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1The Hikari Clan  Empty The Hikari Clan Mon Jan 11, 2016 10:15 am

Itsuko

Itsuko


D-rank
Symbol: The Hikari Clan  10eebmv


Clan: The Hikari Clan (光)

Kekkei Genkai: Hiton (Light Release)

Elements: Katon (Fire Release, Raiton (Lightning Release)

Specialization:PositiveName: Elementalist
Type: Positive
Description: This individual has dedicated a decent amount of time towards training their secondary element. This element starts at B rank instead of the usual C rank.

Negative
Name: Short Fuse
Type: Negative
Description: This individual has anger issues. They can be set off by the most unimposing of things, and has a very difficult time suppressing his or her outbursts, be they verbal or physical. This will often lead them into foolish fights they would never enter under a reasonable mindset, even against friends or allies.

Location: Kirigakure

Clan History:
Spoiler:

Kekkei Genkai Description:  Incorrectly named by the clan that initially held the Hikari clan ancestors captive, the Hiton is a Kekkei Genkai, more specifically an Advanced Element. Having its basis in the Hikari clan’s genotype, this genetic trait allows all those who inherit it to mix a single Advanced Element – Hiton. Despite the reductive name, when mixing these two charka natures into one, the user will be able to focus his chakra and transform it into electromagnetic radiation, of varying wavelengths and frequencies, allowing them to transform their very chakra into visible light, ultraviolet radiation and infrared radiation. While achieving certain radio wave effects and X ray effects is also possible, they are slightly harder and more demanding of the user, often only being accessible with the highest ranked techniques.

By releasing their chakra into the surrounding area, they can also make it interact with the existing electromagnetic radiation, especially visible light, and manipulate it to the user’s need. This allows the descendant of the Hikari clan ancestors to accomplish feats such as removing visible light from a given area, causing his body to flash with overflowing, blinding light, emitting infrared radiation from his body or focusing light into powerful, searing rays. A rare handful of techniques, additionally, allow the user of this Bloodline Selection to momentarily grant their body some traits of these electromagnetic radiations and, at times, even transform their physical matter into them.

Drawbacks:

  • - Members are weak against Water and wind release by -1 rank.

  • - Members Can't Learn Fuinjutsu/Ijutsu (medical Ninjutsu)/Puppetry.

  • - Members Technique in the night are -1 Rank Weaker.


Members: Judar Hikari

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Name: True Light Perception
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-SS Rank
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Element: Hiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintainable
Cooldown: 1 Post
Description: A basic technique belonging to the Hikari clan bloodline. By focusing some Hiton chakra in and around the user's eyes, the Hikari clan member is able to unlock the full potential of their vision. After being activated (only necessary to pay the activation cost once per topic), the user will gain the ability to visually perceive the different types of electromagnetic radiation, from radio waves to X rays. Each of these types will be slightly tinted with a different color and, thus, the user of this technique will be able to differentiate between them. This technique is also selective, which means that the user can also chose to eliminate his ability to see certain types of electromagnetic radiation for the remainder of the post, allowing him to focus on the one(s) he can still see. The different types of radiation will assume the following colors:


  • -Radio = Light Green D Rank
    Blinds enemy for 1 post
  • -Microwaves = Yellow C Rank
    Blinds enemy for 1 1/2 Post
  • -Infrared = Crimson B Rank
    Blinds enemy for 2 post
  • -Visible light = White A Rank
    Blinds enemy for 3 post
  • -Ultraviolet = Magenta S Rank
    Blinds enemy for 4 post
  • -X rays = Cyan SS Rank
    Blinds enemy for 6 post

2The Hikari Clan  Empty Re: The Hikari Clan Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:54 pm

Itsuko

Itsuko


D-rank
Bump

3The Hikari Clan  Empty Re: The Hikari Clan Fri Jan 15, 2016 5:54 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
General
  • please remove the SC from the title, that would be placed in the KKG section as well as all other buffs.
  • Specialization would mean if they're a Taijutsu, ninjutsu genjutsu etc based clan. SC means special characteristic. If you''re confused, i suggest looking through some approved clans.
  • Also, that symbol is already in use for another clan.


KKG
  • As for Hiton and radiation release, you are going to need a LOT more work on how the elements combine and act together to create it, how it forms and what it is capable of to get this close to being approved. I'm not trying to be mean, but advanced elements require a much more stern and substantial modding process than others. And something as powerful in concept as radiation is going to need to be pristine.~


Drawbacks:
  • Advanced element clans must have hesitant spec. and cannot balance it


Jutsu
  • So, what does this jutsu do? is it sensory? or is it offensive? you add this thing of blinding at the bottom with no context, and you dont detail any differences between the ranks other than the waves that are seen. You need to be way more specific and open with what you're trying to get.



Lots more work to be done here.

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