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Uzumaki Ilya

Uzumaki Ilya


D-rank
delete this, going to request change to ninjutsu



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Senju Airi

Senju Airi


D-rank
Spoiler:

Pre-Approved Jutsu
Not to be mean here, but ... the previous mods didn't quote what exactly they approved, so it's hard to track this -.-


Foot of darkness~Down up, Foot of Darkness~Jump are approved


Sword of Darkness~Cut
- No activation cost? Surely you jest. All jutsu have an activation cost.
- This is... weak for a B rank. You can drop it to C rank without worry and keep everything that the jutsu currently has. And even then it's on the lower end of C rank jutsu power o.o


Turning Point
- As the same rank of their weapon? This makes the jutsu potentially fall under 'illegal ranking' since it scales on weapon rank rather than jutsu rank. Example: the C rank jutsu would be able to deflect an S rank jutsu if you use an S rank weapon.
Sorry, I can't re-approve this unless you scale it on jutsu rank, or limit the weapon rank to be fitting with the jutsu rank.


Black Rose Crystal
- Duration: please add chakra cost/post since its maintainable
- Specialisation: the creation/expelling of black crystals sounds like an external manifestation of chakra, which would be considered ninjutsu.
I'm sure that's not quite what you had in mind, so perhaps clarify/reword it?
- 'immobilize a limb/body part', matter of making sure this isn't going towards stun potential, what exactly is to be understood here?

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