a second before running towards Margaret.

And with his eyes locked on her he avoided a punch from Theodore, by tilting to the side, and a kick from Elizabeth as he ducked, still rushing towards Margaret whom released a multitude of bullets formed by the lightning of her chakra, the young man dodged right and left above and below till he was in front of her, he immediately moved his right hand furiously and viciously towards the neck of his frightened victim, Margaret, his hand began gripping the woman's neck as he dominated her by instilling fear in her, he choked her more and more, but his enjoyment was stopped by Theodore and Elizabeth.

They rushed towards him and aimed to cut his arm but Tsuneo defended himself with black cursed chains that stopped the two from movement, or so he thought, it turns out they were mere decoys for the real two, the captured two were mere clones, the real ones however, stopped Tsuneo forcefully by aiming to truly cut his arm off, backing away from the danger that would befell his hands, he watched intently as three black chains remained at his disposal, three chains and three target. Margaret coughed as she struggled to regain her breath, these three proved to be powerful indeed, their attacks are completely synchronized like their movements are, it was as if they think and act exactly the same, as if they know exactly the next move each one of them would make, to Tsuneo they were fun, but they were trouble indeed, and he had to get rid of this trouble, how is what he asked himself, he was stuck with thinking as he realized, this battle was more about strategy and being witty rather than power.

After minutes and minutes, hours and hours of a prolonged fight between the three and the centipede, the centipede was squashed like the bug he is, he smiled as he was half dead with all the wounds on him, he glared at them as he smirked, as if asking them what's next on their schedule for him. Spitting their words  in his face they informed him of his next trial, it was a mere survival test, they would dump him in the middle of nowhere in his current state and leave him for one full month, the place where they left him was no safe haven, it was called a suicide ground, no one would easily survive in this, the act of entering this place was called a suicide, all of this intimidating talk, did not scare Tsuneo in the least, did he fear death anymore? No, death is actually a medicine to him, a medicine he would take by himself should no one give it to him, once his objective is complete.

He walked slowly, wounded, tired, dehydrated, hopeless, towards a dark cave where he rested for five days, food and water were of course necessary and so he sought food from the trees and the living animals around the jungle of death, his water supply? Trees, and the sea. He would make a mess of this jungle, creatures that approached him, while they left multiple dents on him, they were eventually slaughtered, one by one, animals, beasts, monsters, anything that came across his way was slaughtered and most eaten in most cases.

“To live is to sin, to eat is to sin, to want is to sin, we're all sinners, but what matters is not the amount of sins committed, but their weight, I can say this clearly; I don't give a damn how heavy my sin is, or how painful my punishment is, until the day I die, I'll wreck this world as I please.”

Saying these words her continued walking in this vast jungle for the fourteenth day, he would devour as he pleased, live as he pleased, get hurt, touch death's hand multiple times, and enjoyed it. He fought the beasts that roamed this island,  risked his life for mere fights, all in the hope of improving, hoping to evolve, evolve into someone more and more powerful, he had gotten sick of his weak self, and for the hundredth time, he was simply striving for a greater power, his obsession with revenge soon turned into an obsession for power,  he did not care for titles, rewards, or anything of the sort, he only cared for power, his revenge, his friends, himself, most of the things around him were reasons for his obsession, his losses, his wins, everything was a reason to strive for more power, when will satisfaction occur? The answer to that question remains unknown, all that is known, until his dying breath, his greed for power will never die out, and no not political power, or things related to the matter, but by power he meant brute fierce power, one that can demolish whatever stands in its way in the blink of an eye, obliterating all that aims to stop him, he would show no mercy for those that try to interrupt, and ruin his happiness, or hurt the people under his wing, he aims to breach the skies and aim for a higher place when it came to power, but perhaps his greed will one day be his end, his undoing. He knew nothing but the present, and right now, he wants to become stronger, to destroy everything and everyone in his way.

Ripping apart the skins of the beasts before him, dodging and countering their smart attacks, for a bunch of beasts they were quite smart and cunning, but Tsuneo was not a mere fighter with no brains, but he was a strategist before he was a fighter, he would anticipate his opponent's movements and await for the perfect moment to strike.

“Pathetic, that's what I am, in the end, no matter how isolated I am, no matter how powerful I am, I seek gentleness, kindness, and love, any type of love, and type of mercy, I am forever prone to that, I am only human, but if there's a way to kill that human within me, I would gladly do it, for my weakness is not only physically and my inadequacy is not restricted to combat, but also mentally, my heart is weak for any type of compassion, I truly despise that fact.”

Having said so the lone spirit glared at his reflection on the water as the sun sunk in the horizon and the wind blew, in this vast jungle he held in his hand what he had found, his favorite; a spider lily, he sniffed the scent surrounding it as he enjoyed its beautiful appearance, walking slightly to the sea from the shore where he sat after gazing at his reflection, he placed it as he left it to float its way to the unknown, he smiled at the moon as he enjoyed a beautiful night under the starry sky, under the inspiring glittering full moon on the shore of gold, as the sound of waves hummed its way to his ears like a sweet melody.

He wanted to enjoy the calmness of the sea, and so he left himself to float on the calm sea, under the shining moon, such a relaxing night, not forgetting the relaxing breeze caressing whatever was exposed to it, he smiles and smiles, this beautiful night was far better than any medic in his opinion, it heals him more than one, the aches of the heart are never healed with any type of medicine, healing technique, or magic. He needed no physical healing or medicines, what he needed was a soothing time for his aching heart, for almost a second, a thought of forgetting war, bloodshed, and all of the fighting, and begin a new life, but that's not his world, he was already a part of the cycle of violence, he could never go back, no matter how much he may want to, from the day he was born, his fate was to remain in the struggle of power, it was his fate to struggle and suffer, but it was up to him, whether to give up, or continue fighting, it was always up to him, and so far, he never thought of giving up, he always pushed ahead, not knowing what awaited him, or what he truly desires of this world, but he knew one thing, that he exists, and he does for a reason, and that reason will be fulfilled no matter what, or so he spoke in his mind.

The eighteenth day

He awoke on the shore as he rushed to a scream he had heard, all to find a woman that appeared similar to his mother being attacked by a ferocious beast, he rushed to the beast, and attacked it with all his might, not showing mercy, he would rip it apart with his hands, bit its skin off with his teeth and glare down at it to death, terrified from the sight the woman who had a striking resemblance to his mother, she was held aghast from the brutality of the boy that bathed in the blood of the creature that attacked her, and before long she rushed to him as she bit a chunk of his leg's flesh, he would push off him and hold her by the shoulders only to see a wrinkled face with black holes for eyes and a blood soaked hole for a mouth, flies raged away from her mouth pushing Tsuneo away at a surprise.

What was this? That was all he could ask himself, and the answer is nowhere to be found, he was sure he was under no illusion crafted by the crafty hands of man and beast, what was this? He would return to his cave wondering about the disturbing scene that had unfolded before him, it was disturbing, truly disturbing, he liked nothing about it and tried to solve it, but before he thinking for a minute he found himself sinking in a sea of corpses, arms pulled him to the unknown below, and he himself felt powerless, he was bewildered by the scenes unfolding before him, panicking calmly he struggled to escape but before long the scene faded into nothingness before long. He was back at his cave, his hands on his head, his eyes wide open, shocked and bewildered by what's happening, and that's when he remembered, illusions are a tricky spider web indeed but hallucinations were also a dirty card up the jungle's sleeve it seems, perhaps he ate something, or enjoyed the scent of something, whatever it was, it was messing with his head, the abhorrent scenes were, he had to carry himself somewhere he wouldn't be discovered by the beasts, in this state, a fight with those overpowered beings is the essence of stupidity.

He then found himself puking blood, like a waterfall he puked blood till he drowned in it, his limbs detached from his body as if melting his stomach was ripped open as he sunk in the blood he puked, he would continue puking blood, his ripped open stomach would let his insides dangle out of him, his four limbs melted as he heard screams of madness, his teeth would fall as his hair fell, his eyes would burn him like no tomorrow his heart would fall through his chest beating in the ocean of blood he puked, shocked aghast by the insanity he screamed aghast by this scenery unfolding around him, only to find himself unharmed and untouched, he was just sitting there at the very end of the cottage, nothing had happened, he checked his body, and he was anything but harmed, he realized then, it was all a hallucination.

His weary eyes darted calmly all over the place, to calm his sick mind, and the suffering continued; even more horrid scenes tortured him alive, he smiled as he sunk in another world of gore, the suffering continued. Days went past, the boy couldn't eat, and breathing was a task itself. The boy hummed a tone to calm his weary mind, and at the end of the third day, he was dehydrated, hungry, sad, and most of all he was no longer fazed by anything, he was a walking tragedy. He walked to the sea, left himself to sink beside the shore, drinking all that he could, and before long he got up as water was splashed from his sudden stand.

He  slept peacefully for a whole day, and awoke the next , restarted his training.

The twenty-eighth day.

His power improved quite drastically, he is now much stronger, much calmer, much more disciplined, he calmly takes on his enemies, calmly dispatches them, and calmly returns to his new house, a cottage he had built instead of the cave he's been living in. Scares covered the boy's body, a calm wind blew caressing those scars. He accepted himself, his past, and his future, his acts, his sins, his crimes, and most of all, his present. He was no one different, but he was without a doubt better, his parents' death, his master's disappearance, his friends' deaths and disappearances, he accepted them all, kindly, with a smile, accepting each tragedy he lived through, accepting war, accepting the world and his fate whatever it may be, he embraced all that he had and all that he lost, all truths and all lies, he accepted who he is.

The world is not ugly or beautiful it is what it is, I…. Don't know what's to come, nor do I know what is it that I strive for, but I know one thing, there are people that count on me, people that gave their lives up for me, I would like to avoid betraying their trusts and sacrifices.

A monster appeared before him, it was raging and aching for destruction, Tsuneo welcomed it with open arms: “You want war?  I'll give you war” were his few words that he spat in the face of a raging humongous beast standing on thirty meters, Tsuneo was not about to let the beast have its way with him, and so two monsters prepared for war.

Flaming eyes, raging auras, thirst for victory, were all things these two monsters held in common, they were both raging beasts, one was in human form, and the other was in its original form, their energies surged all over the place for a second as they both stared down the other, aiming to demolish the other, as they started staring down at each other, they rushed towards one another as they were mere meters away from one another, the beast threw a raging punch towards Tsuneo aiming to crush him, Tsuneo responded by jumping and running on its arm in incredible speed,  and right before  Tsuneo reaches the monster's head, Tsuneo was interrupted by the monster's left hand as it aimed another punch towards the lad, but in that second the fist thrown by the left arm struck a nearby tree creating a faint small smokescreen, but by the time it dissolved the young lad was gone, nowhere to be found, he had disappeared like a shadow, and from the shadows he arose, surprising the big fool and destroying one of its eyes before standing in front of it again, while he was merely in the size of an insect compared to the big thirty meters tall monster, still he looked down at it, he was not about to be defeated by this big weakling.

The beast raged and with its rage it threw its punches rapidly and ever so angrily, but Tsuneo ignored that rage as a mere breeze, Tsuneo pierced thousands of blades of fear from his mere glare, he disappeared with the speed of his own towards the destructive beast and reappeared in its face, smirking Tsuneo rushed away and on top of its hand he stood, with his hand covering his mouth he leant his upper body backwards as he stood on it, breathing in the enormous amount of flames before unleashing it to destroy his whole hand, and his whole hand he destroyed, nothing but ashes were left, the beast panicked from the enormous amount of pain Tsuneo had just inflicted, but still there was more to that attack than just blowing an arm to ashes, he used the blast of flames to incinerate the monster's arm and to blow himself away till he was in front of its face once again, and as soon as he was, he slowly rotated his body and in that same movement his he aimed with his open palm as he stretched his arm to face the remaining eye, and surged his chakra into his open palm creating a devastating spear of lightning that not only paralyzed the big weakling but removed his remaining eye for good, now the monster was both blind and one handed, and Tsuneo stood as he stood before the fight, unscathed.

