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1Senju, Mikumi Empty Senju, Mikumi Thu Jan 24, 2019 10:00 pm

Mikumi Senju

Mikumi Senju


A-rank
Wood Style:


Earth Style:




Water Release:

2Senju, Mikumi Empty Re: Senju, Mikumi Wed May 01, 2019 11:12 pm

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Mikumi Senju wrote:
Wood Style:


Earth Style:




Water Release:

Where are your jutsu names? Add your jutsu names.

Wood Jutsu #1 - I can't tell if it's saying the chakra cost is 10, or if you pay 10 more chakra. If the first, change it to 15. If the second, choose either a prep post or a higher chakra cost; using both doesn't get you extra Max Effects. Remove your Cooldown on this and all further jutsu.

Wood Jutsu #2 - Up to 3 targets is a Mid Effect, Half Hand Seals is a Mid Effect, you're using max values for 1 rank lower (min. effect) on the immobilize. With the extra 5 chakra, you could actually raise the damage to Mid here.

Wood Jutsu #3 is alright for approval, but I won't approve it until it has a name.

Hang ten for the Earth and Water Release Libraries, which will contain Earth Shore Return and Water Trumpet.

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