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1Raihana Clan Empty Raihana Clan Mon Oct 29, 2018 4:09 pm

JokerTheOG

JokerTheOG


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Clan Name: Raihana | Lightning God Flower
Location: Scattered | Main Branch in Kumogakure
Specialization: Taijutsu
Elements: Raiton | Lightning Release


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Clan History:
The founder of the clan, Kazuya Raihana, ironically was said to have not have believed in many of the ideals held today by the Raihana. The historians say that he was in-fact a mercenary, who fought with his hands only because he'd never had enough money at one time to buy a decent weapon, since the poor quality weapons he'd bought simply broke quickly, and the ones he'd salvage from a battle were more than likely put beyond their mettle when faced with his lightning techniques. Kazuya eventually came across a kunoichi in the battlefield and was apparently dazzled by her will to continue fighting outnumbered, after helping her out she then attacked him shouting that she would have beaten them eventually.

After such a puzzling encounter Kazuya began to see things differently in life, surprised at his helping her and astonished at the self-confidence the girl had. Upon receiving an invitation for help from a country beset by raiding bandits, though happy his reputation had spread far, he had to leave his beloved Land of Lightning for a tiny country that's constantly raining. Adding to his dismay he noticed the girl who attacked him was in the village he was asked to help defend, however thankfully she seemed peacefully meditating, which was almost his undoing as she nearly caught him unawares with a kunai aimed at his neck. After immobilising the girl he forced her to tell him what she was doing here and how she had such idiocy in the belief that she could overcome anything, fortunately, they were on the same side as this was her country and so, she complied. The girl's name was Natsuko - apparently, she didn't give him her family name which historians argue Kazuya probably didn't remember - she asked him why he was so fascinated with her confidence if he thought it was foolish. She then explained that she was always testing her limits, which Kazuya then said, "Were you testing how long you could sit still back then?" which resulted in Kazuya having to immobilise Natsuko again after she somehow got out of his last hold technique.

Trying to find common ground with the anger-prone girl he learnt how to meditate from her and in the process felt his chakra flow through him with evermore ease, as thanks for this he decided to defend the village for free quickly putting him on her good side.

After defending the small village Kazuya decided to meditate to cultivate his already prominent lightning chakra, however, he chose to meditate in a previously unbeknownst to him, 'unlucky spot'as the locals knew it located on a hill. And while causing his surroundings to become full of sparks as his lightning chakra overflowed out of him, he was subsequently struck by lightning.

Surviving the bolt of the lightning, he found that he had a nasty scar in the shape of a flower on his back and felt 'As though I could do almost anything' analysts say here that the lightning most likely reacted with his own lightning chakra, causing permanent changes to his body, although how he survived the lightning bolt is a mystery since all the static in the sky above him was attracted to the thing leaking out lightning chakra everywhere. From here on the records and accounts of people's encounters of Kazuya become disjointed such as the widespread rumour that the bolt carried the essence of a thunder god, although the one thing that seems certain is that he travelled continually between the Land of Lightning and Amegakure lending his skills to those threatened and in need, before eventually settling in Amegakure with Natsuko, establishing the Raihana clan and its ideals of self-bettering. As such the Raihana clan dates back centuries ago, though only ever becoming well known during the great ninja wars for their ability to disrupt and crush enemy front lines, though not wielding the status of the Uchiha or the Senju in the mercenary hierarchy much to their irritation.

Across many centuries they've grown in status due to their mastery of taijutsu combined with their enhancement of Raihana as well as branching off into any and all villages. They even have become seen as the Kumogakure equivalent of the Hyuuga: the ultimate taijutsu users of the land. As history has been recorded, the Raihana now hold a belief that they have been touched by the God of Storms: Susanoo, and that their scars are merely a piece of Susanoo embedded into them; their scars hurt because they are scars of a god that they cannot control even a tiny piece of.


