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1Hibiki Clan Empty Hibiki Clan Tue Apr 02, 2013 7:26 pm

Baki

Baki


D-rank
Symbol:

Hibiki Clan Pentagram

Clan: Hibiki

Kekkei Genkai: Genjutsuken ( Illusion fist)

Elements: None

Specialization: Genjutsu / Taijutsu or Genjutsu /Medical Ninjutsu

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The Hibiki clan itself is a new clan, however, the origins of there Kekki Genkai is mostly lost to history. The rediscovery of the Kekki Genkai by Baki Hibiki and his teacher at the time happened as sort of a fluke, but nevertheless, the Kekkei Genkai was reborn. Untold ages have passed since the world saw this Kekkei Genkai and now its return. The clan itself was scattered due to most of them being pacifists and refusing to fight. The ones that choose to fight where kicked out of the clan and declared ronin. The true clan name was lost to history and since Baki after he discovered it was a ronin at the time and had no clan name, His teacher who was the last of the clan known as Hibiki decided to Adopt Baki into it and declared him the clan leader.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Simply put the Kekki Genkai allows one to fool there enemy's and themselves with illusions. What makes it unique is they are able to bring out there body's full potential by targeting themselves. They cast the genjutsu on there clothes or there own body so that all one needs to do is look at them when the Kekki Genkai is active to be under the first part of the illusion. They use Genjutsu to make there strikes and moves appear faster,slower, or off target to make the enemy block or move wrong so that they get hit. The ability to wrap themselves in the genjutsu stems from the False Surroundings Technique as it creates a overlay on top that is hard to tell it is there. The second part is the ability to target there own body/senses to get there body to feel different things ie: they can target there own cerebral nervous system to release endorphins or adrenalin to boost there performance or to tone down pain.

Drawbacks: If the user passes there limits due to putting themselves under genjutsu they can overwork there body and strain it. It starts off with overworked muscles and joints, past that they damage there own internal organs and if they go past that they ether die or are forced to stop being a shinobi. Due to constant strain on the body all members have to take the Pharmacophobia trait. The other drawback is if they are not careful they will lose sight of who they are and lose there mind. Insanity is the price for being weak minded in this clan. The members of this clan are weak to fighting puppets as they can not be put under Genjutsu. They take a -2 to fighting puppeteers. If the user goes past the limit three times in one thread they have ruined there body and must take the born ill trait.

The disease is not a disease per say as it comes from ruining ones own body. The effects of it are drastic. The user coughs up blood and has a very hard time moving and breathing taking a -2 to speed and a -2 to strength. This comes into effect after 3 uses of the Adrenaline release in the same topic. And ONLY if the person has ruined there body by using Adrenaline release.

Members of this clan do NOT start off with the born ill trait. They only get it if they ruin there body by pushing it way beyond there limits for a long period of time. ( By using there adrenalin to boost there body for 3 times in the same topic.)

Members of this clan have to take Pharmacophobia as a trait even if they don't have a positive trait.

Members: Hibiki, Baki

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

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Last edited by Lonewolf1 on Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:57 pm; edited 23 times in total

2Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Tue Apr 02, 2013 7:32 pm

Daximus Maximus

Daximus Maximus


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I know this is WIP but you need to have the correct coding.

I.e:

Drawbacks: Text

3Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:19 pm

Baki

Baki


D-rank
ok Fixed.

4Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:47 pm

Guest



Guest
Okay...the KKG itself seems fine, as it just seems to be describing the jutsu.

Drawbacks. Make sure to say that the Born Ill trait is ONLY for Adrenaline. Detail this in the jutsu. Also, be sure to say that the clan takes Pharmacophobia without having a positive SC to balance it out. Detail how long it takes for each of these side effects to set in.

KKG Jutsu: Genjutsuken-ken looks like it can be merged with Genjutsuken, as the only point of Genjutsuken is to activate Genjutsuken-ken. You can merge them into one D or C-rank jutsu. Incidentally, Genjutsuken-ken, Endorphins, and Adrenaline all need cooldowns.

5Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:08 am

Baki

Baki


D-rank
Fixed

6Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:16 am

Guest



Guest
Kutsuu: Longer cooldown.

Endorphins and Adrenaline: 1-2 posts longer cooldown.

Endorphins: Detail what rank of pain you can dull with this jutsu. Probably dependent on the rank of the user.

Adrenaline: You need to detail how much stronger, in ranks or percentages. Also, the cooldown prevents you from using it 8 posts in a row, nullifying the drawback. Fix eet.

7Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:33 am

Baki

Baki


D-rank
Fixed eet :P

8Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 3:19 pm

Jezzi

Jezzi


D-rank
Ok first off, your code is still off, you didn't bold any of your headings like Drawbacks or Clan History

This is a bit of a nitpick but you keep spelling "Kekkei Genkai" wrong...

Other than that it looks fine...

9Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 3:24 pm

Baki

Baki


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fixed...

10Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:15 pm

Guest



Guest
You can't teach Clan Jutsu to non-clan members. Blasphemer

11Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Wed Apr 03, 2013 10:15 pm

Baki

Baki


D-rank
Fixed T.T

12Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:36 pm

Guest



Guest
Endorphins: "Members of the Hibiki clan can use it at B rank automatically."

No. Give yourself +1 usage and some drawbacks to balance it out, and sure.

13Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:51 pm

Baki

Baki


D-rank
Fixed again :P

14Hibiki Clan Empty Re: Hibiki Clan Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:05 pm

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Guest
Approved.

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