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1Senju, Owydelu [Jutsu Update] Empty Senju, Owydelu [Jutsu Update] Sun Jun 22, 2014 6:34 am

Owydelu

Owydelu


D-rank
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Suiton -> S-Rank
Doton -> S-Rank
Mokuton -> S-Rank

E-Ranked:
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self/Sight
Specialty: None
Duration: -5 every two posts.
Cooldown: 2 posts after deactivation.
Description: Given all the missions ninja are assigned to--battle, intelligence gathering, diversions--this is a priceless ninjutsu. It is typically used to change into people other than oneself, but one also has the ability to change into animals, plants, and even inanimate objects like weapons. This gives this technique an abundance of uses. The transformation of a skilled shinobi will be visually and physically the same as the original, so it will be impossible to tell the two apart. On the other hand, a transformation performed by an inexperienced person will have obvious discrepancies. It will be impossible to deceive anyone with it. This is one of the most basic ninjutsu, as such most shinobi know how to perform it. This jutsu is purely appearance-based, and does not give a ninja the abilities or jutsu of a person they transform into. Dojutsu can easily pick out this technique, and if the user has transformed into someone larger than themselves, the bits beyond their natural body will have no heat signature. This, and the fact that the chakra of the user wouldn't look normal makes it easier for sensing techniques to pick out transformed people. Costs 5 chakra on activation, and an additional 5 chakra every 2 posts.

Name: Doppelganger Technique (影分身の術 ~ Bunshin no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Short (0-5m)
Speciality: None
Duration: Clones last 4 posts, or until dissipated.
Cooldown: Six posts after all clones are dispersed.
Description: Using this technique, the user can create up to five intangible clones that appear physically identical to the user. The clone has no physical form, and as such cannot attack. When any object passes through the clone, be it a fist, a rock or a blade, the clone will evaporate. It's mainly used to help mask the user, helping them attack an opponent who is superior at dodging. The clones do not disturb the area around them, don't have shadows or body heat, and as such experienced ninja can easily pick them out. Costs 5 chakra to create clones.

Name: Subtitution Technique (変わり身の術 ~ Kawarimi no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Specialty: None
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 post
Description: With this technique, a ninja replaces moves at high speed and switches with a nearby object at the exact moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful; experienced ninja can even make it appear that their Substitution is bleeding. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations.

Name: Genjutsu Dissipation (幻術解 ~ Genjutsu Kai)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Specialty: None
Duration: 1 post.
Cooldown: 4 posts.
Description: A technique taught at the Ninja Academy requiring chakra control. By using Kai, a ninja disrupts their own flow of chakra, then starts it again. This allows a ninja to escape from illusions, provided he or she has figured out that a Genjutsu is active. This is an E-ranked technique, but has variable chakra costs. The user must pay 15 more chakra for every rank the Genjutsu is above their own rank.


  • Genin: 15 chakra for a D-ranked Genjutsu. Genin cannot dispel B-ranked Genjutsu.

  • Chuunin: 25 chakra for a C-ranked Genjutsu. Chuunin cannot dispel A-ranked Genjutsu.

  • Special Jounin: 35 chakra for a B-ranked Genjutsu. Sp.Jou. cannot dispel S-ranked Genjutsu.

  • Jounin: 45 chakra for an A-ranked Genjutsu. Jounin cannot dispel SS-ranked Genjutsu.

  • Sannin/Kage: 50 chakra for an S-ranked Genjutsu. Only Genjutsu that specifically say that they cannot be Dissipated (such as Tsukuyomi) are the exception.


Name: Supernatural Walking Practice (不自然歩く型 ~ Fushizen Aruk'kata)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: None
Range: Self
Specialty: None
Duration: -5 chakra every 3 posts (every 2 posts if using on water)
Cooldown: None
Description: Supernatural walking Practice is a basic ninja technique. It involves using chakra flow to channel chakra to one's hands or feet, allowing him/her to walk on surfaces that normally do not allow it. This includes, but is not limited to, walls/ceilings, trees, and even water. Should the flow of chakra stop for any reason, the user will immediately fall off of the surface they are walking on, or plunge underwater.