Members:

  • Kazuya Raihana [Founder | Deceased]
  • Kazame Raihana [Former Leader | Deceased]
  • Noboru Raihana [Current Leader | Missing]
  • Kirin Raihana [Current Stand-in Leader]
  • Shang Raihana [Clan Elder]



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Kekkei Genkai Name: Raihana

Kekkei Genkai Description:
The Raihana is a effectively a scar which spreads (when stage 2 is achieved) across the holders back in the shape of a small flower at first, then eventually the scars begin to mysteriously spread and jagged scars begin forming from the flower spreading across the whole back and sometimes along the arms and neck. These scars begin to radiate lightning chakra harmless to the user and causes the scars to glow electric blue and then spark loudly in stage 2 and beyond. The Raihana feels as if the user is being cut in the path of the scars leaving them with a painful experience once activated. When used shinobi tend to feel more in tune with their environment and become visibly faster and stronger.

The true story of the mysterious flower-like scar that lays upon their back is that it indeed carried the essence of a "thunder god". The lightning bolt that struck Kazuya scattered the spiritual sentient essence of the god into billions upon billions of shards that bonded with his chakra 'core'. Either extremely gifted or incredibly experienced Raihana can actually converse with the lightning spirit within - although each spirit is different. The chakra that is released from the flower scar derives from the spirit, even if the Raihana themselves is unaware of the fact that they carry a spirit within them.

Stage One: Raihana Hanabira | Lightning Flower Petal -15 Chakra on Activation
The three petal flower scar marks those born with the Kekkei Genkai. The user's body becomes electrified lightly shocking/burning people who touch them and makes an almost silent humming sound only hearable within a 3-meter distance, they must also meditate(for a full post) to help control it so they don't shock allies. At this stage, the damage if touched is an equivalent of minor 1st-degree tissue dmg. At this stage the shinobi becomes slightly quicker and stronger than normal, however, they find it slightly harder to make lots of handseals whilst active.

  • The effects of this stage are demonstrated by the following stat increases: +1 to Speed, +1 to Strength.
  • These boosts obviously can stack with other techniques and are applied first.
  • They can use this stage for three posts upon access.
  • This stage requires 1,000 words to access.


Stage 2: Raihana Saku | Lightning Flower Blossom | -20 Chakra on Activation
At this stage: the Hanabira painfully etches out new scars onto the shinobi's skin: across their torso. This is representative of the Raihana becoming the Saku, commonly known among the clan as their 'payment in blood', for blood spills forth from the new and old slits in the flesh before burning shut with the new power instilled. This process harms the user in exchange for its great power - making this a painful and bloody trial permanently reducing their Endurance by a tier in said areas. When Saku is activated it begins to spark every post loudly with a light blue hue whilst also causing the shinobi's eyes to become a glowing ice blue, also the shinobi feel much more invigorated than normal becoming stronger and faster than the Hanabira stage, their minds stimulated to improve their physical coordination. After using the Saku the scar becomes sensitive and racked with pain, making frequent usage deterring for most Raihana. The electrical 'aura' they seem to gain around their body becomes more potent now occasionally jumping from their body to nearby things (1 meter distance), in the form of a spark, causing them minor 2nd degree tissue minor damage. Now the clan opens up with most of the techniques derived solely for their bloodline now they believe their kin has attained the amount of control over themselves needed; all the jutsu given to them MUST be trained by either a PC or NPC.

  • The effects are demonstrated by the following stat increases: +2 to Speed, +2 to Strength.
  • Can be used for five posts. But Stage 1 can be used for six posts at this stage of training.
  • -2 to Endurance, -2 to Perception
  • Stage 2 is a 3,000 word ritualistic topic.


