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1Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Mon May 26, 2014 10:01 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


D-rank
Done!



Last edited by Strafe Aisu on Sun Nov 30, 2014 5:30 pm; edited 13 times in total

2Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Thu May 29, 2014 8:17 am

Tame

Tame


D-rank
Rejuvenating Water: Just change damage amounts healed to match current C-rank damage; the -.5 rank is ehh to me now. You might be better off just having a pre-heal effect the same potency as the heal.

Kidney Coldemnation: Leaving this, as it's my own technique.

Ice Prison: Detail what is needed to break it/get out (it should be easier to escape from within than to break through as a defense).

Cold Sky Water Attack: Detail piercing depth of senbon.

Archerfish: This jutsu scales with the user's rank; however, D and C-rank on here are grossly underinflated and higher ranks are overinflated. That being said, I think somewhere near 50-75 cubic meters would be good here? (keep in mind 1 acre ft is 1234 cubic meters.)

Ice Disks: Just say what can break them (and if used for defense, if one breaks does the jutsu get undone?).

Ice Spears: Are these actual spears or do you mean like, stalagmites/spires of ice? If one spear breaks, the jutsu's dispelled. 6 is too many, methinks; 3 or maaaybe 4 is good.

Ice Encampment Wall: Make it so that blocking 1 rank higher becomes buffeting to 2 ranks lower in damage.

Blizzard of Blood: Reduce the radius in accordance with jutsu rules; since this has a weakness, you can go slightly bigger.

Flash-Freeze: I feel there should be a miniscule delay between getting in range and starting to suffer the effects. When do these people thaw out? Is the freezing immediately undone when you end the technique?

Sternum Shatter: Can you reword 'stun'? The default is being unable to take any action at all (which is reserved as the power of an A-rank jutsu).

3Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Fri May 30, 2014 2:33 pm

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


D-rank
Updated besides a few.

Ice Prison and Archerfish: Is it possible that I could trade these in for library jutsu? They are from over a year ago and will probably never use them again XD

Flash-Freeze: Delay as in? There isn't a to accurately describe a delay, unless we use the post system. If you mean a 1 post delay, the jutsu is kinda pointless as it only has a radius of 3 meters (D-Rank). They would have to thaw out by natural means and no to the last question. This jutsu's effects are long lasting in the same way that fire burns.

4Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:37 am

Mikage

Mikage


D-rank
Rejuvenating Water: I'd say that the most this technique could do in terms of pre-healing wounds would be decreasing the damage by a rank from any technique B rank or lower.

Kidney Coldemnation: Hm. The effects of this technique might just require an entire re-working. Seeing as now stat debuffs only exist in the form of tiers instead of ranks, it will be a loong time before a target's speed and strength stat are reduced to zero. I recommend keep stat tier debuffs as a one-time thing, during which time the target still has the ability to somehow heal / get themselves out of the technique, before they are rendered immobile / unconscious after a certain number of posts.

Ice Prison and Archerfish: Go ahead and swap them out, just let us know which ones you've removed / replaced.

Ice Disk: Specify the damage capabilities of the disk, and decrease the number of D ranks it can block to 3.

Ice Spears: Specify the exact damage the spears are capable of inflicting.

Ice Encampment Wall: Decrease the number of C ranks this can block to 3.

Flash Freeze: Leaving this for Miles, since I'm not entirely certain what form of delay he wants.

Sternum Shatter: If this is going to cause a -1 debuff at C rank, it'll need a drawback.

5Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:34 am

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


D-rank
Bumping this because i don't quite remember if I finished all the edits you requested Jaycee, but it needs another look anyway.

6Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Thu Nov 27, 2014 1:45 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Alright. Let's do this

Blood Scab - E rank abilities are only supposed to deal minor scrapes and bruises. However since this is only scabbing them over I would like you to reduce that too minor burns, bruises and cuts 1/4 inch deep. If you want more, this needs to be of a higher rank

The art of the hand heal: Specify roughly (because it's maintainable it doesn't matter so much) how long it takes to heal smaller-larger injuries. Other than that, this is fine

Rejuvenating Water: This is fine
Healing Water: Longevity: This is also fine

Kidney Coldemnation: Get back to this one after the others have been fixed up

Advanced Recovery Method: is good as is
Creation Rebirth:  so is this

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Tile Shuriken - Is fine
Ice Dart Jutsu: - I would like to see a more defined speed

Hidden Mist. Water Trumpet, Ice Disk, Ice spears, Water Clones, Ice Encampment Wall and Sternum Shatter - All are fine to be used once again.

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The rest will be sorted once changes have been made and the approved Jutsu have been put back in to your jutsu list.

7Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Thu Nov 27, 2014 5:45 am

Strafe Aisu

Strafe Aisu


D-rank
All the approved jutsu have been moved to my official list and have been removed from this one. I have made the updates you requested as well.

I completely removed Kidney Coldemnation and replaced it with Chakra Scalpel, as it will be much more useful and save us a lot of time xD

I'm also guessing clan jutsu (Stunning Eye and Aisu techs) will be updated with the clans? Should I remove them as well?

8Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Aisu, Strafe [Jutsu List Update] Sun Nov 30, 2014 5:15 pm

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Alright

Blood Scab, The Art of the Hand Heal, Ice Darts,
Blizzard of Blood, Flash Freeze.


All APPROVED.

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