The monster's screams raged throughout the island, and the young lad cared not, for he was now a nightmare for the monsters, and giants living on this island, The lad walked slowly until  he was a meter away from the raging blind beast, his right hand would glow in darkness as something similar to black smoke circle around it, Tsuneo clenched  his fist only for a cursed black chain to appear  from nothingness swinging his arm towards the beast's head he opened his palm as it faced the monster's head, letting a cursed chain rage towards its head, and before long the cursed chain merely pierced into its unsightly head, and as it ran deep inside the black chain was let go by Tsuneo, and before even a second passes, thousands of chains erupted from with that chain, the chains would rage all over its head a ripping it to smithereens, nothing was left of its head the terrifying chains raged all over the place in its place as they radiated the essence of darkness throughout the island, he bathed in the beast's blood before letting go, it was far too easy, for the evolved Tsuneo, the lad would wash his body up, thinking back that was no fight, but if anything, that was a one sided mayhem, with that being said, the lad left to search for more beasts to crush, perhaps one might be worth it.

2Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Fri May 01, 2015 12:01 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
Nothing unpleasant appeared in these past two few days appeared, Tsuneo named and listed each plant, and each animal, and each beast type he faced, how they fight, and how they react, and normally act under different circumstances. It was all crucial information he needed, he also couldn't ignore his curious side so he jotted down whatever info he gathered on his way, in these past days, he would enjoy doing so too, he also carved words about his feelings, each single emotion he felt, and each scene carved in his memory, his stay was a rather joyful one, horrific, and empowering, but it's time he left this place and back to the place he should be at now, his eyes were sharper, his endurance was greater, but not enough yet, it was about time he evolved even further, about time he became much more stronger. He smiled as he left the island walking towards a velvet door, existing the island, and into the velvet room. 

Greeted by the same figures he was, uninjured is what surprised them, yes, time and knowledge healed his wounds, effectively too, he used his knowledge of his surroundings, used himself as lab rat and tested all sorts of things, however one thing was left away, his notebook, this world was only a gap in space opened by a special technique, it can only be used by that person in certain times, as if it has its own conscious, it opens automatically whenever it pleases, no one, or anything can control it, it is trapped in the form of a blue key, as it opens the world of illusion that manipulates the ultimate reality, no one controls it, no one can use, it chooses when to appear, and nothing of items or trophies or scenes can come out of this world or room except the power and knowledge gained, nothing aside, however it will be forever carved in the mind of the guest.  What use does knowledge in this world hold? All beings, from plants and insects to deadly beasts, all is a copy from the real world, physical and mental training done in this world is carried on, one can call this world, the ultimate training space, and while years pass here, days only pass in the primary world, or the real world.

His eyes were locked at the four figures as he asked what the cause of their bewildered gazes was, and  he was given a flat out answer, he seemed 'stronger', he thanked them for the compliment, and spoke; “but was that not the point?” they replied answering a fulfilling and an enjoyable answer: “Grow stronger yes, but you seem to have conquered the area in all honesty, our expectations you have exceeded.”

Such pleasant words, indeed to him they were pleasant, but to him, his current state was nothing enough to cause him satisfaction, and until he feels that satisfaction his training will not end, or so his answer was. He then asked them to open the next door towards his next location, he would hope that a tedious task awaits him, he hoped for a tougher world, a world to make him suffer even more, a world to strengthen him more, a world to show him nightmares unspoken of, it all strengthened him mentally, and any type of power he could gather, he would.
 
He entered the new world that he would train in the next thirty days in , and was astonished by what he had seen as he stood in front of a door that disappeared as soon as he set foot in this new dimension. It was a place he always wanted to visit again, but not in this shape, and not in this way, as he looked around him, in the place he never thought he would be in again his blood boiled, a mere illusion, true, but despite that fact his rage blazed through his eyes. He calmed himself down, and looked around him as his eyes locked on the boy crying on top of the corpses of what seemed to be his parents, saddened he walked towards the boy as he stopped at the sight of a shadow that frightened the boy, the poor boy looked back to see what covered him in its darkness, and rushed away from it running until he began crawling from having his leg cut off by a bladed metal tentacle, and before long the crying boy was pierced in the heart, Tsuneo tried to rush towards the boy but failed, his speed was not competent enough, he was overcome in terms of speed, he held the boy's corpse as he glared towards the humongous puppet of twenty meters, glaring with his deadly instinct in the cold blooded machine before him, he spoke “You better be ready, cause shit's about to go down, and the bigger they are, the harder they fall” Blasting of towards the machine, Tsuneo darted all over the place, the machines red orb followed him effectively, and as he dashed towards it, waving its multiple bladed tentacles it tried to eliminate him, however, the centipede dodged effectively and rushed towards it, until he was in its face; “You're evil” he spoke in a darkened harsh tone, as he threw his palm towards it, as a ball of raging chakra destroyed its eye, the Rasengan struck again , and successfully too, Tsuneo unleashed his second form of his deadly chains,  unleashing ten black cursed chains, he spoke “Erase All”, the chains raged throughout the area as they erased everything around Tsuneo, piercing through everything around Tsuneo, destroying everything, the machine before him was nothing but shreds of metal, a red glow raged throughout the village he was in, it seemed to have alarmed the surrounding forces, multiple  similar humongous puppets appeared, Tsuneo braced himself for a raging rough battle as he armed himself in a stance, he was ready. Interrupting his concentration a man appeared out of nowhere, paralyzing Tsuneo with a dastardly lightning technique, he then grabbed Tsuneo over the shoulder, and rushed away with him. Moments passed and Tsuneo regained his control of his body, pushing away the stranger with a chakra burst he asked him: “Where do you think you're taking me?!” or so Tsuneo questioned the stranger spoke:  “we've not much time, my name is Hiruzen, and I'm taking you to our hideout it's where we all remain, and hide, and rest after fighting these bastards, look at you you're so engaged you never noticed the wounds it inflicted on you”, Tsuneo's eyes widened as he finally felt his multiple wounds, from scratches to large cuts and small pierces.

Tsuneo rushed alongside the stranger , and when he arrived he was surrounded by children, a couple gathered around the two as Hiruzen spoke to them gently, and a couple of men trained away, and other children were playing, some were crying, and few were studying. Tsuneo calmly asked for an explanation, wondering what happened to Konoha, his beloved village, and an answer he was given.

Hiruzen: “Three years ago, an army of puppets invaded us, it destroyed houses, killed people, killed animals, killed trees and destroyed anything in their way, we were overwhelmed by their numbers and their power, we eventually retreated to an underground hideout we created in order to survive, and sleep comfortably. We trained and fought, and above us our leader…. Our Kage fought to his death, there was nothing we could do, all we could do was watch, we continued a normal slightly more peaceful life under the ground we once stood on, we train, eat, sleep, cry, fear, hope, and despair here, and we fight above, slowly, but whatever our actions are, we must not give up, we are the resistance, our goal is ending this destruction, the other villages sent in help, but all was demolished, and nothing was left, you've taken one down splendidly, will you please join us, we will train you to become stronger, as you are now, only three or four more would be your limit, please help us fight them, you'll be a great addition?”

“I agree” were the words he spoke minutes before he started walking towards the horrific training room that he had asked for, a training room for their strongest and fiercest. And there he began his new life and training for a month, he would end their despair, that he promised secretly to himself as he barely showed much emotions around anyone, he was silent calm and awkward, his smiles were there but still existed, his eyes spoke of his sadness, and his figure spoke of his power, and of his growth, he would begin training and always train until he had fainted,  he was his usual self, hardworking, calm and collected, raging in the battlefield, hardworking, a genius, and an honest, and loving man, but all that he was described as was: emotionless, and that is what he showed, he was intense, powerful, calm, and in the eyes of other; a superior existence.

Fifth day-

Tsuneo's fights are daily, as his wounds are; a new wound would pop up before the other fades. His training was far more harsh when compared, his first training, was perception, a helmet that produces lightning to shock the wearer, whenever a mistake occurs in the registered subject, Tsuneo had to follow raging kunai all darting all around him with his eyes, should he lose one, he would be shocked with a painful form lightning, he would also have to trace the rest while being shocked without losing trail of a single one unless he wants to prolong the torture. His physical training  required doing pushups, under him, needles ready to pierce through him, and above him rocks to push him down to his doom, needles differed in length, just so that he could feel a little pain, making his training enjoyable.

The one thousand cuts is an execution method, perhaps also a training method? Multiple cuts were caused to Tsuneo, and he had had to endure, his screams could have reached skies or so one can say, he had the obligation to remain silent otherwise machines would invade the hideout, and murder a lot of people, innocent people. He was tasked with carrying large blocks of rock, large as in twenty meters in height, and so forth, he was tasked with many, many tedious tasks, and he had to hold on and carry through, he did his best and even more, trained till he fainted, and trained till he was begged to stop, another training machine is the hawk's eye, he must learn to evade all strike from something similar to a baseball ball shooter, only difference is it shot rocks, Tsuneo had to dodge them, destroy them, and reach the machine clicking the stop button, it was only forty meters away from him and the closer he was the faster the rocks were, as if they weren't fast enough from forty meters, he had to deal with some of them that were enhanced with chakra making them more and more deadly, this one was Tsuneo's favorite even though he had to deal with daily broken bones and deadly wounds, whenever he was capable of fighting he fought, he had to perceive his surroundings, calculate carefully, move fast, and react even faster, he was healed by woman named Mei, she had superior healing techniques, and even more superior combat abilities.
Tsuneo's whole body was full of scars, but in the end he enjoyed the site of each scar, it was proof he's growing stronger, and so he sought out more from the dead room, or the humongous room built underground to train humans to become human weapons, he fought and enjoyed, he trained more and enjoyed himself more, he was fully engaged in fighting and combat, and enjoyed every wound inflicted on him, whoever saw the expression on his face was terrified, an undying unwavering deadly smirk and a blazing crimson red eye surrounded by the darkness in his hear, and a normal silver eye glaring forward towards power, they all knew one thing for sure, he would become a killing machine, that fact is not as far as one would think. 

Thirteenth day

It was time to go puppet hunting, and this time he's the leader of his squad, they've been tasked with eliminating a small but deadly puppet that's been kidnapping soldiers from the resistance, and their job is to rescue the soldiers and to destroy  the puppet, the lad  rushed alongside his comrades, the puppet began shooting chakra enhanced bullets, coming into contact with just one would leave the victim in a world of hurt,  similar to the rocks training only difference is if one of these bullets come into contact with the victim, at least half of their body is blow away, they had to be extremely careful, as Tsuneo was thinking of a strategy, two of his squad bumped into one another, a bullet caught the two, and they were both eliminated in a flash, the rest of Tsuneo's squad struggled to keep up the pace as fear gripped their hearts as if it was poison seeping into their veins.

Tsuneo's eyes widened as the scene unfolded before him, and that acted as the torch to light the flames of his rage, and that is what truly occurred, his fierce gaze now fixated on the puppet he ran towards the puppet even faster, and before long he was under the ten meters puppet, he struck its leg with a taste of his Rasengan letting it stumble and fall to its knees, and with that Tsuneo destroyed its balance, and with that his team advanced towards the destructive puppet, attacking every bit of it, attacking every inch of it, they demolished the pathetic toy. 

Smiling slightly they brought out the prisoners, hugging them, embracing them, they were relieved of their worries, they were reunited once again with their loved ones, and with their loved ones they all die. Multiple puppets hailed from the middle of nowhere, Tsuneo's eyes widened, shocked again from the sceneries that keep unfolding before him, ten puppets, different types of weapons and different sizes. He yelled retreat as he stood to face the calamities, and as his comrades were taken out one by one, he attacked forcing all attention on himself, letting one comrade of his escape, he darted around the place till he was struck down and in front of them, he armed himself in the stance he would crush these robotic toys with. He stood before ten fierce puppets of destruction as he took on last breath, it truly his last, his eyes glittered amidst the raging fires as he rushed forward, not looking back jumping into the horde of killer puppets, ready for his last battle, or so he thought it would be, he attacked, dodged, perceived his surroundings, waited, and rushed, and attacked again, the fight continued, he attacked with all he's got, with all of his jutsu, with every ounce of strength in his body, throught the battlefield he raged, through metal he tore, with flaming eyes.

