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1Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Furaingusōdo Clan Wed May 31, 2017 9:23 am

Inari Furaingusōdo

Inari Furaingusōdo


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Clan Name: Furaingusōdo (Flying Sword) Clan
Location: Kirigakure
Specialisation: Bukijutsu - Kenjutsu [Must be primary specialisation], Fuinjutsu [Must be secondary specialisation]
Elements: Katon [Must be primary or secondary element]

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Clan History:

The Furaingusōdo began as a small merchant clan in the land of waves where, through their sword crafting techniques, they grew rather popular. Looking to for an environment that would better suite their craft they moved to Kirigakure to supply ninja with their wares.

Originally just merchants a few members of the clan decided to pursue as a career ninja, three to be exact; Muzi, Kirin, and Sito Furaingusōdo. Though Sito would go on to die before he reached Chuunin he and the others discovered, through a weird training incident, that by channeling chakra into their weapons they could move them, without holding them, for a short amount of time. Muzi and Kirin went on to develop the technique, both branching into fuinjutsu and ninjutsu to produce better results.

Muzi went on to become clan head while Kirin focused on becoming a seal master. Their techniques slowly building and incorporating themselves into the very culture of the Furaingusōdo clan. What was once a docile merchant clan was now a powerful shinobi clan. Through this transition new traditions and practises began to take place.

Practices such as 'The Trial of the Blade'. This trial is taken when a Furaingusōdo becomes a genin. It begins with an appraisal of skill, a battle using only the genin's preferred type of sword, against the clan head. If the genin passes this appraisal of skill he/she will be given an elemental affinity test. This is to better prepare for seals used in the creation of their weapon.

For the next few days the genin will assist the clan head with making their chosen sword. They are not allowed to speak or leave the forge during this time, only getting food once a day. Once their weapon is finished a seal master inscribes a two seals into both the hilt and the blade of the weapon. The genin ceremonially cuts their dominant hand on the blade before covering the seals and filling them with chakra.

This creates a bond between the genin and the blade. With the blade now saturated in their chakra they are able to manipulate it like any one would manipulate a jutsu. The seals, specialised to their chakra nature and fighting style, allows the blade to move in the style of the wielder. The Ni Sōdosutairu was deemed a Kekkei Genkai when other ninja tried to imitate the practice but failed could not move the weapons without chakra string or physical touch.

Members:

Sito Furaingusōdo [dead]
Mizu Furaingusōdo [dead]
Kirin Furaingusōdo [dead]
Dea Furaingusōdo [alive]
Inari Furaingusōdo [alive]

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Kekkei Genkai Name: Two Sword Style {二ソードスタイル ~ Ni Sōdosutairu}

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Ni Sōdosutairu is a clan technique that allows the members of the Furaingusōdo to manipulate personalised blades from a distance, using their minds. Through the use of seals, and the sacrifice of chakra, members are able to create swords that move at their will and that radiate their chakra. Because of this each member is required to have a masterful understanding of the blade as well as at least a minor understanding of sealing techniques. Members can only manipulate two blades at any given time within a 30 meter radius before their focus fractures. When a member of the Furaingusōdo clan members dies all their swords (bar SS-Rank) use whatever chakra they have in them to non-violently self-destruct.

Creating a Sword:
Trials:
Sword Replacement/Destruction/Theft:

Drawbacks:

- Members can not specialize in any other Bukijutsu besides Kenjutsu.

- Members must sacrifice parts of their total chakra to create new blades.

- The Furaingusōdo clan has metal in their blood (figuratively) and as such have an aversion to Raiton Jutsu. When hit with a Raiton Jutsu a clan member must treat it as a Jutsu of a rank higher in effect or damage.

- Members may only use a sword equal to or one rank above their current ninja level, their current Kenjutsu level, and their current Fuinjutsu level. (For genin this is a c-rank sword)

- Hesitant (Specialisation) SC

- Hesitant (Element) SC



Last edited by Inari Furaingusōdo on Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:46 am; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Update)

2Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Thu Jun 08, 2017 7:16 pm

N'Jobu Aburame

N'Jobu Aburame


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Remove all clan jutsu.

Multitasker isn't a drawback.

