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1Hyakuen Empty Hyakuen Thu Apr 20, 2017 9:49 am

Lillith

Lillith


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Clan Name: Hyakuen
Location: Scattered
Specialization: -
Elements:  Fūton [Not Required]


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Clan History: The Hyakuen are rare. Almost nothing more than Mysterious names on the wind. they have appeared through-out the world, though most are unsure of their origins, Not even the clan members are all that sure on there heritage. Some believe they are spawned from one of the original shinobi clans that fought alongside and against the Uchiha and the Senju. Some believe they are the direct descendants of Kaguya herself. Whilst others believe that they knew of the ways of chakra, and it's manipulation long before Kaguya took the fruit from the tree. However the story appears to be different no matter who is asked.


Members: -



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Kekkei Genkai Name: The Blessing of the Prodigy.
Kekkei Genkai Description:

Gifted learners
Clan Members are exceptionally gifted learners, beyond what any could comprehend. Clan members receive a 40% wordcount reduction when training new jutsu. If the clan member is learning this technique from another person, this bonus goes up to 60%.

Masters of Development
Clan member, once they understand how a technique works are exceptional at creating techniques the spawns of, or better versions of the same techniques. With this, Clan members can take a technique they already know, and do one of two things, either create a variant of the technique, or create a higher ranking version of it.

When creating a variant of a technique the user already knows the user can do so at a 60% word count reduction to training, and no ryo cost. [This is the only bonus that applies, if the clan member is creating both a more powerful technique, as well as a variant, however in doing so, the bonus goes down to 40% word count reduction]

When creating a more powerful version of a technique, the user can only needs 500 words per rank above the original technique, as well as it requires no ryo. However whenever either the original or this technique go on cooldown, so does the other.

All Masters of Development techniques must list which Jutsu they are spawning from in their description.


Drawbacks:
Clan Members must take the Hesitant (element) special characterist without balancing it with a positive.

All of the benefits received by "Masters of Development" cannot be impacted in anyway by any sort of WC reduction.

All Clan members, due to their natural affinity for learning, and just simply understand how things work, have a hard time teaching, and explaining to others how or way something works, or how to do it. Thus whenever a clan member is teaching a Specialization, Element, or Jutsu to another person. The word count required to train the technique doubles, and no word count reduction bonuses apply.

Clan members, due to their increased ability to learn incredible amounts of techniques, must reach double the original requires to rank up, when it comes to jutsu. [Meaning a Genin would need a minimum of 4 D-rank techniques, and 2 C-ranks to rank up], as well as clan members can no longer supplement weapons for the jutsu when ranking up.

Clan members due to their natural prodigy nature, have a hard time not being seen as pompous and are easily targets for envy. As such, clan members require an additional 20% increased word count on both their social threads to rank up, as well as every mission they wish to complete.

Clan members have a harder time learning the ins and outs of elemental working, as it is not something that is necessarily taught, but more intrinsic to the individual, and as such have a 50% increased word count when training their elements.

Clan members cannot take the Quicklearner Special Characteristic nor ever receive it, or the Genius perk.



Last edited by Lillith on Thu Apr 20, 2017 1:17 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Hyakuen Empty Re: Hyakuen Thu Apr 20, 2017 12:45 pm

Sol

Sol


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Please change the clan name and history to not be related to canon. There's no evidence that Minato's lineage had anything to do with his being a prodigy; Naruto, likewise, had no such advantage for the entire first part of the series, and arguably at least another 1/3 of the second part. Even Minato wasn't praised for the sheer breadth of the number of techniques he was able to learn.

My first glaring thing that I pretty much can't allow (since I don't think clans have any territory there): The turning in of a mission for 2 jutsu. I ask that you remove it.

I'm guessing this is the case, but to be more concrete about it, please state in the clan that the extra 20% cannot apply to the increased 60% from learning a variant of a jutsu the ninja already knows. (60% is already a monstrous training buff that I'm still on the fence about, and increasing it to 80....yeesh.)

Being that some of the boon of a new technique is that you have another tool in your box ready for another situation, having multiple jutsu share the same cooldown is an interesting drawback for creating derivatives at lower WC cost. (Just to be clear, your training buffs do not additionally apply here, as you're already getting a huge cut in needed training.)

Keep in mind that I'm not taking the teaching drawback into account. That is entirely able to be circumvented, and does not even really count as a negative to you specifically.

3Hyakuen Empty Re: Hyakuen Sat Apr 22, 2017 8:58 pm

Sol

Sol


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Other than requiring some proofreading for a little syntax/grammar and spelling, this is technically fine as a writeup. I am going to be asking my superiors whether a 60% reduction is permissible.~

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