The remaining comrade of Tsuneo rushed in fear, and sadness, crying on her way back to the hideout, she had lost many of her comrades in one night, and her leader, Tsuneo, the person who's been nothing but kind to her, Naomi cried her eyes for her comrades, and as she arrived with her head down, she spoke silently “The entire ninth squad including the captain, was eliminated, except for… One…. Survivor…Na… Naomi… Ku…. Kurosora” 

She reached the hideout and on the fifteenth day

Hiruzen bit his lip as he learned of the shocking truth, speechless he was, they had lost Tsuneo, and lost many other capable fight, all thanks to an ambush prepared by cold blooded machines, his anger and sadness forced him into despair, but he remembered words Tsuneo's words before departing on his last mission, he spoke with an emotionless expression that faded into a quick and a faint smile “Never give up on hope….”

Meanwhile Tsuneo was sinking in his own blood and the oil of destroyed machines, as he continued to rip and tear every piece of metal out of these killing machines, using his surroundings was also smart thinking from him, he as swiftly as one could, dashed through the battlefield, and as tentacles bullets, and spikes were launched towards him, he evaded, dodged and blocked, tilted his body, move gracefully and flexibly yet solidly, and angrily, Tsuneo moved through the battlefield like a demon, raging towards his last breath, Tsuneo began feeling his life force fade as blades pierced through him, he fell down as his consciousness began to fade, all light escaped his irises, and he was left there to die.

Hiruzen spoke with confidence: “although his time was short, he taught me to never give up, and I won't give up on him, he must be alive, fighting for our sake, Tsuneo wore the mask of emotionlessness, but deep inside he held more emotions than us all, I am not asking you guys to accompany me, but we've all felt his kindness even if just a little, and with that I'm telling you I am going to get that idiot back.” The young leader of the resistance left through the door not expecting many to follow him on this dangerous path, but many did, and with a tear in his eye he rushed towards the tragedy.

Tsuneo began speaking to himself calming himself and thinking back on his mistakes: “Will this be the end of me? After all I've been through, I lose? Am I really going to accept that? It's not like I can do anything, I can't feel my body anymore, I have no power, nothing left, sorry master, sorry big brother, sorry mom, dad, sis, I.. I…”

Are you seriously stopping now?
Ah c'mon is that all you've got
I'm here for you its okay you can stop crying
We've both grasped the hand of death now, I survived, you?
I'll teach you how to stand up no matter how many times you get knocked down

“Tsuneo… We both desire and we both have our ways in getting things, you call me the darkness in you but you never reject me, you just keep me at bay, imprison me, but for now what do you say we unite our powers, we're both two faces of the same coin are we not?”
“Fine then let's do this…” spoke the bleeding Tsuneo to his darkness, to his hidden other personality, the brutal dark persona forged from the pains and sadness of this world, it was despair fusing with hope, Tsuneo arose to his feet as his chakra ravaged through the fires of a burned village, Tsuneo raged through the battlefield, once again, Tsuneo would move faster his eyes were sharper as were his move, decisive he was, and brought upon the destruction of these mindless machines.

A tentacle threw itself towards Tsuneo whom bent his upper body to the back bending his knees, and before long he spun  in the same position underneath the first tentacle and above a second one that came aiming  towards his legs, while midair  three bullets came rushing towards him, Tsuneo took hold of the tentacles and had them collide with the bullets, dodging the third bullet he rushed towards the bullet shooter, rode on its head and threw raging punches towards it, destroying its eyes, the machine kept rotating its head and shooting off its bullets crazily until it had emptied itself out, the rest of the machines were in a pitiful state, shuriken were thrown at him fused with chakra, Tsuneo swiftly moved on his two feet and slid towards the one shooting them destroyed its legs with his lightning spear and  left it to fall down as the spear ran up its body before disappearing, another one attacked this time with its multiple hands, it threw two punches towards Tsuneo, the young man replied by sidestepping with fierce speed from the left fist and jumping when the right fist was launched at him, the other two open palms came rushing towards him as he was stuck midair, this time pure white chains unleashed themselves and chained up the large machine run by chakra, in that same moment Tsuneo ran up to it head and jumped from there till he was above it and falling towards it, and before a second passes while he's stuck up there he withdrew his chains and unleashed raging flames towards the robotic monster, he then rushed to the rest, surging through towards the end.

After hours and hours, the group led by Hiruzen would stumble upon the horrific sight, it was inhuman, the sight they had seen, they were all shocked to the core, this destruction, they were all held aghast by the scenery before them. 

Tsuneo spoke to himself: “We really went all out this time, been a while eh? I guess this is it for us…” Tsuneo was a part of the horrific scenery, his arms were stretched as he held a giant puppet that was falling, to save a little kid, but what was truly horrific was the destruction he brought upon over twenty puppets all by himself, they all rushed to the man bathed in his own blood from how much he bled, his blood was splattered all over the place as did raging fires.

Hiruzen cried as he thanked the man for protecting them, and left the scolding till after he was healed, for three more days Tsuneo was left in the eyes of six healing professionals, he was being healed and healed again with all sorts of healing techniques, and multiple people donated blood to the boy, he was nicknamed, chaos hero, by the whole resistance. Tsuneo awoke after a week and rushed to his training even though his body was still fragile, he still rushed to the training facilities, the others tried to stop him, but their action were all but futile as were their words. Hours before he left for training he was scolded by Hiruzen for trying to sacrifice himself, not only that, Mei couldn't help but get a few licks in. He continued training after getting scold, and astounished everyone with his newfound powers, fighting for four days truly did help him, and so he continued his life, but he was not allowed to exceed his limits or go outside.

The twentieth day

Tsuneo had been fighting since day one, and he wasn't going to stop now, the fights continued, Tsuneo was an official member of the elite squad, he was a weakling compared to them even after what he did, the six elites trained him, and their leader Hiruzen also, they all supported the boy and fought alongside him, trained him and helped him even more. Their fights were endless; their missions were daily, from retrieval to elimination , together they moved swiftly, and ended their fights victoriously, they raged across a burned down konoha hoping to restore it to its glory, but why  was he  so eager to help them, Tsuneo was thrown away and used as a sacrificial lamb,  he was nothing but another pawn, and now this mere pawn has grown into a deadly killing machine, but despite all of that, he still is helping konoha, why was he doing so? He couldn't stand the sight of his beloved burn away, the flames of war in this village were never sleeping, non-stop destruction, the whole village was engulfed in flames, the sounds of screams and cries, they fought endlessly, but their fights were only getting stronger, never seeing an end to this ugly madness, many of them died, in front of their eyes, in the most gruesome ways, captured comrades were executed in an even more gruesome fashion, a much more painful way, and all they could do was watch as their beloved comrades screamed in agony, returning from a depressive mission, they all sat around  the table were they placed their food and ate together on a daily  basis, today was a silent day, sadness roamed around the soldiers as their gazes were fixated on the ground beneath them, they all sat silently as Hiruzen cried over the death of his beloved lover.

They still fought, Hiruzen remained  in his room, He  remained there for days, the group began to worry about him, Tsuneo knocked on the man's door, but heard a mere short reply, “Leave me alone, I'm fine.” The same reply was give each time they knocked on his door, the group let him be, and they silently fought under the depression caused by the loss of their second leader, Hiruzen's lover, the woman named Nazuna.

Mei was trying to cheer up the young lad Tsuneo, she moved in and hugged him from behind as he gazed at his reflection in the water, in that moment she spoke to him: “I hate you, and I don't know when is my turn, so please stop being sad, I hate you when you torture me with your sadness, can you smile… Please?” Tsuneo turned towards the older lady as he looked into her eyes, he felt a current pulling him in, and as he leant, they kissed, they ended their kiss with a confession of love, as they shared shy laughs, and together they remained for a while, they shared in laughs, cries, fights until it was time for this happiness to fade

Twenty sixth day.

They finally broke the door down, and what was there? A set up voice recorder, and a hanged Hiruzen, He had committed the unthinkable, suicide, he took his own life, such idiots they were to think it was okay for someone to remain in their room like that, but his voice comforted them, they all wept as they reverted to their depressed selves, they lose their leader, their beloved older brother. They all cried, they all wept, and they all chose the new leader, Tsuneo, the emotionless kind ghost, and with their new leader they fought, however, their new leader was a lone wolf now that a close friend of him had died, and now that he worries for his love, and as he patrolled the burning streets of konoha, this time with his team, a puppet approached, and on top of it was, his beloved, Mei.
The thirtieth day
 He asked, she answered, and she was the master puppeteer, the one that brought upon the destruction that is currently occurring, she yelled in anger, why was his face still so emotionless, and so he spoke his final words to this pretentious hypocrite:

“Such stupidity, you think I'd fall in love with an illusion?” His words bewildered her but still, he continued “You're too bad as an actress, fool your friends before your enemies, I was using you as a mere toy to have fun with, the sadness in my eyes you know nothing of it, you wrench, you seriously thought you could trick me? Well too bad, I fooled you. I had seen through you ever since I laid eyes on you, you're too transparent, and you're too filthy.” He paused for a second as she screamed with bloodshot eyes, her anger. He spat to his left side “I can't believe that I had to kiss you, disgusting. Or am I wrong? Hiruzen?” Her eyes opened widely as the man who's supposed to be dead stood next to Tsuneo, to his right side, stood Hiruzen who smirked mockingly at the whore standing on top of her toy “YOU IINSOLEN-!” Her eyes remained wide open as her skin grew older,  and her jaw dropped in shock, before she even continues her words.

“Get Wrecked n' Drop Dead” He spoke to her as his cursed chain pierced through her throat, and demolished her body in the next second, they rushed as her toys went berserk, Hiruzen by Tsuneo's side, and their comrades behind them following them, till they left the village and through the front door, Tsuneo pushed down his thumb as he watched the village disappear into smithereens, he patrolled Konoha's burning streets alone only to plant these explosives, a part of it was because he truly was a lone wolf, and that is why he did things alone, as for Hiruzen's death and burial, they handled it well, and it was all planned by Tsuneo, they shook their hands together and collided their fists together as they said goodbye, behind Hiruzen the kids and people they evacuated secretly, and in front of Tsuneo was the velvet door, he left them to rebuild Konoha, and returned to the room, even stronger than he was before.
He was no longer the weakling he was, his power blazed through his eyes, he spoke calmly “Let's get started, I'll break you” He cracked his fingers as he smiled slightly gazing at the three that stood to face them as their master sat in his usual spot, they felt the difference in power immediately, Tsuneo keeps growing stronger, and the stronger he is, the faster he is out of this dimension.

