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1Borou Clan Empty Borou Clan Thu Aug 14, 2014 8:22 pm

Kaekio

Kaekio


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Symbol:

Borou Clan Imageedit_4_2323049280_zps46cb7f91


Clan: Borou

Kekkei Genkai: Triningan (Doujustu)

Elements: None

Specialization: Fuuinjustu (Sealing, Must be Primary)

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The borou Clan has been in hiding for the past 1000 years, in fear of those that would seek their special eyes. but now that they have fully comprehended the Abilities of their eyes, they feel like they my be strong enough to take on those that would oppose them, and so they came out of Hiding as a United front. but soon a civil war broke out between them, the wars was bloody but fast and ended in the members of the Clan scattering out to everywhere.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Triningan, the Sealing Doujustu. this Doujustu allows the User to Use the Clans Signature Technique ヘブンエリアシール (Haven Area Seal) which creates a Seal on the Ground that allows the user to then use their eyes to place a seal on the Ground somewhere in the Seal. The Size of the Haven Area Seal depends on the Stage of the Doujustu, this Doujustu also allows for some Sensory Techniques.



Borou Clan Doujustu1_zpsabe2d44d
No Stage
This Stage is Empty and Untrained the User cannot use the Haven Area Seal. Nor the Sensory range.

Costs no Chakra.


Borou Clan Doujustu2_zps0c740848
First Stage
Allows Use of D-ranks Haven Area Seal. Can be Trained at D-rank. this Rank allows for 360 degree vision around the user while this Stage is Active for 10 meters in every direction. although this doesn't come without side effects. (listed in drawbacks)

Takes 5 chakra per post


Borou Clan Doujustu3_zps485bff9e
Second Stage
Allows Use of C-ranks Haven Area Seal. Can  be trained at C-rank. this Rank allows for 360 degree vision around the user while this Stage is Active for 20 meters in every direction.

Takes 10 chakra per post


Borou Clan Doujustu4_zps4fe50ff9
Third Stage
Allows Use of B-ranks Haven Area Seal. Can be Trained at B-rank. this Rank allows for 360 degree vision around the user while this Stage is Active for 35 meters in every direction.

Takes 15 chakra per post


Borou Clan Doujustu5_zps4a9fa8df
Fourth Stage
Allows Use of A-ranks Haven Area Seal. Can be Trained at A-rank. this Rank allows for 360 degree vision around the user while this Stage is Active for 50 meters in every direction.

Takes 20 chakra per post


Borou Clan Doujustu6_zps3243f6ec
Fifth Stage
Allows Use of S-ranks Haven Area Seal. Can be Trained at S-rank. this Rank allows for 360 degree vision around the user while this Stage is Active for 100 meters in every direction. 

Takes 25 chakra per post




it takes 1.5k to Train up to go form one rank to go to the next, also takes some ryo, 150 ryo to go from Nothing to D, 200 from D to C, 300 from C to B, 500 from B to A, 750 A to S. A to S-rank has double WC to train.

Side Note: Users of this clan do not have to have blue eyes, the back round color will simply be swapped out for the eye color of the user. however if the user has black eyes or dark any darker color that would make the Doujustu hard to see, then the color of eyes will changed to the same color blue as seen above.

Drawbacks: Due to There High affinity for Fuuinjustu the Members of this Can must take Hesitant (Specialization) and cannot be counter balanced, and also they are only ever allow to know 3 elements due to their focus on their Specialization and the The third can allow be learned at A-rank. As Borou clan members have felt pain for a long time, none of them will allow one another to Forget that pain, as such no member can take the Numb SC or any SC that allows them to negate the Headaches caused by the KKG.

Headache:  For the first 2 posts of usage of the doujutsu a headache slowly builds, causing minor distractions while battling.  after 3 posts the headache has become a migraine making it so that the user loses a tier of reaction time, and for every 3 more posts the headache gets stronger losing another tier of Reaction time. once the doujustu has Ended it will take an Equal amount of posts for the headache to go away slowly digressing once more, so if used for 6 posts the user will have -2 reaction time, at 3 posts into the cool down, the use will only have -1 reaction time. This headache stacks on top of the Haven Area seal Headache.

Members: None as of Yet.

