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1Dao Clan Empty Dao Clan Mon Jul 16, 2018 1:46 am

Verdandi

Verdandi


D-rank
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Clan Name: Dao Clan
Location: Yuki no Kuni [Kirigakure Start]
Specialization:

  • Ninjutsu [Required]
  • Kinjutsu [Implied] (All corruption based techniques are Kinjutsu)

Elements: Any



Dao Clan Vsprfes
Most members of the Dao Clan never fully awaken their bloodline, they are however very skilled shinobi and intelligent to begin with. Giving them a massively positive reputation all over Yuki no Kuni and Mizu no Kuni. The pure Dao's are famous for their beauty and skill. They are loved and carried throughout wherever they go. Their strength to overcome their tainted past is but a reminder of how good can always prevail against evil. How one of disciplined mind and character can use the powers genetically inherited by the Hyouton genes of Onna Yuki, to completely deny the devilish corruption that awaits within them. Allowing the Dao and their family members to lead a normal, comfortable life in honour and happiness.

However, there are those whom desire power more than to keep themselves pure. Those whom would slay their own loved ones usually do it for the single goal of obtaining an unnatural power that can play on equal grounds with those demons from ancient times. The corruption will grow the more they taint their hands with the blood of their enemies. However all corruption must start by killing a loved one with their own hands. It however, is no requirement to do so willingly. There have been reports about Dao's sacrificing themselves upon the blades of their loved ones to grant them this unholy gift of corruption. However for most Dao's this is seen as a curse and hence even on the brink of death, most would rather choose a dignified end over succumbing to the corruption within their blood.
Cursed Blood:
The Demon Emperor:
Ghost of the Snow:
Yin and Yang:
Recorded Members:



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Kekkei Genkai Name: Akuma No Chi (Demon Blood)
Kekkei Genkai Description: Dao's are historically cursed to bear the blood of true demons in their veins. Making their existence an eternal battle between their Yin and Yang energies. However siding with either of those energies is said to grant the Dao's strength in reward to their resolve for either, Light or Darkness paths.

A 'Pure Blood' Dao draws its power from Yin Release. Their dedication to serve the light and fight the genetic evil that resides within their genes gives them access to a unique resolve that empowers them passively in many ways. Becoming talents and legends on their own accord.

A 'Demon Blood' Dao draws its power from Yang Release. They have abandoned the light within them and turned to the utter purity of dark energy that lies hidden within them. Tapping on the genetic properties from their ancestors they become one with the demon world. Allowing them access to both, forbidden demonic artifacts as well as a true demon form that adorns their bodies with seemingly impenetrable, corrosive armor, as well as giving them superhuman strength.
Pure Blood:
Demon Blood:

Drawbacks:
Pure Blood:
Demon Blood:

Corruption Disclaimer:
Become Demon:



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2Dao Clan Empty Re: Dao Clan Mon Jul 23, 2018 4:07 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
I'll be stepping in for this instance of modding.


KKG:

Natural Armor (All Ranks): As it's currently written just keep in mind that this will also reduce your speed stat like other heavy armor items.

Demonic Artifact(ranks above D rank): So when it says, "you gain access to-" is this an upgrade of the same item you get at D rank corruption?

Demonic Artifacts (A and S ranks): Items can only have at max, one of each type of ability, one mechainical ability, one passive, one active.



Drawbacks~

Corrosive Skin: "Since they already have a natural armor they are unable to wear any non physical armor-" do you mean physical armor, you wouldn't be able to wear non physical armor anyways. Additionally I would figure this would also affect any weapons they could potientially wield, affecting them in a similar manner to armor.

And that's all for now.

3Dao Clan Empty Re: Dao Clan Thu Jul 26, 2018 11:00 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
KKG:

Demonic Artifacts: Just making sure that ya aren't too restricted. However you say that these Artifacts can be any item, but you only mention weapons in the description. Just saying. You could have like an demonic armor too or something if ya wanted. If that was the case then you might want to change the wording on your Corrosive Skin drawback. Also, you might want to change wording on the Demonic Artifact into being able to app these artifacts one rank higher than normal. While it doesn't raise to many issues as it is, you can't reforge any item below B-rank into a higher ranked item. Meaning that you would have to toss an artifact eventually if you wanted both Artifacts. It would be easier to be able to able them higher.

I would also include a 10% discount to the apping of this Demonic Artifacts, given that you can only have a maximum of two of them at a time, I don't see much problem with this.


Demonic Summons: Don't need to change anything, just want to make it really clear that these demons are going to look like Tayuya's demons. So no, really hot Inucbi, other types of demons until they actually get the event prize.

Skin Armor: So with the speed drawback you already have, and considering you're just wearing really durable skin, no further speed drawbacks needed. However consider adding that a single breakage doesn't nullify your entire defense.

Example: If someone broke the skin on your right arm, your entire hardened skin doesn't just crumple, just the area broken.


Drawbacks:

Hunters: For that one technique they have above you, make sure to clarify that it is also from the jutsu library.

4Dao Clan Empty Re: Dao Clan Tue Aug 14, 2018 8:54 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Approved~

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