Expand upon what happens when you break a sword. On Saga you can fix weapons through the item process so there needs to be some content addressing that.

The hesitant element spec isn't really a drawback if you allow it to be balanced with a positive.

Expand upon the trial of blades process. This should most likely be a solo thread with a certain WC to get your first weapon.

Your clan would at minimum require Fuin and Buki to function so those must be mandatory

Given you effectively have an evolving weapon/seals, For balance purposes I would say for each rank that you would need to do something similar to the trial of blades to create/infuse your next weapon. Also the weapons need to be limited to the rank you can wield. Normally 1 rank higher than your ninja rank

Chakra regen on the sword is a no go unless you have senjutsu.


3Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:08 pm

Nozomi

Nozomi


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Pre-approved (By Ashes) additional modding, Issei has the other half:
Much of what I have to say is already said above, so this is all I have that's relevent-

The process of what happens when a sword is broken needs to be better expanded upon for the process of fixing, as well as selling the swords, if able to do so. (Then again, breaking weapons doesn’t really apply much outside of the thread, I’ve literally NEVER seen anyone reforge a broken blade/equipment)
The Taijutsu and Genjutsu drawback is ineffective, as there is already 3 Specs taken with a Hesitant in Specialization.
Not sure what the drawback of only being able to move two swords when not using a clan jutsu is about, it doesn’t seem like a suitable drawback.

4Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Fri Jun 09, 2017 9:33 pm

Issei

Issei


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Hello!

As Nozo said, I don’t think that the 20% ryo cost increase and 100% wc increase for learning genjutsu or taijutsu is an effective drawback, so either remove it altogether and replace it with something else or ban clansmen from taking those specs altogether. It is further contradicted by the fact that the clan starts with three specializations, and yet has to take hesitant (spec) which means that they shouldn’t even be able to learn a fourth spec, so that needs to be changed.

The part that says Kenjutsu is primary spec needs to be changed to Bukijutsu - Kenjutsu. Finally, SS-Rank sword description needs to be less vague.

http://www.narutosaga.com/t23427-new-organization-ninshiki#18669

5Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Sun Jun 11, 2017 5:46 am

Inari Furaingusōdo

Inari Furaingusōdo


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Thanks for the feedback!

I just though I should clarify some of my thinking at the time and also update you on my changes.

-  With the Specialisations: I didn't originally mean for there to be three Specs, I meant for it to be Ninjutsu or Fuinjutsu. I've edited that so now it's just Fuinjutsu.

- I've removed the Multitasker SC mention in drawbacks as well as the mentioning of any clan jutsu. Replacing instead with a sword movement radius and control limit (maximum two swords at a time within 30 feet)

- I've added a section on breaking/theft/selling of the swords, which better clarifies their properties.

- I've added more trials to perform as the rank of the sword increases each being more difficult (higher WC) then the last. I've also added the process for making an SS-Ranked sword. (Though the sword itself is extremely strong, it requires an almost impossible set of circumstances, before it can be gained by a PC.)

- Instead of banning the Genjutsu/Taijutsu specs I instead made clan members susceptible to Raiton jutsu in reference to their close relation to forges and metal.

- I've also made them incapable of learning any other Buki-jutsu.

6Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Tue Jun 13, 2017 12:06 pm

Issei

Issei


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Hey, this is looking better now. The SS-Rank sword and acquisition of it is very detailed, however I feel that the fact that you are able to use all jutsu that the previous person had through the sword made from them is a lot of potential. In order to balance this, I would like that you change it so that the user must have an SS-Rank in Bukijutsu before they are able to use an SS-Rank clan sword, rather than an S-Rank. To add to it, I want you to specify that the person who dies/gets sealed and becomes the sword must be another PC in order for it to know all of their jutsu they had when they were alive.

http://www.narutosaga.com/t23427-new-organization-ninshiki#18669

7Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Mon Jun 19, 2017 2:12 am

Issei

Issei


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1/2 approved.

http://www.narutosaga.com/t23427-new-organization-ninshiki#18669

8Furaingusōdo Clan  Empty Re: Furaingusōdo Clan Sun Jun 25, 2017 2:08 pm

Jet

Jet


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Approved

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