Clan: Akayoru

Kekkei Genkai: Essence Creation

Elements: Any

Specialization: Medical Ninjutsu

Location: Iwagakure

Clan History: The Akayoru have been in Iwagakure for as long as anyone can remember. No one really remembers why or when they showed up. They just did. They have always been a small clan. Never holding any sort of dominance or prestige. In fact most people rarely ever see a Akayoru as they mainly stick to their small compound just outside of the village. However, they are easily distinguished. Some members boast horns, pointy ears, or tails (purely cosmetic), but all members of this clan boast sharp fang like canines. Most people who see a Akayoru never forget. They have been called many names in the amount of time they have been in Iwagakure. Demons. Vampires. Even though they have done nothing to earn such names. Although they don't care much, and probably because they aren't always seen in the most positive light, they have become even more reclusive the over the past few decades. Although recently a few members of the clan have been getting tired and angry about the insults thrown their way.

*It should be noted when a Akayoru member is born, the blood covering their body converts to an a Essence cloud around them before being the cloud goes into the child's body.

*It should also be noted that members of this clan whose Essence color differs from the normal red color, are highly stigmatized and outcast in the clan. Some may even become targets for assassinations. This is due to the fact that stories are carried down from an ancient time before the clan joined Iwagakure, that a small group of Akayoru members who had different essence colors, banding together and started a civil war which almost made the clan go extinct. It is extremely rare to have a different Essence color, and your differing Essence color also changes your chakra color to that color.

Kekkei Genkai Description:
Essence Creation: Essence is a form of energy, used for a variety of different means. The primary use of Essence is for healing, although other uses can be found. Being as Essence is a form of energy it is intangible, and as such cannot be hardened to form things (meaning no essence spears or walls or anything of that nature). While essence mostly resides in the user's body if it does come out, it takes the form of a cloud of a gas, that the user can control. Essence is primarily red in color, although sometimes a rare occurrence happens, and it is colored differently, either for a user or just for a single jutsu. Essence is created by absorbing blood into the user's body, primarily through the use of their fangs. Once the blood is in the user's body it is instantly intermingled with the user's chakra creating a new form of energy knew as essence. This is a natural instinct of the members of this clan (similar to breathing or blinking), and as such cannot be taught or gained by anyone outside of the clan. Members of this clan cannot control blood, or use blood related jutsu. They can only turn blood into Essence.

* All Essence techniques are required to have how much blood they drain in the technique.

Talented: Members of this clan can use Medical ninjutsu techniques of 2 ranks higher than their rank (so genin's can use B-rank jutsu), due to this members of this clan also start out with 1 B-rank jutsu.

Fangs: Clan members are born with naturally born sharper canines, also known as fangs. these fangs deal damage based on an individual's strength. These fangs gain 0.5 inch deeper penetration for every rank of strength starting at D-rank (I.E. someone of D-rank strength can puncture 0.5 inches, where as someone of B-rank strength can puncture 1.5 inches). It is these fangs that allow the bearer to absorb blood into their body, and convert it too Essence. Although the process of creating essence is a natural instinct to clan members, and cannot be taught or gained by members outside of the clan.

Predatory Smell: Similar to other predators, members of this clan can smell blood. This sense of smell, can recognize and distinguish each person's blood, and it works similarly to an inuzuka's sense of smell. This means that members of this clan can track and identify target's by their blood, and even pinpoint locations using only their sense of smell. However this isn't without it's own drawbacks of course. Similar to an inuzuka's nose, if a being has fowl smelling blood that foul smell becomes worse in the target's nose. Also a target can confuse a member of this clan by scattering their own blood in several locations.

This can be hidden by a C-rank or higher stealth Technique. Members can also only smell blood within a 20 meter radius of them.

Drawbacks:

Talent with knowledge:Members of the Akayoru clan, while talented, know that talent and knowledge, with training, becomes a deadly combination. training jutsu of a higher rank than the clan member has a 50% increase in wordcount.

All and Nothing: While members of this clan start out talented, their jutsu library also starts out small. Members of this clan start out with only 1 B-rank jutsu. That is all. (this of course excludes clan jutsu, and that academy jutsu)

Elementally Weak: Members of this clan are elementally weak and as such start out with no elements. The first element can be trained as a genin. Members of this can only ever have two elements, with the second one being able to be trained as a special jounin. Both of which have a 50% increase in wordcount or a 100% increase in word count if they are learning it from an NPC.

Converting cost: The fangs were a natural born way of converting blood to essence. As such any conversion of blood to essence that does not involve the fangs requires an extra 5 chakra for ranks E-B, and an extra 10 chakra for A+ jutsu

Members: Akayoru, Sora (Heir to clan head)

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Night vision:

Blood Withdrawal:

Essence Transfer:

Essence Healing:

KKG

First things first, what is essence, how is it created, what does it do, is it an element, what are its effects, what does it look like. You need to add a lot more here just in the description of what your KKG is.

Also, some of your wording throughout comes off as a little off, i would read the app out loud, or have someone else read it to you. Just a handy tip.

Next, you have too many advantages and i would like to see some of those culled. I'll go through them individually if you would like, but having +'s to stats. + to jutsu use, an advanced element of sorts, + to training, start with 3 specs, having multiple beginning passives which are always there... like, it's a bit much. Way too much. You could half those and be on par with every clan for bonuses.

Drawbacks

Same thing, if you bring down the number of pros, you can bring down the cons, remember to keep things active as drawbacks which would be relevant and matter to characters of the clan.

Jutsu.

1/ seems fine.
2/ why do you loose the -1 to yourself, even though you're draining MORE blood, that makes little sense to me, you should keep things thematic. You're healing and getting max -1 debuffs per rank. I'd like downsides throughout.
3/ No. Way too high, this is denied. +2 ranks is just too high sorry.
4/ this jutsu just does not make sense to me sorry, might need a general go over. Perhaps due to the fact that 'essence' is just so vague.

bump.

KKG

Some spelling errors throughout

Nose: You need to say what rank of stealth technique can hide from this, as the effect does not escalate, i would say C and higher which hides the user's scent.

Drawbacks

we're good.

Jutsu:

1/ cool
2/ this is your 'special' jutsu, it looks okay, maybe touch it up to make it a little more uniform, but as i said, it looks ok.
3/ I'd like a 1 post prep time. Need a projectile speed, just in case a baddy wants to intercept this.
4/ How much blood does this drain, please give it in either liters or Pints. :) just so we get an idea of how lethal it is. ensure you do this with all their jutsu, so that you can actually drain people dry. A person should not just have limitless blood at the cost of debuffs.~

Bump.

KKG:

1/ Talented. You need to make this specific, the whole +1 to the use of thing is limted to a spec or element or type of technique, not everything. So, in this case, it can be a spec, element, or essence techniques, not everything.

need the nose thing i said earlier

rest seems ok

Add the essence jutsu must require an amount of essence drained disclaimer here please.

Drawbacks

Seem ok

Jutsu

1/ Seems ok

2/ Much better

3/ Just make this maintainable. And make the downsides apply over the duration, a duration of 8 is silly. add amount drained

4/ add amound drained

Bump