The darkness within him spoke “Tsuneo let us…” Tsuneo nodded as he agreed to his darkness “Break them” He bursting towards them he came rushing the three were devastated with his speed, Margaret threw a lightning enhanced kick  towards his head, and Theodore threw a kick underneath Margaret's, Tsuneo did indeed duck but he expected such next move,  Tsuneo perceived Theodore's movements closely and sharply, and right before Theodore's kick strikes him, Tsuneo moved his hand underneath his attackers leg and lifted it up in a second flat re-directing it towards Margaret's leg as it remained in the flat second above Tsuneo's head, their kicks collided while Tsuneo remained ducking on the ground Margaret's leg broke, or it should, at least that's what the sound implied to Tsuneo, as for Theodore, apparent third degrees appeared on his leg, Tsuneo took hold of both of their legs and threw each  one to a side, Elizabeth's hands emerged from underground and took hold of his legs, Theodore still rushed towards Tsuneo aiming to destroy him  aiming a punch at Tsuneo's back, Tsuneo used Elizabeth as a shield by placing his palms on the ground,  and pushing his lower body upwards, lifting her from underground and placing her exactly in the aim of Theodore strike, and before long his strike collided with her back, shocking her eyes wide open, disabling her movements, and as the three of them were nearby he released his chains on the three of them, and began by 'breaking' Theodore as he struck him destructively with each blow a mortifying sound roared across the room, dropping Theodore to the ground he noticed, the two girls had escaped, where to? That was the question. Tsuneo closed his eyes calmly, as he perceived his surrounding using his sharp ears, underneath his eyelids his eyes moved towards the sounds he realized in his current state, before long Tsuneo confirmed their location. He rushed like lightning towards them as they armed their selves in stances, fully healed, to make this more amusing hopefully. He rushed towards them with his fist ready to strike, Theodore style, they moved in confusing steps aiming to disrupt his aim, and attention, but rushed towards him in the same manner, Elizabeth struck the ground turning it into mud as Margaret charged her hand with lightning ready to strike down Tsuneo, and strike him she did, but disappoint her, he did. Her strike splattered no blood, but the disappearance of a clone as Tsuneo appeared above her releasing ten chains and piercing her body all over, in a rush of anger Elizabeth came towards the young lad that pierced her the same way her sister had been pierced. With ten holes in the two sisters, and the younger brother with shattered bones all over, Tsuneo stood gloriously, but still there was more. A light came down towards the three, and their bodies dissipated into the nothingness of light, Tsuneo worried over the three, chased the light with his eyes, and looked back at their master questioning him with his gaze, the long nosed man merely gazed back at him a gaze that spoke few words “Wait and you'll see.” Tsuneo turned his gaze towards the three pieces of light as they merged together colliding with one another the light slowly shaped itself in the form of a human, as colors were slowly bled into it, Tsuneo armed himself in a stance as an attractive muscular woman stood before him in her blue outfit, she rushed with such speed throwing her raging punch towards the young lad, he moved his head to the right as her punch shattered the wall he had stood in front of, her gaze was sharp indeed, but never the less Tsuneo smirked mockingly in her face, as she threw her second punch with her left arm, he slipped from between her legs as he slid down, on his way he took hold of her legs from her ankles and slammed her into a large part of what was remaining of the wall, he would rush towards her aiming to strike her with a punch as she was planted into the remaining piece of wall, but she replied with a destructive kick that threw Tsuneo away but Tsuneo took the fracture for a price, he struck leg at the same time with a raging Rasengan, she still never let up, she rushed towards him took hold of his wrist and slammed him to the ground with a mocking smirk, Tsuneo would smirk back at her enjoying the fight as he hugged her after planting her fist in his abdomen, with blood dripping from his lips he spoke: “Break” as he bit off the skin of her shoulder, in that same moment as she moaned in pain he took hold of her head and struck it with his knee, stumbling back the woman glared at Tsuneo for a flat moment  before he threw a kick towards her head, however, she swiftly took hold of his leg from the ankle, but that she had already lost, had she forgotten or not expected it, that will never be known, Tsuneo's chains were still out, he retracted one of his chains and struck her head as he had the chain emerge from his foot, but even though he struck her and pierced through her head, she got up and attacked the young man, with lightning tigers as they came rushing towards him, Tsuneo used his favorite technique to swallow the two into the abyss of nothingness, rotating in his positing her threw his five Uzumaki chakra chains as they rushed towards her, she  moved swiftly dodging them efficiently, but before long Tsuneo rushed towards her as she dodged the chains, he attacked with his punches and kicks, she would crush the one leg's bones with her elbow Tsuneo quickly retracted it to his side, as his chains raged with him binding her down in front of him, her strikes were deadly, but Tsuneo escaped their blunt power with his tactics, he would move away in whatever way he could to lessen the impact, her focused attacks were capable of destroying walls, but they were slow, which made it easier for him to follow and react, Tsuneo moved towards the bound woman as he placed his hands on her head and twisted it one hundred and eighty degrees, leading her to her death.

They returned to their original forms, the master acknowledged Tsuneo's growth, Tsuneo proved himself as the superior one, he triumphed, the master clapped slowly, as he walked towards the lad and handed him the exit key, Tsuneo accepted, and bid his farewells, as they smiled away their goodbyes, will they ever meet again? Unknown is that question's answer. Tsuneo left, and as he left, he created his Immortality, how? That will forever remain a secret.

3Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Sun May 03, 2015 3:06 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
As he stepped back into the world of truth, the world he was born in he smiled saying: “It's good to be back.”His tone was a gentle one coupled with the tragedies he's survived and the calmness of his chaotic yet peaceful soul. He took his first step as the evolved version, he looked around as he saw the same idiotic bunch trying to capture him and deliver him, as the centipede, as the centipede, he's quite the venomous fighter with a venomous bounty, he smirked at them as he sharpened his gaze at the foolish bunch, he would close his eyes, and open them as bodies rained from the sky, ten men approached and ten men were sent to hell or heaven, either way it never mattered  to the young lad, his chains dangled around the area, the cursed enchanting feeling bewitched all that stood to behold the scenery, Tsuneo bathed in the glory of the moment, but he had things to do, he continued walking towards his next destination he had to clean up Kirigakure from the scum that lived in peace with his disappearance. 



She loved him, a man with great power, a man of wealth, however, that man loved imperfection, he would fall in love with any woman with significant imperfections, but one-night stands is all he wanted, aside from his abhorrent fetish, he was gentle, kind, and caring.
He was the first one to notice her, a mere frail lady. the man took hold of her before she fell, it seemed her wooden leg had failed her. He passionately gazed into her eyes, took her to his castle, gave her food, money and pieces of cloth fit for queens.
He rested on her lap under the shadow of a beautiful tree, she caressed his golden hair while blushing as her eyes met his blue orbs. He smiled as he touched her cheek gently. . . .
Night came, it was him, and her, in bed. hours passed, the sun rose, her eyes opened as she awoke from her sleep, shocked from what she opened her eyes to, it was her old cottage, a crumbling wooden cottage, which she called home.
She rushed outside as she heard the steps of a mighty horse, and on top of that horse she found, the man that had stolen her heart, she rushed to him and called out to him, but his guards pushed her aside, and even he the one she loved ignored her, and looked down at her, as if she was some filthy bug.
shocked she sat on a wooden chair in her cottage, her neighbor spoke to her, and told her of him, he loved women with defects for one night, the next day they're nothing to him.
She cried and cried, but her neighbor still sat next to her, and calmed her down as he spoke to her gently, trying so hard to get her to notice him romantically... He loved her.
The devil's whispers bewitched her, perhaps if she loses another limb, he would notice her once again, so she cut off her left hand, and waited till the wound closed, and appeared in front of him once again after a couple of weeks, but still he ignored her-


Three men armed with high ranked weapons appeared in front of Tsuneo, they asked him if he was the centipede, he replied to them in a brutal voice only a mad man could conjure “What if I were the centipede, what would you do?”, they replied: “Kill you-” before the man continues his little fragile weak words, he was pierced in the heart, alongside his pathetic excuse for bandits. They shouldn't interrupt Tsuneo while he's reading such an interesting book or so it was in his opinion.


 13k words

Endurance and perception---->A3

4Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Fri May 08, 2015 4:15 pm

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
After running into the doragonseji clan and receiving the art of senjutsu, Toshiko left for the village of kirigakure after being given a week to train himself by the mysterious clan's leader.  He had been at the temple ruins that could be found right upon the outskirts of the land that surrounded the outside of kirigakure, and set out for the village early that morning. He was at least a mile away from the entrance, but he could still see it from his current distance. He head directly for the village at full speed Trying to get there as fast as he possibly could. There was no time available for him to waste. With only a week to harness his skills and master senjutsu, he had to make well use of all the time he had. Not one second could be wasted. He was able to clear most of the distance within an hour, but he found himself a bit too fatigued to keep moving at full speed beyond that point. He slowed his pace down, and began walking. He was about 400 meters away from the gate, and at his current position he noticed the change in the environment. It had gone from a ground of damp, marshes and plateaus to a large forest. There was a single path to travel down, with an abundance of trees upon each side. Toshiko quickly entered to forest, walking down the wide path.

As he walked, he took note of his surroundings. Part of the training the leader of the doragonseji told him to undergo was to learn how to be at one with the world around him. Toshiko figured to do so he'd have to be aware of what was around him at all times on a spiritual level. It didn't take long for Toshiko to notice how eerie and unsettling the area around him was. Rusted weapons were scattered  around the ground, some sticking out of trees, and a dark, musty fog riddled the sky. Chills ran through Toshiko's spine simply from the cold, heavy air hitting his skin, giving him the illusion that someone or something was touching him. This chilly and disturbing feeling caused him to pick up his pace. If there was any place on earth he wouldn't want to be at, it'd be here.

Toshiko almost didn't notice it, but standing 10 meters in front of him were a group of people. They didn't seem to notice him, but he could see and hear them clearly. Three of them were grouped together and were upon the fourth one in a hostile manner. One of them asked the man if he was the centipede. The centipede? The hell could he mean by that? The incident managed to Catch Toshiko's interest, so he stopped moving and paid close attention, trying to stay out of sight.

“What if I were the centipede, what would you do?”

The man replied in a raspy voice that was almost satanic. It creeped Toshiko out a bit. Who was this guy?

The three men carrying the lethal looking weapons stared at him, and one of them replied.

“Kill you-”

No. They were attacking him. Three guys on one? Toshiko couldn't just sit there and let that happen. He had to move. Now. Quickly he stood up and ran directly towards the four, hoping to intervene and take one of the three attackers. Before Toshiko could make it there, the victim had speared the man in the chest, piercing his heart. Toshiko stopped dead in his tracks, doing so in such an abrupt manner that he practically tripped over his own feet, falling to the ground. When he got back up, he looked to see all of the attackers dead. The sight of their blood and corpses sent Toshiko's body into a state of terror. After a few moments, Toshiko tried to calm himself by laughing nervously, and then spoke.

"Well..... I guess you didn't need any help with that at all!"

Word Count: 687

Senjutsu: 687/7000 C-B



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5Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Mon May 11, 2015 4:58 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
The young Uzumaki glared towards the person that appeared out of nowhere, apparently he hiding in the bushes, quite the amusing skill, Tsuneo guessed he wasn't a target for elimination, the boy moved towards Tsuneo but keeping distance and speaking in a hesitating tone, Tsuneo looked into the boy's eyes, piercing through as if a dagger, but then he spoke“Introduce yourself detail-fully, otherwise it's over for you, this place is no place for ordinary shinobi, yet you're still standing” He was correct, the atmosphere would choke anyone, Tsuneo did kill those three easily, but they were no ordinary weaklings, they were to Tsuneo, to others, not so much.

“No tricks too, or its game over.” he spoke as he raised his arm to his side with his open palm as chakra began rotating violently and endlessly in his palm, forming a blue orb, called the Rasengan. This techniques history was no joke, this technique is over hundreds and hundreds of years ago, but its popularity did not arose from nothing, its power is destructive, its shape and whole state is quite useful, its a flawless technique, and while some may view it as ordinary, they regret it.

Tsuneo glared into the man's eyes, his glare was far too confusing for anyone, it was both gentle and cruel, suffocating, and relieving at the same time, the young man had gone through hell and back, yet he was still standing normally, as if nothing ever happened.

The young Uzumaki felt the boy's chakra, it was quite something, suspecting it but unsure, was this boy an Uzumaki too? He wasn't sure, many clans appeared with similar if not equal high life force, and so the Centipede awaited the boy's answer.

The rotating ball of chakra rotated in an even more fearsome manner, but there was something different about the Rasengan Tsuneo created, it never was in the same color the legends spoke of, but it was pitch black, like the color of his chakra, was the color of his chakra, the imprint of all lives he took, or was it reflecting the darkness within him.


The boy standing before Tsuneo was quite strange or at least so he was in Tsuneo's eyes, he didn't look like he had much kill count up his sleeve nor did he have the look of a manipulative demon, it almost was like as if this boy was just another pure  boy that suffered in his past, Tsuneo couldn't tell, suffering differs from person to the other, in size and in how it is regarded, yet he remains standing through the deathly atmosphere, and the horrid darkness Tsuneo spread to warn his next victims.

Tsuneo was not the type of person to hesitate, he already thought of a thousand method to counter any actions that may disturb the ferocious Uzumaki.

 The cold wind blew, the whispers of the dead were sung in silence, the mist hid the truth, and the atmosphere choked its victims as it always have, the moon persuaded death to smile upon those that set foot in here, in this grave no one was safe.