Stage 3: Tenhana | Tempest Flower Blossom | -25 Chakra on Activation
At this stage the Hanabira painfully extends their new scars to encompass their entire body, spilling blood of crimson in a pool all around them. While activating the Tenhana: the user is enhanced to the peak of their physical ability. They feel a wealth of strength and speed surpassing even than the Saku stage, their minds stimulated to improve their physical coordination to their peak levels. After using Tenhana: the scar becomes overly sensitive; their pain excruciating. The electrical 'aura' they've appeared to gain around their body becomes more legitimate. They can now emit an electromagnetic wave around them to block incoming projectiles and shock incoming opponents with a resulting 3rd-degree major tissue dmg (1 meter distance. Can only be used once per two posts) moderately shocking them. Now the clan opens up with all the techniques derived solely for their bloodline now that they believe their kin has attained the amount of control over themselves needed.

  • The effects are demonstrated by the following stat increases +3 Speed, +3 to Strength.
  • This stage can be used for 5 posts, Stage 2 usage is 6 posts, Stage 1 usage is 7 posts.
  • Endurance -3, Perception -3; A Permanent Decrease of -1 to Endurance

    • The permanent Endurance debuff limits to the base rank of the character's rank. Genin, D-0, Chunin, C-0, etc.


  • 5,000 WC topic involving a painful or traumatic experience similar to that of the Uchiha


Drawbacks:

  • Due to the clan's members focusing solely on Taijutsu, every character born into this clan must take Taijutsu as their Primary Specialization, and Secondary Specialization must start at D-Rank.
  • Once Activating and Receiving Stage 3 of the Raihana clan's ability, the user receives a permanent -1 to their Endurance Stat.
  • The characters must take the Hesitant (Element) Special Characteristic but it applies to the Third element, meaning they cannot learn more than two elements. Must take this Special Characteristic without balancing with a positive.



Last edited by JokerTheOG on Mon Nov 05, 2018 9:04 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Raihana Clan Empty Re: Raihana Clan Wed Oct 31, 2018 1:47 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Sorry for the long wait, however let's get started shall we?


KKG:


  • Static(?): "The user's body becomes electrified lightly shocking/burning people who touch them and makes an almost silent humming sound only hearable within a 3 meter distance, they must also meditate(for a full post) to help control it so they don't shock allies." So it shocks people, but you don't mention how much damage it does. 
  • Stage One | Two | Three: So a -2 chakra per post isn't going to really cut it here. Minus -10 is much more reasonable, likewise bump the cost of stage two to -15, and stage three to -20. However since these modes have set number of posts it can remain active for I'd suggest to just having activation costs instead, it'll be much more efficient that way. While I'm somewhat opposed to having a +6 stat boost, it looks fine since you're evenly balancing it out with equal drawbacks to stats in other areas. 


Drawbacks:



  • Stage Three's -1 to Endurance: While it does provide a real stat deduction, if you can just remove it with WC it doesn't really count as an active drawback.



That's all we got for now.

3Raihana Clan Empty Re: Raihana Clan Wed Oct 31, 2018 10:25 pm

JokerTheOG

JokerTheOG


D-rank
Edited some things.

I put in that the endurance debuff limits at the base of the ninja's rank, I also left in the re-training of the endurance debuff. Only leaving it in because I'm not sure if you noticed that if they decide to train it back it's double the regular WC. If that's still not ok, then I'll take it out and have the aforementioned stay.

4Raihana Clan Empty Re: Raihana Clan Sat Nov 03, 2018 11:29 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Hm... I'd still like for you to not be able to be able to undo the permanent -1 to endurance. Additionally, you forgot to increase the chakra costs, please increase the chakra for all stages by 10. However, feel free to remove the Hesitant (Specialization) drawback.

5Raihana Clan Empty Re: Raihana Clan Thu Nov 08, 2018 12:28 am

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Unless anyone has anything to say about this, consider this clan APPROVED~

6Raihana Clan Empty Re: Raihana Clan Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:54 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Apologies, however, a big oversight on my part. There needs to be rank gates added to the different mode levels. As well as added detail on a few different parts. Feel free on discord if you have any questions.


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