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1Zhinu [Revamp] Empty Zhinu [Revamp] Sun Apr 28, 2019 10:02 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
ZHINU



Zhinu [Revamp] Gray_hawk_2_-_01112017_tortuguero_

Rank: B-rank
Species: Grey Eagle
Type: Combat
Elements: Fuuton, -
Specializations: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu

Personality:
Zhinu is a hawk of selective taste, rarely allowing the touch of anyone else but those she deems worthy. To make sure others understand their position in the hierarchy of her society, she is not afraid of biting to make her displeasure towards the daring well-known. A bit of a temper, she expects to regularly soar the skies or will turn to show her back and glare with something akin of an offended pout. More vocal than most of her species, Zhinü has been trained to quickly reply both in positive and negative manners to Mizuki.

Stats:

Strength: B-0
Speed: B-0
Endurance: B-0
Perception: B-0
Dexterity: B-0

Bird of Prey: Zhinu has +2 perception
Airborne Majesty: Zhinu has -2 endurance

Jutsu: 100 chakra

B-rank (3)
None

C-rank (5)
None

D-rank
Body Flicker Technique:



OLD VERSION
[x] Link or see spoilerbox below. Note that this version precedes even the 'last outdated' rules on pets. Those rules made pets start by default with nin/tai, and set their stats equal to the pets rank - as you'll see in the papertrailing. When the 'new' (now outdated again) rules came in, pet stat training was implemented - hence why the old version has no stats. I didn't revamp Zhinu back then since nothing really changed for her.


Old version:



Last edited by Raiu Mizuki on Mon Apr 29, 2019 12:42 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Zhinu [Revamp] Empty Re: Zhinu [Revamp] Sun Apr 28, 2019 9:20 pm

Gattsu

Gattsu


D-rank
For a revamp, may we have a link to the old one for comparison?

3Zhinu [Revamp] Empty Re: Zhinu [Revamp] Mon Apr 29, 2019 11:08 pm

Gattsu

Gattsu


D-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:ZHINU



Zhinu [Revamp] Gray_hawk_2_-_01112017_tortuguero_

Rank: B-rank
Species: Grey Eagle
Type: Combat
Elements: Fuuton, -
Specializations: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu

Personality:
Zhinu is a hawk of selective taste, rarely allowing the touch of anyone else but those she deems worthy. To make sure others understand their position in the hierarchy of her society, she is not afraid of biting to make her displeasure towards the daring well-known. A bit of a temper, she expects to regularly soar the skies or will turn to show her back and glare with something akin of an offended pout. More vocal than most of her species, Zhinü has been trained to quickly reply both in positive and negative manners to Mizuki.

Stats:

Strength: B-0
Speed: B-0
Endurance: B-0
Perception: B-0
Dexterity: B-0

Bird of Prey: Zhinu has +2 perception
Airborne Majesty: Zhinu has -2 endurance

Jutsu: 100 chakra

B-rank (3)
None

C-rank (5)
None

D-rank
Body Flicker Technique:



OLD VERSION
[x] Link or see spoilerbox below. Note that this version precedes even the 'last outdated' rules on pets. Those rules made pets start by default with nin/tai, and set their stats equal to the pets rank - as you'll see in the papertrailing. When the 'new' (now outdated again) rules came in, pet stat training was implemented - hence why the old version has no stats. I didn't revamp Zhinu back then since nothing really changed for her.


Old version:

You seem to have forgotten the appearance portion of the template.

also, this isnt possible under current pet rules:


Bird of Prey: Zhinu has +2 perception
Airborne Majesty: Zhinu has -2 endurance

4Zhinu [Revamp] Empty Re: Zhinu [Revamp] Tue Apr 30, 2019 1:13 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
I dropped the appearance section because there is a picture right under its name making it obvious.

As for the stat mod, the rules do not forbid it. In fact, in many ways, the approach to pets is similar as that to shinobi.  Stat modification were not covered in the old rules either, but that didn't cause them to be denied. These modifications are balanced if anything.

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