WC:533

6Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Mon May 11, 2015 10:06 pm

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko tried as hard as he could to ignore the strange, unsettling feeling he had in his spine. Was it because of the aura Toshiko was getting off from the individual himself, or for what he had done. He killed three people so easily without breaking a sweat. But Toshiko wasn't so jerked up because of how efficiently he killed the three, but by how he did so without batting an eye. As if it was no big notion or issue to take a life. To take people off the face of the earth. he did it as if it were nothing. Toshiko knew to be weary of this guy, but he didn't really believe in being hostile upon initially meeting someone. He didn't know anything about this guy who he knew only as the centipede. He may have done a bad thing by killing these three, but that didn't make him a bad person. Toshiko wanted to know more about him in a strange way. He was intimidating, but Toshiko felt like there was something deeper to him than what he was deciding to show. The man noticed Toshiko's presence, turning to face him. He had snow white hair, that seemed as though the color and life had been sucked out of it. one of his eyes was a normal, brown pupil, and the other was of demonic appearance. a pitch black eye with a blood red pupil. Toshiko hadn't seen anything like it. Was it a doujutsu similar to his sharingan? He had no idea, but it sure as hell was terrifying. Despite this, Toshiko kept his cool while in front of the stranger.

“Introduce yourself detail-fully, otherwise it's over for you, this place is no place for ordinary shinobi, yet you're still standing”

Toshiko was in no place to disobey the man, and he had no secrets to hide about his identity, so he smiled to him as his nerves calmed, and spoke.

""I am Toshiko Uzumaki. Fourteen year old Special Jounin of the village hidden within the leaves. I am here on a travel that i was permitted to by our hokage and my sensei, Sousetsu Senju. My purpose is to simply educate myself on the shinobi world, and i've been to all five nations. As i was traveling to kiri, i got caught in a storm, and i sought refuge in cave ruins until it subsided. Then i continued my travel towards kirigakure, and found this forest along the way. I didn't know whether or not this was the right path to take, but i continued on and that was when i.... well, when i ran into you."

Toshiko knew that he hadn't gone into complete detail about what he was doing before coming to kiri, but he couldn't tell him about the Doragonseji. Their clan was a secret that he was vowing to keep once they took him in and taught him the art of senjutsu. He still had told the man everything that he needed to know.

“No tricks too, or its game over.”

As the man spoke, he raised up his arm, and within his palm chakra began to rise, rotating and then completely spiraling around within his palm. Toshiko knew right away it was chakra, but it wasn't a type of chakra he had ever seen before. It was black, pure dark chakra. The chakra of those who had immeasurable hatred within themselves. The chakra being emitted from the stranger was scary, but toshiko could barely notice it as he was being amazed by the technique itself. A spiraling ball of raw, hard hitting chakra within his palm. Toshiko hadn't ever seen anything like it.

"Woah...What technique is that?"

word Count: 644

Senjutsu: 1331/7000 C-B



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7Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Tue May 12, 2015 8:14 am

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
The boy was honest that Tsuneo confirmed, being in the business of interrogation, and spying, Tsuneo learned a few tricks he kept up his sleeve to sniff out a liar. Tsuneo smiled as his dark aura retracted itself back into the man's core, as he used a nearby tree to sport the power of his Rasengan, and as one would expect the tree was demolished, Tsuneo moved his hand to shake the boy's, as he spoke to him and said “Follow me,”

With that Tsuneo walked towards an open field, which seemed to be someone's camping place, as a tent was left out in the open beside a small fire, a piece of cloth spread in front of the small fire, he invited the boy to siit next to him as he spoke: “That was a technique mastered by the Uzumaki that saved the world hundreds of years ago, It is the legendary Rasengan”

Tsuneo was happy, this was certainly no coincidence, it is the hand of fate guiding him, the young Uzumaki, Tsuneo unzipped the whole made for the mouth as he spoke in a clearer voice,the centipede, an uzumaki, should someone know this it would enable the anbu to find him easily, and with them, his best option is to kill them, and he would rather avoid that, killing someone from his beloved village.

“You've the look of innocence in your eyes, and you're probably wondering, how was it so easy to take a life, these three punks were not the first, I've killed so many I forgot how many of them I killed, people who want to ruin others' happiness”  Yes.. That's the truth Tsuneo was murderer “I don't know how many of them I killed, but they're nothing less than a thousand” People would call the man insane for such words, but the tone of honesty, and the sadness he harbored would never lie, it has been four years since he defected, and every day since then he had killed at least five or four  a day slowly but steadily as his power grew the number of criminals he killed a day passed his past limit, Tsuneo had murdered  many, and although they were all, mostly scum, but the truth is truth, he's a murderer.

Tsuneo was not the least bit angered by how many he killed or how many he destroyed, because in return, many families were given the happiness they deserved uninterrupted, Tsuneo logically saved millions, from thievery, trickery, murder, and much more worse things, he's called the hero of the city in Kirigakure for a reason, but in fact he was a hero towards all nations, a hero who's path lies in the darkest of  darkness.


And then came this boy, an Uzumaki from his village, under the new Hokage, he whom was a sanin, Sousetsu, impressive, but that means that the white star is gone, such a shame indeed. Tsuneo liked the boy, the boy seemed earnest and honest, brave and amazing in his own way, Tsuneo asked the boy few questions between them pauses of fewer seconds:

“Do you love your village?”

“How are things going in Konohaga~?”

“Have you any goals?”

and his most important question:

“How far are you willing to go to gain power, and what do you need it for?”


WC:566

8Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Tue May 12, 2015 11:14 am

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
After Toshiko finished speaking, the stranger cracked a smile, condensing the black ball of chakra within his palm, and then thrust it towards a nearby tree, sending his arm into it full force with the power of the raw chakra within his hand literally obliterating the tree with one blow. Toshiko was in awe of the jutsu. Why had he never heard of it? He'd seen some immense jutsu in his day. Some that blew his techniques and even those of his sensei out of the water, and he'd never seen anything like this. It intrigued him to the point he wanted to know everything about it, but this tranger was his main focus. As he was infatuated with the jutsu the man had used, he almost didn't notice as the stranger's hand was held out to shake his. Toshiko immediately shook his hand, relaxing himself and smiling to the man. Despite what he'd just done, Toshiko knew that he could trust this guy completely.

“Follow me,"

Toshiko loosened his grip from the hand shake, and then followed the man as he lead him into a large, open spacing. The two came up to what appeared to be a campsite. There was a large tent. Next to it was a small and yet timid fire, and a cloth spread out in front of it. Toshiko watched as the man sat down, inviting toshiko to sit down next to him. Toshiko complied, taking a seat on the cloth next to the centipede.

“That was a technique mastered by the Uzumaki that saved the world hundreds of years ago, It is the legendary Rasengan”

An Uzumaki that saved the world? Toshiko had heard legends about such, but had only considered them to be nothing more than stories passed down throughout generations. Did members of the Uzumaki clan really possess enough prowess to do things like that? Rasengan. That was the name of the technique that the centipede had used.

You've the look of innocence in your eyes, and you're probably wondering, how was it so easy to take a life, these three punks were not the first, I've killed so many I forgot how many of them I killed, people who want to ruin others' happiness”

Toshiko didn't understand it. Why did it seem like everyone he knew was so desensitized to the action of murder? Out of all the ninja he ever met, he was the only one who seemed to have a problem with it. Why was that?

“I don't know how many of them I killed, but they're nothing less than a thousand”

A thousand....? Toshiko didn't even have it in him to kill a bug, and this guy had lost track of how many people he'd killed. Toshiko would give off a somewhat sad expression upon hearing the centipede's words. He wanted to say something, but he knew nothing of the mans situation, and couldn't jump to conclusions.

“Do you love your village?”

“How are things going in Konohaga~?”

“Have you any goals?”




Toshiko quickly paid attention as the man barraged him with multiple questions. They weren't strange questions to ask, and because of that Toshiko was quick to answer them one by one.

"Yes i love my village. I'd protect it with my life. To my knowledge, Konoha is doing pretty well as of now. nothing dangerous going on."

He hesitated to answer the next question, as he didn't know how Yosuke would perceive him for his answer. He knew what his goals were, and how important they were to him.

"My goal....... My goal is to become the next hokage of Konoha , and lead the world to a new age of peace. It's my dream."

“How far are you willing to go to gain power, and what do you need it for?”

The words rang around in Toshiko's head for a few moments. how far was he willing to go for power? Did he know the answer to this question himself? What was he willing to do? He took a deep breath, thinking to choose his next words carefully so he could be as elaborate as possible with his answer. He then opened his mouth, and spoke.

"I'd go as far as i possibly need to really. I'd do anything and everything i could to gain power unless it would end up hurting someone else in the long run that is.... I need power to make myself a better ninja. That's why i'm constantly training. I can't stop until i'm the strongest ninja around, and even then i'd have to keep going to make sure i'll be able to protect those in need. that's the only reason i want power really. So i won't ever have to worry about being helpless. So i can help those in need. I want power, so i can save people."

Word Count: 857

Senjutsu: 2188/7000 C-B



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9Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Tue May 12, 2015 2:35 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
Tsuneo smiled a gentle smile, the boy reminded Tsuneo of himself, Tsuneo was also courageous, and he still is, Tsuneo loves his village insanely he sacrificed himself for the village, and accepted the title of a crazed psychopath, not that he wasn't at least to a certain level, Toshiko Uzumaki, should he place his hopes in this boy, Tsuneo wasn't sure just yet, was his willpower strong enough? Tsuneo would test that.
And so the centipede spoke: “The name's Uzumaki Yosuke. Stand up Toshiko-kun, it's time to fight” Or so Tsuneo spoke, he would test the boy's willpower, Tsuneo was no kind teacher, he was no teacher at all, but he merely sought out a hero that would rescue this world from the great destruction hatred creates, why did the world matter at all to this young Uzumaki, it is because he has power, and because he has power, he has a responsibility, and because he suffered, he can't let others suffer the excruciating pain.
Tsuneo, this time, let his whole chakra rage as it replenished over time, his whole chakra raged through the field, as if the moon fell in a silent crash colliding with that very same area, as calm loud wave raged through the fields, Tsuneo's chakra was horrific in its greatness. Tsuneo armed himself in a fighting stance as he remained away from the boy, ten meters away, Tsuneo would calmly gaze into the eyes of the boy as he spoke before the battle began “Getting used to deaths is horrible, never get used, cry your eyes out if you want to, and never kill, while to me it is my only way in saving this world, it is full of pain and regret, sadness and despair, never ever kill, Uzumaki Toshiko of the hidden leaf”
Tsuneo hated murder, but it was his only way, Tsuneo would gaze into the brave young man's heart, he lowered his head as tears filled his eyes, he missed it, Konohagakure, imagining himself as a Hokage is nice, but it is an impossible dream, still it is a nice one, one might sometimes pity the young man, he was forced into this darkness, but still it is the path he chose as well, he can't turn back, and he doesn't want to, sucking up the tears, the cold cruel gaze returned as he steeled himself for the fight.
“I will NOT go easy on you Toshiko-kun”
It was the time to fight, he would see if this boy has it in him, to become the strongest, of course that was also Tsuneo's dream, become the strongest and put down those that oppose him, Tsuneo would seek power regardless of the harm it could cause him.
The young Uzumaki's eyes were locked on his fellow Uzumaki, Tsuneo didn't flinch for a second, his cruel cold eyes watched the boy's every flinch, the centipede was far to wary of his surroundings as well, Tsuneo's four limbs were locked in his fighting stance, prepared to attack whenever the time to fight was on.


WC:527

10Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Tue May 12, 2015 6:23 pm

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
“The name's Uzumaki Yosuke. Stand up Toshiko-kun, it's time to fight”

Yosuke Uzumaki? The man was of the Uzumaki clan himself. Toshiko hadn't met any other Uzumaki outside of his mother and his now late brother. There were really more out there? Now Toshiko knew for a fact that he hadn't known as much as he originally thought. Wait. Had his fellow Uzumaki challenged him to a fight? Toshiko smiled as he heard the words, quickly standing up to his feet and moving back a bit from Yosuke. There was about a 10 meter distance between them. Toshiko had been looking for someone to test his skills on ever since he had faced Suutei. This was the perfect chance. He could tell that Yosuke was a powerful ninja by how quickly he took down those three guys on his own. This would be the best thing for Toshiko to test his skills.