D-Ranked:


C-Ranked:
Name: Wood Release: Four-Pillar Prison Technique (Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Wood/Mokuton (Water and Earth
Range: Short-range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: The user converts chakra into timber under the ground and makes it grow rapidly, while forming it into a wooden prison. The player can only create the prison to the size equal to that of a holding cell. The timber itself is treated with a chakra coating, making its destruction difficult to c-rank jutsus or weapons or below. A maximum of two c-rank or 1 B-rank. Fire jutsus also damage the wood further reducing the amount of jutsus by half the amount it would usually take for each level; 1 c-rank. During war, it has the great ability to detain prisoners, but it can also be used as a disciplinary measure for quarrelling subordinates.

Name: Earth Release: Earth-Style Rampart {土遁・土流城壁 Doton: Doryū Jōheki}
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C-Ranked
Type: Supplementarry
Element: Earth Release {Doton}
Range: Short Range ( up to 2 meters)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: -
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description: This technique makes a rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. It can cause bruising no deeper than 2,5 inch penetration without the possibility of bone fracture. The maximum size of the earth is 3 and 1/2 meters.


Name: Wood Release: Wooden Fists Attack
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Mokuton
Range: Short to Middle Range (up to 10 meters)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description: The user creates, at the start, a wooden punch that gets out of the trees or from the ground. Anytime he wants, he can create another punch for 5 chakra. The punch can be easily destroyed, using a C-Ranked or higher technique, in one post. The punch's size is of a car, while the arm that sustains the punch can get up to 2 meters. The punch does moderate bruising when it hits a target. The user can only make a punch per post.




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S-Ranked:

2Senju, Owydelu [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Owydelu [Jutsu Update] Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:28 pm

Mikage

Mikage


D-rank
Please replace your clan / library techniques when the clan is updated / library revamps are released. The Ninjutsu, Katon, and Fuuton libraries are out already. Otherwise, leave them as they are and update them when they are out.

Rain Dance: What happens if the katon jutsu duration is less than the amount of posts it takes for your rain to put it out? Remove the +1 jutsu effect if it's going to help boost Raiton techniques. Cooldown needs to be increased to at least 7 posts.

Wooden Shuriken: This needs a set range - a D rank range, see jutsu guidelines for appropriate ranges.

Hiding in the Forest: Specify that chakra sensory abilities of one rank higher will be able to see the user, and limit it to a single other person - and only if the tree is large enough to fit both the user and the other person.

Four-Pillar Prison Technique: Increase cooldown to 6 posts. Your description is a little unclear - clarify that it takes two C ranks or 1 B rank (non-Katon) technique to destroy the prison, as well as anyone with A rank or higher Strength stat would be able to destroy the prison within a post, with a few basic strikes.

Earth-Style Rampart: Decrease the damages according to the new jutsu guidelines.

Wooden Fists Attack: A punch is a verb … what exactly is a wooden punch? Clarify exactly what this technique does.

Mokuton no Jutsu: Which canon technique is this made after? You need to specify exactly how this stuns an opponent. Right now, it just says there's a pillar of wood in their hand, and then stunning occurs.

Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death: Please use the library version of this once the new suiton library revamp is out.

Wooden Clone: Broken list coding.

Owydelu wrote:Unlike the Shadow Clone Technique, the wood clone doesn't disappear when hit and even appears to take the damage.

Remove this. Shadow Clones also only disperse when they take the max amount of damage. Also give this a set range that the clones can travel up to and specify that chakra from clones that are forcefully dispersed do not return to the user. Clones should only be able to use Mokuton techniques, and if they run out of chakra, they will disperse.

Genesis of a Thorny Ivy Realm: Change Range from "All Ranges" to 15 meter radius. Give a range and speed to the thorns being launched. Decrease the defensive capabilities of this technique - this is an entire forest, there is no way that each individual plant requires an A rank technique to destroy.

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