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Triangle Chakra Reflection Technique:
Triangle Chakra seal:
Triangle Area Barrier:
Haven Area Seal:



Last edited by Kaekio on Sun Mar 22, 2015 9:01 pm; edited 11 times in total

2Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Mon Aug 18, 2014 6:57 pm

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Bump for checking?

3Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Thu Aug 21, 2014 3:05 pm

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
Haven Area Seal: I notice the headache rules from posting a seal using this technique after B Ranked and above. If that is truly what you want it to say, then explicitly say so in the portion of the technique.

4Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Thu Aug 21, 2014 4:02 pm

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Okay... fixed... i hope...

5Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Thu Aug 21, 2014 4:06 pm

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
I feel as though just losing tiers to reaction time will be enough a suffice drawback for the doujutsu. I see no need for the user to also lose chakra as well for stepping outside of the circle.

6Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Fri Aug 22, 2014 12:02 am

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Kay fixed and new justu added...

7Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Fri Aug 22, 2014 12:44 am

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
Haven Area Sensory Technique: please note that the haven doujutsu seal must be activated for this ability to take place

8Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Fri Aug 22, 2014 1:03 am

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Kay fixed :p

9Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Fri Aug 22, 2014 1:05 am

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
Haven Area Sensory Technique: Clan techniques can have only one technique that scales with the user.

10Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Fri Aug 22, 2014 1:37 am

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Kay... Bump... if the Hyuga can have Scale able eyes AND A scale able Justu so can i <_< and there are also some other Doujustu clans that have Justu scaled to their eyes as well as scale able eyes... so i will leave it at that.

11Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:52 pm

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Bump <_<

12Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:07 pm

Tame

Tame


D-rank
Triangle Barrier: This is alright.

Haven Area Seal: See below; we'll deal with the other technical stuff later. Please try to condense this as much as possible; it's a bit difficult to get through.



Doujutsu: It's alright, up to the A-S jump. That rank needs way more words and a slightly bigger headache. You just went from 50 to 200.

I think you should put types of headache in the Drawbacks section, along with what effect each has on the Borou clan member while it persists. This will immensely reduce clutter in your jutsu and KKG description.

13Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:23 pm

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
Bump for edits made made jutsu added

14Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Tue Feb 10, 2015 5:40 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Hai, reduce the time it takes on the headaches to increments of 3 posts, not 6, fights are over in 6 posts. What ranks can each stage of the Doujutsu be trained at? Cos, as it stands, with the words and the ryo, you could train it up like a specialisation... I'd like you to have to be the ninja rank, equal to the rank of the eye you want to attain in order to attain it. Ie. The fist rank of the eye can be trained at D rank, while the final rank of eye should only be able to be trained at a 'minimum' of A rank.

Triangle chakra seal: I want you to define exactly what happens if an item with chakra running through it or another player hits the symbol? I understand it seals away up to 30 chakra from a technique, which absorbs the technique, but can it rob a ninja of their chakra pool and stop chakra enhanced items? If so, then this number will have to be lowered, as well as its defensive properties to 1 of equal rank, 2 of lower, 4 of lower than that. And redice the chakra reduction to 25.

Haven Seal: lastly what do you mean by this? "Triningan must be active at all times in order to learn this jutsu." That, kindof doesn't make sense, do you mean use?

15Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Sat Mar 21, 2015 5:17 am

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
think i got everything, bump for review.

16Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Sun Mar 22, 2015 8:51 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
JUTSU:

  • Triangle Barrier: Is fine

  • Triangle Chakra Seal: I'm really not sure about this technique... Hmmm, it stops people from using chakra in its area, including the user, stops people from using any activated seals etc on their weapons/ items... but it IS after all A rank. This is fine for now... but imma put a * here.

  • Area Barrier: Is fine

  • Haven Seal: I want you to add this sentence, and it is non-negotiable. "the entire range of the seals placed within the Haven area seal must be able to fit within its radius, and they take a single second to form, and a further second before they can activate." I'm also placing a * here as well


After that, this clan has my approval~

* Some of the approvals on this app are approved for a period of trial, and I reserve the right to pull this clan for any reason to assess its KKG and jutsu.

17Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Sun Mar 22, 2015 9:01 pm

Kaekio

Kaekio


D-rank
edits made :3

18Borou Clan Empty Re: Borou Clan Sun Mar 22, 2015 10:47 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
This clan is

APPROVED

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