“Getting used to deaths is horrible, never get used, cry your eyes out if you want to, and never kill, while to me it is my only way in saving this world, it is full of pain and regret, sadness and despair, never ever kill, Uzumaki Toshiko of the hidden leaf”

A heartfelt smile came unto Toshiko's face as Yosuke spoke the words. He understood Toshiko. Even though they couldn't relate in that aspect, he was able to see past that and see things in Toshiko's perspective. Toshiko hadn't known Yosuke for even a day, but he considered him his friend. He had nothing but respect for him at this point, and because of that, he wouldn't hold back on him.

“I will NOT go easy on you Toshiko-kun”

Yosuke spoke the words as he got in a fighting position. Toshiko smiled. It had been a long time since he had a challenging fight against another ninja. This was going to be fun, but toshiko believed the words that came out of his friend.

"i'll make sure to do the same! Okay.. Here i go!"

Toshiko formed the ram hand seal, Toshiko grinned and then spoke out to Yosuke.

"Get ready for this! Shadow Clone Jutsu!"

Three Clones appeared by Toshiko, two on his left and on on his right. Toshiko gestured, and two of his clones started running forward at full speed, clearing their distance from Yosuke in a moment. One of the clones aimed a kick at the side of Yosuke's head, and the other would rush by both of them completely, moving another 10 meters before stopping. Toshiko then gestured to the final clone that hadn't moved yet, and then it nodded, making the ram hand seal. With a poof of smoke, The clone transformed itself into a fuuma shuriken. Before it could hit the ground, Toshiko grabbed it, and then smiled.

"Let's see how you handle this!"

He threw the clone in fuuma shuriken form in the direction of Yosuke, but purposely aimed it to the right side of his body way off target so it would be out of his arm's reach. It went flying towards him, passing by him just as the clone would attempt to strike the side of his head with the kick. It went flying on for another 10 meters, and the clone that had went on running caught it in his hand. Without taking another second, he threw it back towards Yosuke from his backside. The clone transformed back to normal from it's transformed state, holding out both of it's hands channeling it's raiton chakra, and then sent out the jutsu from a 5 meter distance from Yosuke, shooting out a surge of electricity at 25 meters per second, covering the distance almost instantly. As this went on, Toshiko stood there a bit fatigued.

"Damn it. I used up most of my chakra with those shadow clones."

As he said this, he picked up enough on the other field of chakra around him. The senjutsu chakra. He remembered how it felt when he was in the cave, surrounded by the chakra. When his body took it in and allowed it to enlarge his own chakra pool. maybe.....

Toshiko stood there perfectly still, closing his eyes and focusing on the chakra from the nature around him. It probably wasn't the best idea for him to stop like that in the middle of combat, but he needed to replenish his chakra. as long as the clones were there he'd be somewhat safe. As he focused, chakra from the life forms around him began to come forth towards him, and he could feel it even though it was in short portions. Could he keep this going long enough before yosuke's attack?

Word Count: 820

3008/7000 Senjutsu C-B rank

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11Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Wed May 13, 2015 9:00 am

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank

Impressive, indeed it was, his trap combo was one interesting combo, but it was flawed, indeed it was, a nice technique is the clone technique, but it was risky, using it in the begging of a fight had Tsuneo unsure about the quality of the jutsu, still if anything it had potential, and this young man did indeed use its potential to the fullest in his current situation, but Tsuneo wasn't impressed in the boy's state after he used his elegant and nice combo.

A mere second ago, Tsuneo was standing there armed in his fighting stance, awaiting any movement from the young man, Tsuneo would see his fellow Uzumaki creating three clones, Tsuneo would think of stopping his plans, but this was meant to be training for his fellow clansman, and so he watched quietly, as  he was surrounded  with the Toshiko and his duplicates, the centipede rushed and aimed to take hold of the clone's ankle as it aimed to kick Tsuneo's head, Tsuneo would rush and aim to grab the clones ankle and throw the clone to the opposite side from the one it came from, and just as he did so, a  projectile would be thrown in a manner as if the thrower meant for it to miss, Tsuneo smiled as he began acting.

Dark chakra arose, this dark chakra, even the Mizukage herself had felt its horror without even witnessing it, it was the destructive jet black cursed chains of death, four chains arose, from Tsuneo's back  and two from his stomach, and one from his right shoulder, the chains raged in a second crossing insanity's and monstrosity's speed and rushing towards all clones with such force the air surrounding them was dispersed, destroying all clones, Tsuneo threw the remaining Chain in that same second towards the young Toshiko, but Tsuneo's aim was not to kill Toshiko, but merely correct him, and aid him, and in so he let the chain pass near Toshiko's cheek and plant itself into the ground behind Toshiko, giving him a slight fright, and a think-over as it cut his cheek an inch deep from feint contact, should it have made contact the chain.

Upon their presence the clouds darkened, and the left eye of death of Tsuneo's would glow in blood red, as darkness seemed to surround the area, this was the power of Tsuneo of the Uzumaki clan, the centipede, the murderer of many, Tsuneo stood their bathing in the darkness of his chakra, as the darkened scenery faded in the matter of a second, it was merely a hallucination created in the minds of all that  witnessed the chains of death.

Tsuneo stood there gloriously, as he began speaking coldly yet gently:“The combo you created was indeed a good one and a useful one, but it leaves your chakra in danger, which is really... Abhorrent, my opinion use this combo as a last resort, l should we wait till your chakra is fully restore, while I advise that, we can continue. Try and save chakra.”

Tsuneo didn't move an inch from his spot, he merely unleashed destructive chains, eliminating all hostiles in a flash, Tsuneo thought of a more destructive way to end such tactics, but anything else would put Toshiko's life in danger, Tsuneo would rather avoiding any critical damage on the boy.

Tsuneo's cold gaze was locked on the boy, the centipede was as deadly as ever, he merely comanded his chakra and destroy anything that Tsuneo  wanted eliminated.

Tsuneo would await the boy's reply as he smiled, after the horrific display of power anyone would piss themselves in fear, but not Toshiko, Tsuneo had faith in the boy, Toshiko did stand up in the atmosphere of death, hopefully he would now as well.

And so Tsuneo awaited the boy's reply, if he would move single finger, Tsuneo would surround him with his rushing deathly chains that crossed fifty meters in the matter of a second, Tsuneo's monstrous power was sported finely enough for the boy to see the gap of power and how he, and so Tsuneo waited as his chains floated around begged for some actions.



Jutsu [chakra: 290/300]:



WC: 711



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12Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Thu May 14, 2015 3:04 am

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
As Toshiko's clone went to attack Yosuke with a kick aimed at the right side of his head, Yosuke would swiftly respond, grabbing it's ankle and throwing it to his opposite side. As the rest of Toshiko's strategy played out, He felt a chakra. A large, heavy chakra that seemed somewhat dark, being emitted at such a fast, unsettling pace that it almost took Toshiko out of his focus. The flow of chakra he was gaining from the environment slowed for a moment, but then began continuing on immediately after. What was this? Toshiko knew almost right away. It was Yosuke's chakra. It was immense. He'd never felt anything like it before. One thing was for sure. Yosuke was way stronger than what Toshiko originally assumed him to be. He had no idea of how his tactic had planned out, and he couldn't see until he'd gathered up enough chakra to maintain himself. All he could do was wait, and hope that he'd done something.

Moments after, Toshiko felt his chakra disappearing in the masses. His clones. All of them, had been obliterated by Yosuke. Just as Toshiko felt his chakra disperse, his flow of chakra was completely interrupted as he felt the large chakra raise past him, cutting into his cheek on the left side of his face, causing his eye patch to fly up due to the sheer force of the chakra behind the blow. Toshiko wasn't able to react quickly enough, but made sure to keep his left eye closed. He trusted Yosuke, but didn't want to give out his secret of his sharingan eye. As the cut upon his cheek began to spew a blood at a slow pace, Toshiko grabbed the part of the eye patch meant to cover his eye, and placed it back over. he'd have to maintain his secret. Toshiko stared into the eyes of Yosuke.

“The combo you created was indeed a good one and a useful one, but it leaves your chakra in danger, which is really... Abhorrent, my opinion use this combo as a last resort, l should we wait till your chakra is fully restore, while I advise that, we can continue. Try and save chakra.”

Toshiko hadn't been able to obtain much chakra from utilizing senjutsu. Figures. He still hadn't managed to master the art that he was told to by the doragonseji. Still, it had been something. Did he have enough in him to take on Yosuke head on? It didn't look like he really had much of a choice. He'd used up most of his chakra. Only options he had left were a few direct jutsu and his hand to hand combat. it was a chance he'd have to take. He'd just taken notice to the pain within his cheek. What was it that Yosuke had used to hit him? Toshiko hadn't gotten a good look at it, but it look like some form a chain. It had great destructive power. Toshiko would have to keep his distance. He quickly inhaled deeply, filling his throat with a thick chakra and converting it to oil within his throat, He took a few more seconds to gather as much as he could, and then fired out a massive fireball spiraling directly towards Yosuke at full speed. He couldn't move in any closer. He jumped back, moving out of range and another 10 meters away from Yosuke. He'd await his next move.

Word Count: 596

3604/7000 Senjutsu C-B

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13Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Thu May 14, 2015 2:41 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
The young man looked as exhausted as one can be, he must be low on chakra or so the Centipede assumed, it could also be an act, but trickery wouldn't do him any good now, Tsuneo would still stand at the exact same spot, he noticed the boy's distress, it seems he wasted a great sum of his chakra, the exhausted  expression and the paleness of his skin spoke only of so. Tsuneo wondered about that boy's meditation, but the only thing that came to mind was Senjutsu, Tsuneo was unsure, regardless of what it was, it required Toshiko to remain still, and as courageous as he was pulling that stunt, sitting in the middle of the field with his eyes closed, concentrating so hard he didn't hear the clones poof, that was the most idiotic move, courage and recklessness are two different things.

Tsuneo would stand where he always stood, calmly welcoming his fast attack, but as the fires raged towards Tsuneo, he began thinking:

The boy needs to remain still, and remain protected as well, Tsuneo had just the jutsu for his fellow Uzumaki, the jutsu ideal for his meditation, it's even more than ideal, but it was cost-y, it would cost him a good amount of chakra, still it was better than nothing, plus he would be capable of moving, and acting normally, the technique would protect him, allow him to meditate, attack, and dodge.

But for now Tsuneo would decide to end this quickly, and so the centipede raised his hand to face the raging fires, as a mere part of the second was before impact, Tsuneo's arm would be stretched towards the flames.

Tsuneo activated his jutsu, as a loud sound was emitted from the two techniques colliding, smoke would cover the area, and in a flash Tsuneo tore through that smoke and rushed towards Toshiko with an insane speed, and with not a single scratch on his body, Tsuneo had used his swallowing seal, the swallowing seal was a tricky technique in its process, it would fool anyone, making them think that A, the user was an immortal or that they had something to do with the sage of six paths, which is the only person that can absorb ninjutsu, Tsuneo merely seals it in the void.

Tsuneo would rush towards the boy in a different manner, like a flash the Centipede crossed twenty six meters in a mere second, like a demon he appeared with the weight of his chakra, disappearing from where he was and appearing behind Toshiko, he spoke in a feint tone as the pressure of his chakra would aim to crush the young man, but in the second of that pressure, Tsuneo broke all tension as he poked Toshiko's head with his index and middle finger gently as he said  “Bang, you're dead...”


