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1Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Fri Apr 25, 2014 2:14 pm

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Last edited by Dameon Shikyo on Thu May 01, 2014 2:31 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Mon Apr 28, 2014 2:09 am

Dameon

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Finished.

3Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:12 pm

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bump

4Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:41 pm

Keiko

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Library jutsu will be left alone for now, as revamped libraries are currently being made by staff. This includes Anbu techniques. When the new libraries are up, please ensure that you replace your old ones.

Raiton Striking Current: Range should be changed to "user / length of weapon". Cooldown needs to scale according to duration, so make it "3 posts + duration".

Raiton Skin Current: Give this a max duration. Additionally, like the technique above, make the cooldown "3 posts + duration".

Raiton Katana: Decrease damages; check the jutsu rules for the new damage chart.

Electric Cannon: Increase the cooldown by a post. Decrease burns to major 1st degree burns, and give the spheres a firing speed.

Lightning Release: Shadow Clones: Specify so that it clearly states that only if the clones disperse through the user's own will that remaining chakra will return. Also specify that clones can only use techniques of a raiton nature, and decrease the damage of the electrocution to major second degree burns.

White Lightning Beam: Decrease damages ; check the jutsu rules for the new damage chart.

Ground Sensing Technique: This should only be able to detect stealth jutsu of equal rank.

Electrolocation: How this sphere works need to be clarified more. To what extent are objects being sensed? Just their general shape, or more? Additionally, this should only be able to detect stealth jutsu of equal rank. Anything one rank higher will be able to bypass this.

Techniques that have not yet been approved / trained & paid for need to remain your jutsu registration. This is for techniques in your jutsu list only. Please move those back and bump it there for edits.

5Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:02 pm

Dameon

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edited

6Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:48 pm

Keiko

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Raiton Striking Current is Approved.

Raiton Skin Current: Give this a max duration, as requested before.

Raiton Katana: Change cooldown to "Duration + 3 posts". Change the paralysis effect to simply numbing, and decrease burns to major first degree.

Electric Cannon: Muscles locking up is the most I would allow for this jutsu, no full body paralysis at C rank. Also, as requested before, give the spheres a travel speed.

White Lightning Beam: Either remove the paralysis, or bring both the piercing and burn damage down.



Last edited by Keiko on Wed Apr 30, 2014 1:39 pm; edited 1 time in total

7Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Tue Apr 29, 2014 4:06 pm

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edited.

8Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Wed Apr 30, 2014 1:46 pm

Keiko

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Raiton Skin Current: What I meant with the max duration was that it can be maintainable, but can't be maintained indefinitely. So it would still be Maintainable (-5 chakra per post), but would also have a limit of (Max of 7 posts), or something of the like. However, if you want to keep your newest edits with the 3 post duration, cooldown should be simply changed to "5 posts".

Raiton Katana is Approved.

Electric Cannon: I'm pretty sure complete lockdown of the body is the equivalent of paralysis. Remove that, or drop the speed of the spheres to somewhere between 10-15 m/s to compensate for the paralysis effects.

White Lightning Beam: Again, I consider full lockdown of the body to be paralysis. So as requested in the post above, either remove that entirely, or decrease the cutting and burn damages. As well, give the beam a speed (not the max of its rank).

9Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:10 pm

Dameon

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edited

10Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Thu May 01, 2014 2:25 pm

Keiko

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Raiton Skin Current: Remove the "+duration" in your cooldown, since you're going with a set duration.

White Lightning Beam: Either drop the cut depth to 1.5 inch, or burn damage to minor second degree, or remove the locking up of muscles (when I said remove that entirely before, it didn't mean simply toning down the paralysis, it meant literally get rid of the effect if you wanted to keep the burn & cutting depth damages).

11Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Thu May 01, 2014 2:31 pm

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edited. sorry I misread.

12Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update  Empty Re: Dameon Shikyo Jutsu list update Thu May 01, 2014 2:35 pm

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Your Jutsu List Update is Approved.

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