“Toshiko, I'll be teaching you a new technique, it will let you move, and act normally, attack, dodge, and remain still without using chakra at the same time, its name is Matoryōshika~マトリョーシカ, created and developed by me, a sealing ability of rank A, another thing is, that jutsu that seemed to have you dumbstruck, the Rasengan, the favorite technique of the hero that saved the world thousands of years ago, also try and stop wasting your chakra, calculate everything around you, and plot your next move, rethink your abilities, and devise multiple strategies, choose the most fitting one for the situation, but consider your chakra, your opponent's possible reactions, and your reactions to THEIR reactions. Be  quick thinker, your triple way trap should be used as a last resort, my opinion, it should be used when you have exactly... mmm you should use that technique when you have the chakra to use only four B-rank techniques, and prepare yourself immediately after casting them to disperse them, that strategy should be a quick strike, either hit or miss, no second tries, again you should remain careful it is a handy combo, and a handful to deal with, but with high rank shinobi, it can be sent to ruins easily if not used at the correct time. 


Back then Tsuneo could've easily dodged the technique and rushed for Toshiko, but Tsuneo did not want Toshiko to think of himself as powerful, he wanted him to feel as weak as possible, power would make anyone arrogant, and arrogance merely leads to one's demise, Toshiko would have to accept his weakness, and embrace it, in order to get stronger.



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WC:765

14Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Thu May 14, 2015 6:53 pm

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko watched on forward, anticipating the next step that Yosuke would take. He didn't expect what would happen next. Yosuke would stretch his hand forward towards the full speed immense bullet of flame that Toshiko had produced from the last few bits of chakra he had to his name. There wasn't much Toshiko could do but sit there. His tactic wasn't a bad one, but he hadn't the resources or correct timing to pull it off. He was on the verge of complete exhaustion. He couldn't spend any more chakra, or he'd end up getting rid of himself before Yosuke even made his next move. As the jutsu connected with Yosuke's stretched out palm, there was a minor explosion of smoke throughout the area As a loud sound echoed throughout the entirety of the open space. The smoke got in his plain of view, and It blinded Toshiko for a few moments, causing him to gag and close both of his eyes for a moment. Toshiko had absolutely no time to react. As the cloud of smoke dispersed he opened his eyes. Not even a second later, Yosuke was right behind him. Clearing the distance in less than a second. He placed his middle and index finger to Toshiko's head, and then spoke in a condescending and yet subtle tone.

“Bang, you're dead...”

Toshiko jumped away a single meter due to being startled. How? Dammit. He gritted his teeth and then calmed himself a bit before thinking to himself.

'Dammit. I couldn't even see him moving! This guy... He's on a completely different level. I've never met anyone like him. There are really ninja as strong as him? I have to reach their level.'

The large power gap between Toshiko and his fellow Uzumaki excited him, but managed to anger him at the same time. yosuke was stronger than him. As he came to this realization, he became a bit weary of his own skills. There was no doubt about it. He had to get stronger now. It was mandatory. He couldn't return to konoha until he was 10 times as strong as he was before he left.

“Toshiko, I'll be teaching you a new technique, it will let you move, and act normally, attack, dodge, and remain still without using chakra at the same time, its name is Matoryōshika~マトリョーシカ, created and developed by me, a sealing ability of rank A, another thing is, that jutsu that seemed to have you dumbstruck, the Rasengan, the favorite technique of the hero that saved the world thousands of years ago, also try and stop wasting your chakra, calculate everything around you, and plot your next move, rethink your abilities, and devise multiple strategies, choose the most fitting one for the situation, but consider your chakra, your opponent's possible reactions, and your reactions to THEIR reactions. Be  quick thinker, your triple way trap should be used as a last resort, my opinion, it should be used when you have exactly... mmm you should use that technique when you have the chakra to use only four B-rank techniques, and prepare yourself immediately after casting them to disperse them, that strategy should be a quick strike, either hit or miss, no second tries, again you should remain careful it is a handy combo, and a handful to deal with, but with high rank shinobi, it can be sent to ruins easily if not used at the correct time. ”

Toshiko's looks of anguish and embarrassment vanished as he listened to Yosuke speak. This had become a training session between the two. Yosuke's goal was to help Toshiko enhance his skills, and he realized it by the tips he was given about his tactic. Yosuke said he was going to teach him two techniques.  Matoryōshika, and the technique he has shown him earlier. The rasengan. Toshiko smiled. He knew he'd have to do anything he could to get to the top of the ninja ranks, and Yosuke was giving him an opportunity to increase his skills and gain some experience that he could use to better himself. He appreciated it more than Yosuke would ever know. Toshiko thought about the kindness that Yosuke was showing him, and then thought about the secrets he'd kept from him. There was no need to. He was sure that he could completely trust him now. He'd given him absolutely no reason not to. He thought about it for a few moments, then opened his mouth to speak.

"Yosuke Sensei.... Please forgive me. You're showing me a great kindness, and i've been keeping secrets from you. I cannot continue until i come clean to make sure that you know every capability i possess......

Earlier when i was completely still, i did so because i was trying to gather natural chakra from the area. It's something i learned from a clan in the cave i took refuge in on my way to kiri called Senjutsu. I was just with them before coming here, and after i obtained the power they sent me on my way and told me to master it to come back and learn something known as Sage mode. And underneath my eye patch is no scar, but something far more useful."


Toshiko lifted up his eye patch, and slowly opened his eye. Yosuke would now be able to see Toshiko's sharingan that he had possessed rather than his original eye. Was he making a mistake? He surely hoped not.

"Please forgive me for not being completely honest with you from the start. I hope you understand why i was hesitant."  

word count: 974

4578/7000 Senjutsu C-B

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15Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Sun May 17, 2015 8:39 am

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
The boy exposed a bit more about his secrets, in all honesty what he exposed was no 'little bit', and perhaps it was everything, the boy spoke in a polite way, Tsuneo smiled, the boy had a sharingan, Tsuneo was not sure how he got this eye of his, but whatever it is, its in the past and Tsuneo was sure, the boy killed no one to get those, he was an Uzumaki, with a sharingan, a dangerous combination, once taught well, this should become a fierce weapon in his hand, but not only that he was learning the art of sage, the thing Tsuneo was looking towards for a long time, perhaps Toshiko might assist him in getting to the Hawk temple.

Tsuneo would smile as he patted the boy, speaking in a slightly more cheerful tone, as he gently smiled letting his chakra become an ever so gentle feel to embrace everything around, this was Tsuneo, gentle to people he cares about, and fierce to his targets “Don't worry Toshiko, I won't judge you for your secrets, I too have been keeping secrets, however, my secrets I must keep, because the less you know about me, the safer you are, trust me... And some of my secrets, might bring you to hate and question many things...” as he said the last words of his sentence his tone darkened.

His smile still returned, as he spoke “I would be happy to teach you a thing or two, but similarly I want you to help me reach the Hawk shrine, I've been trying to become a sage for a while, but I am afraid I never found the hawk shrine.”

Tsuneo would then think of his teaching methods, he would try to help the boy in his training, but he would also not let himself go, he also had training to do, and this time, he had to take it seriously, he had to learn the arts of a sage, its what he's been seeking for a very long time.

Tsuneo thought about the easiest way to teach the boy the rasengan, its a complex technique for today's most structures used for techniques, Tsuneo was capable of using it only after months of translation, and still not giving up, he finally aquired it, and now has to teach it to the boy, another thing was his own sealing technique, since the boy likes clones, or so Tsuneo assumed, this technique should be a very joyful ride for him, not forgetting the help it will lend the boy, Tsuneo smiled as he thought about the combination of meditation and this technique, it was a perfect combination as if the jutsu was made just for that.

Tsuneo would ask the boy to help him go to the location marked in his map, and on their way they would train to their heart's content and even when they arrive there, they would still train, and thus their trip began.


WC:500

16Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Sun May 17, 2015 11:56 am

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko hadn't a single clue of how Yosuke would, react. Was it a smart idea for him to be doing this? Of course it wasn't. He'd just met the guy. And even though he was helping him, it wasn't right for him to trust people so quickly and so openly. There was nothing wrong with it of course, it just wasn't always the best action plan. Some people weren't the best at keeping there word. Some would abuse the kindness and trust that he ensued in them. That was a habit that Toshiko always had, but never liked about himself. His perception of other individuals was really the same. He promised himself to always show everyone he met complete respect and kindness, unless they gave him a legitimate reason not to do so. he didn't like making assumptions about people, as when he came into contact with a new person, he'd know nothing of their situation. For him to pass automatic judgement on someone else would be wrong of him. While that was true, he still knew that he couldn't trust everyone. Some people just weren't trustworthy. and that was the truth. but did Yosuke fall underneath this category? Was Toshiko truly being too kind by showing this brutal shinobi a few of his secrets that he hadn't told anyone else? Toshiko didn't know, but he'd soon find out.

Yosuke would come over To Toshiko, smiling to him and patting him on the head. his chakra flow was much more gentle than it was before.

“Don't worry Toshiko, I won't judge you for your secrets, I too have been keeping secrets, however, my secrets I must keep, because the less you know about me, the safer you are, trust me... And some of my secrets, might bring you to hate and question many things...

Toshiko gave a slight smile for a moment, but it was masking his inner emotions that had been sparked by the actual questions he was being forced to ask himself. he knew his secrets with safe with Yosuke. He knew that they were friends. But there was obviously more to him. More that he didn't want anyone to know. For what reason? What secrets did he possess? It made Toshiko curious, but he'd respect the fact that the secrets were better off it they were kept secret. Toshiko would put the eye patch back over his eye, covering his sharingan. He was too low on chakra to keep it out any longer.

“I would be happy to teach you a thing or two, but similarly I want you to help me reach the Hawk shrine, I've been trying to become a sage for a while, but I am afraid I never found the hawk shrine.”

Hawk Shrine? Toshiko hadn't heard of that. That definitely wasn't the place of the doragonseji. Did that mean.... there were other methods of learning senjutsu? Toshiko couldn't believe it. He felt like he'd been exposed to a completely different world. one that had been hid within his own the entire time. Despite his surprise, he was happy to comply with his sensei.

"I can do that. I can help you reach this place called the hawk shrine. It'd be good training for me anyway."

Yosuke asked Toshiko to go with him to a location upon a map that he'd marked.

"sure. Lead the way"

Toshiko would then follow behind Yosuke to their destination, awaiting their arrival.

Word Count: 610

Senjutsu C-B 5188/7000

17Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Wed May 20, 2015 1:54 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
How about this, try converging your chakra into the center of your hand, imagine a circle in the middle of your palm, and try forming a ball of chakra imagine a ball in the size of your hand, and hold it carefully yet dominantly, careful a rasengan can be heavy at first, so you need to get a good feel of it, hold the wrist of your dominant hand with your other arm, and start surging your chakra carefully shape a ball, imagine your chakra circulating and converging, make sure to manipulate your chakra fiercely in order to create a heavy and fast rotation, if the rotation stops your rasengan dies, start! 

Or so the centipede guided the boy, the centipede spoke to the young man Toshiko on a different subject, speaking and apologizing: “Toshiko I apologize for not being able to tell you who I was, but I can tell you who I am now, my new name, and my new home... So for now and for eternity, I will be known as Yosuke, Uzumaki Yosuke of Iwagakure, it is honestly what I am, sometimes I forget the name I am born with.”

It has been a long time since Tsuneo smiled this much, come to think of it, when was the last time he smiled for happiness' sake, Tsuneo's smiles faded as he remembered his duty, and as he sensed presence, he did not know if Toshiko had sensed them, but they were for sure no weaklings, or so Tsuneo sensed with his high perception.

The young man Tsuneo would wonder about the place he seeks, why can't he seem to find it, where would this temple be, Tsuneo asked himself that over and over, but no answer was there, instead of crawling the earths, he had to search the skies.

Tsuneo would watch Toshiko as he trained while they both walked towards the temple Tsuneo seeks, he would wonder should the training prove difficult what methods should Tsuneo use, it was his first time training someone, Tsuneo's could sharp exterior returned, he wasn't used to being cheerful, smiling this much, was an't a usual thing.

The centipede was a hunter, not a prey, nor a free man, or a happy spirit, in fact, if anything the boy was tragic, but it is because he is tragic, no tragedy will overcome him, over all he shall triumph, he would teach this boy, Toshiko, the rasengan, the signature move of the hero that saved the world, a very long, long time ago.

Tsuneo sensed the figures in the dark, his eyes would chase their presence, and his red eye's sclera would turn pitch black as his pupil sharpened into a vertical slit, prepared to spill blood, the young centipede would walk normally not alarming Toshiko, perhaps Toshiko was already aware of them himself, Tsuneo wasn't so sure. Taking their steps carefully their enemies hid in the shadows, Tsuneo would remain wary of them, should they aim to hurt Tsuneo and his friend, they would become a bloody bludgeoned mess, a l9mp of rotting fresh, Tsuneo would make sure of so, Tsuneo wore his black hood and eye patch covering his normal eye and hiding his other cursed eye under the hood. 


WC:548

18Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Wed May 20, 2015 9:10 pm

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
"How about this, try converging your chakra into the center of your hand, imagine a circle in the middle of your palm, and try forming a ball of chakra imagine a ball in the size of your hand, and hold it carefully yet dominantly, careful a rasengan can be heavy at first, so you need to get a good feel of it, hold the wrist of your dominant hand with your other arm, and start surging your chakra carefully shape a ball, imagine your chakra circulating and converging, make sure to manipulate your chakra fiercely in order to create a heavy and fast rotation, if the rotation stops your rasengan dies, start! "

Toshiko listened carefully as Yosuke spoke to him while they walked towards the unknown destination. He could infer that he was explaining to him how to utilize the rasengan. It didn't sound to be that difficult, but Toshiko knew it would be challenging. According to Yosuke, It was the signature move of the hokage that saved the world hundreds of years ago. Toshiko knew next to nothing about this kage from centuries ago but the fact that he was an Uzumaki. An uzumaki as hokage? maybe toshiko had a greater chance of obtaining the title than others presumed. It was mind boggling to him that an Uzumaki could have saved the world. This truth did nothing more than make him aspire to achieve his goal of hokage even more, and made him even more eager to learn the technique. He was hesitant to attempt at first. Would he be able to do it just as Yosuke had explained it to him? He didn't know at first. He wasn't completely capable of exerting his chakra at will. He could do it while implementing his elements of course, but raw chakra was a different story. It was something he wasn't used to, but he knew he'd have to if he wanted to get any stronger than he currently was.

“Toshiko I apologize for not being able to tell you who I was, but I can tell you who I am now, my new name, and my new home... So for now and for eternity, I will be known as Yosuke, Uzumaki Yosuke of Iwagakure, it is honestly what I am, sometimes I forget the name I am born with.”

Toshiko understood and appreciated Yosuke's honesty. Toshiko knew that he still hadn't known everything about his newfound sensei, but that was just okay with him. Toshiko didn't know about Yosuke's past, and Yosuke didn't know about his either. For now, it was best that it be kept that way. Toshiko's secrets of his past were too dark and personal for him to bring up, as they still traumatized him to that very day. Any second he wasn't training or meeting someone new, he was thinking about the people who he'd loved and lost. His mother, his father, and his brother. Hideki. They were all gone. No matter how much he wanted them to be there for him they had all left him one way or another, and that stuck with him. He missed his mother and brother. They may have been dead, but they were still alive in his heart. And his father.... His father was the only living thing in existence that had Toshiko's hatred. he wanted to confront him. He had to find him.
If he still planned to go after his father and avenge the rest of his family, one thing was for sure. He couldn't waste time dilly dallying. He had to get stronger.

he decided it was time to apply the knowledge that Yosuke had given him. He didn't know whether or not his attempt at the usage of the rasengan would be successful, but he'd have to try. If the uzumaki from centuries ago managed to maintain and utilize the jutsu as his signature move, maybe that meant Toshiko had a shot as well. As he walked directly next to Yosuke, He held up his right hand, staring at it, and focusing his chakra into it. For a few moments there was simply nothing, and then Toshiko's hand began to glow with his mellow blue, peaceful chakra. he tried to exert it all into center of the palm of his hand as Yosuke had told him, but it was harder than he originally anticipated it to be. He grimaced, struggling to emit his chakra into the same point. He wish he'd put more time into training his chakra control. It was the size of his chakra pool. The doragon seji had told him that. Those with uzumaki blood possessed chakra greater than that of the average ninja, and after all the chakra he absorbed from senjutsu it made his chakra pool even large. There was no telling how large it had been now. It was certainly better than average. Due to his great amount of chakra, he wouldn't be able to get used to channeling it normally. Especially without a nature affinity to assign it with. despite this truth, He tried harder. Staring directly into the center of his palm and attempting to force his chakra there.

He did as Yosuke said, gripping his right hand's wrist with his left hand, applying force to keep it steady. The chakra that had coated his hand slowly started to migrate to the center of his palm. He gritted his teeth. It was really difficult for him, and he didn't understand why. Yosuke was an uzumaki, and did it with such ease. He had better control of his chakra than Toshiko did that was for sure.

"Dammit..... I..... This is impossible! I can't focus my chakra there. There's too much of it."


Even though he spoke words of denial and lack of belief in his own abilities, he kept moving next to yosuke and kept trying, focusing on the chakra within his palm. It was there. That wasn't the problem. The only issue that remained was exerting out to the surface of his skin, and form it into the sphere of chakra that Yosuke had, and rotate his chakra simultaneously. he focused to the best of his ability, managing to bring his chakra to the surface of his palm. It was too much chakra for him to maintain in one single area of his body. as the chakra began to take the sphere form in his hand, He palm felt like something was ripping into it. He yelled out in pain, stopping the flow of chakra into his palm, and subsiding it. He was sweating heavily. The concentration was interrupted as the aftershock of pain went through his entire arm. He grimaced, and then looked over to Yosuke.

"I'm.... used up on all my chakra. It's too much for my body to handle. What do i do?"

They came up to a temple,  It was dark, and upon entrance there wasn't much that could be seen. It was then that Toshiko felt a little upset. It was strange. the hair upon his neck was standing up and his body erupted with goosebumps as though he was being watched by something.

"Yosuke.... I don't know, but i think we're being.."

Word count: 1251

Senjutsu C-B 6439/7000

19Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Thu May 21, 2015 1:30 am

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
He smiled as he watched the boy struggle to create his Rasengan, he carried the boy over his shoulder, and as they walked towards a temple of complete darkness, it appears Toshiko started to feel their presence, the perhaps meant they're getting closer, Tsuneo smiled towards the boy as he disappeared and reappeared behind Toshiko, he would strike the nape of his neck, aiming to drop Toshiko out of his consciousness,  he then would create a clone and seal Toshiko within it , giving one order to the clone Tsuneo dismissed it, that order was “With your life” the clone's main job was to provide protection, Tsuneo ordered him to protect the boy regardless of the cost.

Tsuneo sat down with one leg stretched and one bent,  one hand holding Tsuneo up, and the other was left motionless on his knee, as he waited for nothing more than a second, two figures would come out, one of them is at least A-rank, Tsuneo would make sure to rip the two apart if they proved to be enemies, but he would certainly get answers as to why they were tailing them.

The two figures were amazingly trained or so Tsuneo thought from their forms, they would speak few words, and those words proved taunting as is for Tsuneo's decision; “Centipede, we were ordered by the Daimyo of Kirigakure to bring you in for execution, you best comply, otherwise it will be rough for both you, and your friend.”

Tsuneo would, remove his hood and look at the two with his darkened eyes, it was time to murder, Tsuneo stood up as he glared with a killing intent, daggers to all that stood in his way, Tsuneo spoke:
“I'm gonna be keeping one of you assholes alive, you'll be sending a message to that brat, or to his adviser.” 

Tsuneo hoped Toshiko wouldn't wake up from within his clone to witness the brutality that is to occur. The taller masculine servant of the daimyo came towards Tsuneo rushing, he would send a sweep towards Tsuneo's legs, Tsuneo reacted by jumping, but the man had more to him, he sent a kick towards Tsuneo's head  aiming to send him to his doom, but it was no doom that Tsuneo was going to, the Uzumaki latched onto the man's leg as he rotated midair and landed on the man's leg, using it as an object to push himself up above them man, Tsuneo would take aim and prepare to shoot his flames into his soon-to-be-dead target, but Tsuneo was interrupted with the other one, the one with the feminine body, Tsuneo would bend his body backwards as a kick came above him he would grab her ankle and launch here to the expected man who just darted towards them, launching the small one towards the other one, but still they reacted quite nicely, each darted to a direction, Tsuneo rush towards the side of the girl and with his spear he cut off her legs and had her unmoving for a while, while the other rushed a punch towards Tsuneo whom was speaking to the girl “So pitiful-”  Tsuneo  spoke with a cruel tone looking down on her, and when that man's rush interrupted Tsuneo's word, the centipede would grab his punch with one mere hand, and  with that Tsuneo spoke as he pulled the man closer “Don't you see I'm talking, shut up for a while” he said as he pushed the man's head down and lifted his leg striking them man's head and crushing his nose with a strike from his knee.

And as the pathetic one began regaining her control, he decided it would be appropriate to finish the fight, he kicked the man outside, as he unleashed  his raging fires from  nothing more than two meters, but as he unleashed the raging surge of flames, that came towards his victim like a raging bull, Tsuneo jumped away, his clone would reappear at his side, Tsuneo would ask abou the boy, and luckily Toshiko was unharmed, the female remained on the ground but as she arose, Tsuneo appeared in top speed behind her crawling figure.

He would begin the torture, sneaking a centipede from his ear to hers, she began beating against the ground as she laughed with insanity,Tsuneo began then by biting one finger after the other, and slowly devouring parts of her as he questioned her, Tsuneo would squeeze the answers from her, and then leave her crawling back to the daimyo's palace, letting them know of what Tsuneo had done to her, and of what  darkness the centipede can expose, the centipede had also sent her a message, that message would speak of the horrors to come:

“Get your ass ready, I'm about to destroy you little brat.”


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20Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Thu May 21, 2015 4:44 am

Toshiko Uzumaki

Toshiko Uzumaki


D-rank
Toshiko was sure of it. There was someone or somethings chakra very close by. Not only one signature. There were multiple. He couldn't make them out completely, but he definitely felt them. Who could these people be? Were they friends of Yosuke's No.... No way. If that was the case, he wouldn't have been cautious of their whereabouts. They were enemies. But who were they after? Toshiko recalled what had happened a while earlier. right when he came into contact with Yosuke, there were individuals out for his head. Referring to him as the centipede, and ganging up on him with the intent to take his life. After remembering this detail, Toshiko realized he knew less about Yosuke than he originally thought. What was with him? When Toshiko had first met him, he seemed scary. His physical appearance and chakra all matched that of an individual with a dark mentality. But when Toshiko spoke to him, he got a completely different side of him. Toshiko didn't understand it.

As he was thinking, he was met with an abrupt strike. Usually, he wouldn't have reacted the way he did, but his body was already in a strain from his great usage of chakra. his eyes rolled back as his body went toppling forward seemingly to him in slow motion, and he blacked out.

he hated it when he blacked out. he'd have absolutely no recollection of what had occurred during him being incapacitated, and it felt weird. To him. It was a state of unconsciousness that could not be willfully recovered from. All he could do was wait. Time went by, he could not distinguish an exact amount of how much of course. He grunted, appearing to be on a solid ground, He started moving, and then got up to his feet before opening his eyes. He couldn't see anything really. Well at all. It was pitch black all around him. He couldn't remember what happened at first, but as he began to regain complete consciousness, he remembered what had happened. Yosuke had knocked him out. But where was he now? He could sense Yosuke and other individuals nearby. like within meter range, but just couldn't see them. He wasn't in their plan of sight. that was the only logical realization that could be made. He had to be trapped within something near them. Only question was what?

"Yosuke?"

His call was met with no answer, immediately being swallowed by the void that he found himself trapped within. What was he to do? He could hear the voices and murmurs of two individuals somehow, but saw nothing in front of him. Where had Yosuke put him? He was still alive, so he figured that at least Yosuke had been trying to protect him, but that still didn't make sense towards why they were being attacked in the first place. There was not much for him to do. He simply stood there within the void that he found himself trapped in, waiting for a way or moment for him to utilize an exit.


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21Evolution[private/training] Empty Re: Evolution[private/training] Tue Oct 11, 2016 2:41 pm

Tsuneo

Tsuneo


D-rank
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Learning Senjutsu 1371/5000 
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